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|imagine how our ancestors would have survived without Computers, televisions,internet
4 - .... sounds better without "to" :) Internet instantly connects people across the globe without any time...
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Dec 25, 2012 / dumi - Dec 28, 2012
|SAT:"Is it always better to be original than to imitate or use the ideas of others?"
Writing FeedbackObaid Allah - Dec 25, 2012 / dumi - Dec 30, 2012
|American Literature Literary Criticism Unit - "Easy A"
Writing Feedbackcollege13 - Dec 25, 2012 / hongyen2192 - Dec 25, 2012
|Changing jobs frequently?I feel it's good to continue at least for six years (IELTS)
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Dec 25, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 25, 2012
|Studying abroad or in our own country? Both options have plus and minus results
NEW - Question: The idea of going overseas for university study is an exciting prospect for many people. However, while it...
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|You created something using your bare hands, and your takeaway from the experience
3 - Thanks...
Writing FeedbackIkennaBlack - Dec 25, 2012 / IkennaBlack - Dec 25, 2012
|Magical Girl Warrior; Sailor moon essay
7 - I don't watch the show, but you should just bring out more of your personality in your essay if...
Writing Feedbacksailorjupiter - Dec 24, 2012 / NRessay - Dec 24, 2012
|[IELTS] Learning foreign languages is common now. Good or Not? Can prevent drawbacks
Writing Feedbackchristyzhongs - Dec 24, 2012 / devabe2005 - Jan 27, 2013
|IElTS: benefits and drawbacks of urbanization; urbanization is a phenomenon
6 - ...move from countryside to the city due to undeveloped financial and social facilitieslooking for more opportunities for life. ...
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Dec 24, 2012 / dumi - Dec 28, 2012
|my perspective on how one should live life to obtain happiness and success!
Writing Feedbackaaldana1 - Dec 24, 2012 / Millin Gabani - Dec 25, 2012
|Shifting large factories to countryside helps solve traffic&housing issues... I agree
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Dec 24, 2012 / dumi - Dec 26, 2012
|Main function of universities; Well-rounded graduates
3 - Hi, I like your conclusion. clear state your ideas. I feel the below sentence is a bit strange....
Writing FeedbackFrenzyzqq - Dec 24, 2012 / christyzhongs - Dec 24, 2012
|Christmas & continuity of traditions; Stanford/ What matter to you and why?
4 - Your Christmas essay was very warm and fuzzy :) Your roommate note, however, felt disorganized and very list-y, if...
Writing Feedbackblondie51295 - Dec 23, 2012 / haneom94 - Dec 27, 2012
|Time & how it passes by; should we blame distance or time?
4 - Hey.. Thanks for your comments... I was actually kind of mad when I wrote it, especially the conclusion... Lol.....
Writing FeedbackSRabia - Dec 23, 2012 / SRabia - Dec 23, 2012
|External/ internal Reasons for School dropouts & possible measures ;IELTS
4 - Hi, I think you can talk about the mesures in the same sequence as the resons you listed external:...
Writing Feedbackash5005 - Dec 23, 2012 / christyzhongs - Dec 25, 2012
|IELTS ; Veg or Non Veg? Veg is healthier!
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Dec 23, 2012 / y0_3mma - Dec 24, 2012
|[iels task 2]The government spends about 220 million pounds a year supporting museums
2 - .... what do you mean by "unnecessary to be substantially" ? .... that part sounds a bit confusing...
Writing FeedbackLunate - Dec 23, 2012 / dumi - Dec 23, 2012
|( IELTS essay) Cigarette advertisements should be banned completely?
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Dec 23, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 23, 2012
|(IELTS ESSAY) merits and demerits of MNCs in developing countries..
3 - .... the presence of many multinational companies in the developing countries have a mushrooming effect. The...
Writing Feedbackash5005 - Dec 23, 2012 / dumi - Dec 23, 2012
|IELTS topic. animal experiments have more disadvantages over their advantages
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Dec 23, 2012 / alphy - Dec 23, 2012
|IELTS Topic. the power of advertising and its impact on high sales
2 - ....Very interesting : )... Good introduction ! ....I feel "specialists in advertising" sounds better ...
