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|Narrate how did you overcome the challenges to achieve your goal(s) in life
6 - I appreciate your revision. You have changed it more concise. Would it be more appropriate if I am...
Writing Feedbackniesaysi - May 6, 2013 / niesaysi - May 20, 2013
|TOEFL; A person's job's has more effects on his happiness
Writing Feedbackpulp - May 6, 2013 / carolyn - May 19, 2013
|Model Minority vindicating the American dream
NEW - The topic I am discussing is this: "...[D]iscuss the manner in which the model minority stereotype "vindicates the American...
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|My first story: Waking up in the Darkness
Writing Feedbackdgc90 - May 5, 2013 / dgc90 - May 5, 2013
|IELTS WRITING: the population is a mix of people from different cultures and ethic
Writing Feedbackhahong - May 5, 2013 / sharmajali - May 8, 2013
|TOEFL: Living with families for a longer time
6 - 1.Well structure essay, with a introduction, body and conclusion. 2. But some where i found you repetitive, which you...
Writing FeedbackGodiva - May 5, 2013 / sharmajali - May 8, 2013
|IELTS WRITING :Countries are becoming similar, what are causes, and effects ?
6 - products as KFC,Ford, which (are able to find) in most contries like American,England,China and so on I think...
Writing Feedbackhahong - May 4, 2013 / nada english - May 7, 2013
|IELTS:Should the government spend money on poor population or hi-tech research?
4 - I think you could make the begining of eassy better. Something like " whether should the money be spent...
Writing Feedbackveronicafy - May 4, 2013 / Godiva - May 5, 2013
|IELTS TASK 2:Whether without satisfying career, the life is meaningless?
4 - Thank you!!!!!!! To varonicafy: I'll look for the charity career and self-affirmation. And, good luck! Your IELTS~ :D To...
Writing Feedbackeileenalien - May 4, 2013 / eileenalien - May 6, 2013
|Child labor - Advantages vs disadvantages
2 - In the first sentence, you said:" The employment, in recent years, has been changing and becoming more sensitive". In...
Writing FeedbackXuan Dung - May 4, 2013 / bloodkid - May 4, 2013
|'not the best way'; steep prices of petrol solve traffic and pollution problems
4 - I appreciate your encouragement that makes me fell fulfilled. And thank you for correcting my errors and continuously...
Writing Feedbackhomsai - May 4, 2013 / homsai - May 5, 2013
|Power of advertising determines high sales of products
3 - How are customers influenced towards certain products? If possible you can talk about media portrayal of what to like...
Writing FeedbackRajji - May 3, 2013 / hthiara - May 4, 2013
|Young people face more problems than adults. Do you agree? [IGCSE]
Writing Feedbackmina_3006 - May 3, 2013 / mina_3006 - May 3, 2013
|SAT: Are there situations where it is more ethical not to follow established rules?
4 - kridUessay I'd say start with an anecdote, about a situation where one man/ idea was more important than...
Writing FeedbackkridUessay - May 3, 2013 / manjot - May 3, 2013
|People are living longer now - medicine is more advanced
2 - Hi! First, your thesis statement is a bit unclear and confusing to readers. I think you should clarify the...
Writing Feedbacksuncult - May 2, 2013 / BioCat - Jan 19, 2015
|Clothes make the man? -CLEP essay
2 - When you dress nice together with your good looks, you would certainly be treated better with more respect...
Writing Feedbackmusicmajor - May 2, 2013 / dumi - May 2, 2013
|Write about the benefits of having good friends (Qualifying English Test)
Writing Feedbackkevinj888 - May 2, 2013 / kevinj888 - May 2, 2013
|"Honesty is the best policy"; Is it good to tell the truth always?
Writing Feedbackthegypsygirl - May 2, 2013 / Yourz_Truly - May 2, 2013
|"Can't Wait to Play The Lottery"; College Assignment
NEW - This is my college english final that is due at 8 tomorrow morning! If you could please help me...
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|FAMILY Vs WORK; What is more important?
