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|Essay : Which type of movie do you prefer? seious or entertaining?
2 - i really liked your essay...your ideas are clear and it is easy to follow them for the reader. The...
Writing Feedbackbuituandung231 - May 31, 2012 / Saidakhror - May 31, 2012
|'it would increase the sales in the Central Plaza store' - GRE essays
3 - please check for content, grammatical errors and sentence formations. Thank you ! The following appeared in a letter...
Writing FeedbackNJiya - May 31, 2012 / NJiya - Jun 6, 2012
|Gandhi - About a World Leader
5 - Sure. He would be the perfect example of a leader if you feel that he inspired others through his...
Writing Feedbackinform - May 31, 2012 / admission2012 - Oct 24, 2012
|Draft: Women's Health vs. Religious Freedom
2 - It is also noted that, "Women who use OCs have more regular and predictable menstrual cycles, with a reduction...
Writing FeedbackWilliamMorton - May 30, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 6, 2012
|TOEFL Essay: Advantages and disadvantages of sports.
8 - Hi Vickey & Sudhir, I think, this is a Description/Explanation type of essay and not a preference or...
Writing Feedbackana_p - May 30, 2012 / ana_p - Jun 1, 2012
|'important to make large amount to money' - essay
3 - Thanks Ahmad for your advice. Request you review the whole essay I have corrected the sentence below. Nowadays...
Writing Feedbackinform - May 30, 2012 / inform - May 31, 2012
|essay about "a fake beauty"
Writing Feedbackjessiangela - May 30, 2012 / kersise - Jun 5, 2012
|(Persuasive Request) Help in writing a Memo for my English assignment
2 - Hi Tony, When you write memos, you usually follow a general format, which sometimes may vary according to...
Writing Feedbacktonloc1234 - May 30, 2012 / dumi - Jun 7, 2012
|'to promote medical standard and science through sports facilities' - IELTS TASK II
2 - is play ----->is palying.? sorry..my writting is so bad. so...I can't correct it for you. but.that's my little suggestion......
Writing Feedbackbtxdzsz - May 30, 2012 / vickywang - May 30, 2012
|Crime news should not be reported in newspapers or tv
7 - Ahmad, i really appreciate your words and you are 100 percent right. But someone who has got so called...
Writing FeedbackSaidakhror - May 30, 2012 / Saidakhror - May 30, 2012
|(development studies / Japan / WB president) - Reflective Journal essays
NEW - Hi all, i am writing my reflective journals, it woul be nice if some body can correct my grammar...
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|'he is right people to work and learn from' - reflective Journal
2 - Even thoughwe had only a few months of working together, he has contributed a great deal to the group...
Writing Feedbackphabee007 - May 29, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 31, 2012
|'more money has to be spent on the road system' - IELTS Essay
3 - this essay is partially out of topic. the question asks to discuss both views are government's and users' payment...
Writing Feedbackbtxdzsz - May 29, 2012 / Saidakhror - May 30, 2012
|Definition of heroes - Gandhi, Luther King, Lincoln essay
4 - go to this website it will help articulate info.gcsu.edu/intranet/univ_senate/Feb_23_04/Feb_04/newsat_scoring.pdf...
Writing Feedbackrishav25 - May 29, 2012 / chessman567 - May 30, 2012
|Parents know better their children than teachers -To be a good member of society
3 - Some sentences are simple and there are some minor grammatical mistakes. I would recommend you to work on coherence...
Writing Feedbacklamck - May 29, 2012 / Saidakhror - May 30, 2012
|'leisure activities are necessary for students' - IELTS 2
Writing Feedbackbtxdzsz - May 29, 2012 / Athena - May 31, 2012
|Effects of theBaby Boom Generation on society.
Writing Feedbackfdm1995 - May 28, 2012 / fdm1995 - May 28, 2012
|'Science deserves more attention' - IELTS Task2
4 - Thanks for your advices. I do need to structure the paragraphs. maybe.I think,when i was writting a essay, i...
Writing Feedbackvickywang - May 28, 2012 / vickywang - May 30, 2012
|Writing report about "Convenient Computers" - feedback
3 - Hi, There is no relationship between the first sentence of the introduction and what you wrote in the other...
Writing FeedbackLulz94 - May 28, 2012 / ah_zafari - May 31, 2012
|TOEFL Writing Exercise : Smoking should not be permitted in restaurants
3 - Hi Stefina, Nicely done. Thank you for sharing nice TOEFL topic. I am also preparing TOEFL exam....
