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|TOEFL - Improving conditions - Has human harmed the Earth or made it a better place?
Writing FeedbackMunkhjin - Nov 7, 2012 / dumi - Nov 9, 2012
|'Effort to keep some things private' - question for the SAT
3 - Society did not have the opportunity to share "its" opinions is a really great thing - seems a little...
Writing Feedbackjazzyjj - Nov 7, 2012 / archie18 - Nov 28, 2012
|'Harmful effects' - IELTS Essay about the influence of advertisement
Writing Feedbackying0216 - Nov 7, 2012 / ying0216 - Nov 11, 2012
|Power of advertisements are overrated!
3 - Thankyou ah_zafari for your suggestions, I will try to improve those fiels which you highlited....
Writing Feedbackpriya9991 - Nov 7, 2012 / priya9991 - Nov 10, 2012
|History shows us how forgetful human beings are
Writing Feedbackrkandil - Nov 7, 2012 / jincera1 - Nov 7, 2012
|'museum can attract visitors' - [ielts] topic with museum
8 - Plz every one comment on this There are different kinds of people having different personalities and opinions living...
Writing Feedbackrenlyso - Nov 7, 2012 / ibadullah - Nov 10, 2012
|'Good atmosphere' - What change to hometown more appealing to people your age?
4 - "Although there are many buses in the urban and rural area, but it is pretty hard for people to...
Writing Feedbackpurplepotato - Nov 7, 2012 / zahras93 - Nov 11, 2012
|[graph] Percentage of students giving good ratings - IELTS review
Writing Feedbackbigbang15101990 - Nov 7, 2012 / renlyso - Nov 7, 2012
|The power of advertising and ads in the commerce essay
4 - ah_zafari Thanks for your valuable advice. Please see If this change can be helpful in introduction :- ...
Writing Feedbackmanjit809 - Nov 7, 2012 / manjit809 - Nov 7, 2012
|Dishonesty in relationship / Should you be always truthful?
3 - thanks a lot!...
Writing FeedbackMai_Alexei - Nov 6, 2012 / Mai_Alexei - Nov 8, 2012
|'years to build' - WILL I EVER TRUST AGAIN?
3 - Thanks for the reply it really helped i changed it to "I will remember that conversation until the day...
Writing Feedbacktata98 - Nov 6, 2012 / tata98 - Nov 6, 2012
|'What I taught myself' - Essay Revision
Writing Feedbackdudeman - Nov 6, 2012 / ysysysys - Nov 10, 2012
|'More comfortable with parents' - Toefl Essay-Parents are the best teacher.
2 - Hai Sonia... Always write the question because, there are so many types of essays.. it was simple...
Writing Feedbackchikoo09 - Nov 6, 2012 / joythblessy - Nov 24, 2012
|TECHNOLOGICAL FOODS IS HARMFUL TO PEOPLE'S HEALTH ( IELTS )
3 - HI.dzung1991 Beside motivator, general background should be given in the introduction. However, ah_zafari said that the opinion should...
Writing Feedbackdzung1991 - Nov 6, 2012 / renlyso - Nov 10, 2012
|AP Lang Essay: The Twerp in the Photo is Me
Writing FeedbackKnighted - Nov 6, 2012 / Martin80 - Nov 15, 2012
|IELTS,ESSAY with topic Relationship between different countries
Writing Feedbackrenlyso - Nov 6, 2012 / renlyso - Nov 7, 2012
|IELTS; Rural depopulation- Effects and Suggestions to reverse the trend
NEW - Hi guys, I'm practicing for the IELTS test and here is my essay. Could you please help me to...
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|Fast food brings us more avails than drawbacks (IELTS task 2)
Writing Feedbackclackkent - Nov 6, 2012 / humanx - Nov 8, 2012
|Feedback- Has technology isolated us from society and nature?
Writing Feedbackmap181 - Nov 5, 2012 / sailinalbion - Nov 6, 2012
|[IELST task 2] Topic parents or school should teach children
2 - This opening statement sounds a bit deviated from the topic which deals more with teaching children social skills...
