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|By punishing murders with the death penalty.
Writing FeedbackAlicegaga - Nov 16, 2012 / Alicegaga - Nov 18, 2012
|Health safety and budget - how important to the society - Ielts test
7 - I do not know, I am not an examiner. Different examiners would score your differently. I think this...
Writing Feedbackmanjit809 - Nov 16, 2012 / ah_zafari - Nov 16, 2012
|IELTS WT2: Library vs. Computer Technology
7 - Thanks Dumi, I started reading introduction tips and surely I have issues with introducing my topic. I recalled some...
Writing FeedbackInspired2012 - Nov 16, 2012 / Inspired2012 - Nov 20, 2012
|IELTS WT2: Preservations of Museums and artworks
2 - Hi Inspired, I'm marking and giving you every little bit that I think a better way of expressing....
Writing FeedbackInspired2012 - Nov 16, 2012 / dumi - Nov 16, 2012
|IELTS_WRITING) What are some important characteristics of a co-worker?
6 - Thank princedynasty and dumi for your proofreading. I want to tell you it is a big help for me....
Writing FeedbackLOMOBOY - Nov 15, 2012 / LOMOBOY - Nov 17, 2012
|Ielts:60% of freshmen alter their major subject in the second year of university
6 - Secondly, organization is how candidates divide an writing into many paragraphs as well as how they link them together....
Writing FeedbackNam12lehoan - Nov 15, 2012 / mcuong01 - Nov 22, 2012
|Education is undeniably the driving force in every country's evolution.
6 - Amazing essay! I can not believe this has been produced in 40 minutes. In my view your essays deserve...
Writing Feedbackprincedynasty - Nov 15, 2012 / Ravichandra - Nov 22, 2012
|Money spent on FAST FOOD IN BRITAIN (IELTS TASK1)
NEW - The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows...
Writing Feedbackorkhan - Nov 15, 2012 / — -
|Research Paper: Steroid Use in Baseball
Writing FeedbackTimqe92401 - Nov 14, 2012 / Timqe92401 - Nov 16, 2012
|'You have been my role model' - Essay on my inspiration
Writing Feedbackemilee956 - Nov 14, 2012 / emilee956 - Nov 17, 2012
|Ielts task 2: today, more school leavers are unable to find jobs.
7 - @Inspired2012: I'm impressed by your fighting-to-death spirit in English writing. You will probably succeed. At least it's what I...
Writing Feedbackprincedynasty - Nov 14, 2012 / princedynasty - Nov 15, 2012
|Your Music, Your Emotions, You (news article for concert)
NEW - Please read this and tell me ASAP, what the mistakes and everything else that's wrong. I will reply to...
Writing FeedbackBani - Nov 14, 2012 / — -
|'modern appliances' - Technology help improve our lifestyle
Writing Feedbackannguyen - Nov 14, 2012 / Inspired2012 - Nov 16, 2012
|how important is to maintain old buildings?should history stand in the way of progres
2 - Hi Saaaaaaaaaaaaaammmmmmmm ;) Is this for IELTS? If yes, What is the task for this essay? Is it to...
Writing Feedbacksam2012 - Nov 14, 2012 / Inspired2012 - Nov 14, 2012
|IELTS WT2: Position of women in Society and their career status
Writing FeedbackInspired2012 - Nov 14, 2012 / Inspired2012 - Nov 16, 2012
|'Learnt how to type with 10 fingers' - A New Expermient essay
Writing Feedbacksynz - Nov 14, 2012 / synz - Nov 16, 2012
|IELTS essay main benefit of international cooperation
7 - Your essay have specific ideas and examples. I'm just wondering how we can think up such interesting ideas within...
Writing Feedbackjenny45 - Nov 13, 2012 / princedynasty - Nov 14, 2012
|'the development of science' - IELTS TASK2- TECHNOLOGY
Writing Feedbackrenlyso - Nov 13, 2012 / renlyso - Nov 15, 2012
|'Teen Responsibility' - dropingout of high school (agree or disagree)
Writing Feedbackbetocheagha - Nov 13, 2012 / betocheagha - Nov 13, 2012
|Ielts; teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work
Writing Feedbackskop - Nov 13, 2012 / renlyso - Nov 13, 2012
|GRE - technology deteriors our critical thinking abilities - feedback/grading
2 - Although technology has given us great comfort and amenities in our daily lives, its rapid advancement is also regressing...
