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|'changes of using fuel source to produce electricity' - [IELTS] Task 1--- Pie chart
2 - you should use words with more impact like dramatic increase or exponentially rather than huge. "In constrast, there...
Writing Feedbackcollphunk - Aug 13, 2012 / jezeter - Aug 15, 2012
|Modern high technology is transforming the way we work and is of benefit to society
NEW - Please check and reply my way of writing and grammar. Write an essay for university lecturer arguing either...
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|'Computers can translate, so there's no need to learn foreign languages?' - IELTS
3 - I wish you have some examples to support your reasons. None of translator program is able to detect the...
Writing Feedbackvickey - Aug 12, 2012 / silverfi - Aug 17, 2012
|IELTS -a wide range of courses,i.e. physics, music. which most,least important
Writing Feedbackwyjyzh68919 - Aug 12, 2012 / xiaoyu - Aug 18, 2012
|'improper use' - Effect of tv on teenagers
Writing Feedbackneo1989 - Aug 12, 2012 / neo1989 - Aug 13, 2012
|Better to use our mind in exchange for computers to translate text
NEW - computers can tranlate all kinds of languages well.Do our children need to learn more languages in the future? ...
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|'how travel mode usages have changed in England' - IELTS
2 - The table shows a database about how travel mode usages have changed in England from 1985 to 2000. Overall,...
Writing Feedbacks2184973 - Aug 12, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Aug 12, 2012
|TOEFL essay : The subject that you want to learn more about (economics)
Writing Feedbackmdrphongdinh89 - Aug 12, 2012 / mdrphongdinh89 - Aug 16, 2012
|IELTS - POSSIBLE WAYS OF LEARNING ENGLISH, INCLUDING IN THE SPEAKING COUNTRY.
3 - I absolutely agree with your opinion! However, it could be nicer if you put one more body paragraph....
Writing Feedbackjobymonpj - Aug 12, 2012 / vickey - Aug 12, 2012
|(teacher salaries / being unique for success?) - TOEFL Essays
Writing Feedbacktoohunlee - Aug 12, 2012 / toohunlee - Aug 12, 2012
|'Reach Malaysia!' - essay check
2 - Hi,first of all your essay is not clear i could not understand what it was about,internet?,facebook?using of handphones? what?,then...
Writing Feedbackisai - Aug 11, 2012 / payampoya - Aug 16, 2012
|America on Drugs - ENG102 Research Paper Draft
2 - I have a few suggestions. ...the nation, and its habitual use of medications is on the rise. Maybe...
Writing Feedbackmrogerscarruolo - Aug 11, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Aug 12, 2012
|TOEFL- juvenile delinquency and critical situations
NEW - Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Discuss...
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|'computers and machines are the best inventions' - TOEFL
NEW - Most people prefer working with people than with machines. There are host of occupations that we can choose, but...
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|' the happiness we experience' - we experience special days in our life easier
2 - Hey Neo, Kindly find my help below; people(PEOPLE) may come up with different ideas about this subject...
Writing Feedbackneo1989 - Aug 11, 2012 / justivy03 - Apr 11, 2015
|'learning ease' - Using a computer can have more negetive than positive effects?
3 - constant stairing the monitor as well as emission of radiations/obesity because of sitting are few more drawbacks but if...
Writing Feedbackmalaknaz - Aug 11, 2012 / amitt - Aug 11, 2012
|You can learn a lot about people by clothes they wear.
NEW - In our daily life we meet different people; they have different characters, different hairstyles and different clothing style. I...
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|GRE ISSUE 207:Rituals and ceremonies help define a culture. Without them, societies
NEW - I really need your recommendation! The speaker asserts that rituals and ceremonies help define a culture and it...
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|Art essay, forever impacting our world
2 - In the conclusion, do not say "something that can make us feel an emotion"...say "something that make me feel...
Writing Feedbackmforero333 - Aug 10, 2012 / PBP - Aug 11, 2012
|Censorship is eradicating social partisan
Writing Feedbackbeibeibajin - Aug 10, 2012 / beibeibajin - Aug 23, 2012
|Physical exercise is important issue, should be a required part of every school day
4 - I think so much disection of essay is also not fruitful... if one contributor is giving his/her views in...
