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|How would Public Funds be spent? IELTS
6 - wouldn't be better...existing sicknesses ? I wouldn't use Nevertheless 2 times I am new in the...
Writing Feedbackvalency - Dec 4, 2012 / colorado - Dec 5, 2012
|I believe parents shape the way you see life!
3 - Hai... Good essay, good flow to read, and interesting too.. The question asked you agree or disagree...? ...
Writing FeedbackEdna - Dec 4, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 4, 2012
|Be cooperative/ Global village/ Importance of English
Writing Feedbackr01521232 - Dec 3, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 5, 2012
|I love the different facets of Taipei
4 - And I'm sorry I did not know that facet actually meant aspect. And now it makes much more sense...
Writing Feedbackaszxxccv - Dec 3, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 5, 2012
|One Page of Taipei
Writing Feedbackbilly790203 - Dec 3, 2012 / dumi - Dec 4, 2012
|politicians have the greatest influence on the world.
6 - I like the way you have organized the essay. Its very clear. One paragraph for the politicians and one...
Writing Feedbackvalency - Dec 3, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 4, 2012
|IELTS; Exterior of buildings is more important than their functions.
Writing Feedbackvalency - Dec 3, 2012 / valency - Dec 4, 2012
|Argumentative essay on Space and ocean exploration
2 - I love the way you have expressed this idea.... you have an interesting and unique style of presenting...
Writing FeedbackWheelchairEC - Dec 3, 2012 / dumi - Dec 5, 2012
|Arranging My Thoughts on Marriage - ENG101 Essay
Writing Feedbackcrackhamster - Dec 3, 2012 / dumi - Dec 5, 2012
|Why do we use Smartphones?
3 - You did not point out your statement clearly in the first paragraph, and what is the purpose you write...
Writing Feedbackwealthy life - Dec 3, 2012 / ERIC SUNG - Mar 20, 2017
|Writting a argument synthesis essay about Divorce and children
3 - this is a very interesting topic to write on and you have presented some very good facts. :) Here...
Writing FeedbackBarzakh1 - Dec 3, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 4, 2012
|IELTS writing - Criticism is useful for improving education system?
NEW - Please help me polish the essay. thanks buddy. In order to improve a country's education system, young students...
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|IELTS--people prefer to follow sports events on TV rather than take part in sport
Writing Feedbackaugustine - Dec 3, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 3, 2012
|(IELTS essay) disappearing languages good or bad?
6 - People feel, unity, equality and encourage economical development. -->>economic development Besides, it may reduce the problem of translation,...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Dec 3, 2012 / colin - Dec 14, 2012
|IELTS essay, should all children's leisure activities be educational?
2 - quote=my88626]Today, many parents want their children's leisure activities to have educational component, while their kids may just want...
Writing Feedbackmy88626 - Dec 3, 2012 / dumi - Dec 3, 2012
|media focus too much on celebrites
3 - hai.. You have good ideas.. I feel you need little bit more organization. Some ideas for the 1st...
Writing Feedbackvalency - Dec 3, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 3, 2012
|IELTS|the effects of long-distance programs can never be as good as face to face prog
NEW - TOPIC: Nowadays,people can work and study at home through internet. However,the effects of long-distance programs can never be as...
Writing Feedbacktitanseer - Dec 3, 2012 / — -
|Young people VSăď˝ď˝ď˝-ď˝...ď˝'ď˝ď˝ď˝...ď˝ď˝"
Writing Feedbackvalency - Dec 2, 2012 / valency - Dec 3, 2012
|'the aging tendency and burden on the society' - my ielts essay
4 - hai.. Ageing is a process and not a tendency.. 1st sentance =>...poses..i did nt get the meaning...
Writing Feedbackvalency - Dec 2, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 4, 2012
|Modern cooking offers convenient solutions for preparing food
11 - Thank you sooooo much for your revise, Dumi. ^^ To be honest, i'm still confuse about using inappropriate word...
Writing FeedbackSalikron - Dec 2, 2012 / Salikron - Jan 26, 2013
|Why the divorce rate is so high in North America?
