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|Lying is always wrong, no matter whether it is a big lie or a white lie
8 - your essay is really good, but there some grammar mistakes. Try to expand you essay to mak it more...
Writing Feedbackhizaza - Aug 6, 2012 / cherry_09 - Aug 9, 2012
|Has junk food changed the way people live?
6 - It is much clearer I think. However, you should not mention it doesn't take much time and skills to...
Writing Feedbackco11apse - Aug 5, 2012 / sophienguyen92v - Aug 6, 2012
|Not enough time to study for students?
2 - Hi there! I think you should organize it a bit better: leave some spaces, maybe organize it into paragraphs......
Writing Feedbacknadalhoang - Aug 5, 2012 / Tucayana - Aug 5, 2012
|IELTS Task 1 main source of energy in US in 1980 and 1990
2 - The graphs illustrate the percentage of five different energy sources of energy in the USA infrom 1980 and 1990....
Writing Feedbacksamenmohammad - Aug 5, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Aug 6, 2012
|IELTS TASK:Popular events are essential in easing internatiol tensions.
7 - In my opinion, the structure is not good. Usually there are at least 4 paragraphs including introduction, body and...
Writing Feedbackhunkar - Aug 4, 2012 / sophienguyen92v - Aug 6, 2012
|GRE Issue Essay - Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are
7 - ThisSuch organization of labor achieved more effective results forin primitive societies as a whole . and theyThis kind...
Writing Feedbackalf10087 - Aug 4, 2012 / deepakbaniya - Aug 6, 2012
|'computers have made life easier' - TOEFL essay
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|Are relationships between people and pets good? [TOEFL]
6 - Pats has to be "strikethrough" or not be there at all... Sorry, I noticed it too late to edit...
Writing Feedbackco11apse - Aug 4, 2012 / co11apse - Aug 7, 2012
|Studying alone vs. with a group - both sides of the story
6 - It is chit-chat not chit-chit. While writing my laptop's "a" button some times takes "i" , now after repair...
Writing Feedbackco11apse - Aug 4, 2012 / amitt - Aug 7, 2012
|Should companies use young people for work? - [IELTS ]
2 - I will try to express my own opinion and show advantages, disadvantages of this type of policy. - It...
Writing FeedbackHusseinova - Aug 4, 2012 / co11apse - Aug 4, 2012
|Work has the most remarkable effect on our pursuit to happiness.
2 - In my own personal opinion, it really depends on the job itself. There are so many factors to this...
Writing Feedbackshallbytwo - Aug 4, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Aug 6, 2012
|'My wife and I get along great' - Life goal paper for human relation class
NEW - Have to write a life goals paper for human relations class. He wants it to go like this. I.Life...
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|Should cell phones or pagers be allowed in class?
Writing Feedbackbsm25 - Aug 3, 2012 / gauravwalia1988 - Aug 4, 2012
|'beyond our imagination' - essay on advantages of reading
Writing Feedbackneo1989 - Aug 3, 2012 / neo1989 - Aug 3, 2012
|Disadvantages of taking a break after high school essay- college essay
2 - Hey Lisa, honestly it is an "OK" essay, but it can be better. 1) Your thesis statement is too...
Writing FeedbackLeelee93 - Aug 3, 2012 / ariellw2013 - Aug 3, 2012
|Compared to previous generations an increasing number of people are traveling oversea
2 - in my opinoin, you have some grammar mistakes the younger generation this has both positive and negative impacts it...
Writing FeedbackOngJE - Aug 3, 2012 / bsm25 - Aug 3, 2012
|Technology and the communication between people
2 - You got really good ideas and divided them into good format- Introduction, bodies and conclusion. I suggest...
Writing Feedbacknadalhoang - Aug 3, 2012 / deepakbaniya - Aug 3, 2012
|'busy work and modern entertainment' - lack a sense of community
3 - You should write about the 2 causes in 1 paragraph, don't seperate them in 2 different ones. Also, in...
Writing FeedbackMarylin_Monroe - Aug 3, 2012 / April April - Aug 11, 2012
|IELTS Task 1 division of houeshold tasks by gender
Writing Feedbacksamenmohammad - Aug 3, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 3, 2012
|Multinational companies and globalization - negative or positive?
