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|'Time of judgement' - college essay
Writing Feedbackjustintubbs - Oct 10, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Oct 10, 2012
|Causes, effects, and solutions to DIVORCE
2 - Causes, effects, and solutions to DIVORCE Be sure to discuss each of these topics equally. If you were to...
Writing Feedbackphantan252 - Oct 10, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Oct 10, 2012
|Academic or non academic subjects at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
4 - I admire your position. However, if you use shorter sentences, your main idea will undoubtedly stand out...
Writing FeedbackGagandeep - Oct 10, 2012 / rezwan3 - Nov 1, 2012
|IELTS: World literacy rates by region and by gender; 'lower for men than women'
2 - Hello! This makes sense, but has a few grammatical errors. Lack of literacy skills IS found (currently you have...
Writing Feedbackding - Oct 10, 2012 / Leah_Writer - Nov 5, 2012
|does cheap air travel damage the environment
2 - Your way of description is good . Straight to the point. I like your way of description and how...
Writing FeedbackLIGE - Oct 10, 2012 / alfredeie - Nov 1, 2012
|IELTS TASK 2 - Sport man makes more money than other. Discuss both views
3 - To be success in --- To ACHIEVE success in (it must be either BE SUCCESSFUL or ACHIEVE SUCCESS) Many...
Writing FeedbackTran Tong - Oct 10, 2012 / April April - Oct 16, 2012
|Harmful human activity damages the Earth
2 - Sorry for my bad english because i'm still beginner with the language. I think is very interesting the comment...
Writing FeedbackJue - Oct 10, 2012 / Chapapote - Oct 10, 2012
|How to use "Ratio", "Disproportion" and "volume" in the IELTS Task1 report???
Writing Feedbackgreenbeen - Oct 10, 2012 / greenbeen - Feb 27, 2013
|"Traditional Market"- Narration for a theme : Look before you leap
2 - Shopping with my mother in traditional market has become a nightmare for me recently. - Recently, shopping in...
Writing FeedbackAlyssa - Oct 9, 2012 / skinbag - Oct 9, 2012
|Teacher vs parent role in children's intellectual and social development IELTS Task2
Writing FeedbackIris77 - Oct 9, 2012 / Leah_Writer - Nov 5, 2012
|'Norwegian Philosopher Arne Naess' article correction
3 - Can anyone with good english correct this A Norwegian Philosopher Arne Naess invented the term 'Deep Ecology'. An environmental...
Writing Feedbackbat - Oct 9, 2012 / bat - Oct 9, 2012
|IELTS TASK2 Pros and cons of building nuclear power plants
5 - In my opinion, the very first thing is that you'd better write more (IELTS Task 2 essay requires at...
Writing Feedbackz1z1z1z1 - Oct 9, 2012 / Chicken - Oct 24, 2012
|'A person of good moral character' - Writing Sample
Writing Feedbackgospelkeys - Oct 9, 2012 / anniejerry - Oct 9, 2012
|side effect to the society; Higher petrol price Vs Level of traffic & pollution
NEW - Hi, I need to improve my writing skill. kindly give me feedback so that i can improve. Pollution...
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|Design Rationale - Essay about advertising for communication class
2 - Instead of saying this "Advertisements surround us, they appear everywhere" you could maybe say something to the fact of...
Writing FeedbackmBluebear - Oct 9, 2012 / Tabby - Nov 3, 2012
|IELTS: Investment in public transportation to against pollution; Agree/ Disagree
NEW - The policy to increase spending on public transportation to reduce air pollution has been common in many cities in...
Writing FeedbackTran Tong - Oct 8, 2012 / — -
|Problems in relationships have led to separation ; Conflict and Relationship
5 - As this is my first essay I really require your reviews on structure , grammer , sentences , punctuations....
Writing Feedbackiamtrying - Oct 8, 2012 / iamtrying - Oct 13, 2012
|visitors going to music sites / sales and prices of Coca Cola - IELTS Writing task 1
3 - the numbers of Pop Parade's guesses stay around 120.000 = he numbers of Pop Parade's guests stays around 120.000...