Writing FeedbackJareer1979 - Dec 2, 2012 / Jareer1979 - Dec 11, 2012
|The Fruit Section - story for english 9
3 - What is the message of this story? I think you should work on this point. You found you mother,...
Writing Feedbacknowel - Dec 2, 2012 / ah_zafari - Dec 2, 2012
|IELTS Topic. women's role in modern society
5 - hai... I feel you should read the question once more... The question is men discreminated or not..(Nice...
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Dec 2, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 2, 2012
|Piano - the meaning of my life!
3 - thank you for the input! could anyone give me their feedback on what they think is the overall quality...
Writing Feedbackuhsikahtap - Dec 2, 2012 / uhsikahtap - Dec 2, 2012
|Talents; Born with them or not? IELTS
Writing FeedbackMommmmo - Dec 2, 2012 / valency - Dec 2, 2012
|Analysing argument estate agents GRE
3 - There are some grammar issues here and that disturbs conveying your idea to the reader; The homeowner who...
Writing Feedbackbusybee - Dec 2, 2012 / dumi - Dec 6, 2012
|analytical Argument GRE
4 - Yes... you have come up with very logical points that need to be considered before taking a decision. Language...
Writing Feedbackbusybee - Dec 2, 2012 / dumi - Dec 5, 2012
|Should universities provide skills for workplace? IELTS Essay
Writing FeedbackMommmmo - Dec 2, 2012 / Mommmmo - Dec 2, 2012
|[TOEFL] College and universities must do a better job for the workplace.
3 - Thank you!...
Writing FeedbackSetter - Dec 2, 2012 / Setter - Dec 2, 2012
|Universities and high schools should teach students specific careers
5 - I disagree with this statement/ I disagree with these statements However, I disagree with this statement...
Writing FeedbackJinQ1212 - Dec 2, 2012 / dumi - Dec 28, 2012
|Did Mother Goddess ever exist? stories circulating over 3000 to 4000 years before Christ
2 - Hi jcfriend; Your essay caught my eyes because its topic aroused interest in me... However, I feel you have...
Writing Feedbackjcfriend - Dec 1, 2012 / dumi - Dec 4, 2012
|Multicultural societies are becoming more and more popular due to...
Writing FeedbackEdna - Dec 1, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 6, 2012
|Urbanization is growing faster, which means the criminals are becoming more common in our lives.
5 - Hai... Urbanization is growing fast...o.k Bt i feel.. it doesn't mean what you wrote... Crime rates are...
Writing Feedbackkeinymigg - Dec 1, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 2, 2012
|TOEFL ESSAY Success is something which is so dear that everyone seeks
Writing FeedbackTiablo - Dec 1, 2012 / Tiablo - Dec 3, 2012
|school uniform or giving the student the choice to decide what to wear to school.
2 - I think you need to add more specific details pertaining to your experiences, how you've had to deal with...
Writing FeedbackTiablo - Dec 1, 2012 / kc2vwx - Dec 1, 2012
|IELTS essay, gap year between high school and university
6 - Hai.. Advantages para i feel o.k some points are there. But disadvantages add more ideas.. They...
Writing Feedbackmy88626 - Dec 1, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 1, 2012
|The last two decades the internet has been bringing us many benifits
4 - The last two decades, the internet has provide us many benefitscompare to the negative affects since it has been...
Writing FeedbackSardor 77 - Nov 30, 2012 / Ashley5789 - Nov 30, 2012
|CAE - Report on foreign language learning in your country
NEW - Hi guys.I'm preparing for the CAE exam, I have some difficulties at the Writing part and I need some...
Writing FeedbackTiby4Fun - Nov 30, 2012 / — -
|Person should never make an important decision alone; 'faculty choosing'
8 - Thank you so much joythblessy and snaacks. ^_^ Your suggest are so useful for me. I will try to...
Writing FeedbackSalikron - Nov 30, 2012 / Salikron - Dec 2, 2012
|Gender Images in Chinese TV shows - Research Proposal
3 - Thank u so much for helping me revise this! This paper is a qualitative content analysis of a...