Writing Feedbacksilentwarrior - Nov 5, 2012 / dumi - Nov 6, 2012
|IELTS ESSAY Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid commu
Writing Feedbackjenny45 - Nov 5, 2012 / sydvu76 - Nov 29, 2012
|IELTS ; Nowadays travelling abroad is more convenient and cheaper!
Writing Feedbackanar_ - Nov 5, 2012 / anar_ - Nov 16, 2012
|Humanity is in a tight fit with carbon emissions and climate change; NUCLEAR ENERGY
Writing FeedbackJude2005 - Nov 5, 2012 / CubiksRuber - Nov 23, 2012
|"Love, Loyalty, Trust are the three things to lead a good relationship in life"
Writing Feedbackpal - Nov 5, 2012 / pal - Nov 7, 2012
|Advantages of learning English
3 - Thank to Jennyflower81 for adjusting my writing. The adjusted writing is very helpful for me in the next English...
Writing Feedbackhuybinh111 - Nov 5, 2012 / huybinh111 - Nov 5, 2012
|'technology does not kill the tradition'
Writing Feedbackibadullah - Nov 5, 2012 / ibadullah - Mar 18, 2013
|Individualism and Personal Diversity
Writing Feedback2320beyodor - Nov 5, 2012 / canyouhelpme - Nov 21, 2012
|Friendship and financial matters essay - money can harm relationship?
Writing Feedbackmanjit809 - Nov 5, 2012 / manjit809 - Nov 6, 2012
|Bad sides in public hospitals and the gap between the rich and the poor
4 - I think you should write more about the problem stated in the prompt. Reword the topic as a thesis...
Writing FeedbackHeina - Nov 4, 2012 / ah_zafari - Nov 6, 2012
|"Today is not a winter day yet. Why is it so thrill?" ; Narrative paragraph
2 - ---------- better rephrase this; it doesn't come clearly : ( Either she couldn't open her eyes or...
Writing FeedbackJames89 - Nov 4, 2012 / dumi - Nov 17, 2012
|The Cobra - journey to the Amazon; Narrative Essay
2 - Being in nature is very good forexcellent not only physically but also mentally as wellhealth ....
Writing FeedbackHelenSwan - Nov 4, 2012 / geebs5 - Nov 20, 2012
|Most of my family members refer to me by the colloquial expression "foodie" I'm more gourmand though
3 - This essay is very attention grabbing and detailed, I pretty much can see a picture in my mind of...
Writing Feedbackmagnamaxx13 - Nov 4, 2012 / bintadiallo - Nov 26, 2012
|IELTS Essay : Borrowing money from a friend is harmful to friendship
Writing Feedbackw_even - Nov 4, 2012 / dumi - Nov 5, 2012
|Common App (Essay B) - The Importance of Worldwide Cooperation
Writing FeedbackThePirateKing - Nov 4, 2012 / rezwan3 - Nov 4, 2012
|My IELTS Task 1 Reports (UK citizens travel abroad and the countries visited)
Writing Feedbackahmedsamir - Nov 4, 2012 / dumi - Nov 19, 2012
|The average weight of people is increasing/ What do you think about this trend?
7 - There are several reasons for this alarming trend, but measures could be taken to tackle the problem. ...
Writing Feedbackdzung1991 - Nov 4, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 2, 2012
|'improvement of education' - change something in your hometown
5 - That is something you can fix quickly through learning. However, in essay writing you need more things; good...
Writing Feedbackyammm95 - Nov 4, 2012 / dumi - Nov 4, 2012
|'child support program' - research on welfare for ENG 102
2 - I like the essay, great information, dont forget to cite your information that your putting out there, even if...
Writing FeedbackTabby - Nov 3, 2012 / Wolter - Nov 6, 2012
|moving to America when I was three as the biggest struggle - personal statement
2 - Why not start with "the people,the environment...unfamiliar to me" this will keep the reader wondering up until the 4th...
Writing FeedbackMemona - Nov 3, 2012 / Phoebe Africa - Nov 3, 2012
|Do the Right Thing Violence Paper
3 - Thank you!...
