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|Fiction books are better than reality? - essay
3 - Contain means capable of holding something. So you should use it with what it is holding. Eg. contain...
Writing Feedbackasdfgg - Nov 2, 2012 / dumi - Nov 2, 2012
|old buildings need to protected by government or not
NEW - Now a days government spend lot of money to protect old buildings which reflects the history of our nation.Some...
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|IELTS Essay severe punishment for traffic offensese
Writing Feedbackjenny45 - Nov 1, 2012 / jenny45 - Nov 3, 2012
|[IELTS TOPIC] - In many countries, students who behave badly in class are expelled
4 - children should not be out of school for any reason this sentense seems a little wired ,but i don't...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Nov 1, 2012 / jenny45 - Nov 4, 2012
|William Shakespeare and his great works!
2 - --------------- I wish you rephrase this sentence... Seems having a problem with its length --------- he...
Writing Feedbackelma96 - Nov 1, 2012 / dumi - Nov 17, 2012
|IELTS examination; Adults and adolescents have many differences
Writing FeedbackNigora - Oct 31, 2012 / Nigora - Nov 2, 2012
|GRE issue- #Society does not place enough emphasis on the intellect...
NEW - Society does not place enough emphasis on the intellect--- that is, on reasoning and other cognitive skills. The...
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|IELTS Essay : How is your generation different from your parent's generation
Writing Feedbackw_even - Oct 31, 2012 / Heina - Nov 2, 2012
|It was a great EXPERIENCE; A day in shopping mall.
2 - During my vacation last month, I had been to the biggest mall in south India with my family. I...
Writing Feedbacknithin1234 - Oct 31, 2012 / keroro - Oct 31, 2012
|His life has been unusual; The Spectacular For Me
Writing Feedbackniesaysi - Oct 31, 2012 / dumi - Nov 18, 2012
|[IELTS] - 'The unsolvable problem' - In many countries, people are living longer.
3 - Thanks Scientiana. I learned so much from you:) Thanks for your encouragement, Inspired2012. I will remember that. ...
Writing Feedbackcswords - Oct 31, 2012 / cswords - Nov 15, 2012
|What historical event in your country has had a major effect on your country?
2 - I think the historical event that had great effect on my country is a Treaty of Gulistan.Because with the...
Writing FeedbackAzeroglu - Oct 31, 2012 / orkhan - Nov 15, 2012
|Ielts - "culture shock" - nowadays more people traveling around the world
Writing Feedbackelnora - Oct 30, 2012 / elnora - Oct 31, 2012
|Having unity and social skills through sports games
NEW - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their...
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|Living in the big cities is better than living in the country
NEW - Some people prefer to living in the big cities but some people prefer to living in the countryside, in...
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|'qualities of a good student and respect is earned' - illustraction Paragraph?
NEW - Qualities of a good student There are several different qualities of a good student. First as a good student,...
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|Is talent a key element for children to become professionals?
3 - Thank you very much. The question is "Discuss should we teach all of children to be expert or only...
Writing Feedbackzzzz - Oct 29, 2012 / zzzz - Nov 5, 2012
|Rich countries should share wealth among poor countries!
3 - Thank you very much Scientiana for your valuable advices and corrections.Ä°n the third paragraph i have considered that if...
Writing Feedbackorkhan - Oct 29, 2012 / orkhan - Nov 12, 2012
|'spacious and desirable' - Apartment is better than a house
2 - I agree with the suggestions the prior contributor suggested, as well as I would advise for you to re-read...
Writing Feedbackmonaalvand - Oct 28, 2012 / BrwPrd - Oct 30, 2012
|'my priorities and goals' - Meaning of life essay
2 - I believeThe world is inhabited by millions of individuals, each defining the meaning of life differently. Corresponding to...
Writing Feedbackmeme123456 - Oct 28, 2012 / EF_Susan - Nov 8, 2012
|Stress is the body's reaction to a change
Writing FeedbackJennyChi - Oct 28, 2012 / JennyChi - Oct 31, 2012
|A nation should be responsible for the health, welfare and prosperity of its citizens
Writing Feedbackiamtrying - Oct 28, 2012 / iamtrying - Nov 20, 2012
|TOEFL - People are not satisfied with what they have; they want something more
Writing FeedbackMunkhjin - Oct 28, 2012 / zhdevilla - Oct 28, 2012
|IELTS: I believe that poorer countries require rich ones support to develop their countries
3 - I do not know what books are you studying now, but for improving your writing you should write...