Writing Feedbackpetitsourire - May 28, 2012 / vickey - Jun 3, 2012
|About me and my big dreams
2 - My name is Suhartini and I come from Johor Bahru. My English teacher in secondary school was named Tini...
Writing Feedbacktinie - May 28, 2012 / BaileyLeong - May 29, 2012
|GRE issue essay (Effects of technology, human interaction)?
2 - The rapidly shifting world of technology has drastically changed the way in which people behave in society. Technologies...
Writing FeedbackBucketOfFish - May 28, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 31, 2012
|IELTS writing: moving big companies out of cities
5 - there appears a bunch of problems which have already been heated social issues. 1 stimulate maybe better than appear....
Writing Feedbackjasmine4gjc7 - May 27, 2012 / land1111 - Jun 7, 2012
|"The technology connecting people" - The gre issue 1
2 - Hmm... well, there's a lot of grammatical errors in there, which I'll get into below. However, the structure is...
Writing Feedbackforever299 - May 27, 2012 / BucketOfFish - May 28, 2012
|Are there some heroes who will be remembered forever (Marie Curie)
Writing Feedbacksanya119 - May 27, 2012 / ana_p - Jun 1, 2012
|Multi-cultured has more benefit...
NEW - Some people think there is no drawback to ethnic in the multi-cultured country. Multi-cultured does more benefit than the...
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|(Hamburger, Fish & Chips, Pizza) - IELTS - help with writing task 1 line graph
NEW - Question and line graph is the attached .png My task 1 writing is below The presented information from...
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|'Temperature and Ice melt' - Global Warming Essay
3 - EF_Susan Hi Susan, Thank you so much for your help, I have learned a lot from your correcting. Thanh...
Writing Feedbacktranclack - May 27, 2012 / tranclack - Jun 1, 2012
|'wonder woman' - write about a person you admire - my mum
Writing Feedbackawesome123 - May 27, 2012 / muslim24 - May 27, 2012
|Is the use of animals as the object of sport and entertainment ethically justifiable?
Writing Feedbackarcan - May 27, 2012 / hungvud - Jun 4, 2012
|Visual Arts Essay Writing on Post Modern artisits, architects or designers -feedback
NEW - Discuss how Post Modern artisits, architects or designers have used appropriation to represent cultural and emotional reactions. "The...
Writing Feedbackrated3 - May 26, 2012 / — -
|WHY DRUGS are used by teenagers?
Writing Feedbackburssuztalebe - May 26, 2012 / burssuztalebe - May 27, 2012
|Dallas- the town you were raised in...
NEW - -discuss the town you were raised in how has it and the people in it help develop certain traits...
Writing Feedbackdestiny518 - May 26, 2012 / — -
|TOEFL : What recent news story has affected you the most? In what ways?
NEW - Question: What recent news story has affected you the most? In what ways has it affected you? Use reasons...
Writing Feedbackshift_alan - May 26, 2012 / — -
|The loss of many traditional values and customs due to the working hard of modern men
3 - Thank Ahmad for your quick reply. I'll revise my introduction and conclusion. Good luck to you!...
Writing FeedbackCherry Dang - May 26, 2012 / Cherry Dang - May 26, 2012
|College - the best time when a person participates in other activities which broadens his knowledge
Writing Feedbackinform - May 26, 2012 / inform - Jun 6, 2012
|'traditions of predecessors and society' - IELTS TASK 2
3 - Hi Your essay missed a lot of essay structures I think you should follow a considerable plan to...
Writing Feedbackabdr95 - May 26, 2012 / hadi1981 - May 26, 2012
|TOEFL: Is first impression enough to know about person's character..?
4 - Hey Athena, Thank you very much. That was very useful. I 'll start accordingly and my essay practice...
Writing Feedbackana_p - May 25, 2012 / ana_p - Jun 1, 2012
|Students spending time studying, but what about physical activities?
Writing Feedbackyaseer - May 25, 2012 / jagdeep5171 - Dec 14, 2014
|Setting up Cameras in public places us a controversial issue!
2 - Hi Lan Anh, your thesis format is nice. However the concession ideas that you gave in the beginning of...
Writing Feedbacklananh87512 - May 25, 2012 / Cherry Dang - May 26, 2012
|IELTS ESSAY PRACTICE: Computers replace human teachers.
