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|Paid work in children - My discussion essay written following writing task 2 IELTS
Writing Feedbackanhtu214 - Sep 4, 2012 / dumi - Sep 4, 2012
|I believe that teachers are responsible for motivating students to learn
Writing Feedbackfarnaz_nouri - Sep 4, 2012 / MoonMoon - Sep 4, 2012
|GRE ISSUE; TOURISM WILL BECOME OBSOLETE DUE TO TELEVISION & WORLDWIDE COMPUTER
2 - Television and world wide computer connections arethe greatesta great boon to users . ComputerThe internet connects us to...
Writing FeedbackSiddharthvora01 - Sep 4, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Sep 4, 2012
|Healthy Lives for Plainsville residents - GRE
2 - The perspetive of the vice president of Nature's way to expand the business by opening stores of food and...
Writing FeedbackSiddharthvora01 - Sep 4, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Sep 4, 2012
|Difference between present and past generation about stress
5 - Give some examples and explain the example: such as stress due to study,money pressure,stress to employer due to meet...
Writing Feedbacksarahira - Sep 4, 2012 / Siddharthvora01 - Sep 8, 2012
|TOEFL; plethora of convenient stores in Taiwan: 7-11, Family
2 - has greatly enhance the quality of people's lifestyle due to the fact that there is more expand time we...
Writing FeedbackJinFay - Sep 4, 2012 / April April - Sep 4, 2012
|Pets should be treated as family members or not? 'pets are also live creatures'
5 - Thank you guys, especially Jennifer for your precise responses. Although I was overtime for this writing ( 40 mins...
Writing Feedbackthaonguyen1901 - Sep 4, 2012 / thaonguyen1901 - Sep 5, 2012
|Museum; see things in reality and feel their texture - it's unforgettable moment
4 - An interesting Topic. I think your writing is rather short and need some ideas. I suggest you some more...
Writing Feedbackgag379 - Sep 4, 2012 / thaonguyen1901 - Sep 5, 2012
|Scandals are useful - they stir up all people in any level of classification
Writing Feedbackhsn - Sep 4, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Sep 5, 2012
|In general all communicating media are important and have their own advantages
Writing Feedbacksara_venusir - Sep 3, 2012 / dumi - Sep 4, 2012
|"Chocolat" movie essay
Writing Feedbackm1994 - Sep 3, 2012 / ace - Sep 3, 2012
|'expressing myself in deferent's ways' - My passion for singing
Writing FeedbackCrysta - Sep 3, 2012 / Crysta - Sep 3, 2012
|TOEFL: which do you prefer: A high paying job or quality sparse time
2 - Open the introduction with a motivator and then write the thesis statement. Try to write the reasons (Several...
Writing Feedbackmamad60 - Sep 3, 2012 / ah_zafari - Sep 3, 2012
|'comparison the sales of CD' - Bar chart of IELTS task-1
Writing Feedbacknitish582 - Sep 3, 2012 / color - Oct 1, 2012
|studying major cities only gives a glimpse on a society...
2 - 1. Use a spell checker (example: 'continueing' should be 'continuing' or ' undersrtanding' should be 'understanding'). 2. Proofread (example:...
Writing Feedbackmohammmo - Sep 2, 2012 / testing - Sep 18, 2012
|TOEFL: Why visit MUSEUMS? Learn History &Culture, Making friends
3 - the topic is: Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people...
Writing Feedbackmeili luo - Sep 2, 2012 / layla88 - Sep 2, 2012
|IBT essay.. What do you do for good health?
Writing Feedbackchallagali - Sep 2, 2012 / dumi - Sep 3, 2012
|Autism Vs vaccines essay - the Controversy
2 - Essay sounded awesome! I have a younger sister with Autism, and I loved this! Do you at least have...
Writing Feedbackleshiro - Sep 2, 2012 / amcd - Sep 14, 2012
|'fair government' - Patriot's Pen - Essay bout founding fathers and America
2 - Hello, thanks for commenting on my PAtriot's Pen essay. I'll provide a few comments on yours. If you see...
Writing Feedbackaspiringwriter - Sep 1, 2012 / chessman567 - Sep 3, 2012
|"Arrival to the United States" - Culture Shock Essay
2 - I remember when I first arrived to the United States, my family and I was were, not was because...