Writing Feedbacklayla88 - Oct 27, 2012 / ah_zafari - Oct 28, 2012
|People should share domestic responsibilities - "equality depends on esteem"
NEW - Hello :-) I would really appreciate if someone helps me with my essay and fix my mistakes. I am...
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|'Positive, acceptable, truthful, and loyal' - a good friend essay
3 - Thank you so much Scientiana. ^^ I really appreciate it for your revising. Thank you again for your worth...
Writing FeedbackSalikron - Oct 27, 2012 / Salikron - Nov 27, 2012
|[IELTS] (academic) What is the main function of a university?
Writing Feedbackspringflowers - Oct 27, 2012 / annguyen - Oct 29, 2012
|"each fresh crisis is an opportunity in disguise" - Grade My SAT Essay
Writing Feedbacksaanuu - Oct 26, 2012 / Obaid Allah - Nov 1, 2012
|(choosing fields of study based on job availability) - GRE issue
Writing FeedbackHalehh - Oct 25, 2012 / Halehh - Oct 26, 2012
|IElTS: 'fast food as an alternative'; the average weight of people is increasing
NEW - Hi everybody, here is my second essay over here wish you guys help me in elevating my writing level...
Writing Feedbackhumanx - Oct 25, 2012 / — -
|'Keep healthy and don't eat junk' - Convenience foods vs traditional foods
2 - It was really good essay. :) I don't have much confident to correct essays, but I commented below. Except...
Writing Feedbackannguyen - Oct 25, 2012 / springflowers - Oct 30, 2012
|'The source of media and private information about famous people' band according to IELTS
4 - Dear Scientiana, Thanks for providing me your feedback and the impressive correction and suggestion .That for sure help me...
Writing Feedbackdeep9012 - Oct 25, 2012 / deep9012 - Nov 11, 2012
|IELTS: WHETHER BOTTLED WATER SHOULD BE BANNED
3 - Thank you dumi and scientiana, I greatly appreciate your comments. I will write as many essay as I can...
Writing FeedbackChuHa - Oct 25, 2012 / ChuHa - Nov 11, 2012
|Television destroys the family living and communication; Agree or Disagree?
3 - I applaud your conclusion, that T.V. is not alone in destroying family communication. You did point out some other...
Writing FeedbackTrai Do Van - Oct 25, 2012 / EF_Carol - Mar 24, 2015
|'avoid prolonged exposure to the Sun' - My essay for term's examination
Writing FeedbackHeina - Oct 24, 2012 / ah_zafari - Oct 28, 2012
|Nation should attempt to regulate school curriculum - one for all students
NEW - "A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum" Discuss the extent to...
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|[AWS] Pros and cons of permissive parenting style
2 - Hello symptom, Your essay is clear, but needs more examples to back up why you do not agree with...
Writing Feedbacksymptom - Oct 24, 2012 / linmark - Nov 5, 2012
|'People should not work as slow as turtles' - TOEFL Writing
NEW - Could anyone help me check this and correct my grammatical errors? Big thanks. :) Topic: In today's world,...
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|'You helped America' - Patriots Pen-TELL MY FOUNDING FATHERS
Writing FeedbackDancingstar22 - Oct 23, 2012 / fashion520 - Nov 1, 2012
|[ielts task 1] report on quantities of goods transported in UK
2 - Your writing is very good with good use of a variety of vocabulary. However, try to use more linking...
Writing Feedbackgandora1510 - Oct 23, 2012 / Scientiana - Nov 9, 2012
|IELTS essay: Whether reading is better than TV or internet?
2 - It seems much better now. Thanks very much to you, Elena. I have some questions here: 1. Basically Honestly...
