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|IELTS:narrow the gap; should wealthy nations share their wealth with poorer ones
3 - Hi, I feel that you are contradicting yourself in the essay. Instead, try to stick to one perspective...
Writing Feedbacknmcong95 - May 15, 2012 / Athena - May 20, 2012
|Job satisfaction and meeting employees needs - essay IELTS
4 - thanks...
Writing Feedbackvincentyoung - May 15, 2012 / hadi1981 - May 15, 2012
|'Computer' is the greatest change in the 20th of century?
3 - I have to choose only one topic: computer, the Internet, radio or World War II) I chose computer...
Writing Feedbackbek23 - May 14, 2012 / bek23 - May 14, 2012
|do you prefer to have big or small family? and Why?
Writing Feedbackhadi1981 - May 14, 2012 / hadi1981 - May 15, 2012
|TOEFL:We should never make judgments about a person's character based on appearance
NEW - Please revise my essay for TOEFL independent writing Question: We should never make judgments about a person's character...
Writing FeedbackZook - May 14, 2012 / — -
|Why Golf is my favorite Sport?
Writing FeedbackNajah1987 - May 14, 2012 / Najah1987 - May 15, 2012
|SINGLE SEX SCHOOLS have many benefits and are as equally good as Co-ed schools
NEW - (Some people) might say the single sex schools are wrong, because girls and boys need to know how to...
Writing FeedbackAshrehm - May 13, 2012 / — -
|'one year break can be long for young people' - encouraged to work or travel
Writing Feedbacksheyh - May 13, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 12, 2012
|TOEFL:both books recording real things and imaginative things is worth reading.
2 - But if we read books that record fabricated facts like what had been wrotewritten in the autographautobiography of Hitler,...
Writing Feedbackhywb2 - May 13, 2012 / dumi - Jun 9, 2012
|The average educational spending on each student have rocketed continuously for more than 20 years
NEW - School should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Agree or disagree. Some of my expressions are not accurate. Please...
Writing Feedbacktommyzhu - May 13, 2012 / — -
|financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program
2 - it's great writing abot financial education,but i think, you should add more negative effects about financial education. you can...
Writing Feedbackloandinh - May 13, 2012 / jessiangela - May 16, 2012
|Sat essay: Is conscience a more powerful motivation than fame, power or money?
Writing Feedbackkimuratakuya - May 13, 2012 / kimuratakuya - May 14, 2012
|Enjoyment? We have responsibility to support our family and contribute to improvement of society
2 - There=> This is where the controversy arises your essay has good structure, the supporting ideas are clear enough to...
Writing Feedbacktonywenlxf - May 13, 2012 / loandinh - May 13, 2012
|IELTS: News editors are objective and have their own agendas on what to publish
NEW - Topic: News editors decide what to broadcast on TV and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you...
Writing FeedbackScientiana - May 13, 2012 / — -
|'advertisement is very important for cosmetic company' - essay to modify
2 - OH My ! You have so many wording in one paragraph? I think you better get it organized otherwise...
Writing Feedbackessaybiubiubiu - May 12, 2012 / Jeecee - May 14, 2012
|IELTS essay. International music vs traditional ('music is vital to us')
6 - It is great job to open Ielts essays forum But I would like to suggest a sort of categorization...
Writing Feedbackkhumayra - May 12, 2012 / hadi1981 - May 15, 2012
|SAT essay-What gives us more pleasure and satisfaction?
Writing Feedbacktanvi3595 - May 12, 2012 / tanvi3595 - May 13, 2012
|'Chance to change life?' - Going overseas for university study
2 - most of Vietnamese students who chose to continue study=> continue studying abroad have got better jobs than the ones...
Writing Feedbackthaomeo - May 12, 2012 / loandinh - May 13, 2012
|'4 ways of life goals' - personal story essay
Writing Feedbackstorygirl18 - May 11, 2012 / An312406 - May 12, 2012
|IELTS- SHOULD FOREIGNERS RESPECT LOCAL CUSTOMS OR VISE VERSE
Writing FeedbackJaishri - May 11, 2012 / Jaishri - May 12, 2012
|Persuasive essay: it's okay to strive for perfection. 3 claims + intro and conc
3 - its not a quote it was written in a discussion about perfection by someone anonymous. I just want to...