Writing Feedbackrabeyar22 - Sep 1, 2012 / twinklae - Sep 1, 2012
|Plan to build a new restaurant - do you support or oppose essay
2 - please se the attached file, you dedicated a large portion of the essay for strictly "personal" reasons. I...
Writing Feedbackneo1989 - Sep 1, 2012 / mohammmo - Sep 2, 2012
|'Left to be Forgotten' Short story. Narrative about toy raccoon for english 10 CP
Writing Feedbackrochelleleeo - Sep 1, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Sep 4, 2012
|My visit to a beautiful place (Hyderabad in India)
8 - Actually I know what you meant by your bolded letters but the thing is one must point out what's...
Writing Feedbackstephenie - Sep 1, 2012 / stephenie - Sep 1, 2012
|Proposal Essay - 'It's Time Athletes Stop Getting Played'
2 - To be more objective, I think you need to discuss the issue of steroids in sports. The problem is...
Writing FeedbackADR21_2 - Sep 1, 2012 / ace - Sep 3, 2012
|IELTS- In some countries people are not taking care of their elderly relatives
8 - can't we say this includes : medical management and promoting regular performance of their daily life activities???...
Writing Feedbackclarkmc - Sep 1, 2012 / amitt - Sep 1, 2012
|What do you want to change about your school?
5 - I think your essay needs some transitional expressions,such as :First of all, However,Finally... That would make your essay seem...
Writing Feedbacklayla88 - Sep 1, 2012 / Jason sp - Sep 1, 2012
|'the shortest and the safest goals' - Why do you think people attend universities?
4 - Hi Moonmoon I am just new. I'd like to comment your essaybriefly as follows: 1/ Your ideal is so...
Writing FeedbackMoonMoon - Sep 1, 2012 / caihuu - Sep 6, 2012
|TOEFL--It is more important to relate well with people than studying hard at school.
Writing FeedbackJason sp - Sep 1, 2012 / ace - Sep 1, 2012
|Parents have a greater influence on their children's; "parents training courses"
4 - If you have time & you want to pour your ideas without any grammatical mistakes with full confidence then...
Writing Feedbacklengoctrang - Sep 1, 2012 / amitt - Sep 4, 2012
|IELTS- latest topic from this month's exam: Internet replacing books
Writing Feedbackcharrmaine - Sep 1, 2012 / nitish582 - Sep 3, 2012
|Creativity can be dangerous when exercised excessively
Writing Feedbackjisthesmartest - Aug 31, 2012 / amitt - Sep 1, 2012
|'Athletes and sports professionals deserve it' - essay
Writing Feedbackarminima - Aug 31, 2012 / arminima - Nov 25, 2012
|Eat at food stand or restaurants. What is your viewpoint?
5 - This statement is unclear to me, "That is to say, at restaurants, you merely enjoy the taste of food...
Writing Feedbacklengoctrang - Aug 30, 2012 / ndiduch - Sep 22, 2012
|'the progress of the nation' - spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding
3 - performing the same things repeatedly --- you just used the exact same phrase in the intro. ''the same set...
Writing Feedbackumasampath54 - Aug 30, 2012 / April April - Aug 31, 2012
|Schools should contain some obligatory courses that are necessary for students
Writing Feedbacklayla88 - Aug 30, 2012 / clarkmc - Aug 31, 2012
|IELTS - Job training is far important than broad-based education
2 - clarkmc It is a good writing, however,If I were instead of you I would change these sentences : ...
Writing Feedbackclarkmc - Aug 30, 2012 / layla88 - Aug 31, 2012
|Television is responsible for destroying communication among friends and family;TOEFL
NEW - Television, the most famous entertainment tool in our life. During the last decade tons of new channel started their...
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|IELTS- balanced argument regarding the effects of technology
6 - You have given your stand in your introduction, so you have to support your stand throughout the essay or...
Writing Feedbackcharrmaine - Aug 30, 2012 / clarkmc - Aug 31, 2012
|'Famous park in Sanadaj' - Describe your last summer holiday
Writing Feedbackblackklightt - Aug 30, 2012 / blackklightt - Aug 30, 2012
|IELTS : Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities
4 - Thanks Ahmad and Duminda for your review. I will remember your feedback when I write my next essay....
Writing FeedbackMurko - Aug 30, 2012 / Murko - Aug 30, 2012
|[IELTS] schools are no longer needed?
