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|Happiness is an emotional or affective state; Causes of Happiness
6 - I think the ending is too dull. Add some flavor to the conclusion; it will make it more interesting....
Writing Feedbackyumna - Dec 14, 2012 / xxxbluefrogxxx - Dec 29, 2012
|Toefl subject : Nowadays, spending budget on space exploration is not reasonable
4 - Space exploration, for the exploration of space, has been possible for human in the 20th century. The United...
Writing Feedbackhamedmas - Dec 14, 2012 / colin - Dec 22, 2012
|IELTS essay : criminal who send to prison would commit crimes when set free
Writing Feedbackcolin - Dec 14, 2012 / Prafull - Dec 15, 2012
|I ate the candy eleven years ago but the bitterness and sweetness of life remains!
Writing Feedbackxpmichy - Dec 13, 2012 / xpmichy - Dec 15, 2012
|Our past is a cemented foundation upon which we build our future - GRE
3 - @Lisa Thank you immensely! The follies you pointed out were completely legitimate! I am taking the gre on 18...
Writing Feedbackkethsaxena - Dec 13, 2012 / kethsaxena - Dec 14, 2012
|"80 points" - Different reasons as to why people attend college; TOEFL
3 - What you have written is completely out of topic. For TOEFL independent task, you need to write at least...
Writing FeedbackEmin Can - Dec 13, 2012 / dumi - Dec 13, 2012
|(Ielts practicing) - It is common to leave home countries to study at universities abroad
6 - @dumi : thanks your appreciation , this forum gives me opportunities to improve my skill hi hungdv :...
Writing Feedbackleeminh - Dec 13, 2012 / leeminh - Dec 15, 2012
|Most education system rely on examinations to encourage children to study,but as a re
2 - I certainly do not agree with the idea of abolishing examinations for several reasons. .... unnecessary...
Writing FeedbackAlicegaga - Dec 13, 2012 / dumi - Dec 14, 2012
|Expository essay on cell phone's impact.
3 - Well it's an expository essay...so I have to give my opinion, but without really stating it. My teacher is...
Writing FeedbackAbr518 - Dec 12, 2012 / Abr518 - Dec 12, 2012
|Intentional tourism can promotes people to understand and respect other cultures
13 - Thanks all for the good suggestions, may I know how to change the title? It seems that someone...
Writing Feedbackchristyzhongs - Dec 12, 2012 / christyzhongs - Dec 24, 2012
|(IELTS essay) International tourism creates tensions in the host country
9 - Hai hungvud and colin... Thanks for the correction and time... It was really helpful. Thanks a...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Dec 12, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 16, 2012
|Without friends we can hardly survive
Writing FeedbackInvisiblebbb - Dec 12, 2012 / Invisiblebbb - Dec 12, 2012
|television and movies will bring more harmful things than the delightful things
Writing FeedbackInvisiblebbb - Dec 12, 2012 / Invisiblebbb - Dec 12, 2012
|The reason why I choose Lee is that he was born in Taiwan
Writing Feedbacksimonsat - Dec 12, 2012 / simonsat - Dec 13, 2012
|Description on Telecommunicating.
9 - Telecommunication is a form of communication that takes place through technolobical means such as telephone, internet, etc. Telecommunicating...
Writing Feedbacktranquanghuy321 - Dec 12, 2012 / dumi - Dec 12, 2012
|How to reduce air pollution in our Mongolian city? Pure air importancy for people's health
Writing Feedbackulziitugs - Dec 12, 2012 / EmeeAfua - Dec 13, 2012
|TOEFL - Contribution of young people to their communities is not sufficient.
Writing Feedbacklily41628 - Dec 12, 2012 / lily41628 - Jan 25, 2013
|people should be flexible to adjust their thoughts and behavior; Task 2
Writing Feedbackprue124 - Dec 11, 2012 / prue124 - Dec 12, 2012
|IELTS practice - cause and effect essay; "Television at its worst"
Writing FeedbackSnowTran - Dec 11, 2012 / SnowTran - Dec 12, 2012
|I prefer living in a small town; birds' chirping and singing
Writing Feedbackcindy_523 - Dec 11, 2012 / korch - Dec 12, 2012
|A Picnic I enjoyed; it was marvellous to leave the grey building of a city behind
2 - Ayreen, when you write a descriptive essay, the first thing you have to learn to do is accurately describe...
Writing Feedbackayreen akrami - Dec 11, 2012 / Holt - Mar 20, 2017
|Letter to the building owner ; IELTS General Training Writing Task 1
Writing Feedbackbeyondmtk - Dec 11, 2012 / shawkat - Jan 3, 2013
|The advantages & disadvantages of starting school at an early age.
4 - hai.. The essay stracture and organization is good. Some sentences are confusing. As it pointed out earlier. ...
Writing Feedbackththnho_tl - Dec 11, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 14, 2012
|College plays a great role in shaping our future :TOEFL
5 - These days people get many choices when it comes to choosing colleges or university. ==>These days people get many...
Writing Feedbackkiratee - Dec 10, 2012 / colin - Dec 14, 2012
|allow workers to work at home ESSAY
Writing Feedbackleeminh - Dec 10, 2012 / leeminh - Dec 11, 2012
|Potential promblems that people face while Living Abroad; IELTS exam essays
Writing Feedbackbehruz - Dec 10, 2012 / B_Simba - Dec 12, 2012
|I have some true friends! ; My memorable experience(s)"
Writing Feedbackdelightlita - Dec 10, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 10, 2012
|Some people think it would be a good idea for school to teach every young person how
2 - This line has several issues; grammar, punctuation, clarity and sentence structure. Also you must post your essays in...