Writing FeedbackLyndsey9201 - Nov 3, 2012 / Lyndsey9201 - Nov 4, 2012
|capital punishment is a brustal decision and should be abolished?
2 - Honestly, this essay is not very convincing. I stand with you, but if I didn't, then this would not...
Writing Feedbackphamngocduy - Nov 3, 2012 / ericramon - Nov 3, 2012
|How many hours of 10-11 years old schoolchildren spent time on home activities
2 - The graphic shows how many hours of 10-11 years old schoolchildren spent time on home activities between televisions and...
Writing FeedbackWal - Nov 3, 2012 / EF_Susan - Nov 8, 2012
|Higher education of advanced learning and teaching - better jobs for graduates?
3 - I have some suggestions on your second essay. Hope you find them helpful. No doubt, humans beings that are...
Writing Feedbackmanjit809 - Nov 3, 2012 / ah_zafari - Nov 6, 2012
|IELTS ESSAY: PARENTS ARE THE BEST TEACHERS
Writing Feedbackjohnz777z - Nov 3, 2012 / MaryMary - Nov 6, 2012
|Fiction books are better than reality? - essay
3 - Contain means capable of holding something. So you should use it with what it is holding. Eg. contain...
Writing Feedbackasdfgg - Nov 2, 2012 / dumi - Nov 2, 2012
|old buildings need to protected by government or not
NEW - Now a days government spend lot of money to protect old buildings which reflects the history of our nation.Some...
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|IELTS Essay severe punishment for traffic offensese
Writing Feedbackjenny45 - Nov 1, 2012 / jenny45 - Nov 3, 2012
|[IELTS TOPIC] - In many countries, students who behave badly in class are expelled
4 - children should not be out of school for any reason this sentense seems a little wired ,but i don't...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Nov 1, 2012 / jenny45 - Nov 4, 2012
|William Shakespeare and his great works!
2 - --------------- I wish you rephrase this sentence... Seems having a problem with its length --------- he...
Writing Feedbackelma96 - Nov 1, 2012 / dumi - Nov 17, 2012
|IELTS examination; Adults and adolescents have many differences
Writing FeedbackNigora - Oct 31, 2012 / Nigora - Nov 2, 2012
|GRE issue- #Society does not place enough emphasis on the intellect...
NEW - Society does not place enough emphasis on the intellect--- that is, on reasoning and other cognitive skills. The...
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|IELTS Essay : How is your generation different from your parent's generation
Writing Feedbackw_even - Oct 31, 2012 / Heina - Nov 2, 2012
|It was a great EXPERIENCE; A day in shopping mall.
2 - During my vacation last month, I had been to the biggest mall in south India with my family. I...
Writing Feedbacknithin1234 - Oct 31, 2012 / keroro - Oct 31, 2012
|His life has been unusual; The Spectacular For Me
Writing Feedbackniesaysi - Oct 31, 2012 / dumi - Nov 18, 2012
|[IELTS] - 'The unsolvable problem' - In many countries, people are living longer.
3 - Thanks Scientiana. I learned so much from you:) Thanks for your encouragement, Inspired2012. I will remember that. ...
Writing Feedbackcswords - Oct 31, 2012 / cswords - Nov 15, 2012
|What historical event in your country has had a major effect on your country?
2 - I think the historical event that had great effect on my country is a Treaty of Gulistan.Because with the...
Writing FeedbackAzeroglu - Oct 31, 2012 / orkhan - Nov 15, 2012
|Ielts - "culture shock" - nowadays more people traveling around the world
Writing Feedbackelnora - Oct 30, 2012 / elnora - Oct 31, 2012
|Having unity and social skills through sports games
NEW - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their...
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|Living in the big cities is better than living in the country
NEW - Some people prefer to living in the big cities but some people prefer to living in the countryside, in...
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|'qualities of a good student and respect is earned' - illustraction Paragraph?
NEW - Qualities of a good student There are several different qualities of a good student. First as a good student,...
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