Writing Feedbackmadsummertime - Nov 29, 2012 / madsummertime - Dec 2, 2012
|'soul-searching and life experience' - SAT Essay (1-12)
Writing Feedbackwhynotzoidberg - Nov 29, 2012 / bhos - Nov 29, 2012
|IELTS TASK 2: go straight to university or take a year off traveling
Writing Feedbackmcuong01 - Nov 29, 2012 / aeshamalik2010 - Nov 30, 2012
|Technology is clever - Present Paragraph
Writing FeedbackBani - Nov 29, 2012 / dumi - Dec 1, 2012
|Expressing concern : Environmental Damage VS Rise in standard of Living
7 - hai joythblessy, This essay is not for IELTS. I wrote it just out of my interest. Thanks for your...
Writing FeedbackPrem - Nov 29, 2012 / Prem - Dec 1, 2012
|What can we do to save our environment?
3 - hai... As ah_zafari pointed out lots of mistaks..i will give you some ideas.. :Reduce use of plastic and...
Writing Feedbackhamedmas - Nov 29, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 3, 2012
|Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr. Essay Contest: "The Drum Major Instinct"
Writing Feedbackmimilambie77 - Nov 29, 2012 / mimilambie77 - Dec 7, 2012
|IELTS essay, teenagers should encouraged to do unpaid community work
6 - It's easy to follow the ideas that you've given. The topic sentence of each paragraph is quite clear. Good...
Writing Feedbackmy88626 - Nov 29, 2012 / Edna - Dec 4, 2012
|Future Paragraph; Integrated Marketing Communication (IMC) strategy
Writing FeedbackBani - Nov 29, 2012 / dumi - Nov 29, 2012
|Marriage partners should similar or not - essay structure check
3 - Thank you so much Dumi. ^^ Thank you for your comment and suggest. Your example it's useful so much...
Writing FeedbackSalikron - Nov 29, 2012 / Salikron - Nov 29, 2012
|Science VS Religion - what is best for the people?
14 - you can also include , "Science without religion is lame, religion without science is blind." by Albert Einstein...
Writing FeedbackPahan - Nov 29, 2012 / cheetha - Jan 21, 2013
|IELTS essay: Blood sports should be banned.
Writing Feedbackshirleybouvier - Nov 28, 2012 / dumi - Nov 29, 2012
|Past Paragaph - "sell-as-much-as-we-can" method
5 - From the old days of marketing (before the 1950s)I'd say "Before the 1950s," because as you're talking about marketing...
Writing FeedbackBani - Nov 28, 2012 / xamanda - Nov 28, 2012
|IELTS TASK 2: gender discrimination in education
4 - Uneven tends to give a meaning of unbalanced. Unfair seems to sound better because it means simply means unjust....
Writing Feedbackmcuong01 - Nov 28, 2012 / Pahan - Nov 30, 2012
|TOEFL Essay:advantages and disadvantages of building a factory near a community
Writing Feedbackksh - Nov 28, 2012 / Pahan - Nov 30, 2012
|'My Sister and I ' - a comparative essay revision
Writing Feedbackimbouziar8749 - Nov 28, 2012 / — -
|IELTS essay, technolgy and traditional ways
7 - I like your revising. I also read your profile too. Also you help me for my essay before, can...
Writing Feedbackmy88626 - Nov 28, 2012 / hamedmas - Dec 1, 2012
|'expressing negative opinions' - my essay about "TV and Radio Censorship"
Writing FeedbackNazaninrp - Nov 27, 2012 / Nazaninrp - Dec 10, 2012
|Virtual: The Evolving Classroom; Peer review
2 - E-learning is a student-centered teaching technique that facilitates new generation to study at any place with internet access. ...
Writing Feedbackkyaungthu - Nov 27, 2012 / dumi - Nov 28, 2012
|Teaching kids to be actively outside and limit the use of electronic devices
2 - Hai... To start off with...? Better = to begin with, to start with... At a young age....lazy...:...
Writing Feedbacklgalea - Nov 27, 2012 / joythblessy - Nov 30, 2012
|'Sharing task' -Teaching small kids is the responsibility of both parents and schools
2 - I think you should pay more attention to the structure and organization of an essay. Start the essay with...
Writing Feedbackmahfouzelsawi - Nov 27, 2012 / ah_zafari - Nov 27, 2012
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