Writing Feedbackbwithu - Oct 23, 2012 / bwithu - Oct 24, 2012
|IELTS Essay : Reading fiction or watching movies : Introduction only
Writing Feedbackw_even - Oct 23, 2012 / w_even - Oct 23, 2012
|This is preparation for my Greek mythology Finals, I need reviews.
Writing Feedbackmin33 - Oct 22, 2012 / dumi - Nov 20, 2012
|IELTS TASK: support fixed punishment for each type of crime or not
2 - no two crimes happen (appear) in totally the same conditions there's not always one simple punishment which suit every...
Writing Feedbacksydaisy - Oct 22, 2012 / jenny45 - Nov 8, 2012
|IELTS essay: free health care or not
3 - Thanks,Scientiana! I am going to take the IELTS test recently. And I still have a slow writing speed, I...
Writing Feedbackwoyunsi3000 - Oct 22, 2012 / woyunsi3000 - Nov 20, 2012
|Support the arts or protect the environment? 'stop this massacre of the nature'
2 - [quote=juliamedeiross]The humans being hashave been deterioratingdoing lot of damage to the environment for a long time, and nowadays something...
Writing Feedbackjuliamedeiross - Oct 21, 2012 / dumi - Oct 22, 2012
|Movement away from written exams to practical skills.Discuss this trend
2 - These days, besides written papers , many universities have been applying other forms of assessment like practical or oral...
Writing Feedbackhoapq - Oct 21, 2012 / EF_Susan - Nov 13, 2012
|My father and my eldest brother shaped my personality into what I am today
NEW - Please proofread my essay and correct if there is any grammatical mistake. Thank you in advanced. I have to...
Writing Feedbackhninaung - Oct 21, 2012 / — -
|too much fat, salt and sugar; Weight of people is increasing, health decreasing
3 - Hi Gangster777 You have pretty good ideas for the body paragraphs. However, the problem is that your essay doesn't...
Writing FeedbackGangster777 - Oct 21, 2012 / April April - Oct 24, 2012
|Critique practice GRE "Analyze an Argument"(head of household)
Writing FeedbackMBA_bound - Oct 21, 2012 / lynzee22 - Mar 12, 2015
|Essay about my close friend, Sasha
4 - I really like how you`re approaching this piece of writing but I found that there were too many line...
Writing FeedbackSofi - Oct 21, 2012 / lollypop12 - Oct 21, 2012
|IELTS Writing Task 2, topic about yongsters
2 - Your essay is great! Well organization and well argument! However, you have to be careful with your grammar and...
Writing Feedbackgoldmanswalking - Oct 21, 2012 / Scientiana - Nov 8, 2012
|Narrative essay in betrayal; 'John Dustin was the most popular boy in school'
2 - hey... women don't envy good looking guys, but go crazy... only men envy ...lol So, I suggest you...
Writing FeedbackBluwinda - Oct 20, 2012 / dumi - Nov 14, 2012
|Changes to the society and the suicide rates essay
Writing FeedbackSomeoneNoOne - Oct 20, 2012 / Sheri_Editor - Nov 13, 2012
|[TOEFL] Choose friends who are similar to yourself or different from yourself?
2 - We all have our own friends, and they can be either similar or different from us. Friends who are...
Writing Feedbackcrz_keane - Oct 20, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Oct 21, 2012
|[TOEFL] Attending a live performance vs. TV? 'live football game at a stadium'
NEW - Hi everyone, I'm preparing for TOEFL iBT test. Please help me to improve my writing skills. This is my...
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|'It's not that easy' - The advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad
2 - (The example is not that effective: say some shortcoming those are not easily available and accessible in your country...
Writing FeedbackLinhSua - Oct 19, 2012 / Mriytunjay - Oct 20, 2012
|GRE Analytical Argument Task: Memo to WWAC station
Writing Feedbackjackketch - Oct 19, 2012 / westway50 - Oct 21, 2012
|IELTS Exam: people and technology
Writing Feedbackhumanx - Oct 19, 2012 / — -
|This is my GRE awa practice essay - advance Thanks for Review
2 - All in all, pretty solid grammar wise and some great word choices (exaggerated, libertine, digress) I would do a...
Writing Feedbacknakul123 - Oct 19, 2012 / MBA_bound - Oct 24, 2012
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