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|IELTS; Consumer durables(telephone,refrigerator,etc)owned inBritain
4 - The rate of people using this item fluctuated between 93% to 98% during the period Refrigerator...
Writing Feedbacklytetdi - Jun 21, 2013 / dumi - Jun 24, 2013
|What's more useful: purchasing a business or a house?
6 - I think you can get a better structure for this essay if you could share some insights also on...
Writing FeedbackMabossani - Jun 21, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 24, 2013
|IELTS: business and financial grew noticeably and become the most advanced area
3 - -> ... the UK in the twentieth century -> business and financial services grew/developed the most...
Writing Feedbackshinichi75 - Jun 21, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 23, 2013
|Human activity is harmful to the existance of earth; what's your opinion?
Writing Feedbackkvant - Jun 21, 2013 / kvant - Jun 21, 2013
|Reason why you want to buy carbon filter comforter mask
3 - ...it's good if you can improve clarity of this line; [i]The industrial enviroments are often polluted by noise,...
Writing Feedbacklespeed - Jun 20, 2013 / dumi - Jun 24, 2013
|Books and experience - rate my essay for TOEFL iBT
Writing Feedbacklucky_boy - Jun 20, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 20, 2013
|Let various boards maintain their autonomy in preparing curriculum
7 - Our country is developing and step by step becomes a civilization country where the vast majority of people are...
Writing Feedbackrohan4819 - Jun 20, 2013 / chiphan38 - Jun 21, 2013
|IELTS TASK1:Complain letter for wrong information on a product's AD
3 - Yes, this has some grammar errors that have been already highlighted by others and the fixes have been...
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Jun 20, 2013 / dumi - Jun 21, 2013
|IELTS: Many people are busy with work and not enough time for famliy
Writing Feedbackellie_lcl - Jun 19, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 23, 2013
|IELTS; Leisure time is for improving mind or resting mind?
Writing Feedbackmario_nagi - Jun 19, 2013 / ellie_lcl - Jun 19, 2013
|What's more important? Roads or public transport?
Writing FeedbackMabossani - Jun 19, 2013 / Mabossani - Jun 19, 2013
|My trip to a nice and unusual village!
2 - ..."gO to new places" is implied by the word "traveling".... so itsounds redundant. I love to travel because...
Writing Feedbackvahidbm - Jun 19, 2013 / dumi - Jun 19, 2013
|IELTS; CHANGE or ROUTINE LIFESTYLE? Which one is better?
Writing Feedbackorxan88 - Jun 19, 2013 / dido272000 - Jun 21, 2013
|IELTS TASK2:Reward or punishment for a good behavior?
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Jun 18, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 19, 2013
|IELTS; Gender equality should be exercised in universities?
3 - .... Good opening. However, I feel they need fair treatment irrespective of which era they live in. There...
Writing Feedbackjenny90 - Jun 18, 2013 / dumi - Jun 19, 2013
|A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status
Writing Feedbackmsmwarren - Jun 18, 2013 / sherry manson - Jul 4, 2013
|I'll move; my city is not capable to provide job vacancies for young specialists
Writing Feedbackkvant - Jun 18, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 19, 2013
|IELTS; Why attend Universities or Colleges? Specific reasons and examples
5 - I think you should change this sentence a bit: I believe that career preparation is the main reason...
Writing Feedbacksalmah1997 - Jun 18, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013
|Grade this GRE issue essay task out of 6.. feel free to point out any mistake
6 - This can be true. However, if I don't know my multiplication tables, should I be teaching arithmetic (let...
Writing FeedbackNilanjana - Jun 17, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 18, 2013
|IELTS TASK2:learning to play a music instrument is a waste of time
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Jun 17, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 19, 2013
|GRE Analytic Writing; Should student study the same National Curriculum ?
4 - Don't make a list of points in your introduction. High school teachers (and teachers of all kinds) are wrong...
Writing Feedbackshadman19922 - Jun 17, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 17, 2013
|'censorhip'; Creative artists should have freedom to express their views
3 - .... It's not just last decades... Even in ancient times, the artists used to talk to their people...