Writing Feedbackwolf4bunny - May 1, 2013 / wolf4bunny - May 1, 2013
|IELTS : Boarding schools are getting more popular in some countries. Good or bad?
Writing Feedbackiatropathos - May 1, 2013 / iatropathos - May 3, 2013
|Will modern technology, such as the internet ever replace the book as the main source
Writing FeedbackAs is - May 1, 2013 / As is - May 2, 2013
|IELTS wirting: Children should begin formal education at four years old
Writing Feedbackwarmhub - Apr 30, 2013 / warmhub - May 2, 2013
|IELTS: class attendance and vacation length
2 - Hi Malmhed, It's always good that you have one essay in each post. Then you have better chances for...
Writing Feedbackmalhamed - Apr 30, 2013 / dumi - Apr 30, 2013
|SAT; Should people act as individuals or copy others' ideas?
4 - I know.... that's why I wanted to draw your attention on it. Sometimes you get carried away with...
Writing Feedbacktheblackpearl - Apr 30, 2013 / dumi - May 1, 2013
|IELTS - crimes committed by young people in major cities R&G
Writing Feedbackveronicafy - Apr 30, 2013 / veronicafy - Apr 30, 2013
|TOEFL ibT: What do you want most in a friend? Intelligent, humor, reliable?
Writing FeedbackRedFire - Apr 30, 2013 / RedFire - Apr 30, 2013
|Topic: Genetically modified (GM) crops should be encouraged to develop.
Writing Feedbackningo - Apr 29, 2013 / ningo - Apr 30, 2013
|Is there a BEST AGE to marry? ; TOEFL IBT
Writing Feedbackgeorgekozma - Apr 29, 2013 / alexclark512 - Apr 30, 2013
|IELTS WRITING: university students should study a full range of subjects or specific
NEW - Topic : It is argued that university students should study a full range of subjects, instead of some specific...
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|New experiences,Career preparation,Knowledge; Reasons why people attend college
2 - Education is the base that helps people to have a better life and find means to contribute towards...
Writing Feedbackchickiki27 - Apr 29, 2013 / dumi - Apr 29, 2013
|My Favorite Super hero is Ayatollah Khomeini
Writing Feedbackabedkh - Apr 29, 2013 / dumi - Apr 29, 2013
|In twenty years, student will do all of their school work on a computer
2 - Educators debate whether students should be allowed to do all their school work using computers or not. ...
Writing Feedbackhjlary dang - Apr 29, 2013 / dumi - Apr 29, 2013
|IELTS Exam writting : Child should spend more time in play or school project ?
7 - I was not aware of these errors ... thanks to everyone ! And another question is what will be...
Writing Feedbackoliveoil_s - Apr 29, 2013 / oliveoil_s - May 2, 2013
|My grandma Phyllis is very special to me!
Writing FeedbackAmberJason02 - Apr 28, 2013 / dumi - Apr 29, 2013
|IETLS: Children can benefit by engaging in some kind of paid work
6 - Thank you for your correction I think I should redo this question again. Let answer more relevant....
Writing FeedbackAlbert Y - Apr 28, 2013 / Albert Y - Apr 29, 2013
|What is the better way of gaining knowledge, experience or books ?
5 - One of the most traditional ways of gaining knowledge is books. ...is reading books. he learns to not touch...
Writing FeedbackJosephd6 - Apr 27, 2013 / veronicafy - Apr 29, 2013
|Parenting outweigh the schooling in terms of nurturing a good member of society
3 - Nowadays, many people have realized the importance of influencing their children to be more socially responsible . ...
Writing Feedbackhomsai - Apr 27, 2013 / dumi - Apr 27, 2013
|Increasing dependence on technology & the ability of thinking for ourselves
Writing Feedbackedisonjk - Apr 26, 2013 / dumi - Apr 27, 2013
|Utilizing sustainable habits to improve mental, physical and financial well being.
2 - What is the word limit ? You need more paragraphs to make this essay look organized . Remember to...
