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|The advantages & disadvantages of starting school at an early age.
4 - hai.. The essay stracture and organization is good. Some sentences are confusing. As it pointed out earlier. ...
Writing Feedbackththnho_tl - Dec 11, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 14, 2012
|College plays a great role in shaping our future :TOEFL
5 - These days people get many choices when it comes to choosing colleges or university. ==>These days people get many...
Writing Feedbackkiratee - Dec 10, 2012 / colin - Dec 14, 2012
|allow workers to work at home ESSAY
Writing Feedbackleeminh - Dec 10, 2012 / leeminh - Dec 11, 2012
|Potential promblems that people face while Living Abroad; IELTS exam essays
Writing Feedbackbehruz - Dec 10, 2012 / B_Simba - Dec 12, 2012
|I have some true friends! ; My memorable experience(s)"
Writing Feedbackdelightlita - Dec 10, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 10, 2012
|Some people think it would be a good idea for school to teach every young person how
2 - This line has several issues; grammar, punctuation, clarity and sentence structure. Also you must post your essays in...
Writing Feedbackspear - Dec 9, 2012 / dumi - Dec 10, 2012
|Using mobile phone while driving should be banned
6 - Can anyone else check if there is any final errors or anything that I have to remove, that is...
Writing Feedbackfarzan23 - Dec 9, 2012 / farzan23 - Dec 12, 2012
|Inquiry Essay: Literature's power to affect our perspectives - feedback and editting
2 - Hi Tsesh; I find your first paragraph needs improvement in its presentation. Here are my suggestions; What...
Writing FeedbackTsesh - Dec 9, 2012 / dumi - Dec 9, 2012
|Noah and Utnapishtim are exactly the same person
Writing Feedbackshlortx - Dec 9, 2012 / mannyalesh - Dec 10, 2012
|STUDENT BEHAVIOR is becoming a problems in many countries!
Writing Feedbackai7 - Dec 9, 2012 / dumi - Dec 9, 2012
|IELTS essay, new things or old things?
6 - i see your essay isn't really clear. I mean your essay doesn't have a clear theses, it's so general....
Writing Feedbackmy88626 - Dec 9, 2012 / ththnho_tl - Dec 14, 2012
|Are parents the best teachers? they play a dominant role
4 - Hi, Well... what you say is that ''parents definitely play a dominant role in their children's life"....
Writing Feedbacknastaran1990 - Dec 9, 2012 / dumi - Dec 9, 2012
|[TOEFL] Do you prefer to use the telephone or email?
Writing Feedbackkorch - Dec 9, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 10, 2012
|[TOEFL] Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants,other people prefer..
8 - thanks dumi. you drew attention to points that make me confused. I will follow your advices :)...
Writing Feedbackokk - Dec 9, 2012 / okk - Dec 10, 2012
|Beubg Friendly and considerate ; characteristics of good neighbors
3 - This sentence doesn't sound very good. Try this. Since the stone age, man has always lived in groups....
Writing Feedbackbahar - Dec 9, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 9, 2012
|Theoretical knowledge or practical skill.
3 - Hmmm.. The sentence is a little too long. Try to break it down. Firstly, many school graduates find...
Writing FeedbackEdna - Dec 9, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 9, 2012
|'Not being hopeless' - Working in a group or working independently?
Writing Feedbacknastaran1990 - Dec 8, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 8, 2012
|Privacy of celebrates on newspapers and magazines Ielts essay
6 - The topic of privacy of celebrities on magazines and newspapers has sparked a heated debate in the recent...
Writing Feedbackleeminh - Dec 8, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 8, 2012
|IELTS writing: Similarity of different places.
Writing Feedbackmy88626 - Dec 8, 2012 / my88626 - Dec 8, 2012
|Tattoo and Piercing research paper
2 - Change "student's" to "students'" or perhaps "children's" "Young adolescence" is a little redundant Can...
Writing Feedbackltraviss - Dec 8, 2012 / Enigmaticguitar - Dec 14, 2012
|IELTS Cam 7 Test 2- Criminal Punishment
Writing FeedbackMommmmo - Dec 8, 2012 / Mommmmo - Dec 10, 2012
|Discussion about a short example in my essay
Writing Feedbacka5b5935 - Dec 7, 2012 / a5b5935 - Dec 11, 2012
|IELTS - Beijing example; Petrol price rising vs traffic and pollution
Writing FeedbackMommmmo - Dec 7, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 10, 2012
|You have been asked to suggest improvements to a park ,a national park, regional park
2 - Correct grammar would be; park has always been / parks have always been / park had always been/...
Writing Feedbacknastaran1990 - Dec 7, 2012 / dumi - Dec 8, 2012
|describe the table illustrating expenses
NEW - the table is given in the file attachment.^^ The given table illustrates the percentage of expenses consumers spent...
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|Impacts of and solutions for rural depopulation???
6 - Thank you guys so much for your kind comments. Please give me more comments on my next coming essays...
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Dec 7, 2012 / hungvud - Dec 10, 2012
|the compare and contrast between A and B Ice Cream
Writing Feedbackcnancysr - Dec 7, 2012 / dumi - Dec 7, 2012
|Spanking is not okay! (Argumentative Essay)
Writing Feedbackkristenbrooke97 - Dec 6, 2012 / kristenbrooke97 - Dec 7, 2012
|Why do you believe you will be an effective teacher in a high-need school?
3 - Hi,Abby5, Your essay is so impressive! You develop the topic fluently and explain your dream clearly. I think...