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Dec 23, 2012 / dumi - Dec 23, 2012
|Gender and Language in Advertisements
Writing Feedbackalyney - Dec 22, 2012 / dumi - Dec 23, 2012
|why people work? mainly for pride, honor, fame, respect, enjoyment
2 - Hello, please see my edits below. Work isan important part of everyone's life. They feel pride in...
Writing Feedbackadi sharma - Dec 22, 2012 / lynzee22 - Mar 18, 2015
|TOEFL: Children should grow up in a big city!!
5 - It's a good essay, however, I think you should structure your two arguments better. Try to follow a PEEL...
Writing FeedbackRaviSouza - Dec 22, 2012 / alicederp - Dec 29, 2012
|GRE-ARGUMENT- Prunty County should undertake the same kind of road improvement
2 - 2-3/6 a lot of grammatical mistakes that is inhibiting the flow that a reading piece establishes, as I try...
Writing Feedbackkettyabc - Dec 22, 2012 / kethsaxena - Dec 30, 2012
|Government should support student's or professional athelets ? Students!
3 - Hai Alphy.. You have some good points.. But it didn't come out nicely..You have lots of spelling mistakes. Careless...
Writing Feedbackalphy - Dec 22, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 23, 2012
|Ä°ELTS TASK1:children's leisure activities; pie chart illustrations
Writing Feedbacksrns - Dec 22, 2012 / dumi - Dec 22, 2012
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Video games - positives and negatives
Writing FeedbackYanSun - Dec 22, 2012 / April April - Dec 22, 2012
|Taking a year of break between high school & university
5 - Hai... good attempt... Additional ponits for you.. :It helps to meet the tution of future studies espically...
Writing Feedbackmonaph - Dec 22, 2012 / joythblessy - Jan 15, 2013
|IELTS:best way to make new friends?sports, community activities or travelling?
Writing Feedbackcolin - Dec 22, 2012 / YanSun - Dec 22, 2012
|( IELTS essay) Computer will diminish the writing skills
3 - ... This is a strong opening statement. It sounds general but it has relevance to your topic. ...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Dec 22, 2012 / dumi - Dec 22, 2012
|'skip the trial and error period and save the time toward a right way'; what future job for a child?
7 - Hi, you do have many clear points in your essay, and as pointed out before, the main problem is...
Writing FeedbackJoyce zhuang - Dec 22, 2012 / alicederp - Dec 29, 2012
|GRE- Argument on letter by Central Plaza store owners; Hidden factors
Writing Feedbackkettyabc - Dec 21, 2012 / kettyabc - Dec 22, 2012
|(IELTS essay) Effect of action movies on young children/ Solutions
7 - thanks a lot for correcting my essay. i am always grateful to u guys..dumi, pahan , collin,ozia tessy..etc.....
Writing Feedbackash5005 - Dec 21, 2012 / ash5005 - Dec 23, 2012
|( IELTS essay) Advertisements encourages to buy unwanted things?
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Dec 21, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 25, 2012
|Children are very sensitive about what they see or hear from their friends
5 - ????? I don't understand this sentence. Please rephrase it. First and foremost, it is proven psychologically...
Writing FeedbackDibaa - Dec 21, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 22, 2012
|Immigrants should abandon their own ways and adapt to local customs?
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Dec 21, 2012 / devabe2005 - Dec 27, 2012
|IELTS - Technology: taking control our lives or positive developements
3 - Ozia In the modern era, the topic of technological influence is controversial. There is clear divergence of opinions on...
Writing FeedbackOzia - Dec 21, 2012 / Frenzyzqq - Dec 21, 2012
|IELTS:The best extra-curriculum activity, sports, community activities or traveling?
Writing Feedbackcolin - Dec 20, 2012 / alphy - Dec 21, 2012
|IELTS:Cash and coins will be replaced by credit cards in the future.Positive/Negative
Writing Feedbackcolin - Dec 20, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 21, 2012
|[IELTS Essay] Serveral langages die out every year, Is it not important? AD
Writing Feedbackchristyzhongs - Dec 20, 2012 / Ozia - Dec 21, 2012
|TOEFL ; Staying with a host family is better than staying with friends
Writing Feedbackuew37 - Dec 20, 2012 / uew37 - Jan 4, 2013
|( IELTS essay) ageing population: impacts on society.
