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|How Prepare a surprise birthday party for your girlfriend /boyfriend - paragraph help
Writing Feedbackkorsan319 - Mar 2, 2012 / korsan319 - Mar 7, 2012
|IELTS task2 ---influence of parents on children
4 - No scientific reason has been found related to this subject This issue was never be proved by scientific, Mother...
Writing FeedbackMawarday - Mar 2, 2012 / gage - Mar 3, 2012
|A tree .. I am
4 - Thanks for the comments Thors Hammer. On the clarification .. its meant as .. though 'the tree' concerns them...
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Mar 2, 2012 / Rajiv - Mar 7, 2012
|"get rid of our life's pressure" -spend their free time outdoors or stay indoors.
2 - Another thing we can do is going on a picnic in a quiet green nature, talking about special moments...
Writing FeedbackDohaakhateeb - Mar 2, 2012 / bellalove123 - Mar 2, 2012
|'Evolution of artificial lighting' - research paper
2 - Since the dawn of time, light has played aenormously critical role in the evolution of humans, animals and even...
Writing FeedbackFortnight - Mar 2, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Mar 6, 2012
|Business and culture - losing ourselves in the rapid pace of development of society
2 - In the recently years , the situationlevel of interaction between countries in the world has intensified in teams of...
Writing Feedbackfanmanga90 - Mar 1, 2012 / dumi - Mar 2, 2012
|ACCOMPLISHMENT REPORT: ENCOUNTERS UPON OUR OUTREACH PROGRAM WE CONDUCTED
2 - To eradicate illiteracy and promote functional literacy for the out of school children; this is our main goal which...
Writing Feedbackniesaysi - Mar 1, 2012 / dumi - Mar 1, 2012
|(Background knowledge) - the notion of space and place in relation to everyday life
3 - Foucault, in this perspective, argues that power is linked to everyday practices onat all levels of social life. ...
Writing FeedbackMichelluu - Feb 29, 2012 / dumi - Mar 1, 2012
|As an young adult people, we can still be independent, even when we live with our families.
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|Old Ones Essay! Describe an elderly person in your life who has effected you
Writing Feedbackkenzie5369 - Feb 28, 2012 / nchowder - Mar 14, 2012
|What is Marxism?
Writing Feedbackcbarlo2 - Feb 28, 2012 / gage - Mar 3, 2012
|TOEFL - technology make our work more convenient and faster than before, we can save so many time
NEW - Would you help to correct this essay, thank you. Nowadays, as the society's rapidly changing there is a controversy...
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|"...ethnic unity and cultural identity are routinely defined by language.."
2 - There are many differences between that exist between countries, with language being the obvious one. One of the greatest...
Writing Feedbackfatima89 - Feb 28, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Mar 11, 2012
|I read the note from my mom;Home alone - essay
Writing Feedbackthaoquyen - Feb 27, 2012 / diyman21 - Mar 19, 2012
|An essay on "Protecting the Environment" campaign
Writing Feedbackjajadiba - Feb 27, 2012 / tandlanh - Mar 29, 2012
|It is more important for students to study science (government help)
2 - Hi everybody; please put your effort to find my mistakes in the essay (It is more important for students...
Writing Feedbackbahareh - Feb 27, 2012 / bahareh - Feb 28, 2012
|'family living arrangements' - CBEST writing - about extended families
2 - CBEST must be really hard because I think this is really nice Lily Lee, You have some great pointers...
Writing Feedbackliuxin3562 - Feb 26, 2012 / Jovine - Feb 28, 2012
|Creating a descriptive paragraph on the subject of: Library
Writing FeedbackLori - Feb 26, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Mar 1, 2012
|'Ciggarettes Kill' - ESSAY ON SMOKING
Writing Feedbacknadia1 - Feb 26, 2012 / nadia1 - Feb 26, 2012
|Essay about whether creative artists should express their ideas in public freely
Writing FeedbackMartin2012 - Feb 25, 2012 / Athena - Feb 26, 2012
|'improving facilities is the best way' - toefl
2 - Yes, there are subtle differences on those words. They depend on the contents. I took toefl three years ago,...