Writing Feedbackhappydaisy - Nov 12, 2012 / undidiamaka - Nov 24, 2012
|Narrative ESSAY; UNUSUAL VOYAGE, Footballer, and Britain
Writing Feedbackghokmen - Nov 12, 2012 / ghokmen - Nov 13, 2012
|Old buildings and nation's history; History in pages can fade out from our minds
NEW - hi, I am preparing for IELTS can any one correct my essay and tell me how can i improve.thank...
Writing Feedbackprameelagolla - Nov 12, 2012 / — -
|Annual spending by a British school in 1981 - ielts task1
11 - Well, it means that a group of people think that the number of university students is too high and...
Writing Feedbackrenlyso - Nov 12, 2012 / ah_zafari - Dec 7, 2012
|'Yoga practice' - What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress?
4 - .... good opening and you have quickly set up the link and achieved alignment with the topic. Good!...
Writing Feedbackbamboo - Nov 12, 2012 / dumi - Nov 17, 2012
|'Corrupt-free governments and stable economy' - IELTS preparation
Writing FeedbackTrave - Nov 12, 2012 / renlyso - Nov 12, 2012
|Computers overweigh schools so schools will disappear
NEW - Some people think computers and the Internet have more benifit than schools so schools will disappear from our lives....
Writing FeedbackLilianS - Nov 12, 2012 / — -
|Universities should provide graduates with the knowledge or with work experience?
3 - Thanks a lot for valuable corrections. I agree with your suggestion about introduction completely....
Writing Feedbacknazadjou - Nov 12, 2012 / nazadjou - Nov 12, 2012
|How to learn vocabulary: 'writing the words, association, learning by reading'
3 - thanks...
Writing Feedbackle bao - Nov 12, 2012 / le bao - Nov 18, 2012
|'Competitive life' - Ielts essay
5 - thank you writersmyth what do you mean about "make it more effective by pros and cons" can you give...
Writing Feedbackabtin - Nov 12, 2012 / abtin - Nov 12, 2012
|'experience of survival life, South Pole' - Ielts, task 2
3 - Thank you very , very much !!! Could you just point me if isn't there any other mistake, pleasee...
Writing Feedbackskop - Nov 12, 2012 / skop - Nov 12, 2012
|'Global challenges' - Countries should not isolate themselves
2 - bayron Nowadays there are different methods of governing countries. Some countries use the method of isolation instead of...
Writing Feedbackbayron - Nov 11, 2012 / AzizZ - Nov 23, 2012
|Dura, a leader in label converting for the durable-product market ; SUMMARY
Writing Feedbackmsalq - Nov 11, 2012 / hamedmas - Nov 29, 2012
|'better standard of living for people' - ielts - 2 task
4 - I've changed the pointed mistakes by you guys thank you very much, I really need to get down to...
Writing Feedbackskop - Nov 10, 2012 / skop - Nov 11, 2012
|'From Qatar and an independent school for girls' - about yourself
Writing Feedbackdmj - Nov 10, 2012 / ah_zafari - Nov 11, 2012
|'all writers started career at their 20s' - Ielts - graph
Writing Feedbackgop - Nov 10, 2012 / dumi - Nov 12, 2012
|'Coral Gables, Miami' - My lost palace
3 - What about Coral Gables makes you like getting lost? Getting lost is usually not pleasant, so what about the...
Writing Feedbackjincera1 - Nov 10, 2012 / cezyou - Nov 10, 2012
|'Independent, Artistic, Curious' - 3 WORDS TO DESCRIBE YOURSELF ESSAY
5 - MY SECOND DRAFT. I get rid of the curiosity part because I cannot find anything else to back it...
Writing Feedbacksydvu76 - Nov 9, 2012 / sydvu76 - Nov 14, 2012
|How dependent we are on machines? / Are machines going to take over the world?
NEW - We are living in a society which is called a "technologically civilized" society. Every small work that we do...
