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|'the earliest teachers we have in our lives' - ielts task2
2 - Obviously, the earliestfirst teachers we have in our lives in most cases are m our parents, and they are...
Writing Feedbackhehelovehaha - Jun 6, 2012 / dumi - Jun 7, 2012
|IETLS 2-Why young people tend to spend less free fime with family?
NEW - Young people spend less of their free time with their family nowadays. What are the reasons for this? Are...
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|'media may distort the image of the hero' - GRE AWA PRACTICE: Issue topic
NEW - I am horrible at writing and would like some feedback on this AWA Issue topic for the GRE, Thank...
Writing FeedbackGuest - Jun 5, 2012 / — -
|Computers make some jobs easier.
4 - Madman59770 thanks indeed Anthony Nguyen. I am Moroccan and my first language is Amazigh (= Berber)/ Arabic is the...
Writing Feedbackhafidgg - Jun 5, 2012 / hafidgg - Jun 8, 2012
|IELTS:1 - 'wish you the best in the city' A letter to a friend
2 - Dear John, Firstly,I appreciated your acceptance ofThank you fortakingagreeing tocare ofwatch my littleKitty cat whenwhile I spend my...
Writing Feedbackhadi1981 - Jun 5, 2012 / BachChaconne2 - Jun 5, 2012
|Changing jobs frequently or loyal to the same jobs?
3 - Yes, I am preparing for my IELTS exam which happens the end of this month. I need to practice...
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Jun 5, 2012 / hungvud - Jun 7, 2012
|Essay about - Is spending a lot on parties is worthwhile or not?
2 - From a purely social point of view, the main purpose of inviting relatives and friends to a party is...
Writing Feedbackfk6268 - Jun 5, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 9, 2012
|'Some people ignore the importance of history' - IELTS essay
5 - Thank you so much, it's really helpful. I'm afraid i have a long way to go...!! Thanks again!!...
Writing FeedbackFuzzyBunny - Jun 4, 2012 / FuzzyBunny - Jun 5, 2012
|'our municipality should build a plant for burning trash'
NEW - "In order to avoid serious health threats associated with many landfills, our municipality should build a plant for burning...
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|'leading enviable lives to have a deeper education'
4 - thx a lot...
Writing Feedbackhehelovehaha - Jun 4, 2012 / hehelovehaha - Jun 6, 2012
|'the factory will develop city' -essay about building a new factory in the community.
2 - Hi Bebe, I would like to suggest some points: 1. Try to concentrate on sentence structure. 2....
Writing Feedbackbebetxx - Jun 4, 2012 / ana_p - Jun 4, 2012
|International tourism: 'foreigners should study local cultures before traveling'
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Jun 4, 2012 / hungvud - Jun 5, 2012
|Should artists be given total freedom?
4 - Hi Ahmad, I really appreciate your support. The only thing I should add is that " the world-renowned artist"...
Writing Feedbacksophie789 - Jun 4, 2012 / sophie789 - Jun 4, 2012
|Essay: Are books more important than experience?
3 - It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books". ------------- I think you may loose...
Writing FeedbackGenki - Jun 4, 2012 / dumi - Jun 8, 2012
|Natural energy sources are limited, and cannot be replenished - alternative sources are important
2 - there is an alarming issue that nowadays governments, at present, are too reliant on gas, oil, coalfossil fuels. ...
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Jun 3, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 4, 2012
|TOEFL; House OR Business? I would purchase a house if I have money
2 - It is easy to spend it but makeing money is too difficult, say what'swhich one is better, we should...
Writing Feedbackmarikoshka888 - Jun 3, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 4, 2012
|TOEFL(Physical exercise is more important for older people than for younger people)
Writing Feedbackvickey - Jun 3, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 6, 2012
|Sex trafficking paper
Writing Feedbackamarie - Jun 3, 2012 / chincheta - Jun 4, 2012
|Interview paper with an entreprenuer, Cynthia Odo
2 - ...Twelve years ago, she started her business, while leaving LIVING in New Jersey. Her decision to move forward was...
Writing Feedbacknmckenziedesign - Jun 3, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 11, 2012
|'Modern culture understanding'/ GRE AWA
Writing Feedbacksicong - Jun 3, 2012 / sicong - Jun 9, 2012
|'You must be humble' - exemplification paper on respect
3 - Throughout my whole life, I was taught to have respect for others and myself. If you believe someone...