Writing FeedbackAbby5 - Dec 6, 2012 / yisha - Dec 7, 2012
|(IELTS essay) MNC's are good or bad..?
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Dec 6, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 6, 2012
|IELTS: The concept of only mothers raising their kids has become an old one
Writing FeedbackIEC - Dec 6, 2012 / Mommmmo - Dec 7, 2012
|My Not-So Predetermined Destiny
Writing Feedbackgeebs5 - Dec 6, 2012 / dumi - Dec 6, 2012
|( IELTS essay) foreign visitors should be charged more?
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Dec 5, 2012 / ah_zafari - Dec 6, 2012
|Life with Courage
Writing Feedback672jade - Dec 5, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 6, 2012
|The End Is Near! English Portfolio
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|IELTS essay, Will letter writing disappear?
Writing Feedbackmy88626 - Dec 5, 2012 / Mommmmo - Dec 6, 2012
|TOEFL Topic: The Influence of the Internet's knowledge on life
Writing Feedbackminh11081995 - Dec 5, 2012 / minh11081995 - Dec 5, 2012
|Is saving endangered species worth? 'maintain the balance of ecological systems'
3 - This is a wonderfully constructed essay. :) I could not find much faults in it as it had been...
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Dec 5, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 5, 2012
|should wealthy nations take responsiblity to help the poorer countries?
Writing Feedbackcu_chuoi - Dec 5, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 7, 2012
|Internet is a great information provider, but also dangerous tool.
2 - You've written a great essay... Excellent writing with rich vocabulary and sentence structures. However, this task has to...
Writing Feedbacksomemela - Dec 5, 2012 / dumi - Dec 5, 2012
|IELTS; High Sales Vs Power of Advertising - Discuss
Writing FeedbackMommmmo - Dec 5, 2012 / dumi - Dec 5, 2012
|What would you change if you are given a chance?
3 - This road creates problems to people stuck in traffic. Especially, people who drive a motorbikes will...
Writing FeedbackJonni - Dec 5, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 6, 2012
|Most important benefits from a job: relax, and fulfilling - even if less money
Writing Feedbackundidiamaka - Dec 5, 2012 / undidiamaka - Dec 6, 2012
|the largest percentage was presented in teacher; Ilets task 1 pie charts
Writing Feedbackhonghanh763 - Dec 4, 2012 / honghanh763 - Dec 5, 2012
|My struggle with my dad on a day from coming from school going home
Writing FeedbackGenerous - Dec 4, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 5, 2012
|IELTS topic: Skills of letter writing will soon disappear
3 - First of all, I'm not agree your opinion. The skill of letter writing is still being used, when...
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Dec 4, 2012 / Mommmmo - Dec 5, 2012
|Underground Railway Systems: IELTS | GRAPH - date, km, passengers # per year
2 - For me it's just like you give those five cities a title of being a metrapolitan with subway, the...
Writing Feedbackkeytolife - Dec 4, 2012 / Mommmmo - Dec 5, 2012
|television station has devoted more time to national news: GRE-Argument response
3 - You can start with (( It's an idea)).. if you like it. The conclusion that the station should...
Writing Feedbackarchan_dave - Dec 4, 2012 / shenoooo - Dec 19, 2012
|How would Public Funds be spent? IELTS
6 - wouldn't be better...existing sicknesses ? I wouldn't use Nevertheless 2 times I am new in the...
Writing Feedbackvalency - Dec 4, 2012 / colorado - Dec 5, 2012
|I believe parents shape the way you see life!
3 - Hai... Good essay, good flow to read, and interesting too.. The question asked you agree or disagree...? ...
Writing FeedbackEdna - Dec 4, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 4, 2012
|Be cooperative/ Global village/ Importance of English
Writing Feedbackr01521232 - Dec 3, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 5, 2012
|I love the different facets of Taipei
4 - And I'm sorry I did not know that facet actually meant aspect. And now it makes much more sense...
Writing Feedbackaszxxccv - Dec 3, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 5, 2012
|One Page of Taipei
Writing Feedbackbilly790203 - Dec 3, 2012 / dumi - Dec 4, 2012
|politicians have the greatest influence on the world.
6 - I like the way you have organized the essay. Its very clear. One paragraph for the politicians and one...
Writing Feedbackvalency - Dec 3, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 4, 2012
|IELTS; Exterior of buildings is more important than their functions.
Writing Feedbackvalency - Dec 3, 2012 / valency - Dec 4, 2012
|Argumentative essay on Space and ocean exploration
2 - I love the way you have expressed this idea.... you have an interesting and unique style of presenting...
Writing FeedbackWheelchairEC - Dec 3, 2012 / dumi - Dec 5, 2012
|Arranging My Thoughts on Marriage - ENG101 Essay
Writing Feedbackcrackhamster - Dec 3, 2012 / dumi - Dec 5, 2012
|Why do we use Smartphones?
3 - You did not point out your statement clearly in the first paragraph, and what is the purpose you write...
Writing Feedbackwealthy life - Dec 3, 2012 / ERIC SUNG - Mar 20, 2017
|Writting a argument synthesis essay about Divorce and children
3 - this is a very interesting topic to write on and you have presented some very good facts. :) Here...
Writing FeedbackBarzakh1 - Dec 3, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 4, 2012
|IELTS writing - Criticism is useful for improving education system?
NEW - Please help me polish the essay. thanks buddy. In order to improve a country's education system, young students...
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