Writing Feedbacknadalhoang - Aug 2, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 3, 2012
|Freedom for creative artists is essential for the development of society and art
Writing Feedbackselena y - Aug 2, 2012 / selena y - Aug 3, 2012
|'the class passed in silence' - Intro to a short romantic story
Writing Feedbackmaroon5 - Aug 2, 2012 / Pkeeton - Aug 6, 2012
|IELTS Task 2 University education should be limitted for the best students
3 - I would like to express my personal views regarding these two ways of accepting students. Based on evidence and...
Writing Feedbacksamenmohammad - Aug 2, 2012 / faruqiumair - Aug 4, 2012
|'living in a house better than in an apartment' - IELTS General Writing 2
Writing FeedbackThelma - Aug 2, 2012 / Thelma - Aug 3, 2012
|TOEFL: The government should collect fees from those who drive cars during rush hour.
Writing Feedbackanniejhs - Aug 2, 2012 / anniejhs - Aug 5, 2012
|'merchandise transported by various means' - ielts- writting task 1
NEW - Provided multiple-line graph exhibits the volume of merchandise transported by various means throughout the period from 1974 to 2002...
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|IELTS Task 2 coeducational VS single
Writing Feedbacksamenmohammad - Aug 2, 2012 / samenmohammad - Aug 2, 2012
|Cruel apartheid is apparent in Public Ed Sys in USA; An Inequality in Education
2 - injustices that have haunted this country, a country that ... ---- The comma should be either a semi-colon or...
Writing Feedbackcgilkey - Aug 2, 2012 / ershad193 - Aug 11, 2012
|9/11 Afghanistan paper to review; "little temporary safety"
Writing Feedbackbowen74 - Aug 1, 2012 / egl0722 - Aug 2, 2012
|THE PHILOSOPHICAL SCIENCE OF CLIMATE CHANGE
2 - Hi, I'm new to these boards, so I'm still trying to figure everything out. Hopefully this works! ...
Writing FeedbackJohnboscoNwogbo - Aug 1, 2012 / egl0722 - Aug 3, 2012
|"police office shouldn't carry guns" - do you agree or disagree with statement
Writing Feedbackpooh17 - Aug 1, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Aug 1, 2012
|'family, school, and state' - CAUSES OF DROUPOUTS
3 - I am happy that you have corrected my mistakes. I really like your revisions!! Thank you a lot, for...
Writing Feedbackniesaysi - Aug 1, 2012 / niesaysi - Aug 2, 2012
|'in Rome' - What are your hobbies during your leisure times?
Writing Feedbackneo1989 - Aug 1, 2012 / neo1989 - Aug 2, 2012
|'digitalization is revolutionizing' - Public libraries limited resources on
2 - In the introduction u did not say anything about "computer software, videos or DVDs". In fact the thesis...
Writing Feedbackeva123 - Jul 31, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 1, 2012
|People's reason for quit the countryside is logical
7 - Hi, I am little bit confuse about your posts... Can you please clear my confusion...? I think,...
Writing Feedbacka_p687 - Jul 31, 2012 / ana_p - Aug 14, 2012
|'aspects of mobile phones' - IELTS writing task2
3 - Your I/P: It's better to combine the first 2 (even 3) sentences into 1 for a complete thoughts....
Writing Feedbackiamrabin - Jul 31, 2012 / Tong - Aug 1, 2012
|'Main, modern media' - My Essay: dicuss a topic.
Writing Feedbackpandawii - Jul 31, 2012 / pandawii - Aug 1, 2012
|IELTS Task 1: Fish and Meat Consumption
3 - First the topic sentence must mention the unit in the graph. I don't know what your graph looks like...
Writing FeedbackApril April - Jul 31, 2012 / sophienguyen92v - Aug 6, 2012
|IELTS Task 1: Reasons for Study and Support Received
Writing FeedbackApril April - Jul 31, 2012 / April April - Aug 7, 2012
|GRE: Educational institutions should encourage students to succeed
3 - Hello. You should add an example to the second paraghraph. Maybe mention a case where the situation presented in...