Writing Feedbacksiminbiazar - Aug 10, 2012 / amitt - Aug 28, 2012
|"On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation
Writing Feedbacksanyagoyal1988 - Aug 10, 2012 / sanyagoyal1988 - Aug 11, 2012
|The future of our society is partly depended on the socialization of our children
NEW - I really appreciate your help! p.s. some of sentences refer to kevin's answer. The speaker asserts that how...
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|'spending twelve years at high school' - Student Should Work Part-time While Studying
Writing FeedbackGachhong Heng - Aug 10, 2012 / ha phuong - Aug 11, 2012
|"Help for Depressed Teenagers" - summarization of my article
NEW - can you guys check my article if i have a grammar mistakes or suggestion of how can i improve...
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|Same laws which prohibit the sale and consumption of heroin be applied to tobacco?
Writing Feedbackhiren46 - Aug 9, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 10, 2012
|IELTS：globalisation... hold demerits
Writing Feedbackxiaoyu - Aug 9, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 10, 2012
|GRE: Palean Baskets were not uniquely Paleans
5 - Thank you so much for your inspiration, Ahmad. I look forward to your review in my future writing as...
Writing Feedbackdeepakbaniya - Aug 9, 2012 / deepakbaniya - Aug 13, 2012
|[TOEFL] finding traces of the past - Does past pass values on our present lives?
Writing Feedbacksolitaire - Aug 9, 2012 / dumi - Aug 9, 2012
|'rising cities and living in them' - essay
5 - Why do people prefer to live in cities? How should cities be designed? Every week a millions of...
Writing Feedbackmatilda - Aug 9, 2012 / naijaprincess - Aug 9, 2012
|'children play too much computer games?' - IELTS exam criteria
Writing Feedbackbeibeibajin - Aug 9, 2012 / beibeibajin - Aug 9, 2012
|'ways of becoming mature and courageous' - There's no success like failure
5 - Yes, you should use two or three examples. Try to use the structure: 1)Make introduction on what you are...
Writing Feedbackazurek14 - Aug 8, 2012 / Ibrik - Aug 11, 2012
|[TOEFL] Eating at hove vs. eating out (my recommendation)
Writing Feedbackco11apse - Aug 8, 2012 / ana_p - Aug 14, 2012
|Education is long life task. Do u agree or disagree
Writing FeedbackMsx punk - Aug 8, 2012 / Msx punk - Aug 9, 2012
|Heroes risk their reputation and their lives
2 - OtherAnother example is,Elvis Aaron Presley. H is novel versions of existing songs - don't forget capital letters, and another...
Writing FeedbackNada Amer - Aug 8, 2012 / co11apse - Aug 8, 2012
|Do we ourselves cause change in our lives by making certain decisions?(SAT prep)
Writing FeedbackEgyie_D - Aug 8, 2012 / crada - Aug 8, 2012
|[TOEFL] Small town vs. Big city (opportunities, entertainment, job places)
8 - Yeah I'd agree Deepak. Well, I could'nt find much mistakes as I'm just 13, but still I found it...
Writing Feedbackco11apse - Aug 7, 2012 / Msx punk - Aug 9, 2012
|My Generation Essay (music, brands, technology)
2 - Hi :) Nice work on your paper.I have a few ideas and suggestions. As generations come and go,...
Writing Feedbacksydzboo - Aug 7, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Aug 15, 2012
|Training for work is more important than providing a broad base education?
Writing Feedbacksohle143 - Aug 7, 2012 / April April - Aug 8, 2012
|'need creativities and imaginations' - People are never satisfied with what they have
2 - Hi :) I can help you with your grammar People havepossess numerous things, namely, asuch ascostlyexpensive jewelry, an...
Writing Feedbacksy_318 - Aug 7, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Aug 7, 2012
|IELTS Task 2: Art or other essential service? Discuss both views, give your opinions
Writing Feedbacksophienguyen92v - Aug 6, 2012 / dumi - Aug 8, 2012
|Most of us require progressive learning in order to contribute to our field.
4 - Thanks Deep! I guess I've been misusing that word my whole life. I was wondering what anyone else thought...
