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|IELTS; Should all countries have laws to prevent animals being used in circuses ?
Writing Feedbackscorpio - Sep 10, 2013 / dumi - Sep 13, 2013
|[IELTS] Issue on Retirement Age! Agree or Disagree?
5 - .... don't use synonyms if you are not very familiar with their usage. They may mean something very...
Writing FeedbackHai An Hoang - Sep 10, 2013 / Pahan - Sep 18, 2013
|[GRE] - The indicator of a great nation is represented by the general welfare
3 - From my point view too, I believe that general welfare of citizens needs to be considered as a...
Writing Feedbackxiaoheng - Sep 9, 2013 / dumi - Sep 27, 2013
|Teachers should not talk about their personal viewpoints like the social and political ones.
5 - I suggest you to follow the following format for the introduction; Hook - write a sentence which is relevant...
Writing Feedbackramshah - Sep 9, 2013 / dumi - Sep 11, 2013
|[GRE] - University should require students to take various courses
3 - ... Why do you include the word "physically"? I feel many universities deal more with intellectual development and...
Writing Feedbackxiaoheng - Sep 9, 2013 / dumi - Sep 27, 2013
|GRE: Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern
2 - In my view there are many grammatical and spelling mistakes in this essay, for example, should be...
Writing Feedback600score - Sep 9, 2013 / xiaoheng - Sep 9, 2013
|IELTS (Letter)- Invite your friend for a vacation
3 - this sounds odd, stick with the standard phrase - Hope everything goes well with you and your family...
Writing Feedbackssaallaamm - Sep 9, 2013 / gmad06 - Sep 9, 2013
|If you succeed your past events you'll be able to experience the present at easy
4 - The main task of the marketing consultant is to judge how the company would perform in the years...
Writing Feedbackramprashanth_18 - Sep 9, 2013 / Pahan - Sep 21, 2013
|[TOEFL] Changing something in time from the past
Writing Feedbacksomething - Sep 8, 2013 / dumi - Sep 18, 2013
|GRE: Colleges and universities should specify all required courses
Writing Feedbacksistan - Sep 8, 2013 / Th25cc - Sep 15, 2013
|IELTS: Task 2 Some people think that no one should be allowed to work after the age
6 - With the incredible economic growth, the working and living condition has been significantly improved in recent decades. This line...
Writing Feedbackpijiuwdw - Sep 8, 2013 / dumi - Sep 13, 2013
|[IELTS] Task 1 School Spending - Feedback
9 - @pijiuwdw: The conclusion also states the overview again. That's what I have in the paragraph 2....
Writing Feedbackmuffle - Sep 8, 2013 / muffle - Sep 11, 2013
|[TOEFL] For me the influence of my friends was more highlighted than impact of the school
Writing Feedbackmarmaria - Sep 8, 2013 / marmaria - Sep 14, 2013
|Essay about the influence of Technology on human thinking - feedback
4 - Introduction:We are in the "tech era" where one is relied on techonology for a solution probably to a minuscule...
Writing Feedbacksaiwiwo - Sep 8, 2013 / septem1821 - Sep 12, 2013
|IELTS: Today the high sale of popular consumer goods reflex the power of advertising
4 - Nowadays there are many products with the same usage that compete heavily in the market. Therefore, the only...
Writing Feedbacksaphirblu - Sep 8, 2013 / Pahan - Sep 20, 2013
|The usage of free time properly; Relax or Improve mind?
2 - .... good start... this is the type of hook I like :) However, your essay is poorly structured....
Writing FeedbackDr Kumar - Sep 8, 2013 / dumi - Sep 13, 2013
|Essay Title: Something Different That Day
3 - ... By any chance, do you mean fifteen minutes ? quarter minute means one quarter of a minute...
Writing FeedbackKiarasparks16 - Sep 7, 2013 / dumi - Sep 26, 2013
|Essay introduction about SELF CONFIDENCE
2 - WOW...are you a poet? your introduction was really beautiful. I do not know if it maches the requirements for...
Writing Feedbackderpeena - Sep 7, 2013 / marmaria - Sep 11, 2013
|In order for any work of art-for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song-to have
2 - Some people might argue that a piece of art is useless unless it contains a precise message that itwhich...
