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|'nation's social development' - GRE Issue Task-- characteristics of a society
3 - Hi, To tell the truth, I just read the introduction because the essay was long :). Please accept my...
Writing Feedbackcalvin1993 - Jun 15, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 15, 2012
|IELTS Benefits of unpaid work of teenagers
4 - Hi Mriytunjay, it would be better to start a new thread to people can edit your essay more easily....
Writing Feedbackhadi1981 - Jun 14, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 15, 2012
|Culture shock - preventing people from accommodating to a new life?
NEW - This is the assignment form Understanding international communication class.My teacher ask us to choose a topic from chap 5:Culture...
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|Ielts - 'equal ability to compete in the society (males/females students'
Writing Feedbackkarenkk - Jun 14, 2012 / karenkk - Jun 15, 2012
|TOEFL (Business should hire employees for their entire lives)
Writing Feedbackvickey - Jun 13, 2012 / Mark Jose - Jun 28, 2012
|Contribution of artists and scientists are both important to society.
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Jun 13, 2012 / hungvud - Jun 15, 2012
|Spend money or Save money? I support saving for future
3 - We have to save money ,that helps for our children education in future. Maybe change this last line?...
Writing Feedbackjanardhan005 - Jun 13, 2012 / emily_browneyes - Jun 23, 2012
|'Inoculations against cow flu' - essay
4 - Hi Susan & Dumi First, thank you for your suggestions, I really appreciate your time reading and correcting...
Writing FeedbackMuath - Jun 13, 2012 / Muath - Jun 13, 2012
|'drawbacks of pursuing an inappropriate course of study' - GRE practice essay
Writing Feedbackviviana15077 - Jun 13, 2012 / viviana15077 - Jun 17, 2012
|'going to live once' - IELTS: worst diet
6 - The points that you have mentioned on your essay is perfect but the way that you have presented is...
Writing Feedbackhadi1981 - Jun 13, 2012 / Archu - Jun 13, 2012
|TOEFL (Small University of Big University)
NEW - Q: Some students prefer to attend a small university. Others prefer to attend a big university. Discuss the advantages...
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|Essay on Group Therapy vs. Individual Therapy
3 - I think you should improve the introduction. An introduction reveals that what points are going to argue in an...
Writing Feedbacklnddancer1 - Jun 12, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 13, 2012
|'parents should be aware of the type of children's environment' - ILET
7 - Thank you all very much, I will take all your note in writing another essay better Thanks very...
Writing FeedbackIslam - Jun 12, 2012 / Islam - Jun 13, 2012
|toefl essay: friends for fun or for giving help
Writing Feedbackskyss109 - Jun 12, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 12, 2012
|'physical qualifications that a female cannot do' - ILET
2 - In theWith regard ofto the number of females toand males accepted in universities, I am within the opinion...
Writing FeedbackIslam - Jun 12, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 12, 2012
|'to travel or work before starting their university study' - ILETS
Writing FeedbackIslam - Jun 12, 2012 / Islam - Jun 12, 2012
|IELTS ESSAY1 A letter to the college accommodation service
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|movies and television positive and negative effects; 'distracts young people'
3 - thank you so much for correcting my essay. it was hard for me to find the errors.. its really...
Writing Feedbackskyss109 - Jun 12, 2012 / skyss109 - Jun 12, 2012
|'education, production and entertainment' - ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF COMPUTERS
Writing Feedbackkissingyou0912 - Jun 12, 2012 / kissingyou0912 - Jun 15, 2012
|"The playback: late night, Brooklyn.." - respone to a narrative
Writing Feedbacklovekayliex - Jun 12, 2012 / aspiringwriter - Jul 8, 2012
|Does advertising make people be the same?
3 - critisms = criticisms sucessful = successful adolesents = adolescents (and no comma after) " her peers...
Writing Feedbacksophie789 - Jun 11, 2012 / lovekayliex - Jun 12, 2012
|TOEFL Essay - 'disagree with building the new military base here'
2 - In conclusion, military base camps givebring a lot of disadvantages to the people. The last reason I disagree...