Writing Feedbackspear - Dec 9, 2012 / dumi - Dec 10, 2012
|Using mobile phone while driving should be banned
6 - Can anyone else check if there is any final errors or anything that I have to remove, that is...
Writing Feedbackfarzan23 - Dec 9, 2012 / farzan23 - Dec 12, 2012
|Inquiry Essay: Literature's power to affect our perspectives - feedback and editting
2 - Hi Tsesh; I find your first paragraph needs improvement in its presentation. Here are my suggestions; What...
Writing FeedbackTsesh - Dec 9, 2012 / dumi - Dec 9, 2012
|Noah and Utnapishtim are exactly the same person
Writing Feedbackshlortx - Dec 9, 2012 / mannyalesh - Dec 10, 2012
|STUDENT BEHAVIOR is becoming a problems in many countries!
Writing Feedbackai7 - Dec 9, 2012 / dumi - Dec 9, 2012
|IELTS essay, new things or old things?
6 - i see your essay isn't really clear. I mean your essay doesn't have a clear theses, it's so general....
Writing Feedbackmy88626 - Dec 9, 2012 / ththnho_tl - Dec 14, 2012
|Are parents the best teachers? they play a dominant role
4 - Hi, Well... what you say is that ''parents definitely play a dominant role in their children's life"....
Writing Feedbacknastaran1990 - Dec 9, 2012 / dumi - Dec 9, 2012
|[TOEFL] Do you prefer to use the telephone or email?
Writing Feedbackkorch - Dec 9, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 10, 2012
|[TOEFL] Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants,other people prefer..
8 - thanks dumi. you drew attention to points that make me confused. I will follow your advices :)...
Writing Feedbackokk - Dec 9, 2012 / okk - Dec 10, 2012
|Beubg Friendly and considerate ; characteristics of good neighbors
3 - This sentence doesn't sound very good. Try this. Since the stone age, man has always lived in groups....
Writing Feedbackbahar - Dec 9, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 9, 2012
|Theoretical knowledge or practical skill.
3 - Hmmm.. The sentence is a little too long. Try to break it down. Firstly, many school graduates find...
Writing FeedbackEdna - Dec 9, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 9, 2012
|'Not being hopeless' - Working in a group or working independently?
Writing Feedbacknastaran1990 - Dec 8, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 8, 2012
|Privacy of celebrates on newspapers and magazines Ielts essay
6 - The topic of privacy of celebrities on magazines and newspapers has sparked a heated debate in the recent...
Writing Feedbackleeminh - Dec 8, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 8, 2012
|IELTS writing: Similarity of different places.
Writing Feedbackmy88626 - Dec 8, 2012 / my88626 - Dec 8, 2012
|Tattoo and Piercing research paper
2 - Change "student's" to "students'" or perhaps "children's" "Young adolescence" is a little redundant Can...
Writing Feedbackltraviss - Dec 8, 2012 / Enigmaticguitar - Dec 14, 2012
|IELTS Cam 7 Test 2- Criminal Punishment
Writing FeedbackMommmmo - Dec 8, 2012 / Mommmmo - Dec 10, 2012
|Discussion about a short example in my essay
Writing Feedbacka5b5935 - Dec 7, 2012 / a5b5935 - Dec 11, 2012
|IELTS - Beijing example; Petrol price rising vs traffic and pollution
Writing FeedbackMommmmo - Dec 7, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 10, 2012
|You have been asked to suggest improvements to a park ,a national park, regional park
2 - Correct grammar would be; park has always been / parks have always been / park had always been/...
Writing Feedbacknastaran1990 - Dec 7, 2012 / dumi - Dec 8, 2012
|describe the table illustrating expenses
NEW - the table is given in the file attachment.^^ The given table illustrates the percentage of expenses consumers spent...
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|Impacts of and solutions for rural depopulation???
6 - Thank you guys so much for your kind comments. Please give me more comments on my next coming essays...
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Dec 7, 2012 / hungvud - Dec 10, 2012
|the compare and contrast between A and B Ice Cream
Writing Feedbackcnancysr - Dec 7, 2012 / dumi - Dec 7, 2012
|Spanking is not okay! (Argumentative Essay)
Writing Feedbackkristenbrooke97 - Dec 6, 2012 / kristenbrooke97 - Dec 7, 2012
|Why do you believe you will be an effective teacher in a high-need school?
3 - Hi,Abby5, Your essay is so impressive! You develop the topic fluently and explain your dream clearly. I think...
Writing FeedbackAbby5 - Dec 6, 2012 / yisha - Dec 7, 2012
|(IELTS essay) MNC's are good or bad..?
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Dec 6, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 6, 2012
|IELTS: The concept of only mothers raising their kids has become an old one
Writing FeedbackIEC - Dec 6, 2012 / Mommmmo - Dec 7, 2012
|My Not-So Predetermined Destiny
Writing Feedbackgeebs5 - Dec 6, 2012 / dumi - Dec 6, 2012
|( IELTS essay) foreign visitors should be charged more?
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Dec 5, 2012 / ah_zafari - Dec 6, 2012
|Life with Courage
Writing Feedback672jade - Dec 5, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 6, 2012
|The End Is Near! English Portfolio
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|IELTS essay, Will letter writing disappear?
Writing Feedbackmy88626 - Dec 5, 2012 / Mommmmo - Dec 6, 2012
|TOEFL Topic: The Influence of the Internet's knowledge on life
Writing Feedbackminh11081995 - Dec 5, 2012 / minh11081995 - Dec 5, 2012
|Is saving endangered species worth? 'maintain the balance of ecological systems'
3 - This is a wonderfully constructed essay. :) I could not find much faults in it as it had been...
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Dec 5, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 5, 2012
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