Writing Feedbackwatiss - Sep 7, 2013 / fahadbd - Sep 11, 2013
|The mystery of Angelica /descriptive piece
Writing Feedbackmahnoorhassan - Sep 7, 2013 / dumi - Sep 13, 2013
|Notting Hill shows the highest and Fulham is the least in both rental cost and salaries - the table
4 - Hi, You write well, but I feel you better improve on structure. Iwish you followed this structure for this...
Writing Feedbackfahadbd - Sep 6, 2013 / dumi - Sep 7, 2013
|A little inaccuracy saves a world of explanation; SAT peparatory essay
Writing Feedbackaneeta - Sep 6, 2013 / dumi - Sep 26, 2013
|[GRE Argument]To alleviate serious unemployment problem Autotech should be encouraged
Writing Feedbacktesttaker - Sep 6, 2013 / testtaker - Sep 17, 2013
|IELTS; WRITING TASK 1 - TELEPHONE CALLS BY CATEGORY
6 - This is report writing. So limit your introduction to introduce the graph title. In this introduction you have...
Writing Feedbacktrangkhanhle - Sep 6, 2013 / dumi - Sep 14, 2013
|The reasons of an increase in social problems involving teenagers
Writing Feedbackzoha - Sep 6, 2013 / zoha - Sep 15, 2013
|TOEFL; you have enough money to purchase a house or a business. Which one you buy?
5 - Thanks for your recommendations. I greatly appreciate your help. I tried to write the essay under time condition at...
Writing Feedbackholylua - Sep 5, 2013 / holylua - Sep 9, 2013
|IELTS-Write a letter to your friend about a public event
Writing Feedbackredstone804 - Sep 5, 2013 / dumi - Sep 7, 2013
|Sharing room with other students or living on one's own?
2 - Overall pretty good essay, just a few grammar problems. Living in a dormitory is a very good opportunity...
Writing Feedbackmarmaria - Sep 5, 2013 / kaybee - Sep 7, 2013
|[TOEFL] Your job has more effect on your happiness than your living environment does.
11 - Thanks first! But refer to "any" I checked the dictionary and give the following example, I never...
Writing Feedbackewido - Sep 5, 2013 / ewido - Sep 12, 2013
|[TOEFL] Ideas about having university education should be available for all or not
Writing FeedbackJintastic - Sep 5, 2013 / dumi - Sep 7, 2013
|IELTS 2:Talents naturally inherited and talents which are taught
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Sep 5, 2013 / muffle - Sep 13, 2013
|IELTS TASK 2: Students should be organised into groups or study alone
4 - On the other hand, students also need to enhance their individual skills in studying that will help them...
Writing Feedbackldlsky03 - Sep 5, 2013 / Pahan - Sep 20, 2013
|My Holiday (quick weekend) essay
Writing Feedbackjohnnynguyen - Sep 4, 2013 / dumi - Sep 13, 2013
|People are not paying attention to environmental protection
3 - For which task you wrote this essay? Is it for IELTS? or TOEFL or some class assignment. It's good...
Writing Feedbackhuyentrang - Sep 4, 2013 / dumi - Sep 13, 2013
|IELTS; increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18
4 - Very good, this is very clear. You know, it's important to have clarity in your writing more than...
Writing Feedbackfahadbd - Sep 4, 2013 / dumi - Sep 7, 2013
|Ielts-Tables : Students'results in a math test
3 - It can be clearly seen that the point level between 34 and 66 has been achieved by a majority...
Writing Feedbackyucky - Sep 4, 2013 / zoha - Sep 11, 2013
|Opening scenes of God Father 1 & 2 ; NCEA Level 3 English Film Study Essay
3 - I made a lot of punctuation changes, mostly breaking up, lengthy sentences, and clarifying them, with new word choices...
Writing FeedbackNoble - Sep 4, 2013 / EF_Carol - Mar 15, 2015
|Toefl; Ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard
Writing Feedbackmarmaria - Sep 4, 2013 / MisterWandering - Sep 13, 2013
|[TOEFL] A/D The advertising is the main cause of unhealthy eating habits
6 - Your essay is awesome~there are almost on grammer errors in it. At least I can not find any of...