Writing Feedbacklyao1690 - Aug 30, 2012 / dumi - Aug 30, 2012
|Should High School be Extended for 1 Extra Year?
2 - As students progress further into high school, they will have to eventually deal with an enormous problem. Time. During...
Writing FeedbackNotSoAverageJoe - Aug 29, 2012 / alooa95 - Aug 30, 2012
|TOEFL iBT integrated writing - Whether folic acids should be added in flour?
4 - You are Welcome Lin... It's better to practice skim reading and noting down facts in a manner only you...
Writing FeedbackCharles Lin - Aug 29, 2012 / dumi - Aug 31, 2012
|HIGH SCHOOL STUDENTS WITH THE LEARNING OF ENGLISH: PROBLEMS AND SUGGESTIONS ESSAY
NEW - NAME: LE THI THUY TRANG CLASS: 10 ENGLISH LE QUY DON GIFTED HIGH SCHOOL HIGH SCHOOL STUDENTS WITH...
Writing Feedbacklengoctrang - Aug 29, 2012 / — -
|Agree or disagree with forcing a school uniform .
2 - Is this an introduction? Sorry, but what you wrote as an introduction does not include any crucial parts...
Writing FeedbackMohamedos - Aug 29, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 29, 2012
|IELTS - Popularity of convenience foods wouldn't replace traditional foods
Writing Feedbackgolay - Aug 29, 2012 / amitt - Aug 30, 2012
|The world is changing fast, people are less happy.
Writing FeedbackChrisLiu - Aug 28, 2012 / IMQ - Sep 12, 2012
|Fictional or Historical Character Essay: Selfless Selfishness
Writing Feedbackmolluscs - Aug 28, 2012 / pretty3295 - Sep 1, 2012
|'away from non smokers' - essay on smoking in public places
Writing Feedbackelizabethva - Aug 28, 2012 / ace - Aug 30, 2012
|ESSAY: Is life better in a city or in a small town?
6 - Thank you for all of your ideas and suggestions! All of your input has helped me and I appreciate...
Writing FeedbackBillabongfox - Aug 28, 2012 / Billabongfox - Aug 29, 2012
|IELTS- Should government intervene with individual's family planning rights?
5 - False belief and religious traditions are also causes of over population. Also we must omit out blind faith that...
Writing Feedbackcharrmaine - Aug 27, 2012 / amitt - Aug 30, 2012
|IELTS: Is school too academic?
Writing Feedbackssani607 - Aug 27, 2012 / golay - Aug 29, 2012
|Solid education system is the only critical factor to development of country
3 - Solid Education systems paves the way for Research & development in lot of field (defence/food/metal/transport) that bring new technologies...
Writing Feedbackandi2013 - Aug 27, 2012 / amitt - Aug 28, 2012
|'getting a connection' - When people succeed, it is because of hard work?
Writing Feedbackamrayoub - Aug 27, 2012 / MoonMoon - Aug 27, 2012
|'Give good lectures' - what qualities are required of a good teacher?
2 - I think many of your sentences are too long and complex. And you use the words like: 'consequently,' 'to...
Writing Feedbacklengoctrang - Aug 27, 2012 / ace - Aug 30, 2012
|Essay about National education in Hong Kong
3 - Not sure how to help but i'' provide you with my personal suggestions on some phrases. They are only...
Writing Feedbackwalterbb - Aug 27, 2012 / mohammmo - Sep 2, 2012
|The influence of globalization on the world's economics
2 - outer space means space beyond the earth's atmosphere or beyond the solar system. production of...
Writing Feedbacksweetdreamzz - Aug 27, 2012 / layla88 - Aug 31, 2012
|Essay: Agree or Disagree: There really are no better teachers than parents
Writing FeedbackMoonMoon - Aug 27, 2012 / dumi - Aug 28, 2012
|'People change their life style' - doing the same things and avoiding changes
3 - in theirlife, ] lives , promote constantly improve throughout theirlifelives some times they feel fear sometimes...
Writing Feedbacksidhu52 - Aug 27, 2012 / charrmaine - Aug 30, 2012
|IELTS Essay: Scientific research sould be carried out by the governments or not?
3 - You have repeated the word "some" frequently. Synonyms for "some" could be various, several etc.....
Writing Feedbackrocia0717 - Aug 26, 2012 / Tomy6240 - Sep 10, 2012
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