Writing Feedbackbentleysmomma - Jun 3, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 7, 2012
|'the scale of new technologies is overwhelming' - IETLS 2: Technology is good or not?
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Jun 3, 2012 / — -
|IELTS Writing- Spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other.
3 - wow....really thanks for all your help...!!! i didn't notice these mistakes before... really appreciated!!!...
Writing Feedbackwudimopa - Jun 3, 2012 / wudimopa - Jun 6, 2012
|IELTS - Boys naturally more agressive than girls?
5 - The expression of physical strength is common and may be related to the genetic coding that is prevalent in...
Writing Feedbackakhtarkhan - Jun 3, 2012 / land1111 - Jun 7, 2012
|'TV is not that bad' - Television's positive and negative effects.
NEW - Television is now wide spread in all communities almost every one has access to this medium on a daily...
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|IELTS essay about CDs or DVDs in the libraries
6 - You should not copy the topic, but also you must restate it. The structure of an introduction for this...
Writing Feedbackshelley G - Jun 2, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 3, 2012
|'living without parents can give freedom' - TOEFL Essay
5 - Hi Mari Koshka, Yes.... you should start your own thread and you cannot post essays in other's threads......
Writing Feedbackvickey - Jun 2, 2012 / dumi - Jun 4, 2012
|(disobeying citizens / doctor cat) - Short articles
2 - blue means add red means delete It is reported that the Government is making a new plan to struggle...
Writing FeedbackSandra0805 - Jun 2, 2012 / chessman567 - Jun 2, 2012
|IETLS 2: Discussions on travelling
3 - Mustafa is right, first two bodies are related to the questions were given, but why do you need the...
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Jun 2, 2012 / Saidakhror - Jun 2, 2012
|Should University Education be provided free? Yes
2 - Education is important to everyone as it gives them the ability to think differently. I do agree that university...
Writing Feedbackinform - Jun 2, 2012 / sophie789 - Jun 2, 2012
|'Exercising indoors or outdoors?' -TOEFL essay review
2 - Hi, The essay has only one paragraph at the body. A body should involve at least three paragraphs. I...
Writing Feedbackbebetxx - Jun 2, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 2, 2012
|'Internet has exceeded the newspapers demand' - IELTS writing
5 - hey,Archu. I think that your essay is too short,you can add more points,for instance, you can talk about that...
Writing FeedbackArchu - Jun 2, 2012 / shelley G - Jun 2, 2012
|Computer is an electronic device made by the humans for the welfare of human being.
4 - thanks AHMAD and MUSTAFA for correction. i am doing preparation for the IELTS, i hope that with your help...
Writing Feedbackhoshmp - Jun 2, 2012 / hoshmp - Jun 4, 2012
|Hat culture in Britain essay.
Writing Feedbackxitrona - Jun 1, 2012 / xitrona - Jun 2, 2012
|TOEFL Essay: machine made goods are cheaper and more durable than handmade ones
7 - Hi, I mean the body should include three paragraphs. Yes, you should add another idea as the fourth paragraph....
Writing Feedbackana_p - Jun 1, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 5, 2012
|(Five Point Someone by Chetan Bhagat) - My Favorite Book
Writing Feedbackinform - Jun 1, 2012 / inform - Jun 2, 2012
|'right to agree to disagree' - Presidental Election 2012 essay
2 - Currently with an approval rating at less than fifty percent, many would say that President Obama has several weaknesses,...
Writing FeedbackMEG2028568 - Jun 1, 2012 / dumi - Jun 8, 2012
|Eating home-made food is better than eating out in restaurants or food stands
Writing Feedbackvickey - May 31, 2012 / inform - Jun 1, 2012
|TOEFL Essay: Compare different modes of transportation to travel.
Writing Feedbackana_p - May 31, 2012 / ana_p - Jun 1, 2012
|Essay : Which type of movie do you prefer? seious or entertaining?
2 - i really liked your essay...your ideas are clear and it is easy to follow them for the reader. The...
Writing Feedbackbuituandung231 - May 31, 2012 / Saidakhror - May 31, 2012
|'it would increase the sales in the Central Plaza store' - GRE essays
3 - please check for content, grammatical errors and sentence formations. Thank you ! The following appeared in a letter...