Writing Feedbackalice0209 - Sep 4, 2013 / Allen Hu - Sep 22, 2013
|[TOEFL] the ability to relate well to people is more important.
4 - ability to relate well to people and studying===>study i think your writing is not good. the introduction and conclusion...
Writing Feedbackramshah - Sep 4, 2013 / huyentrang - Sep 5, 2013
|IELTS ;Clothes are a necessary part of people's lives
5 - ....people refers to them... For most of us, clothing provides protection from weather. ..or For most people, clothing...
Writing Feedbackkatiequintos - Sep 3, 2013 / dumi - Sep 12, 2013
|Global world changes rapidly with the influx of technology but cultural heritage never changes
3 - It's always good to include the prompt with your essay so that we know what it expects. Is this...
Writing Feedbackfahadbd - Sep 3, 2013 / dumi - Sep 18, 2013
|IELTS Writing task 1: Lonely life by gender profile
Writing Feedbacknhatanh - Sep 3, 2013 / nhatanh - Sep 7, 2013
|IELTS TASK 2: Studying the past can help us better understand present or not
Writing Feedbackldlsky03 - Sep 3, 2013 / dumi - Sep 18, 2013
|full time university students spend most of time studying or doing other activities
3 - First, it is always better that you mention the purpose (i.e. TOEFL, IELTS, GRE etc.) in the topic so...
Writing Feedbackhuyentrang - Sep 3, 2013 / dumi - Sep 18, 2013
|[TOEFL] A/D students who keep their rooms neat and organized are more successful
2 - .... the first and the second parts are loosely connected. It disturbs your flow. .... "always"makes...
Writing Feedbackalice0209 - Sep 3, 2013 / Pahan - Sep 21, 2013
|IELTS letter ; Changing the booking of travel abroad
Writing Feedbacksophisticated - Sep 3, 2013 / huyentrang - Sep 3, 2013
|Should we learn about the country & the cultures and lifestyles to learn a language?
7 - i think you should express that understanding culture can help you use this language more exact. You talk about...
Writing Feedbackseptem1821 - Sep 3, 2013 / huyentrang - Sep 5, 2013
|IELTS;Some people think parents should read or tell stories
Writing Feedbackseptem1821 - Sep 2, 2013 / septem1821 - Sep 3, 2013
|"my worst day in recent memory"; College Essay
2 - forty-fourth president It wasn't clear to me how can this be the worst day? i mean. what makes it...
Writing Feedbacktymack - Sep 2, 2013 / penparker - Sep 2, 2013
|My tears were overflowing; Like the Wind, Like God
Writing Feedbackpenparker - Sep 2, 2013 / chessman567 - Sep 2, 2013
|The proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia
3 - It's good to have your diagram here. Why not upload it? The structure I would follow is that; 1....
Writing FeedbackAmritpal Singh - Sep 2, 2013 / Pahan - Sep 20, 2013
|[IELTS] Inner Four Planets of the Solar System
Writing Feedbackalicanunlu - Sep 2, 2013 / alicanunlu - Sep 3, 2013
|technology and its impact, ability of humans to think for themselves will deteriorate
Writing FeedbackfaraNY - Sep 2, 2013 / dumi - Sep 7, 2013
|IELTS TASK1:Letter to complain about neighbor
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Sep 2, 2013 / gmad06 - Sep 3, 2013
|IELTS 2: Too much exercise is bad for one's health
Writing FeedbackPlank - Sep 2, 2013 / MisterWandering - Sep 3, 2013
|In some countries, traditional food is being replaced by international fast food.
Writing FeedbackOliviaZeng - Sep 2, 2013 / dumi - Sep 18, 2013
|GRE Analytical: 'fields of study'; everybody has the right to decide for himself
Writing Feedbacksistan - Sep 1, 2013 / dumi - Sep 22, 2013
|Benefits of Micro-lending. GRE Analyze an argument, Feel free to comment
4 - I am preparing for toelf and GRE simultaneously too. my gre exam is on 29th september and my GRE...
Writing Feedbackshadman19922 - Sep 1, 2013 / marmaria - Sep 12, 2013
|IELTS-In many countries there are many highly qualified graduates without employment.
Writing Feedbackpuman - Sep 1, 2013 / trangkhanhle - Sep 18, 2013
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