Writing Feedbacknaughtyangel - Jul 31, 2012 / alf10087 - Aug 4, 2012
|'Multitasking skills' - Effects of new technology on society
2 - Hi :) I can help you with your grammar The enhancements of new technology make people life change...
Writing Feedbacktharncl - Jul 30, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Jul 31, 2012
|TOEFL iBT - Qualities of a good neighbor; polite, friendly, not vociferous
Writing FeedbackKiranmayi - Jul 30, 2012 / pooh17 - Aug 1, 2012
|'parents should let children do the things they want' - TOEFL ESSAY
Writing Feedbacksosiforever - Jul 30, 2012 / deepakbaniya - Jul 31, 2012
|Essay: "describe nightfall as you reach camp in the middle of a jungle".
Writing FeedbackTanvi116 - Jul 30, 2012 / Tanvi116 - Jul 31, 2012
|'the change of food preparing' - Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare
Writing FeedbackLusie - Jul 30, 2012 / deepakbaniya - Jul 31, 2012
|Essay on "Women will always make better parents than men"
Writing Feedbackkoreagunba - Jul 29, 2012 / Lutcifier - Jul 31, 2012
|IELTS - Univeristies knowledge and skill essay.
3 - University is the last step and the highest level of education... On the one hand... People believed that...
Writing Feedbackseunggi8 - Jul 29, 2012 / Lutcifier - Jul 31, 2012
|IELTS - Task 1 : rental charges and salaries in three areas of London
Writing Feedbacksamenmohammad - Jul 29, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 2, 2012
|'The additional facility at Tusk University' - Gre argument
Writing Feedbackviviana15077 - Jul 29, 2012 / viviana15077 - Aug 4, 2012
|'Do not rely on government to offer tuition' - GRE writing
5 - Some more suggestion: # While writing essay you disclose your opinion or general view in the first paragraph of...
Writing Feedbackgcgcmary - Jul 28, 2012 / deepakbaniya - Jul 30, 2012
|IELTS - Should parent teach children or schools?
Writing Feedbacksamenmohammad - Jul 28, 2012 / samenmohammad - Jul 29, 2012
|IELTS essay -- individuals contribute to environment problems
2 - we see little effort of individuals help to combat this serious problem. The increasing number of...
Writing Feedbackbingle2012 - Jul 28, 2012 / woyunsi3000 - Jul 28, 2012
|IELTS-overpopulation, governments should prison families who have more than one child
Writing FeedbackLutcifier - Jul 28, 2012 / iamrabin - Jul 31, 2012
|TOEFL -Computers have made it possible for office workers to do their work
6 - Oh, ^^. Thank you so so much. Your advices are really necessary for my writing. I still try to...
Writing Feedbackxucoi - Jul 28, 2012 / xucoi - Aug 2, 2012
|IELTS- 'qualifications, not sexes' - the number of female and male pupils
2 - these educational places playsplay an important role in our community On the other hand, some people, speciallyespecially university...
Writing Feedbacksamenmohammad - Jul 28, 2012 / ricaud - Jul 29, 2012
|essay "to study history and literature rather than to study science and math"
3 - Sorry, I meant the humanities, human studies)) but I would appreciate if you mark at least a couple...
Writing Feedbackveragof - Jul 27, 2012 / veragof - Jul 28, 2012
|'Spending money on hamburgers' - IELTS-Task1 Expenditure On Fast Food
Writing Feedbackjoellasun - Jul 27, 2012 / April April - Jul 28, 2012
|'experience more' - Living in a big city is better than a small city
4 - Hello, In my humble opinion, firstly, you should decide what types of essays you want to write; secondly, you...
Writing Feedbackhui4369 - Jul 27, 2012 / kristennguyen23 - May 29, 2014
|'careful with ads' - advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need
2 - DO NOT copy the topic. Open the introduction with a motivator. The introduction should include four parts: 1)...
Writing Feedbackveragof - Jul 27, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jul 27, 2012
|IELTS task 2 : Olympic Games not playing a role in 21st century?
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