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|IELTS Task 1: Changes in Town_Maps
5 - @Artin: So glad you found my comments useful. I'll try my best to help with your next essays :)...
Writing FeedbackApril April - Aug 19, 2012 / April April - Aug 25, 2012
|IELTS: Impacts of Technology and its crucial part of our lives
7 - nice work but you have stressed only on security .. technology is a general term and so it requires...
Writing FeedbackApril April - Aug 19, 2012 / vikki - Sep 24, 2012
|'very essential to any people' - TOEFL IBT - Why do people need to attend university?
Writing Feedbacktrungandhoai - Aug 19, 2012 / trungandhoai - Aug 25, 2012
|The Muscle Man Gym wants to increase women member enrollment
Writing Feedbacksanyagoyal1988 - Aug 19, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 20, 2012
|'Benildian student' - short essay need to revise
Writing Feedbackedwingo101 - Aug 19, 2012 / Henie - Aug 20, 2012
|There is no such thing as luck. You determine your own destiny
NEW - I think this statement is very true to a certain extent. There is no such thing as luck. You...
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|[IELTS] Why teens engage with crimes
4 - Just a tidbit of advise, you should never say the words "in conclusion". don't tell your reader it's the...
Writing Feedbacksilverfi - Aug 18, 2012 / greneroom1 - Aug 19, 2012
|TOEFL - Do you agree with the viewpoint that people are now easier to becom educated
5 - Many country countries have even established a compulsory policy to decrease the rate of illiterate....
Writing Feedbackee470474137 - Aug 18, 2012 / ichenk - Aug 26, 2012
|IELTS; Is it worth spending on Animal protection?
Writing Feedbackxiaoyu - Aug 18, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 18, 2012
|Extended writting about the life of a child in the industrial revolution
3 - thanks for the help .I couldn't find a way to rephrase that sentence . i also cant change the...
Writing Feedback9Breaker - Aug 18, 2012 / 9Breaker - Aug 18, 2012
|An Open Essay entitled Weekend. I need some help to elaborate further.
Writing FeedbackSuzanne Yeoh - Aug 17, 2012 / Suzanne Yeoh - Aug 19, 2012
|[IELTS]The advantages and disadvantages of the real spirit of sportsmanship.
3 - Thank you, Mohammad. :D I understand that promote athletics and show the appreciation the success with finance,(I really...
Writing Feedbacksilverfi - Aug 17, 2012 / silverfi - Aug 18, 2012
|The bicycle advice from my father
Writing Feedbackdobalilago - Aug 17, 2012 / dobalilago - Aug 19, 2012
|TOEFL TOPIC: "Do you prefer homemade food or restaurant food?"
2 - From my opinion it depends . Sometimes when I find myself free , I can prepare different delicious dishes...
Writing Feedbackmjafarinasab - Aug 16, 2012 / fekry81 - Aug 17, 2012
|'Good contact with nature' - leisure time indoors or outdoors?
Writing Feedbackneila - Aug 16, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 16, 2012
|'more than just strict punishment' - causes and punishment of teenager delinquency
Writing Feedbackzhoujingya - Aug 16, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 16, 2012
|GRE Issue essay - Originality does not mean thinking something that was never thought
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|Severe problems with student behaviour of schools in many countries-IELTS Essay
Writing Feedbackphuonglanhpl - Aug 16, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 17, 2012
|Around 40% of people are studying because of their interest in subject and to gain qualification
Writing Feedbackvijaythot - Aug 16, 2012 / payampoya - Aug 16, 2012
|IELTS essay-whether writing letters will disappear completely
6 - Yes, writing letters can still show more intimacy and people can appreciate the effort that the process of selecting...
Writing Feedbackmaxine2012 - Aug 16, 2012 / silverfi - Aug 17, 2012
|GRE: Students should question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively
2 - hi ,i think if you use the second paragraph as the introduction it would be better but its not...
