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|American continent accounted for the largest proportion of coca-cola sales in 2000
Writing Feedbackjobymonpj - Jul 17, 2012 / bingle2012 - Jul 17, 2012
|'Living in this generation' - [TOEFL essay]
Writing Feedbackbelial612 - Jul 17, 2012 / belial612 - Jul 17, 2012
|IELT essay - causes and solutions for poor work-life balance
6 - YES ,it is true that in ielts essay body paras are more important than intro. and conclu. However ,you...
Writing Feedbackbingle2012 - Jul 17, 2012 / jobymonpj - Jul 17, 2012
|IELTS: Skills instead of Knowledge_Advantage and Disadvantage
17 - I've learnt a lot from you and other members on this forum. And yeah, if native speakers could comment...
Writing FeedbackApril April - Jul 16, 2012 / April April - Jul 20, 2012
|'Divorce' - Cause and effect essay on divorce
Writing Feedbackrandiadair10142 - Jul 16, 2012 / dumi - Jul 17, 2012
|[IELTS]: Should unpaid community service be compulsory for secondary education?
2 - for young student as students in an early age cannot be competent => for young studentS (my suggestion: as...
Writing Feedbackwelnorze - Jul 16, 2012 / April April - Jul 17, 2012
|'Money Vs., Development' - my essay grammer, structure and overall quality
Writing Feedbackjuancho8897 - Jul 16, 2012 / deepakbaniya - Jul 19, 2012
|Understanding the Pull-Essay about food addiction versus drug addiction
Writing FeedbackShelbyFields - Jul 16, 2012 / KhanhZ - Jul 17, 2012
|Influenced by past achievements - To take up any field, inspiration is must.
4 - thanks for your help can you please rate this TOPIC: When exercising, some people prefer to exercise indoors at...
Writing Feedbacksupercool - Jul 16, 2012 / supercool - Aug 19, 2012
|'Caleb and Kylee' - comparing and contrasting these two people
Writing Feedbackrotra32000 - Jul 16, 2012 / joshuanderitu01 - Jul 17, 2012
|Building a new factory near community (away from the local people)
2 - on the other hand _ firstly or to begin with .because you are taking about advantages of building a...
Writing Feedbackbsm25 - Jul 16, 2012 / chucnt - Jul 17, 2012
|Essay Ielts: topic Should companies use young people?
Writing Feedbackpandawii - Jul 16, 2012 / pandawii - Jul 17, 2012
|Claim and Reason. How much do you agree or disagree? -- Essay Evaluation
2 - Rachit, It is always helpful to include some example to make the context more clear. For example; you can...
Writing FeedbackRachit891 - Jul 16, 2012 / deepakbaniya - Jul 16, 2012
|IELTS essay -- Discuss that consumer goods are cheaper to buy
2 - The question asks you whether advantages overweigh the disadvantages. You need to say you agree on this or...
Writing FeedbackGOGO - Jul 16, 2012 / dumi - Jul 16, 2012
|Which do you prefer? Being leader of group or just a simple group member.
Writing Feedbackalaki - Jul 16, 2012 / dumi - Jul 16, 2012
|'building good relations with your coworkers' - toefl ibt
Writing FeedbackNataschaAbra - Jul 16, 2012 / NataschaAbra - Jul 16, 2012
|IELTS-What kind of problems can be caused by people resisting to accommodate changes?
Writing FeedbackPvtValley - Jul 15, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jul 16, 2012
|IELTS practice-Letter about major news in my country
Writing Feedbackanzdriz - Jul 15, 2012 / dumi - Jul 18, 2012
|IELTS -- Students learn more from teachers than from other sources (internet or TV)
2 - I think, "has been changed the ways we learn" is appropriate than "improving.." "the increase of sources.." => "the...
Writing Feedbackbingle2012 - Jul 15, 2012 / PvtValley - Jul 15, 2012
|'not only money' - IELTS: Reasons why people go to work.
3 - Inconclussion To conclude or In conclusion, there are a lot of motivations for people to work, not only money...
Writing Feedbacksmogito - Jul 15, 2012 / gauravwalia1988 - Aug 3, 2012
|'universal pills' - If you could create one invention ,what would it be?
8 - me neither!...