Writing FeedbackJOS2134202 - Apr 26, 2013 / manjot - May 5, 2013
|GRE Argument Essay- Skateboarders VS. Shop Owners
2 - The Central Plaza store owner's concludes that increase in popularity of skateboarding and the level of vandalism and...
Writing Feedbacklaurelmegan - Apr 26, 2013 / dumi - Apr 26, 2013
|IELTS essay, Increasing weight of people - causes and solutions
5 - Thank you all very much! I'll consider all your remarks and try to avoid these mistakes in my future...
Writing FeedbackKamilG - Apr 26, 2013 / KamilG - Apr 29, 2013
|Why do you think people attend colleges?career preparation, new experiences
Writing Feedbackmreza65 - Apr 26, 2013 / dumi - Apr 26, 2013
|People dream things that are often almost impossible achieve;Compare &Contrast Essay
Writing FeedbackAeryn - Apr 25, 2013 / Aeryn - Apr 28, 2013
|What is your idea about children's studying at boarding school?
2 - .... Before coming to this point, it's better if you introduced the other options as well, since you...
Writing FeedbackOrkhan_O - Apr 25, 2013 / dumi - Apr 26, 2013
|IELTS - children learning foreign language in young age; brain under development
2 - Today, children have the facilities to learn a foreign language at the level of primary school itself. Some...
Writing Feedbackchristyzhongs - Apr 25, 2013 / Pahan - Apr 28, 2013
|IELTS Essay - Teenage years are the Happiest time of life?
Writing Feedbackchristyzhongs - Apr 25, 2013 / dumi - Apr 26, 2013
|Most difficult aspects of learning a new language ; TOEFL ibt
11 - ok thanks dear :)...
Writing Feedbackgeorgekozma - Apr 25, 2013 / georgekozma - Apr 29, 2013
|'Learning never stops' - Learn from a teacher or by yourself?
Writing FeedbackJosephd6 - Apr 25, 2013 / Pahan - Apr 28, 2013
|"Foreign students need to be patient"- Report on adjustments for overseas students
3 - Hi Dumi, I apologize for reply late because of the national holiday. My hometown thoroughly doesnt have Internet :D....
Writing Feedbackxucoi - Apr 25, 2013 / xucoi - May 3, 2013
|IELTS : I believe that parents are the best among the teachers to teach
Writing Feedbackshaddy - Apr 24, 2013 / Pahan - Apr 24, 2013
|Toefl Ibt- Task 2; Reasons for attending college or universities
3 - But I have a strong belief that most of students attend to an educational institution in hope of...
Writing FeedbackBarriosMaricel9 - Apr 24, 2013 / Pahan - Apr 24, 2013
|Should museums charge admission fees? YES
3 - Advancement in technology has influenced the hobbies and leisure activities of the people of modern era. ...
Writing Feedbacksanaqvi - Apr 24, 2013 / dumi - Apr 27, 2013
|Punishment for misconduct of school children
Writing Feedbacksanaqvi - Apr 24, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|'what young people can learn from the older?' - the knowledge is most important
Writing Feedbackningo - Apr 24, 2013 / dumi - Apr 27, 2013
|IELTS ; Leading a Simple Life helps protect our environment?
2 - .... I think the word "decade" is more appropriate because it's been happening for sometime at a faster...
Writing FeedbackLorica - Apr 23, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|Should people do things they don't like in some situations?
Writing Feedbackrollin44 - Apr 23, 2013 / Pahan - May 14, 2013
|Competition sports,both team and individual have no place in student's curriculum?
5 - It's always good to include your prompt in your post so that others can give you more relevant comments....
Writing Feedbackreza56t - Apr 23, 2013 / dumi - May 3, 2013
|What is more important? STUDIES or LUCK?
4 - AidanaMyrzakhan You should take a very clear point of view that will help to write convincingly. For instance, ...
Writing FeedbackAidanaMyrzakhan - Apr 23, 2013 / sanaqvi - Apr 24, 2013
|Advantages of face-to-face communication
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