Writing Feedbackfoo488 - May 11, 2012 / foo488 - May 12, 2012
|With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more info...
Writing Feedbacksushiking - May 11, 2012 / tormented chap - May 13, 2012
|SAT ESSAY：ease does not challenge us?
3 - Thank you. Because the time in the test is limited, i want to abridge some part. Casn you give...
Writing Feedbackkimuratakuya - May 11, 2012 / kimuratakuya - May 11, 2012
|Essay on Barbara Kruger
2 - Barbara Kruger's works deals with mass media. Kruger's works expose the deception by re-constructing works in mass media...
Writing Feedbackfrank88 - May 10, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 14, 2012
|Regular and Acceleration - Two Programs in The Learning Process
2 - Well I think your interpretation of the subject matter is quite accurate and nicely demonstrated. Your grammar is a...
Writing Feedbackcikucika - May 10, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 10, 2012
|Essay on social networking services
Writing Feedbackbek23 - May 9, 2012 / bek23 - May 10, 2012
|'female dominance' - IELTS-post-school qualifications by gender in Australia 1999
3 - Thank you very much. I had doubts about the language of "comparison" and all these things related to proportions,...
Writing Feedbackansergeyg - May 9, 2012 / ansergeyg - May 10, 2012
|TOEFL ESSAY: Living with a roommate is better than Living alone
Writing Feedbackjhundais - May 9, 2012 / — -
|TOEFL: selecting / processing information- very important skill a person should learn
Writing Feedbacktommyzhu - May 9, 2012 / tommyzhu - May 11, 2012
|'Work carefully' - Advantages and disadvantages of studying overseas
2 - Many students in countries which are not very developed, especially in the age group between eleven and fifteen tends...
Writing FeedbackMJBSENU - May 9, 2012 / dumi - May 9, 2012
|'the world will never stop developing' - doing the same things and avoiding change.
Writing FeedbackCherry Dang - May 9, 2012 / Cherry Dang - May 10, 2012
|GMAT AWA Essay (Falling Revenues and Manufacturing delays)
Writing Feedbackredpearl - May 8, 2012 / redpearl - May 11, 2012
|TOEFL Essay " Transportation vehicles: Automobiles, Bicycles OR Airplane"
Writing Feedbackana_p - May 8, 2012 / ana_p - May 8, 2012
|Is it important to go to college ? What do you think ? Give reasons for the same .
4 - I strongly believe that people should go to college. Entering university is a very much promising step into worldwide...
Writing Feedbackdpka21 - May 8, 2012 / westway50 - May 8, 2012
|Students study a wide range of subjects or a few subjects. Discuss both pros and cons
NEW - Title: Some people say students should focus on a few subjects while other argue that they should study a...
Writing Feedbackzhonghua2412 - May 8, 2012 / — -
|IELTS: Funding artists or spending money on other important subjects?
2 - I think a more simple introductory statement would fit better such as "In my opinion, there should absolutely be...
Writing FeedbackScientiana - May 8, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 9, 2012
|'people who give their opinion for justified purpose are heroes' - sat essay
2 - A simple, more refined opening statement is necessary, for starters such as: "There are many actions and factors that...
Writing Feedbackkimuratakuya - May 8, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 9, 2012
|Gay marriage should not be legalized because it destroys the meaning of family
3 - Well,I am of the view that there should be freedom and liberty for everybody.It will be like depriving people...
Writing Feedbackbansmart06 - May 8, 2012 / tormented chap - May 9, 2012
|Essay on "We don't see, though we look! We don't hear, though we listen! ............
3 - Dear leah. Thanks for your comments and appreciation. But, have to tell you frankly that I'm not perfect in...
