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|'choosing big cities is wise' - Do you prefer big cities or small towns, to live in?
5 - ---------- heheheeeeeeee .... this is really interesting.... you guys talk in Farsi in an English forum... so, may...
Writing FeedbackMoonMoon - Aug 23, 2012 / dumi - Aug 28, 2012
|The inequality between rich and poor nations and minimizing the gap
NEW - Please help me to edit this essay writing as i practice it in order to retake the IELTS exam...
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|Going, Going, Gone (moving to America essay)
Writing Feedbackkamila - Aug 22, 2012 / voteforandy1 - Aug 23, 2012
|Expressing Al -Eid in Saudi Arabia - essay
Writing Feedbackhmp - Aug 22, 2012 / hmp - Aug 24, 2012
|Cook meal at home or go out for a dinner
Writing Feedbackneo1989 - Aug 22, 2012 / dumi - Aug 24, 2012
|GRE: Is communism better than capitalism?
Writing FeedbackHedonist - Aug 22, 2012 / Hedonist - Aug 22, 2012
|Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase.
Writing FeedbackMalavika - Aug 22, 2012 / April April - Aug 22, 2012
|Toefl Essay : Do you prefer to live in an old or a modern apartment?
2 - I am of the opinion that, new and modern apartments are good to live luxurious and comfortable life....
Writing Feedbackartin - Aug 22, 2012 / Malavika - Aug 22, 2012
|IELTS-Gender Equality at WORK or preferences for certain gender?
4 - By wrote "carers", I mean "caregivers" who usually look after kids or elders. Thank you, Malavika....
Writing Feedbackgolay - Aug 21, 2012 / golay - Aug 29, 2012
|Defeating the Odds -(BIOGRAPHY ESSAY)
Writing FeedbackTallynDow - Aug 21, 2012 / Paalexander - Aug 23, 2012
|A time i was challenged on a expectaion
Writing FeedbackChaCha11 - Aug 21, 2012 / ellecc - Aug 23, 2012
|People prefer to use their own transport nowadays
4 - I think the first sentence have some changes. firstly I firmly believe that government should improve public transportation....
Writing FeedbackMalavika - Aug 21, 2012 / Malavika - Aug 22, 2012
|'both of parents go out to work' - task 2 writing
Writing Feedbacknaught_angel24 - Aug 21, 2012 / naught_angel24 - Aug 21, 2012
|'When becoming a professional person' - ielts
6 - Dumi is correct & I totally agree with him. I think for letter writing/essay writing, essay forum is best....
Writing Feedbackredrose2013 - Aug 21, 2012 / amitt - Aug 24, 2012
|'will be relocating to Perth' - My IELTS essay general training
Writing Feedbackcaocao89 - Aug 21, 2012 / EF_Susan - Aug 22, 2012
|Internet is one of most important invention in the past 100 hundreds years
Writing Feedbackichenk - Aug 21, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 21, 2012
|Learning from previous tasks and how to develop your instint are very important
NEW - Giving a right decision has never been an easy task. Many people think that to have a right decision,...
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|'The next best thing after perfection' - College? Yes. (SAT)
2 - ^Yawn. How many other applicants do you think will be claiming/saying the same thing. Not the best start...
Writing Feedbackpluto - Aug 20, 2012 / Liebe - Aug 21, 2012
|student income over a ten year period ielts writing task 1
Writing FeedbackSoheila7814 - Aug 20, 2012 / Soheila7814 - Aug 23, 2012
|Essay on your reading proccess
2 - The literature I read is mainly non- fictional , and educational. Into the Wild by Jon Krakauer and Eat,...
Writing Feedbacknycgirl319 - Aug 20, 2012 / EF_Susan - Aug 22, 2012
|My School Days (school article)
5 - @KhanhZ..thanks a lot for your help :) @ah_zafari..I see I've got to improve a lot..thanks fr your help!...
Writing Feedbackstephenie - Aug 20, 2012 / stephenie - Aug 25, 2012
|Causes and solution of problems faced by school because of student behavior.
4 - EF_Susan Thank You EF_Susan for correcting my essay. It seems to me like I am making a certain kind...
Writing Feedbackfaizan_bardai - Aug 20, 2012 / faizan_bardai - Aug 21, 2012
|'technology and media' - CAS Essay of a non-English Speaker
Writing FeedbackLolaya - Aug 20, 2012 / Lolaya - Jun 1, 2013
|[TOEFL] Attending university classes should be required or optional-Feedback
Writing Feedbackultraann - Aug 20, 2012 / ultraann - Aug 28, 2012
|The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things
3 - Thank you for your help, it is accurate and complete and really helpful for me. Regards Hasan...
Writing Feedbackhsn - Aug 20, 2012 / hsn - Aug 20, 2012
|Argument topic: Dieting makes people fat.
NEW - According to National Institute of health (NIH) over 30 % of the U.S adults 'population is obese - a...
Writing Feedbackwritforsuccess - Aug 19, 2012 / — -
|'Cyberbullying Hurts!' - Essay Advice
Writing Feedbackpatw - Aug 19, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 20, 2012
|IELTS Task 1: Changes in Town_Maps
5 - @Artin: So glad you found my comments useful. I'll try my best to help with your next essays :)...
Writing FeedbackApril April - Aug 19, 2012 / April April - Aug 25, 2012
|IELTS: Impacts of Technology and its crucial part of our lives
7 - nice work but you have stressed only on security .. technology is a general term and so it requires...
Writing FeedbackApril April - Aug 19, 2012 / vikki - Sep 24, 2012
|'very essential to any people' - TOEFL IBT - Why do people need to attend university?