Writing Feedbackding - Oct 8, 2012 / Tran Tong - Oct 8, 2012
|Essay: compare and contrast between communicating by mobile phone and letter
Writing Feedbackthao phuong - Oct 8, 2012 / thao phuong - Oct 9, 2012
|The World & Experience - UC Prompts
Writing Feedbackdresdenflyer - Oct 7, 2012 / shmegg - Oct 28, 2012
|I really need help next month I have TOEFL and your comment will help me
Writing Feedbackparnian - Oct 7, 2012 / navid_zarif - Oct 11, 2012
|The process of making tea
Writing FeedbackHeina - Oct 7, 2012 / Heina - Oct 9, 2012
|I am preparing for TOEFL iBT - Students choice of places to live
Writing Feedbackaniketkumar - Oct 7, 2012 / navid_zarif - Oct 11, 2012
|IELTS_importance of academic qualifications and personality in employment
2 - After reading your passage,in addition to some of the influent sentences,I feel you'd better think about how to make...
Writing Feedbackchfrank - Oct 7, 2012 / Jue - Oct 7, 2012
|'Myths are the symbols of humans primitive cognition about the world' TOEFL ESSAY
2 - We are living in a world that isconsists of substances which are ,scientifically speaking,the productresult of the Bigbang that...
Writing FeedbackJue - Oct 7, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Oct 8, 2012
|SAT essay -Which is more powerful? Conscience Vs Money, Fame, or Power
NEW - I would like some feedback on improving this, also, I would like to know what score I would get,...
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|Report on culture shock between China and French for exchange student
NEW - Hey, it is a little bit longer. Please help me look at the structure and writing. Thank you ...
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|IELTS Task 01 - Numbers of employed persons by job type and sex
Writing FeedbackTran Tong - Oct 6, 2012 / justivy03 - Apr 12, 2015
|Nuclear Family Essay - needs a LOT of reconstructing
2 - On the first sentence i think you shld remove 'or not' because it will sound better if there's only...
Writing Feedbacksamanthaxo - Oct 5, 2012 / jomk - Oct 6, 2012
|Media Analysis Essay - Vietnam War
2 - If you want to be more specific you could say, for example; that ...as independent news organizations presented real...
Writing FeedbackJustawriter7 - Oct 5, 2012 / nelsond1960 - Oct 21, 2012
|Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment of crime. Others however
2 - Mankind is subject to imperfection and its own mistakes. There are to ways to live a life either honorably...
Writing Feedbackpgaur - Oct 5, 2012 / Tran Tong - Oct 8, 2012
|IELTS letter: requesting some information about the scholarship
3 - jue, thanks for your suggestions by which make the viewpoint more convinced by giving more elabration on the application...
Writing Feedbackredstone - Oct 5, 2012 / redstone - Oct 6, 2012
|IELTS: Should University education be free? 'Everything has two sides'
Writing Feedbackquy - Oct 5, 2012 / pgaur - Oct 5, 2012
|IETLS writing practice: university education-preparation for employment or knowledge?
Writing FeedbackWang Ying - Oct 5, 2012 / Wang Ying - Oct 9, 2012
|Movies expand our knowledge and information about other countries. TOEFL Essay
2 - The last and most important but not the least reason is that movies enhance/escalate our knowledge about other countries....
Writing Feedbacknavid_zarif - Oct 5, 2012 / krishnakant - Oct 5, 2012
|TOEFL essay - help / technology effects
4 - internet,which -> Use space after commas internet, which is the grand an invincible product of technology of 21...
Writing FeedbackJue - Oct 5, 2012 / krishnakant - Oct 5, 2012
|Government expenses for roads and highways or public transportation - TOEFL essay
Writing FeedbackJue - Oct 5, 2012 / besttermpaper - Oct 5, 2012
|Sat essay; punishment as kids teaching method. Intro and Body - grade it, any ways to improve it?
2 - Hi, I made a few corrections/suggestions to your essay. Hope they help. Sorry I couldn't get the strike through...
Writing FeedbackAminemouj - Oct 4, 2012 / Duffy1513 - Oct 4, 2012
|IELTS task 2 - What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?
2 - This statements is too broad and does not establish a close link to your topic theme.... Specify the...
Writing Feedbacklavinia94 - Oct 3, 2012 / dumi - Oct 4, 2012
|IELTS - International travel and mass media: Duchess Kate topless
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|Factors influencing job satisfaction; salary and high level position in ranking
Writing Feedbackjahan - Oct 3, 2012 / jahan - Oct 6, 2012
|IELTS ; The roads are getting more crowded with increasing number of cars
2 - With the number of cars increasing,roads are getting more crowded and the environment is becoming more polluted. But I...