Writing Feedbackchucnt - Jul 15, 2012 / deepakbaniya - Jul 18, 2012
|Preference of where you wish to live is highly personal
2 - Some researchers believe that many people prefer living in small towns. The reason I would like to live...
Writing FeedbackAkrotiri - Jul 15, 2012 / amenanoori - Jul 15, 2012
|IELTS essay -- should students attend private schools
Writing Feedbackbingle2012 - Jul 15, 2012 / smogito - Jul 15, 2012
|'gold fish' - my pet essay
Writing Feedbackreaderxmog - Jul 15, 2012 / April April - Jul 15, 2012
|Toefl writing :what are the important qualities of a good child?
Writing Feedbackmohammad_ee - Jul 15, 2012 / mohammad_ee - Jul 15, 2012
|IELTS!! To obey rules or to have less rules? How to grow up?
Writing FeedbackMInchi - Jul 15, 2012 / MInchi - Jul 15, 2012
|'boy/girl sports activities' / 'leaving home country for abroad' -Ielts writing tasks
2 - U should consider TIME, PLACE, and GENERAL TREND in the introduction of the IELTS writing task one. Where...
Writing Feedbackmarczawa - Jul 14, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jul 14, 2012
|IELTS - Music industry and copyright reforms
2 - The question asked you about your opinion. At the end of the introduction you should clearly state...
Writing Feedbackhds62 - Jul 14, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jul 14, 2012
|It's usually better to learn and practice with teachers
4 - i think the Internet is better than a teacher because the Internet has more books than the teacher...
Writing FeedbackLILUSH - Jul 14, 2012 / readerxmog - Jul 15, 2012
|[IELTS]: Telecommunications technology - making lives more exciting and efficient?
5 - Thank you bingle2012. However, some advice that you given are incorrect. 1. telecommunication= phones, mobile phones, radio,...
Writing Feedbackwelnorze - Jul 14, 2012 / welnorze - Jul 18, 2012
|'life is the best teacher' - what about the parents?
4 - "they have deep intuition about their children" What do you mean by deep intuition? its better to write more...
Writing FeedbackBahrom_4474 - Jul 14, 2012 / pintianz - Jul 14, 2012
|TOEFL Essay: "Before an important exam, do you think it is better to prepare for ..."
2 - an introduction should include Motivator, thesis statement, your opinion, and blueprint. I think you should improve the structure...
Writing Feedbackzinboo - Jul 14, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jul 14, 2012
|I would like to emphasize - all we have now resulted from the past
NEW - Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. Do you agree or...
Writing FeedbackLILUSH - Jul 13, 2012 / — -
|People always leave
2 - Look sometimes in this world you are living you have to just let go if something is noloonger important...
Writing Feedbackjehona - Jul 13, 2012 / terencetufuor - Jul 13, 2012
|'dancing is important and influential' - our culture
NEW - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement, dancing plays an important role in our culture? Each...
Writing FeedbackLILUSH - Jul 13, 2012 / — -
|IELTS - Essay about woman's place in society
3 - There have been strong arguments regarding women's place in the society inthe last decades. Some people advocate the opinion...
Writing Feedbackhds62 - Jul 13, 2012 / Peter Piper - Jul 13, 2012
|TOEFL Essay,"Influence of information available on internet"
3 - --------- change the order; In ancient days, people had to travel a lot to find out information...
Writing Feedbackana_p - Jul 13, 2012 / dumi - Jul 13, 2012
|A POSİTİVE OUTLOOK and people's lives
3 - thank you for checking and could you please explain that how I can improve my sentence sturucture and can...
Writing Feedbackccrnn - Jul 13, 2012 / ccrnn - Jul 13, 2012
|TOEFL Essay,"It was easy in past to identify career or job"
2 - I think you should improve the organization of the introduction. The highlighted sentence includes the points that you...
Writing Feedbackana_p - Jul 13, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jul 13, 2012
|'reducing the frequent use of airplane' - IELTS
7 - Thanks :)...
Writing Feedbackairpunklee - Jul 13, 2012 / airpunklee - Jul 14, 2012
|IELTS: Public libraries, learning materials, and limited resources on Video, DVD
Writing Feedbackwelnorze - Jul 12, 2012 / dumi - Jul 14, 2012
|[IELTS] 'considering their situations and motives' - fixed crime punishment or not?
