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|[IELTS] Successful sport professionals and providing high salaries for them
3 - Over all your essay has good structure and content. I have few suggestions for you 1. In introduction state...
Writing Feedbacksampath3319 - Aug 26, 2012 / umasampath54 - Aug 30, 2012
|'the hardest question for a teenage boy or girl' - article on "I want to become a..."
4 - hi! First of all, you should enter the name of the university you are applying to and explain...
Writing FeedbackSweetCandy - Aug 26, 2012 / anurag24 - Aug 26, 2012
|Major cities provides best understanding about characteristics of a society
NEW - could please any check this essay and correct my points. Thank you by advance. To understand the most...
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|'technological development' -advanced technology widens the gap between rich and poor
2 - "has helped each and every the individuals" check this sentence it irks me. "For example earlier mobile was...
Writing FeedbackLIGE - Aug 25, 2012 / amitt - Aug 25, 2012
|Alternative form of transport and car ownership.
Writing FeedbackHuongPinky - Aug 25, 2012 / HuongPinky - Aug 26, 2012
|TOEFL iBT - Having a teacher or studying along?
Writing Feedbacktrungandhoai - Aug 25, 2012 / dumi - Aug 26, 2012
|IELTS;High sales are due to requirements, not because of power of advertisements
8 - i have read from a book (writing for ielts)Introduction should describe the situation or the problem ,discuss the opposing...
Writing Feedbackumasampath54 - Aug 25, 2012 / clarkmc - Aug 26, 2012
|LIFESTYLES comparison essay - families in Asian and Western countries
3 - It needs more emotion and excitement to capture the reader's attention. Has alot of information and substance, but kind...
Writing Feedbacktuan_minh929 - Aug 24, 2012 / freakosaur - Aug 26, 2012
|'parents will give their sympathy' - What are some of the qualities of a good parent?
2 - Dear Thao Nguyen, After reading your essay, I have to admit that your writing is quite well ( though...
Writing Feedbackthaonguyen1901 - Aug 24, 2012 / trungandhoai - Aug 25, 2012
|'leading, making quick decisions, patiently helping others' - A good leader
Writing Feedbackneo1989 - Aug 24, 2012 / dumi - Aug 25, 2012
|'Choosing an interesting profession' - essay about job satisfaction - IELTS task 2
5 - try to improve your vocabulary use some linking words give two to three ideas and evidences to get a...
Writing Feedbackmehdi0912 - Aug 24, 2012 / nitish582 - Sep 4, 2012
|TOEFL IBT - Do televisions or movies infuence our behavior?
6 - Dear Duminda, I found you a good adviser. would you please have a look on my essays and leave...
Writing Feedbacktrungandhoai - Aug 24, 2012 / MoonMoon - Aug 28, 2012
|job satisfaction; employees feel more satisfied if their hard work is recognized
6 - Over all your essay has good structure and content. I have few suggestions for you 1. In introduction state...
Writing Feedbacksampath3319 - Aug 23, 2012 / umasampath54 - Aug 30, 2012
|Boys and girls should attend mixed schools, which enhances communication skill
Writing Feedbacknguyen hong - Aug 23, 2012 / thaonguyen1901 - Aug 24, 2012
|Not forced children education
NEW - some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age and should spend most...
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|Benefits from Extracurricular Activities
Writing FeedbackPieng - Aug 23, 2012 / dumi - Aug 24, 2012
|'your own magical show stage' essay
Writing FeedbackPieng - Aug 23, 2012 / Macrusa - Sep 2, 2012
|Familiar circumstances plays important role in creativity promoting children's personality
2 - Lengoctrang did a really good job in editing this essay!! I hope you wouldn't mind taking the time out...
Writing Feedbacknguyen hong - Aug 23, 2012 / dvalwani - Aug 23, 2012
|'choosing big cities is wise' - Do you prefer big cities or small towns, to live in?
5 - ---------- heheheeeeeeee .... this is really interesting.... you guys talk in Farsi in an English forum... so, may...
Writing FeedbackMoonMoon - Aug 23, 2012 / dumi - Aug 28, 2012
|The inequality between rich and poor nations and minimizing the gap
NEW - Please help me to edit this essay writing as i practice it in order to retake the IELTS exam...
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|Going, Going, Gone (moving to America essay)
Writing Feedbackkamila - Aug 22, 2012 / voteforandy1 - Aug 23, 2012
|Expressing Al -Eid in Saudi Arabia - essay
Writing Feedbackhmp - Aug 22, 2012 / hmp - Aug 24, 2012
|Cook meal at home or go out for a dinner
Writing Feedbackneo1989 - Aug 22, 2012 / dumi - Aug 24, 2012
|GRE: Is communism better than capitalism?
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|Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase.
Writing FeedbackMalavika - Aug 22, 2012 / April April - Aug 22, 2012
|Toefl Essay : Do you prefer to live in an old or a modern apartment?
2 - I am of the opinion that, new and modern apartments are good to live luxurious and comfortable life....
Writing Feedbackartin - Aug 22, 2012 / Malavika - Aug 22, 2012
|IELTS-Gender Equality at WORK or preferences for certain gender?
4 - By wrote "carers", I mean "caregivers" who usually look after kids or elders. Thank you, Malavika....
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|Defeating the Odds -(BIOGRAPHY ESSAY)
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|A time i was challenged on a expectaion
Writing FeedbackChaCha11 - Aug 21, 2012 / ellecc - Aug 23, 2012
|People prefer to use their own transport nowadays
4 - I think the first sentence have some changes. firstly I firmly believe that government should improve public transportation....