Writing Feedbackdragosp - Jun 17, 2013 / dumi - Jun 17, 2013
|IELTS; Business letter explaining the reasons why I want to be away from work
5 - It is not required but it is good to have at least two sentences in your first paragraph. You...
Writing Feedbackmario_nagi - Jun 17, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 19, 2013
|TOEFL; Integrated writing task - Team Work is the best way to handle a new project
5 - First, the reading passage claims that a team exerts a greater power than that of an individual in...
Writing Feedbacksinafrm1365 - Jun 17, 2013 / dumi - Jun 29, 2013
|'uniformity in the educational system'; one national curriculum for students
Writing Feedbackretro13 - Jun 17, 2013 / retro13 - Jun 18, 2013
|Mind is very vulnerable and fragile; Death and the Maiden / Visual Essay
Writing Feedbackomid_sarox - Jun 17, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 17, 2013
|IELTS; Teachers would not be need anymore in the classroom as a result of computers
4 - Hi Kjerry Pay attention to preposition,vocabulary and spelling. Read some articles and books. the way we...
Writing FeedbackKjerry - Jun 17, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 17, 2013
|Nature Vs Nurture; What is more important? Inborn characteristics or Experience?
Writing Feedbackdido272000 - Jun 17, 2013 / dumi - Jun 17, 2013
|IELTS TASK1:Letter to a friend visiting your country
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Jun 16, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 17, 2013
|Topic: "Which is a better place to live - a small town or a big?"
3 - There are many advantages and disadvantages tothat one would experience by living in a big city or small town....
Writing FeedbackLokiWolfChilde - Jun 16, 2013 / dumi - Jun 17, 2013
|IELTS ; We are getting more and more greedy & selfish; Should we go back to the past?
6 - As everybody else above, I too suggest you to write simple sentences with more clarity. Don't have the habit...
Writing Feedbacksunnyback - Jun 16, 2013 / Pahan - Jul 1, 2013
|parents are the first people who show the children what they should or shouldnt
Writing Feedbackvioletkau1 - Jun 16, 2013 / Pahan - Jul 1, 2013
|technology impact - we should keep the knowledge of traditional skills alive
3 - past tense of lead is led and "leaded" means; 1. (of windowpanes or a roof) Framed, covered, or...
Writing Feedbackdrodriguez_38 - Jun 16, 2013 / dumi - Jul 3, 2013
|Same laws should be applied to Tobacco as they are applied to Heroin
3 - Follow the outline suggested by jkjeremy. Also don't forget to support your reasons with a specific example that can...
Writing Feedbackdrodriguez_38 - Jun 16, 2013 / dumi - Jun 29, 2013
|Now a days technologies have became a very important aspect of everybodys lives!
4 - "Now a days" should be spelled "nowadays," but is a word that is no longer used frequently by...
Writing Feedbackgangadhar - Jun 16, 2013 / IntheClouds - Jun 28, 2013
|TOEFL-ETS Some people believe that automobiles are useful and necessary.
2 - You present an interesting position on the topic provided. However, there is a lot more you can do to...
Writing FeedbackTareqkh - Jun 16, 2013 / vangiespen - Sep 11, 2014
|Being afraid of changing can make people conservative and less interesting than others.
Writing Feedbackshinichi75 - Jun 15, 2013 / shinichi75 - Jun 18, 2013
|IELTS: Should we experiment on animals?
Writing FeedbackDHuong - Jun 15, 2013 / dumi - Jun 15, 2013
|Students are the people who get knowledge from teachers in classroom and laboratory.
3 - These are the places where students gain knowledge and wisdom. This knowledge is necessary for...
Writing Feedbackgangadhar - Jun 15, 2013 / dumi - Jun 15, 2013
|Ielts: Changes in women's position in society cause juvenile deliquency
4 - Thank you, Sopha but the second sentence in the introduction is my thesis statement. I had better add some...
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - Jun 15, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 15, 2013
|Report- The number of vehicles crossing the Waterloo Bridge.