Writing FeedbackSharavi - May 8, 2012 / Sharavi - May 9, 2012
|IELTS: Difference between social behavior of children and adults.
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - May 8, 2012 / ah_zafari - May 10, 2012
|IELTS-'Some people have benefited from modern communication technology'
NEW - I am have to tested on 12th, May please help me.. TOPIC Some people have benefited from modern...
Writing Feedbackhanbal - May 7, 2012 / — -
|'False awareness' - Dieting can better or ruin one's health completely
2 - Hi, Your opinion is expected in first para. After that you can explain other details. Otherwise your essay...
Writing Feedbackloandinh - May 7, 2012 / ana_p - May 8, 2012
|TOEFL Essay "Work by hand OR machine"
Writing Feedbackana_p - May 7, 2012 / ana_p - May 14, 2012
|My research paper about a Movie Theater I would like to open one day.
Writing Feedbacksweetdisaster06 - May 7, 2012 / jishollywood - May 8, 2012
|"As you sow so shall you reap" - children as members of society (parents role)
Writing Feedbackkapilsatija - May 7, 2012 / ana_p - May 8, 2012
|IELTS essay: advantages and disadvantages of getting married at young age
Writing FeedbackAlooy - May 7, 2012 / — -
|"Worthy subjects" - News editors decide what to broadcast on television
3 - спосибо! (I read in the other post that you're from Russia, right? I studied journalism too, I'm from Brazil)....
Writing FeedbackClarissaMach - May 7, 2012 / ClarissaMach - May 9, 2012
|TOEFL: Study in home country or study abroad, which choice is the best?
Writing Feedbackhywb2 - May 7, 2012 / hywb2 - May 7, 2012
|IELTS: "Prevention is better than cure" public health
NEW - Topic "Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted...
Writing Feedbackjjoshijay - May 7, 2012 / — -
|'he must not cheat..' -Write a paragraph about qualities you want from your ideal man
3 - No man in this world is perfect.Every person is born with some defect and shortcoming.Shortcomings which none of us...
Writing Feedbacktrang - May 7, 2012 / tormented chap - May 7, 2012
|'The exploration and development of safe alternative to fossile fuels' -My IELTS
10 - Indeed, the use of "arise" in this context is better. Thank you so much for your suggestion....
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - May 7, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 29, 2012
|HOME SCHOOLING IS ACCURATE OPTION
3 - You definitely need to develop a more inviting, and more broad, introductory statement rather than just jumping right in...
Writing Feedbackjessiangela - May 7, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 6, 2012
|leisure time essay; spending time equally useful for resting and for activities
Writing Feedbackaidossodia - May 7, 2012 / aidossodia - May 8, 2012
|'This camp opened my eyes' - essay on what I learned from a camp
Writing Feedbackdofayyad - May 6, 2012 / westway50 - May 6, 2012
|TOEFL: It is better to work slower to avoid mistakes - iPhone example
3 - Hi Wang, Thanks for your corrections and reminding! I'll try to paraphrase the original sentence next time. Best...
Writing Feedbackarleneintw - May 6, 2012 / arleneintw - May 6, 2012
|'long term investing vs. short term investing' - Clep Exam Composition
Writing FeedbackCajamez - May 5, 2012 / Cajamez - May 11, 2012
|IELTS: There are many effective ways to motivate employees
Writing FeedbackScientiana - May 5, 2012 / Scientiana - May 13, 2012
|ielts-scientific research done by companies
NEW - Any one can offer some suggestions? I have problem with the Task Achievement part, i often feel my essays...
Writing Feedbacklynnyang - May 5, 2012 / — -
|Ielts: Funding education for students who cannot afford it?
3 - Thank you very much. Your comment did not upset me.I will take into account your recommendation and work on...
Writing Feedbackaidossodia - May 5, 2012 / aidossodia - May 5, 2012
|To work and learn at the same time. Advantages and disadvantages.
Writing FeedbackCherry88 - May 5, 2012 / Cherry88 - May 7, 2012
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