Writing Feedbackameynvaidya - Aug 15, 2012 / payampoya - Aug 16, 2012
|IELTS essay: The suggestion for save forest!
Writing Feedbackkogikothe - Aug 15, 2012 / April April - Aug 15, 2012
|'The quest to be Lake City's new mayor' - Argument writing
Writing Feedbackgolnar - Aug 15, 2012 / sanyagoyal1988 - Sep 11, 2012
|'being enthusiastic and committed to become successful' - child hood dreams
Writing Feedbackneo1989 - Aug 15, 2012 / neo1989 - Aug 15, 2012
|paying money to supporting art or protecting environment?!
NEW - Up on the choice that whether art is more important or paying attention to environment, different people hold various...
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|IELTS-Given possible reasons for the loose of relationship between the family members
NEW - Question:It is generally acknowledged that families are not as close as they used to do. Give possible reasons and...
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|IELTS Essay What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural areas?
Writing Feedbackhiren46 - Aug 15, 2012 / neo1989 - Aug 22, 2012
|'What do you do for good health?' - TOEFL essay
4 - I really thanks for your helps, Le Duc Binh.^^ I am learning Pre-TOEFL iBT course, and I really bad...
Writing FeedbackPrince_Prince - Aug 14, 2012 / Prince_Prince - Aug 21, 2012
|'to be comfortable with words' - autoliteracy, rewriting for class
2 - Hi, I have a few suggestions to edit your writing The word 'literacy' means an ability to read,...
Writing Feedbackbjuaquin - Aug 14, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Aug 14, 2012
|GRE Argument--Professor evaluation vs. grade inflation
NEW - Hi guys, just need you to look at my essay! please leave your feedback. Thanks a lot! Prompt:...
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|Life Experience Essay on religious beliefs and how it effects my choices in friends
2 - ...wary of people who were practitioners of other religions; Jehovah's Witnesses , Atheists, Mormons, etc. This often led...
Writing FeedbackHimekoY - Aug 13, 2012 / EF_Susan - Aug 16, 2012
|"couch potatoes" - the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life - Gre Issue
2 - Modern luxuries and conveniences have certainly helped our society become more independent as a whole; specifically by freeing historically...
Writing Feedbackmartinimadness - Aug 13, 2012 / EF_Susan - Aug 16, 2012
|'changes of using fuel source to produce electricity' - [IELTS] Task 1--- Pie chart
2 - you should use words with more impact like dramatic increase or exponentially rather than huge. "In constrast, there...
Writing Feedbackcollphunk - Aug 13, 2012 / jezeter - Aug 15, 2012
|Modern high technology is transforming the way we work and is of benefit to society
NEW - Please check and reply my way of writing and grammar. Write an essay for university lecturer arguing either...
Writing Feedbackkiran7 - Aug 13, 2012 / — -
|'Computers can translate, so there's no need to learn foreign languages?' - IELTS
3 - I wish you have some examples to support your reasons. None of translator program is able to detect the...
Writing Feedbackvickey - Aug 12, 2012 / silverfi - Aug 17, 2012
|IELTS -a wide range of courses,i.e. physics, music. which most,least important
Writing Feedbackwyjyzh68919 - Aug 12, 2012 / xiaoyu - Aug 18, 2012
|'improper use' - Effect of tv on teenagers
Writing Feedbackneo1989 - Aug 12, 2012 / neo1989 - Aug 13, 2012
|Better to use our mind in exchange for computers to translate text
NEW - computers can tranlate all kinds of languages well.Do our children need to learn more languages in the future? ...
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|'how travel mode usages have changed in England' - IELTS
2 - The table shows a database about how travel mode usages have changed in England from 1985 to 2000. Overall,...
Writing Feedbacks2184973 - Aug 12, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Aug 12, 2012
|TOEFL essay : The subject that you want to learn more about (economics)
Writing Feedbackmdrphongdinh89 - Aug 12, 2012 / mdrphongdinh89 - Aug 16, 2012
|IELTS - POSSIBLE WAYS OF LEARNING ENGLISH, INCLUDING IN THE SPEAKING COUNTRY.