5 - Hai Dumi... Thanks for the correction and support.. I mean the less productive workforce may leads to...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Dec 20, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 21, 2012
|Technology has influenced the way that people interact; Is this positive or negative?
3 - Thanks for your reply colin!What would you give me band about my this essay.I am a student of intermediate...
Writing Feedbackcaiden sanetor - Dec 20, 2012 / caiden sanetor - Dec 21, 2012
|Competition and Co-operation should be there moderately ;IELTS
3 - i guess unless groups have competed to each means ''unless groups have cooperated with each other.'' by the way,...
Writing Feedbackmcuong01 - Dec 20, 2012 / Frenzyzqq - Dec 24, 2012
|IELTS:To increase economic growth, government can neglect environmental concerns?
6 - are does. grammer mistake~! really admire ur essay. well developed and have a big vocabulary....
Writing Feedbackcolin - Dec 19, 2012 / jessy - Jan 11, 2013
|American Dream is deeply rooted in the America culture and ideology
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|TOEFL : parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life
2 - Nowadays, the society has become exceedingly competitive than ever before, parents have the responsibilitis to teach their children to...
Writing Feedbacktmartin - Dec 19, 2012 / colin - Dec 19, 2012
|Toefl:Should children grow up in coutryside or in a city?
Writing Feedbackartin - Dec 19, 2012 / dumi - Dec 21, 2012
|About New Hobby - Reading can change my life
2 - I suggest that you rewrite your essay. It is quite short and throws in arguments without elaborating on them....
Writing Feedbackturtkbdr - Dec 19, 2012 / brazilian01 - Dec 19, 2012
|[TOEFL] Friendship is more important than mistake by a friend, although mistake is terrible.
3 - Alright I'm going to be quite critical here so please don't take offense. "First of all, a mistake...
Writing Feedbackgoodluck - Dec 19, 2012 / alicederp - Dec 29, 2012
|IELTS:Young people today are more likely to help others than young people in the past
4 - Your introduction contains good points; follows the right structure for this task. However, I feel the above sentence...
Writing Feedbackcolin - Dec 19, 2012 / dumi - Dec 20, 2012
|News of "End of world"
Writing Feedbacksiamak - Dec 19, 2012 / ellstudent - Dec 19, 2012
|Facebook Users - Classification Essay
3 - Well written and very informative. The last sentence doesn't make sense at all. Maybe say 'the friend seekers, the...
Writing FeedbackpirFena - Dec 19, 2012 / blondie51295 - Dec 23, 2012
|IELTS : Home or Office? Home is better
2 - Good introduction. You introduce the topic well; express your opinion clearly.... Good Job! : ) .... With...
Writing Feedbackcolin - Dec 18, 2012 / dumi - Dec 19, 2012
|Consulting others before making an important decision; 'experienced people'
3 - Babysnow: I like your essay...you have written well...your ideas are clear and sound. Dumi..please with my essays too....
Writing FeedbackBabysnow - Dec 18, 2012 / AryanK - Dec 19, 2012
|It is easier to maintain good health than in the past
4 - Hai, you have presented well. but you don't forget , home made vegetable is good than any where in...
Writing FeedbackShirley0426007 - Dec 18, 2012 / alphy - Dec 19, 2012
|IELTS; Guns should be better controlled or even banned
Writing FeedbackFrenzyzqq - Dec 18, 2012 / brazilian01 - Dec 19, 2012
|Toefl: A good neighbor should be honest, cooperative and considerate!
Writing Feedbackartin - Dec 18, 2012 / dumi - Dec 21, 2012
|IELTS - Mobile Phone and its benefits
4 - i think you should read some samples about different topics available on internet. after you get familiar with these...
Writing Feedbackzubiboy008 - Dec 18, 2012 / ieltswriter - May 26, 2014
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