Writing Feedbackgoldmanswalking - Oct 2, 2012 / giaaahhh28 - Oct 2, 2012
|IELTS; parents and schools are able to share the responsibility to educate children
Writing FeedbackTran Tong - Oct 2, 2012 / April April - Oct 6, 2012
|IELTS TASK 1 - Immigration figures for the UK
3 - Thank you so much. Those are basic errors. Unacceptable. Normally, I cannot see all of my errors, even I've...
Writing FeedbackTran Tong - Oct 2, 2012 / Tran Tong - Oct 2, 2012
|ielts writing, traffic & environmental problems. NEED to improve to Band 7-8
3 - This sounds like an incomplete sentence. Whilst and While (both mean the same) function mostly as a conjuction...
Writing Feedbackafra514 - Oct 2, 2012 / dumi - Oct 16, 2012
|Narrative essay about the time I went on a date with my current boyfriend / "Shelby"
2 - What is the prompt? For the first paragraph, I'd recheck the punctuation. You might want to replace some semicolons...
Writing Feedbacklourdesl - Oct 1, 2012 / zeppy1995 - Oct 11, 2012
|IELTS - Traditional and International music complete each other.
Writing FeedbackAndrixH - Oct 1, 2012 / AndrixH - Oct 30, 2012
|Females & males education [IELTS] Writing Task 1_2
2 - The charts show the number of girls per 100 boys in all levels of education. Compared with nineteen's nineteenth,...
Writing Feedbackcolor - Oct 1, 2012 / goldmanswalking - Oct 21, 2012
|Cell Phones Impact on Society - they have made communication easier
3 - thank you so much!! yes you did help me alot; i added few things thanks to ur feedback...is that...
Writing Feedbackrwony - Oct 1, 2012 / rwony - Oct 1, 2012
|Creative artists should be given liberty to express themselves; like on Facebook
3 - 1. Actually i try to show that yes freedom to be given to creative persons but with some restrictions....
Writing Feedbackpgaur - Oct 1, 2012 / pgaur - Oct 1, 2012
|'How has technology affected relationships' I am preparing to score band 7+ in IELTS
3 - Hey pgaur, thanks for you comment. But could you please elaborate on this more by giving me some...
Writing Feedbackgoldmanswalking - Oct 1, 2012 / goldmanswalking - Oct 1, 2012
|Pregnant Working Women and Finance
Writing FeedbackAimeyMalambri - Oct 1, 2012 / hagertahir - Oct 27, 2012
|There are many diffrent types of music in the world today. Whay do we need music ?
NEW - Hi everybody, I am a newcomer, and I am trying to improve my writing to get ielts examination next...
Writing Feedbackluckyman - Oct 1, 2012 / — -
|Over-reliance on technology & ability of humas to think for themselves
2 - Hi! I think it's great you are trying to improve your writing skills. What I noticed in your essay...
Writing Feedbackshkh23 - Sep 30, 2012 / abbieflis - Oct 14, 2012
|(SAT Essay) Can knowledge be a burden? (grade it based on the SAT criteria)
4 - excellent writing skill and ideas are good, but the structure of the article is a little bit messy....
Writing FeedbackGuest - Sep 30, 2012 / beibeibajin - Oct 12, 2012
|An aberrant curriculum in every other state of a nation would certainly be a reason of chaos
Writing Feedbackaaqibmir007 - Sep 30, 2012 / chiragjain - Oct 21, 2012
|The best aspect of the job is the money one earns
Writing Feedbackhamedmas - Sep 29, 2012 / chadenlabiad - Oct 7, 2012
|Social Networking - how does it affect us? Need third body paragraph and conclusion.
3 - Hello bansmart06, The reason why you are stuck at your third paragraph is because the scope of your...
Writing Feedbackbansmart06 - Sep 29, 2012 / nanoflame - Oct 16, 2012
|Should we trust someone in the first impression or not?
NEW - Hi everybody, please give me some your comments for my essay. Thank you very much :) Some people...
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|Human cloning - is it moral or immoral?
2 - The meaning of the humans cloning is that scientist creates the lab human. They copy the genetic real human,...
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