Writing Feedbackxucoi - Jun 15, 2013 / xucoi - Jun 18, 2013
|The Effects of TV on Society, especially on children;
Writing Feedbackkieulinhbs - Jun 15, 2013 / dumi - Jun 29, 2013
|"I'm not going to lie, I'm a liar" - my best lie yet is lying about lying
Writing Feedbacktrilam153 - Jun 14, 2013 / dumi - Jun 15, 2013
|IELTS task2 : How should visitors behave when they travel in other countries?
3 - Thanx v.much for the feedback ,,do you think any part of this is not related to the main topic...
Writing Feedbackmedoo - Jun 14, 2013 / medoo - Jun 15, 2013
|An short essay - ways and reasons why people are escaping from the reality.
Writing Feedbackmichi555 - Jun 14, 2013 / dumi - Jun 15, 2013
|Ielts: The cement and concrete making process
11 - I see. I guessed I could add a sentence about the fire to supplement the preceded sentence. Thank...
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - Jun 14, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013
|Let's protect our Earth; Effects of Global Warming
4 - 1. "Serious and dangerous" are already implied if not directly stated. 2. The word "this" doesn't mean...
Writing Feedbackrozha - Jun 14, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 16, 2013
|I always dreamed of being a doctor
Writing Feedbackenglishlover - Jun 14, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 16, 2013
|IELTS; İnformation about USA marriage and divorce rates
Writing Feedbackorxan88 - Jun 14, 2013 / orxan88 - Jun 19, 2013
|IELTS: Negative effect of modern life's pressures on family life
6 - Thank you all for pointing out my mistakes. I'll rewrite about this topic as soon as possible....
Writing Feedbacknellylovekelly - Jun 14, 2013 / nellylovekelly - Jun 16, 2013
|IELTS: Advertisements make us waste money, or make our life easier?
7 - I think ah_zafari is right. When it's agree or disagree, you have to go by your opinion only. If...
Writing FeedbackShumaila86 - Jun 13, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 14, 2013
|IELTS;Streamlining Education has more advantages or disadvantages? Discuss both views
3 - Many people are of the opinion that this should be implemented while some oppose this view claiming...
Writing Feedbackntdang92 - Jun 13, 2013 / dumi - Jun 16, 2013
|Should children be encouraged to compete or co-operate? Discuss
4 - .... well.... first, researchers find facts through their studies and not claim. You can also say, "Research studies...
Writing Feedbackdido272000 - Jun 13, 2013 / dumi - Jun 16, 2013
|IELTS: Young people today have more power & influence than previous generations
3 - .... your sentences are pretty incomplete. You also need to have a logical flow of ideas. First, technological...
Writing Feedbackgrb18 - Jun 13, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 15, 2013
|Selecting a career is not an easy thing; How do you choose your career?
5 - Thank Dumi....
Writing Feedbackrozha - Jun 13, 2013 / rozha - Jun 15, 2013
|TV is dangerous for family bonds; Do you agree?
2 - TV has become a serious threat to family bonds because it affects adversely on communication between family members....
Writing Feedbacknguyenngoc - Jun 13, 2013 / dumi - Jun 13, 2013
|People go to college because they need to learn more things about the world - TOEFL
Writing Feedbackinecula - Jun 13, 2013 / hamedmas - Sep 12, 2014
|IELTS task 2: Inclusion of Competitive sports in the school curriculum.
2 - I disagree with this argument and wish to discuss the advantages of inclusion of sports in the school...
Writing FeedbackShumaila86 - Jun 12, 2013 / dumi - Jun 12, 2013
|Earning capacity of successful SPORTS professionals Vs OTHER professionals
3 - I think you definitely need to double check this for grammatical errors; there are a fair amount of blantant[i][/i]...
Writing Feedbackdragosp - Jun 12, 2013 / marecrowley - Jun 12, 2013
|How should girls and boys study? Should they attend separate schools?
2 - These lines do not have much relevance to your essay. In the introduction you are supposed to introduce...
Writing Feedbackgangadhar - Jun 12, 2013 / dumi - Jun 12, 2013
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