3 - I am a teacher. the present use of computers is very helpful in teaching but we can not summarily...
Writing Feedbacksharkondiet - May 24, 2012 / tinie - May 28, 2012
|GRE argument "Of the two leading real estate firms in our town- ...
3 - Thank you for your advice. Yes, I should come to for each paragraph a conclusion how the assumption will...
Writing Feedbackchenokay - May 24, 2012 / chenokay - Jun 16, 2012
|EIKEN's ESSAY (should endangered species be protected?)
5 - Positive impacts: by dint of, thanks to,... Negative impacts: owing to, due to,... Neutral impacts: because of, for the...
Writing Feedbackmikimousekiki - May 24, 2012 / lananh87512 - May 25, 2012
|Death penalty for or against; We should abolish DEATH PENALTY!
NEW - Death penalty appears in many countries from advanced nations to developing ones. Some people believe that this policy has...
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|Character Is a Crucial Thing in a Fiction Story
Writing Feedbackxitrona - May 23, 2012 / xitrona - May 25, 2012
|'Lecture and reading passage' - Toefl: integrated essay
Writing Feedbackmonayoussef - May 23, 2012 / ggalaxy - Nov 24, 2013
|TOEFL: (more productive, energetic) EASIER FOOD PREPARATION IMPROVED PEOPLE'S LIVES
5 - Dear Jason, Nice essay. I am also preparing TOEFL, so it was very helpful for my brainstorming....
Writing Feedbackjhundais - May 23, 2012 / vickey - Jun 6, 2012
|Bar chart - New York and Tokio house prices - IELTS
2 - Hi dear, I just want to suggest smt about your overall. In my opinion, you should make combine...
Writing Feedbackansergeyg - May 23, 2012 / Cherry Dang - May 26, 2012
|[IELTS task 2 essay] Should we first explore our own countries? Discuss?
6 - I have made a few notes of changes you might consider underlined below: Others, however, claim this allegation...
Writing Feedbacksophie789 - May 23, 2012 / JCEstrada - May 24, 2012
|Ielys: lost luggage
NEW - Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you left the plane, you left a bag....
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|Society represents the different characteristics of human lifestyle
3 - yeah. . i mean saying that people not even spending much time to have food. thanx Susan for pointing...
Writing Feedbackvarun1960 - May 23, 2012 / varun1960 - May 25, 2012
|IELTS; The media should stop reporting detailes of crimes reports
2 - Nowadays,(I don't think you need to put annotation here as you have to hang loose the meaning) detailed...
Writing Feedbackjasmine4gjc7 - May 23, 2012 / hadi1981 - May 23, 2012
|People should take time to relax with hobbies very different from their job
2 - I immediately noticed that the first sentence does not sound introductory. I think it would be helpful to open...
Writing Feedbackvickey - May 22, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 24, 2012
|Student's main purpose in getting an education is to earn a lot of money (Toefl)
2 - I agree with the statement that students main purpose of getting an education is to earn a lot of...
Writing FeedbackBahrom_4474 - May 22, 2012 / ola77 - May 22, 2012
|SAT essay-Do we put too much emphasis on self reliance and independence ?
2 - Dear Tanvi, I find that you're key points are well explained and supported. I just corrected some of...
Writing Feedbacktanvi3595 - May 22, 2012 / Athena - May 22, 2012
|Ielts: English-speaking country teacher (notice / advertisement)
2 - Dear sir, I am writing with regards to your advertisement in The Newsweek magazine, Issue 190 about teaching...
Writing Feedbackhadi1981 - May 22, 2012 / ThuyChi - May 23, 2012
|Stop Online Piracy Act (SOPA) - Argumentative Essay
2 - I agree with the author, because censorship from the whole worldwide web will only be an inconvenience to the...
Writing Feedbackunsure - May 22, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 23, 2012
|IELTS ESSAY1 : a complaining letter about broken equipment you bought
Writing Feedbackhadi1981 - May 22, 2012 / hadi1981 - May 23, 2012
|What catches your attention more ; Are Scandals useful ?
2 - Okay ,firstly there are too many spelling mistake here. Scandals - be it political or otherwise, are scandalous -they...
Writing Feedbackhellokitty - May 22, 2012 / tanvi3595 - May 22, 2012
|Imagine that you have received some land to use as you wish. How would you use this
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