Writing Feedbacktrungandhoai - Aug 19, 2012 / trungandhoai - Aug 25, 2012
|The Muscle Man Gym wants to increase women member enrollment
Writing Feedbacksanyagoyal1988 - Aug 19, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 20, 2012
|'Benildian student' - short essay need to revise
Writing Feedbackedwingo101 - Aug 19, 2012 / Henie - Aug 20, 2012
|There is no such thing as luck. You determine your own destiny
NEW - I think this statement is very true to a certain extent. There is no such thing as luck. You...
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|[IELTS] Why teens engage with crimes
4 - Just a tidbit of advise, you should never say the words "in conclusion". don't tell your reader it's the...
Writing Feedbacksilverfi - Aug 18, 2012 / greneroom1 - Aug 19, 2012
|TOEFL - Do you agree with the viewpoint that people are now easier to becom educated
5 - Many country countries have even established a compulsory policy to decrease the rate of illiterate....
Writing Feedbackee470474137 - Aug 18, 2012 / ichenk - Aug 26, 2012
|IELTS; Is it worth spending on Animal protection?
Writing Feedbackxiaoyu - Aug 18, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 18, 2012
|Extended writting about the life of a child in the industrial revolution
3 - thanks for the help .I couldn't find a way to rephrase that sentence . i also cant change the...
Writing Feedback9Breaker - Aug 18, 2012 / 9Breaker - Aug 18, 2012
|An Open Essay entitled Weekend. I need some help to elaborate further.
Writing FeedbackSuzanne Yeoh - Aug 17, 2012 / Suzanne Yeoh - Aug 19, 2012
|[IELTS]The advantages and disadvantages of the real spirit of sportsmanship.
3 - Thank you, Mohammad. :D I understand that promote athletics and show the appreciation the success with finance,(I really...
Writing Feedbacksilverfi - Aug 17, 2012 / silverfi - Aug 18, 2012
|The bicycle advice from my father
Writing Feedbackdobalilago - Aug 17, 2012 / dobalilago - Aug 19, 2012
|TOEFL TOPIC: "Do you prefer homemade food or restaurant food?"
2 - From my opinion it depends . Sometimes when I find myself free , I can prepare different delicious dishes...
Writing Feedbackmjafarinasab - Aug 16, 2012 / fekry81 - Aug 17, 2012
|'Good contact with nature' - leisure time indoors or outdoors?
Writing Feedbackneila - Aug 16, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 16, 2012
|'more than just strict punishment' - causes and punishment of teenager delinquency
Writing Feedbackzhoujingya - Aug 16, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 16, 2012
|GRE Issue essay - Originality does not mean thinking something that was never thought
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|Severe problems with student behaviour of schools in many countries-IELTS Essay
Writing Feedbackphuonglanhpl - Aug 16, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 17, 2012
|Around 40% of people are studying because of their interest in subject and to gain qualification
Writing Feedbackvijaythot - Aug 16, 2012 / payampoya - Aug 16, 2012
|IELTS essay-whether writing letters will disappear completely
6 - Yes, writing letters can still show more intimacy and people can appreciate the effort that the process of selecting...
Writing Feedbackmaxine2012 - Aug 16, 2012 / silverfi - Aug 17, 2012
|GRE: Students should question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively
2 - hi ,i think if you use the second paragraph as the introduction it would be better but its not...
Writing Feedbackameynvaidya - Aug 15, 2012 / payampoya - Aug 16, 2012
|IELTS essay: The suggestion for save forest!
Writing Feedbackkogikothe - Aug 15, 2012 / April April - Aug 15, 2012
|'The quest to be Lake City's new mayor' - Argument writing
Writing Feedbackgolnar - Aug 15, 2012 / sanyagoyal1988 - Sep 11, 2012
|'being enthusiastic and committed to become successful' - child hood dreams
Writing Feedbackneo1989 - Aug 15, 2012 / neo1989 - Aug 15, 2012
|paying money to supporting art or protecting environment?!
NEW - Up on the choice that whether art is more important or paying attention to environment, different people hold various...
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|IELTS-Given possible reasons for the loose of relationship between the family members
NEW - Question:It is generally acknowledged that families are not as close as they used to do. Give possible reasons and...
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|IELTS Essay What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural areas?
Writing Feedbackhiren46 - Aug 15, 2012 / neo1989 - Aug 22, 2012
|'What do you do for good health?' - TOEFL essay
4 - I really thanks for your helps, Le Duc Binh.^^ I am learning Pre-TOEFL iBT course, and I really bad...
Writing FeedbackPrince_Prince - Aug 14, 2012 / Prince_Prince - Aug 21, 2012
|'to be comfortable with words' - autoliteracy, rewriting for class
2 - Hi, I have a few suggestions to edit your writing The word 'literacy' means an ability to read,...
Writing Feedbackbjuaquin - Aug 14, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Aug 14, 2012
|GRE Argument--Professor evaluation vs. grade inflation
NEW - Hi guys, just need you to look at my essay! please leave your feedback. Thanks a lot! Prompt:...
Writing Feedbackrichard1994 - Aug 14, 2012 / — -
|Life Experience Essay on religious beliefs and how it effects my choices in friends
2 - ...wary of people who were practitioners of other religions; Jehovah's Witnesses , Atheists, Mormons, etc. This often led...
Writing FeedbackHimekoY - Aug 13, 2012 / EF_Susan - Aug 16, 2012
|"couch potatoes" - the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life - Gre Issue
2 - Modern luxuries and conveniences have certainly helped our society become more independent as a whole; specifically by freeing historically...
Writing Feedbackmartinimadness - Aug 13, 2012 / EF_Susan - Aug 16, 2012
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