Writing FeedbackSkyanne - Aug 6, 2012 / Skyanne - Aug 13, 2012
|IELTS 2: Are formal 'pen and paper' examinations useful as evaluation?
Writing Feedbacksmogito - Aug 6, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Aug 7, 2012
|IELTS Task 2: Elderly people should live in nursing homes or with younger people!
2 - Hello Mr. Nguyen. I know this essay stated to provide arguments from both sides but it also gave you...
Writing Feedbacksophienguyen92v - Aug 6, 2012 / kibz95 - Jan 19, 2015
|IELTS Task 2: Some people consider thinking about the future to be a waste of time?
2 - Good work! Try to use a variety of vocabulary and to introduce in your essay a discussion of arguments...
Writing Feedbacksophienguyen92v - Aug 6, 2012 / smogito - Aug 6, 2012
|Lying is always wrong, no matter whether it is a big lie or a white lie
8 - your essay is really good, but there some grammar mistakes. Try to expand you essay to mak it more...
Writing Feedbackhizaza - Aug 6, 2012 / cherry_09 - Aug 9, 2012
|Has junk food changed the way people live?
6 - It is much clearer I think. However, you should not mention it doesn't take much time and skills to...
Writing Feedbackco11apse - Aug 5, 2012 / sophienguyen92v - Aug 6, 2012
|Not enough time to study for students?
2 - Hi there! I think you should organize it a bit better: leave some spaces, maybe organize it into paragraphs......
Writing Feedbacknadalhoang - Aug 5, 2012 / Tucayana - Aug 5, 2012
|IELTS Task 1 main source of energy in US in 1980 and 1990
2 - The graphs illustrate the percentage of five different energy sources of energy in the USA infrom 1980 and 1990....
Writing Feedbacksamenmohammad - Aug 5, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Aug 6, 2012
|IELTS TASK:Popular events are essential in easing internatiol tensions.
7 - In my opinion, the structure is not good. Usually there are at least 4 paragraphs including introduction, body and...
Writing Feedbackhunkar - Aug 4, 2012 / sophienguyen92v - Aug 6, 2012
|GRE Issue Essay - Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are
7 - ThisSuch organization of labor achieved more effective results forin primitive societies as a whole . and theyThis kind...
Writing Feedbackalf10087 - Aug 4, 2012 / deepakbaniya - Aug 6, 2012
|'computers have made life easier' - TOEFL essay
Writing FeedbackGulnar - Aug 4, 2012 / alf10087 - Aug 4, 2012
|Are relationships between people and pets good? [TOEFL]
6 - Pats has to be "strikethrough" or not be there at all... Sorry, I noticed it too late to edit...
Writing Feedbackco11apse - Aug 4, 2012 / co11apse - Aug 7, 2012
|Studying alone vs. with a group - both sides of the story
6 - It is chit-chat not chit-chit. While writing my laptop's "a" button some times takes "i" , now after repair...
Writing Feedbackco11apse - Aug 4, 2012 / amitt - Aug 7, 2012
|Should companies use young people for work? - [IELTS ]
2 - I will try to express my own opinion and show advantages, disadvantages of this type of policy. - It...
Writing FeedbackHusseinova - Aug 4, 2012 / co11apse - Aug 4, 2012
|Work has the most remarkable effect on our pursuit to happiness.
2 - In my own personal opinion, it really depends on the job itself. There are so many factors to this...
Writing Feedbackshallbytwo - Aug 4, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Aug 6, 2012
|'My wife and I get along great' - Life goal paper for human relation class
NEW - Have to write a life goals paper for human relations class. He wants it to go like this. I.Life...
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|Should cell phones or pagers be allowed in class?
Writing Feedbackbsm25 - Aug 3, 2012 / gauravwalia1988 - Aug 4, 2012
|'beyond our imagination' - essay on advantages of reading
Writing Feedbackneo1989 - Aug 3, 2012 / neo1989 - Aug 3, 2012
|Disadvantages of taking a break after high school essay- college essay
2 - Hey Lisa, honestly it is an "OK" essay, but it can be better. 1) Your thesis statement is too...
Writing FeedbackLeelee93 - Aug 3, 2012 / ariellw2013 - Aug 3, 2012
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