Writing Feedbackvickey - Jun 11, 2012 / dumi - Jun 12, 2012
|ROSARY, MY BEST FRIEND
2 - Ever since I met my good friend Rosary, ---You don't need a comma here.---several years ago, she has been...
Writing FeedbackAdragotto - Jun 11, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 11, 2012
|A college or university should be open for every student or only for good ones?
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Jun 11, 2012 / dumi - Jun 11, 2012
|IELTS TASK 2 Space travel and our routine life
2 - AroundIn the 16th century, human acrossman conquered the sea andfindfoundthe new land successful. Plenty of land and naturenatural...
Writing Feedbackland1111 - Jun 11, 2012 / dumi - Jun 12, 2012
|Encourage to take private health care insurance or maintain free health care systems?
4 - okkkkkkk.... now I get your point :) especially during the period that the price of health care services...
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Jun 10, 2012 / dumi - Jun 11, 2012
|IELTS Taks 2 - People resist to changes in their lives/ Problems & Solutions
Writing FeedbackIELTSPT - Jun 10, 2012 / lovekayliex - Jun 10, 2012
|Should Students (not administrators) control their own education?
3 - Hi Sudhir, Even though it is important that students should be given full control in planning their education,...
Writing Feedbackinform - Jun 10, 2012 / dumi - Jun 10, 2012
|Narrative writing on "we all had different ideas about the parcel"
Writing Feedbackaleen - Jun 10, 2012 / aleen - Jun 12, 2012
|'The house' - IELTS, A letter to ask your friend for help.
Writing Feedbackhadi1981 - Jun 10, 2012 / nina2 - Jun 10, 2012
|When people depend too much on their government, it leads to dire consequences
Writing FeedbackDiana Safiy - Jun 10, 2012 / Diana Safiy - Jun 13, 2012
|'change is a great investment for everyone' - GRE essay
4 - this change has bettered students' lives off This type of change will let retirees see things in different...
Writing Feedbackviviana15077 - Jun 10, 2012 / hungvud - Jun 11, 2012
|Isolation of a country from their neighbors abroad can only cause issues in the long run
4 - I would suggest starting with an opening statement that is more "attention grabbing" and clarifying your first paragraph all...
Writing Feedbackinform - Jun 10, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 14, 2012
|Classification Paper on Reality TV
2 - Some more reasons on popularity of the reality show :- Reality Show is a change from the usual...
Writing Feedbackdberryhill - Jun 9, 2012 / inform - Jun 10, 2012
|'Rumblefish'(Rob and Renee ) - Summary
2 - After five years of marriage, Rob lost his wife Renee to a pulmonary embolism, a blockage of the main...
Writing Feedbacklovekayliex - Jun 9, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 9, 2012
|Should violent films that have adverse effects be controlled?
Writing Feedbacksophie789 - Jun 9, 2012 / greencactus - Jun 9, 2012
|'The Kitchen' - IELTS, Neighbours complain
2 - You stated this before explaining the reason of the noise. I think you should mention this after the...
Writing Feedbackhadi1981 - Jun 9, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 9, 2012
|IELTS task .Expaining why you want to take IELTS exam
Writing Feedbackgiahuy17496 - Jun 9, 2012 / hadi1981 - Jun 13, 2012
|'a great political leader must have wits and tact' - Gre issue essay
Writing Feedbackviviana15077 - Jun 9, 2012 / viviana15077 - Jun 13, 2012
|AIR POLLUTION AND HOW TO REDUCE IT
3 - aponiiik Oh. Thank you very much. I am so grateful to you for having corrected my essay.It is really...
Writing Feedbackkissingyou0912 - Jun 9, 2012 / kissingyou0912 - Jun 9, 2012
|Children with different levels of intelligence should be taught separately???
11 - dont criticize your paper because of the length because trust me, i did that once and i submitted an...