Writing FeedbackNJiya - May 31, 2012 / NJiya - Jun 6, 2012
|Gandhi - About a World Leader
5 - Sure. He would be the perfect example of a leader if you feel that he inspired others through his...
Writing Feedbackinform - May 31, 2012 / admission2012 - Oct 24, 2012
|Draft: Women's Health vs. Religious Freedom
2 - It is also noted that, "Women who use OCs have more regular and predictable menstrual cycles, with a reduction...
Writing FeedbackWilliamMorton - May 30, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 6, 2012
|TOEFL Essay: Advantages and disadvantages of sports.
8 - Hi Vickey & Sudhir, I think, this is a Description/Explanation type of essay and not a preference or...
Writing Feedbackana_p - May 30, 2012 / ana_p - Jun 1, 2012
|'important to make large amount to money' - essay
3 - Thanks Ahmad for your advice. Request you review the whole essay I have corrected the sentence below. Nowadays...
Writing Feedbackinform - May 30, 2012 / inform - May 31, 2012
|essay about "a fake beauty"
Writing Feedbackjessiangela - May 30, 2012 / kersise - Jun 5, 2012
|(Persuasive Request) Help in writing a Memo for my English assignment
2 - Hi Tony, When you write memos, you usually follow a general format, which sometimes may vary according to...
Writing Feedbacktonloc1234 - May 30, 2012 / dumi - Jun 7, 2012
|'to promote medical standard and science through sports facilities' - IELTS TASK II
2 - is play ----->is palying.? sorry..my writting is so bad. so...I can't correct it for you. but.that's my little suggestion......
Writing Feedbackbtxdzsz - May 30, 2012 / vickywang - May 30, 2012
|Crime news should not be reported in newspapers or tv
7 - Ahmad, i really appreciate your words and you are 100 percent right. But someone who has got so called...
Writing FeedbackSaidakhror - May 30, 2012 / Saidakhror - May 30, 2012
|(development studies / Japan / WB president) - Reflective Journal essays
NEW - Hi all, i am writing my reflective journals, it woul be nice if some body can correct my grammar...
Writing Feedbackphabee007 - May 29, 2012 / — -
|'he is right people to work and learn from' - reflective Journal
2 - Even thoughwe had only a few months of working together, he has contributed a great deal to the group...
Writing Feedbackphabee007 - May 29, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 31, 2012
|'more money has to be spent on the road system' - IELTS Essay
3 - this essay is partially out of topic. the question asks to discuss both views are government's and users' payment...
Writing Feedbackbtxdzsz - May 29, 2012 / Saidakhror - May 30, 2012
|Definition of heroes - Gandhi, Luther King, Lincoln essay
4 - go to this website it will help articulate info.gcsu.edu/intranet/univ_senate/Feb_23_04/Feb_04/newsat_scoring.pdf...
Writing Feedbackrishav25 - May 29, 2012 / chessman567 - May 30, 2012
|Parents know better their children than teachers -To be a good member of society
3 - Some sentences are simple and there are some minor grammatical mistakes. I would recommend you to work on coherence...
Writing Feedbacklamck - May 29, 2012 / Saidakhror - May 30, 2012
|'leisure activities are necessary for students' - IELTS 2
Writing Feedbackbtxdzsz - May 29, 2012 / Athena - May 31, 2012
|Effects of theBaby Boom Generation on society.
Writing Feedbackfdm1995 - May 28, 2012 / fdm1995 - May 28, 2012
|'Science deserves more attention' - IELTS Task2
4 - Thanks for your advices. I do need to structure the paragraphs. maybe.I think,when i was writting a essay, i...
Writing Feedbackvickywang - May 28, 2012 / vickywang - May 30, 2012
|Writing report about "Convenient Computers" - feedback
3 - Hi, There is no relationship between the first sentence of the introduction and what you wrote in the other...
Writing FeedbackLulz94 - May 28, 2012 / ah_zafari - May 31, 2012
|TOEFL Writing Exercise : Smoking should not be permitted in restaurants
3 - Hi Stefina, Nicely done. Thank you for sharing nice TOEFL topic. I am also preparing TOEFL exam....
Writing Feedbackpetitsourire - May 28, 2012 / vickey - Jun 3, 2012
|About me and my big dreams
2 - My name is Suhartini and I come from Johor Bahru. My English teacher in secondary school was named Tini...
Writing Feedbacktinie - May 28, 2012 / BaileyLeong - May 29, 2012
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