3 - I absolutely agree with your opinion! However, it could be nicer if you put one more body paragraph....
Writing Feedbackjobymonpj - Aug 12, 2012 / vickey - Aug 12, 2012
|(teacher salaries / being unique for success?) - TOEFL Essays
Writing Feedbacktoohunlee - Aug 12, 2012 / toohunlee - Aug 12, 2012
|'Reach Malaysia!' - essay check
2 - Hi,first of all your essay is not clear i could not understand what it was about,internet?,facebook?using of handphones? what?,then...
Writing Feedbackisai - Aug 11, 2012 / payampoya - Aug 16, 2012
|TOEFL- juvenile delinquency and critical situations
NEW - Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Discuss...
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|'computers and machines are the best inventions' - TOEFL
NEW - Most people prefer working with people than with machines. There are host of occupations that we can choose, but...
Writing FeedbackIbrik - Aug 11, 2012 / — -
|' the happiness we experience' - we experience special days in our life easier
2 - Hey Neo, Kindly find my help below; people(PEOPLE) may come up with different ideas about this subject...
Writing Feedbackneo1989 - Aug 11, 2012 / justivy03 - Apr 11, 2015
|'learning ease' - Using a computer can have more negetive than positive effects?
3 - constant stairing the monitor as well as emission of radiations/obesity because of sitting are few more drawbacks but if...
Writing Feedbackmalaknaz - Aug 11, 2012 / amitt - Aug 11, 2012
|You can learn a lot about people by clothes they wear.
NEW - In our daily life we meet different people; they have different characters, different hairstyles and different clothing style. I...
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|GRE ISSUE 207:Rituals and ceremonies help define a culture. Without them, societies
NEW - I really need your recommendation! The speaker asserts that rituals and ceremonies help define a culture and it...
Writing FeedbackIMQ - Aug 11, 2012 / — -
|Art essay, forever impacting our world
2 - In the conclusion, do not say "something that can make us feel an emotion"...say "something that make me feel...
Writing Feedbackmforero333 - Aug 10, 2012 / PBP - Aug 11, 2012
|Censorship is eradicating social partisan
Writing Feedbackbeibeibajin - Aug 10, 2012 / beibeibajin - Aug 23, 2012
|Physical exercise is important issue, should be a required part of every school day
4 - I think so much disection of essay is also not fruitful... if one contributor is giving his/her views in...
Writing Feedbacksiminbiazar - Aug 10, 2012 / amitt - Aug 28, 2012
|"On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation
Writing Feedbacksanyagoyal1988 - Aug 10, 2012 / sanyagoyal1988 - Aug 11, 2012
|The future of our society is partly depended on the socialization of our children
NEW - I really appreciate your help! p.s. some of sentences refer to kevin's answer. The speaker asserts that how...
Writing FeedbackIMQ - Aug 10, 2012 / — -
|'spending twelve years at high school' - Student Should Work Part-time While Studying
Writing FeedbackGachhong Heng - Aug 10, 2012 / ha phuong - Aug 11, 2012
|"Help for Depressed Teenagers" - summarization of my article
NEW - can you guys check my article if i have a grammar mistakes or suggestion of how can i improve...
Writing Feedbackcherry_09 - Aug 9, 2012 / — -
|Same laws which prohibit the sale and consumption of heroin be applied to tobacco?
Writing Feedbackhiren46 - Aug 9, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 10, 2012
|IELTS：globalisation... hold demerits
Writing Feedbackxiaoyu - Aug 9, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 10, 2012
|GRE: Palean Baskets were not uniquely Paleans
5 - Thank you so much for your inspiration, Ahmad. I look forward to your review in my future writing as...
Writing Feedbackdeepakbaniya - Aug 9, 2012 / deepakbaniya - Aug 13, 2012
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