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Jun 8, 2012 / nina2 - Jun 10, 2012
|IELTS: 'more and more international' - world is becoming a global village
3 - If you record your essay then play it back after you have done the Reading practice you will find...
Writing Feedbackwillywonka - Jun 8, 2012 / ernhen - Jun 9, 2012
|essay about technology and traditional skills and life ways--feedback
2 - Hi! In the first paragraph, I would suggest that you give a basic and general overview stating the...
Writing FeedbackTISIA000 - Jun 8, 2012 / sean_neuman - Jun 8, 2012
|Should restrict detailed descriptions of crime reports?
NEW - Some people suggest that there should be restrictions on a detailed description of crimes in the newspapers and on...
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|TEACHERS SHOULD NOT DISTURB THEIR STUDENTS QUESTIONING
Writing Feedbackinform - Jun 8, 2012 / dumi - Jun 10, 2012
|'Scientists renew people daily life' - IELTS
Writing Feedbackland1111 - Jun 8, 2012 / land1111 - Jun 10, 2012
|[TOEFL] - living on campus in a dormitory is the best choice to live the campus life.
4 - Thanks for your comment! :) It's really helpful to me. I'll try to improve my writing and rewrite this....
Writing Feedbackjanetyang - Jun 7, 2012 / janetyang - Jun 8, 2012
|'change the world?' - What would you tell your founding fathers prompt? 2 3
104 - Yes, this was definitely a worthwhile experience. Nevertheless, I would still like to work on my grammar and overall...
Writing Feedbackchessman567 - Jun 7, 2012 / chessman567 - Sep 23, 2012
|'reports on vicious crime attract a lot of viewers' - IELTS2 Essay
Writing Feedbackrt2012 - Jun 7, 2012 / Mriytunjay - Jun 9, 2012
|TOEFL Essay: "Reasons to work other than earning money"
Writing Feedbackana_p - Jun 7, 2012 / ana_p - Jun 12, 2012
|How I got my title as Prince of Nigeria-revision/shortening
2 - Well, first, try not to repeat yourself. Look for any less valuable feedback and eliminate it. Keep true to...
Writing Feedbackayolegit - Jun 7, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 7, 2012
|'great to see you again'
NEW - An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and...
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|IELTS 2-- old buildings should be knocked down?
Writing Feedbackland1111 - Jun 7, 2012 / land1111 - Jun 10, 2012
|TOEFL (The passage and lecture is about autobiography)
2 - According to the passage, book makers are focused on the factor which the readers want to be heard,...
Writing Feedbackvickey - Jun 6, 2012 / dumi - Jun 7, 2012
|IELTS TASK 2 MODERN TECHNOLOGY HAS GIVEN US MORE LEISURE TIME THAN BEFORE
4 - Hi hadi1981, I'm sorry to say that I mention argument but not opinion before. Opinion comes with arguments,...
Writing Feedbackland1111 - Jun 6, 2012 / peterc - Jun 7, 2012
|Argumentative essay- Thesis Statement - Watching television makes people smarter?
Writing Feedbackjulienruyter - Jun 6, 2012 / julienruyter - Jun 7, 2012
|essay on manufactured landscapes video
3 - Some people assert that old buildings should not be in the way of new buildingshould be taken down to...
Writing Feedbackaurora1995 - Jun 6, 2012 / aurora1995 - Jun 7, 2012
|IELTS - national consumer expenditure on different goods in 5 different countries in 2002
2 - Hi, In the introduction you should state that how many items were investigated. At the end of...
Writing Feedbackandrea23694 - Jun 6, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 6, 2012
|Globalization leads to cultures identity loss?
5 - initially i would want you to know that you have done tremendous work which resulted to this well written...
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Jun 6, 2012 / ashaban - Jun 8, 2012
|ielts 2 - 'parents are superior to the teachers in terms of development'
4 - I hope this could help :) Today-In this day and age. In conclusion-With all things taken into consideration/account....
Writing Feedbackhehelovehaha - Jun 6, 2012 / willywonka - Jun 8, 2012
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