Writing FeedbackJessicaG - Nov 9, 2012 / — -
|Essay about taxation to reduce air traffic - feedback
Writing FeedbackMSMK - Nov 9, 2012 / MSMK - Nov 9, 2012
|'positive and inspirational trend' - IELTS: Creative artists' freedom
Writing Feedbackhumanx - Nov 8, 2012 / humanx - Nov 11, 2012
|This is a research paper on whether Social Networks causes relationships to end
NEW - The guidelines for this paper are as follows Transition sentence to get from the previous paragraph Topic sentence Supporting...
Writing Feedbackmcotton79 - Nov 8, 2012 / — -
|'Educate first' - an uneducated person cannot teach an educated person.
2 - Notes -You keep switching between "someone" and "you". Pick one -Openings and closings are too short -Grammar, Punctuation -Honestly,...
Writing Feedbackmepo - Nov 8, 2012 / petemess95 - Nov 16, 2012
|benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad...argumentative essay
2 - However, as a coin has two sides,this situationstudying abroad brings both benefits and drawbacks. The advantages of getting a...
Writing Feedbackspongebob123 - Nov 8, 2012 / Shoko0229 - Nov 22, 2012
|WritingTask1: Boys and Girls cultural and leisure activities
2 - Your essay is great. However, I suggest you to use more linking words such as on the contrary, while,...
Writing FeedbackHewlett1920 - Nov 8, 2012 / Scientiana - Nov 19, 2012
|IElLTS - reducing pollution and damage to the remote environments
Writing Feedbackjenny45 - Nov 8, 2012 / skop - Nov 12, 2012
|'money-centered people' - Judging person by his social status and material possessions - ielts
Writing Feedbackmanjit809 - Nov 8, 2012 / manjit809 - Nov 8, 2012
|'working for the childrens right' - Children engaged in paid work essay
5 - Hi Ibadullah, From the writing task description, I can see that this is for the IELTS writing exam....
Writing Feedbackibadullah - Nov 6, 2012 / Inspired2012 - Nov 14, 2012
|Is money synonymous to success?
Writing FeedbackCharmaine VC - Nov 7, 2012 / Charmaine VC - Nov 8, 2012
|TOEFL - Improving conditions - Has human harmed the Earth or made it a better place?
Writing FeedbackMunkhjin - Nov 7, 2012 / dumi - Nov 9, 2012
|'Effort to keep some things private' - question for the SAT
3 - Society did not have the opportunity to share "its" opinions is a really great thing - seems a little...
Writing Feedbackjazzyjj - Nov 7, 2012 / archie18 - Nov 28, 2012
|'Harmful effects' - IELTS Essay about the influence of advertisement
Writing Feedbackying0216 - Nov 7, 2012 / ying0216 - Nov 11, 2012
|Power of advertisements are overrated!
3 - Thankyou ah_zafari for your suggestions, I will try to improve those fiels which you highlited....
Writing Feedbackpriya9991 - Nov 7, 2012 / priya9991 - Nov 10, 2012
|History shows us how forgetful human beings are
Writing Feedbackrkandil - Nov 7, 2012 / jincera1 - Nov 7, 2012
|'museum can attract visitors' - [ielts] topic with museum
8 - Plz every one comment on this There are different kinds of people having different personalities and opinions living...
Writing Feedbackrenlyso - Nov 7, 2012 / ibadullah - Nov 10, 2012
|'Good atmosphere' - What change to hometown more appealing to people your age?
4 - "Although there are many buses in the urban and rural area, but it is pretty hard for people to...
Writing Feedbackpurplepotato - Nov 7, 2012 / zahras93 - Nov 11, 2012
|[graph] Percentage of students giving good ratings - IELTS review
Writing Feedbackbigbang15101990 - Nov 7, 2012 / renlyso - Nov 7, 2012
|The power of advertising and ads in the commerce essay
4 - ah_zafari Thanks for your valuable advice. Please see If this change can be helpful in introduction :- ...
Writing Feedbackmanjit809 - Nov 7, 2012 / manjit809 - Nov 7, 2012
|Dishonesty in relationship / Should you be always truthful?
3 - thanks a lot!...
Writing FeedbackMai_Alexei - Nov 6, 2012 / Mai_Alexei - Nov 8, 2012
|'years to build' - WILL I EVER TRUST AGAIN?
3 - Thanks for the reply it really helped i changed it to "I will remember that conversation until the day...
Writing Feedbacktata98 - Nov 6, 2012 / tata98 - Nov 6, 2012
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