Writing FeedbackMalavika - Aug 21, 2012 / Malavika - Aug 22, 2012
|'both of parents go out to work' - task 2 writing
Writing Feedbacknaught_angel24 - Aug 21, 2012 / naught_angel24 - Aug 21, 2012
|'When becoming a professional person' - ielts
6 - Dumi is correct & I totally agree with him. I think for letter writing/essay writing, essay forum is best....
Writing Feedbackredrose2013 - Aug 21, 2012 / amitt - Aug 24, 2012
|'will be relocating to Perth' - My IELTS essay general training
Writing Feedbackcaocao89 - Aug 21, 2012 / EF_Susan - Aug 22, 2012
|Internet is one of most important invention in the past 100 hundreds years
Writing Feedbackichenk - Aug 21, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 21, 2012
|Learning from previous tasks and how to develop your instint are very important
NEW - Giving a right decision has never been an easy task. Many people think that to have a right decision,...
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|'The next best thing after perfection' - College? Yes. (SAT)
2 - ^Yawn. How many other applicants do you think will be claiming/saying the same thing. Not the best start...
Writing Feedbackpluto - Aug 20, 2012 / Liebe - Aug 21, 2012
|student income over a ten year period ielts writing task 1
Writing FeedbackSoheila7814 - Aug 20, 2012 / Soheila7814 - Aug 23, 2012
|Essay on your reading proccess
2 - The literature I read is mainly non- fictional , and educational. Into the Wild by Jon Krakauer and Eat,...
Writing Feedbacknycgirl319 - Aug 20, 2012 / EF_Susan - Aug 22, 2012
|My School Days (school article)
5 - @KhanhZ..thanks a lot for your help :) @ah_zafari..I see I've got to improve a lot..thanks fr your help!...
Writing Feedbackstephenie - Aug 20, 2012 / stephenie - Aug 25, 2012
|Causes and solution of problems faced by school because of student behavior.
4 - EF_Susan Thank You EF_Susan for correcting my essay. It seems to me like I am making a certain kind...
Writing Feedbackfaizan_bardai - Aug 20, 2012 / faizan_bardai - Aug 21, 2012
|'technology and media' - CAS Essay of a non-English Speaker
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|[TOEFL] Attending university classes should be required or optional-Feedback
Writing Feedbackultraann - Aug 20, 2012 / ultraann - Aug 28, 2012
|The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things
3 - Thank you for your help, it is accurate and complete and really helpful for me. Regards Hasan...
Writing Feedbackhsn - Aug 20, 2012 / hsn - Aug 20, 2012
|Argument topic: Dieting makes people fat.
NEW - According to National Institute of health (NIH) over 30 % of the U.S adults 'population is obese - a...
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|'Cyberbullying Hurts!' - Essay Advice
Writing Feedbackpatw - Aug 19, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 20, 2012
|IELTS Task 1: Changes in Town_Maps
5 - @Artin: So glad you found my comments useful. I'll try my best to help with your next essays :)...
Writing FeedbackApril April - Aug 19, 2012 / April April - Aug 25, 2012
|IELTS: Impacts of Technology and its crucial part of our lives
7 - nice work but you have stressed only on security .. technology is a general term and so it requires...
Writing FeedbackApril April - Aug 19, 2012 / vikki - Sep 24, 2012
|'very essential to any people' - TOEFL IBT - Why do people need to attend university?
Writing Feedbacktrungandhoai - Aug 19, 2012 / trungandhoai - Aug 25, 2012
|The Muscle Man Gym wants to increase women member enrollment
Writing Feedbacksanyagoyal1988 - Aug 19, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 20, 2012
|'Benildian student' - short essay need to revise
Writing Feedbackedwingo101 - Aug 19, 2012 / Henie - Aug 20, 2012
|There is no such thing as luck. You determine your own destiny
NEW - I think this statement is very true to a certain extent. There is no such thing as luck. You...
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|[IELTS] Why teens engage with crimes
4 - Just a tidbit of advise, you should never say the words "in conclusion". don't tell your reader it's the...
Writing Feedbacksilverfi - Aug 18, 2012 / greneroom1 - Aug 19, 2012
|TOEFL - Do you agree with the viewpoint that people are now easier to becom educated
5 - Many country countries have even established a compulsory policy to decrease the rate of illiterate....
Writing Feedbackee470474137 - Aug 18, 2012 / ichenk - Aug 26, 2012
|IELTS; Is it worth spending on Animal protection?
Writing Feedbackxiaoyu - Aug 18, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 18, 2012
|Extended writting about the life of a child in the industrial revolution
3 - thanks for the help .I couldn't find a way to rephrase that sentence . i also cant change the...
Writing Feedback9Breaker - Aug 18, 2012 / 9Breaker - Aug 18, 2012
|An Open Essay entitled Weekend. I need some help to elaborate further.
Writing FeedbackSuzanne Yeoh - Aug 17, 2012 / Suzanne Yeoh - Aug 19, 2012
|[IELTS]The advantages and disadvantages of the real spirit of sportsmanship.
3 - Thank you, Mohammad. :D I understand that promote athletics and show the appreciation the success with finance,(I really...
Writing Feedbacksilverfi - Aug 17, 2012 / silverfi - Aug 18, 2012
|The bicycle advice from my father
Writing Feedbackdobalilago - Aug 17, 2012 / dobalilago - Aug 19, 2012
|TOEFL TOPIC: "Do you prefer homemade food or restaurant food?"
2 - From my opinion it depends . Sometimes when I find myself free , I can prepare different delicious dishes...
Writing Feedbackmjafarinasab - Aug 16, 2012 / fekry81 - Aug 17, 2012
|'Good contact with nature' - leisure time indoors or outdoors?
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