Writing Feedbackgoku123 - Feb 24, 2012 / moongtajoo - Mar 7, 2012
|(Subccumb to / Athlete, singer, honor / Mascara) Help my introduction
3 - You spelled "aliments" incorrectly in the fourth line. If you were looking for the word, "ailments" just switch the...
Writing Feedbackuagwuncha - Feb 24, 2012 / skmbrdn59 - Feb 25, 2012
|'experience-based and academic-based learning' - CLEP
2 - Experience-based learning is a very valuable tool and teaches many important skills needed to succeed throughout life as a...
Writing FeedbackHSaucy - Feb 24, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Mar 13, 2012
|'the leadership or talented architects' - Successful sport professionals
Writing Feedbackminhtung9x - Feb 24, 2012 / minhtung9x - Feb 24, 2012
|IELTS: consumer expense on different items (food/drink/tobacco/clothes/leisure etc)
3 - Many thanks for your help I think using present tense is possible here!isn't it?!would u please explain more? what...
Writing Feedbackfahime - Feb 24, 2012 / fahime - Feb 26, 2012
|Computer will replace teachers. Do you agree or disagree?
5 - Only write one side of the argument, so you should change it around so that your argument only disagrees...
Writing Feedbackmarpl - Feb 23, 2012 / coult777 - Mar 18, 2012
|'pressure of covering up for my brother' - Grade 10 Turning Point Essay
Writing Feedbackjadarox - Feb 23, 2012 / jadarox - Feb 25, 2012
|"No, no, not my brother! Anyone but him!" - narrative essay about my tragedy
3 - zhey new here. i very much like this essay. I think you could have made the Second paragraph a...
Writing Feedbacknawal - Feb 23, 2012 / bahamaessay - Feb 26, 2012
|'To read or not to read?' - Cause and effect essay
Writing Feedbacktxle - Feb 23, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 28, 2012
|TOEFL essay - 'University education should be only available for good students'
2 - The purpose of education is always a controversial topic among people and society, especially in high level education such...
Writing Feedbackll931110 - Feb 23, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 28, 2012
|Being honest is the most important thing taken into account of the relationships
Writing FeedbackRuthXue - Feb 23, 2012 / Bahrom_4474 - Mar 4, 2012
|Comparative/argumentative: Classifying Logical Fallacies: Two Schemes Compared
NEW - Classifying Logical Fallacies: Two Schemes Compared In logic and rhetoric, a fallacy is a deliberate or unintentional error...
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|A Mother's Love - she influenced my life
2 - Thank for yours essay. This essay is full of new and useful vocabularies to me. I can improve...
Writing Feedbackfitnessgirl8 - Feb 22, 2012 / jimmy_nguyen - Feb 23, 2012
|'traditions, history and language in China' - IELTS WRITING
Writing Feedbackzengtingzi - Feb 22, 2012 / zengtingzi - Feb 23, 2012
|Toefl essay- the same amount of money to students' sports activities as to libraries
3 - So what's the good of sports and social activities for the university students? this sentence should be eliminated...
Writing FeedbackRuthXue - Feb 22, 2012 / goku123 - Feb 24, 2012
|Should Immigrants adapt to adopted country?
Writing FeedbackJoanne Lee - Feb 22, 2012 / Joanne Lee - Feb 22, 2012
|'My lifetime goal was to attend an American university' - 2 sentences
2 - Hi, Your sentences don't flow together but that's fine as were here to help :). I understand what...
Writing Feedbackinternational3 - Feb 22, 2012 / waldo01 - Feb 22, 2012
|'Successful people do something new or take risks' - TOEFL
2 - I favorfavour the latter; that is, successful people still do things they already know. The first and foremost reason...
Writing Feedbackgoku123 - Feb 22, 2012 / farina - Feb 22, 2012
|'to improve the portion of society' - What is the purpose of higher education?
3 - how should i start out my second phargraph that is going to talk about my frist point impros skills...