5 - I think if you could add some practical examples to prove your opinion, that would be better. Best...
Writing Feedbackpratikdbl - Jul 12, 2012 / welnorze - Jul 14, 2012
|Teachers must have fixed and high salary regardless if they do a good job or not
2 - Good essay!! However, from my quick look 1. Check your commas, where you should put and where not....
Writing FeedbackLILUSH - Jul 12, 2012 / pratikdbl - Jul 12, 2012
|HEALTH AND HYGIENE - Many diseases can be prevented
NEW - TERENCETUFUOR HEALTH AND HYGEINE Many diseases can be prevented from having a damaging effect on the body by...
Writing Feedbackterencetufuor - Jul 12, 2012 / — -
|IELTS: Convenience foods cannot replace traditional methods of cooking
Writing Feedbacksmogito - Jul 12, 2012 / smogito - Jul 16, 2012
|Ielts ( preventing crimes with childhood behavior analyzing)
Writing FeedbackAlicesh - Jul 12, 2012 / dumi - Nov 20, 2012
|Spending a semester in a foreign university (GRE Issue Essay)
4 - I think the content is good. U provided some good examples, but there is an important thing that...
Writing Feedbackcomputergem - Jul 11, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jul 12, 2012
|Where do communal responsibility and individual responsibility begin and end?
6 - Everyone get stuck once in a while, Denzel. The main point is that you must try harder and you'll...
Writing Feedbackdenzelmcd - Jul 11, 2012 / KhanhZ - Jul 12, 2012
|Essay about too much payment for film and sports stars - feed back
4 - ...
Writing Feedbackpravi - Jul 11, 2012 / dumi - Jul 12, 2012
|'gossip-based information' - toefl ibt
4 - A very impressive introduction. I introduced a small change to strengthen your flow further. One small tip...
Writing FeedbackNataschaAbra - Jul 11, 2012 / dumi - Jul 11, 2012
|[IELTS] People born with talent or taught later
Writing Feedbackpratikdbl - Jul 11, 2012 / pratikdbl - Jul 12, 2012
|IELTS Topic: Predict a child to be a criminal in the future by studying his behavior
4 - Thank you 'pravi, Alicesh, deepakbaniya and smogito'. The advice that you provide is valuable and helpful. I will modify...
Writing Feedbackwelnorze - Jul 11, 2012 / welnorze - Jul 12, 2012
|Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in
2 - I believe that teenagers nowadays is very difficult. But I totally agree wit you. Nice one Tau...
Writing FeedbackALI ASADI - Jul 11, 2012 / tau - Jul 11, 2012
|IELTS: wellbeing at work
Writing Feedbackmarczawa - Jul 10, 2012 / Slim shady - Jul 11, 2012
|highest purpose of university education, personal or national goals?
2 - Many individuals wonder the about the highest purpose of university education. The founders of tertiary institutions all around...
Writing Feedbackjueeem - Jul 10, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jul 10, 2012
|'transporting goods on railway and pipeline' IELTS
4 - WHat exactly the letter "m" mean? Million? Do not use abbreviation in IELTS writing! I think the phrase "On...
Writing FeedbackNguyen_Dung - Jul 10, 2012 / PvtValley - Jul 14, 2012
|IELTS; How technology has affected the types of relationships people make?
3 - introduction: Toady new technology has become as indispensable part of my life and has affected a positive and negative...
Writing Feedbackduongphuong473 - Jul 10, 2012 / ALI ASADI - Jul 10, 2012
|'coming up with solution for social problems' - essay about issues and young people
Writing FeedbackPvtValley - Jul 9, 2012 / PvtValley - Jul 10, 2012
|'smiling at my own face' - AN ESSAY ABOUT MYSELF...WHAT MAKES ME 'ME'
6 - That awkward moment when you read your old posts... Like, damn! T_____T So, to everyone reading it now,...
Writing FeedbackGuest - Jul 9, 2012 / Guest - Oct 22, 2015
|IELTS Writing task 1: Percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet
2 - Hi, the essay contains 148 words, while u should write at least 150 words. However, I think the essay...
Writing Feedbacksmogito - Jul 9, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jul 9, 2012
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