Writing FeedbackJodyherr - Feb 21, 2012 / Jodyherr - Feb 26, 2012
|'An Equal Distribution for a Better World' - the rogerian style argument
3 - Here are your main points: 1) "The main causes for malnourishment and undernutrition in the world today: unequal...
Writing Feedbackmabedico - Feb 21, 2012 / chalumeau - Mar 19, 2012
|"independence day" and "mother's day" - are important? IELTS
2 - hi Ielts essays are argumentative essays you cannot write an essay in only one para. your essay must have...
Writing Feedbackrithamanyewe - Feb 21, 2012 / farina - Feb 22, 2012
|'Students are developing more and more interest in arts and literature' - ielts essay
4 - Thanks for your corrections. I have checked the dictionary somber and sombre words have the same meaning so they...
Writing Feedbackfarina - Feb 21, 2012 / farina - Feb 22, 2012
|'Better a job with more vacation time but a low salary' - essay
3 - It's a good topic, but are you writing for admissions? Because, the paper did not tell much about you....
Writing Feedbackrobust - Feb 20, 2012 / byeung1489 - Feb 20, 2012
|Don't Focus Only on Grades
Writing Feedbacktlampard - Feb 19, 2012 / Athena - Feb 21, 2012
|ielts: learn a language in primary school or secondary school?
6 - hi deep i have been earning english since one month.. i am well in reading and listening but while...
Writing Feedbackiceblade - Feb 18, 2012 / deep0757 - Feb 21, 2012
|We should get benefits in the present - the investing in space research
3 - In recent years, the development of the space technology is becoming a hot topic in many science forums and...
Writing Feedbackfanmanga90 - Feb 18, 2012 / EF_Susan - Mar 6, 2012
|'This crystal is in remembrance of me' - story narration essay
4 - All the items are covered with a thick jacket of dust, it seemed like no one had touched them...
Writing FeedbackAmberAngel - Feb 18, 2012 / EF_Susan - Mar 6, 2012
|Are the youths of today irresponsible?
Writing FeedbackYangTeng - Feb 17, 2012 / bahamaessay - Feb 26, 2012
|'being an adult needs a sound skill' - TPO 24 Writing
2 - There are few aspect to like in your essay howvere, punctuation, prepositions, article, grammar, I simply cannot mention it...
Writing FeedbackYunfengHu90 - Feb 17, 2012 / Glorenet - Feb 18, 2012
|'felicitousness' Happiness is considered very important in life.
4 - I agree with the two other comments. You need to be a little more specific with the definition/examples and...
Writing Feedbackuzakova - Feb 17, 2012 / thecarboneraser - Mar 6, 2012
|"When I First Met Him" - How can this Descriptive/Romantic story be improved?
Writing Feedbackgoto124 - Feb 17, 2012 / aj shahzad - Mar 13, 2012
|Print and electronic media feeding us with information
2 - It is NOT ONLY a form of communication which is feeding us with information from all corners of the...
Writing Feedbackfarina - Feb 17, 2012 / uzakova - Feb 17, 2012
|'College pressures' - on Illustration, narrative, cause, effect, contrast, compare.
3 - Many college students face a number of pressures. For instance, many college students have graduated from high school face...
Writing Feedbacknawal - Feb 17, 2012 / EF_Susan - Mar 6, 2012
|'More convincing' -TOEFL whether face-to-face communication is better
Writing Feedbackgoku123 - Feb 17, 2012 / zxc123 - Feb 21, 2012
|Young people in today are less dependent on their parents than in the past.
3 - an important mistake: the last paragraph should not only has one sentence. Try to balance the length of each...
Writing Feedbackliwenxin - Feb 17, 2012 / goku123 - Feb 17, 2012
|English 102 Paper - Stem Cell Research Paper
NEW - Stem Cells have the potential to make a large positive impact in the medical field. It is important to...
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|'types of goals we set in life' - CLEP College Comp Essay
Writing FeedbackHSaucy - Feb 16, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Feb 21, 2012
|Colleges Suffer from a Lack of Diversity of Ideas
2 - below are my revisions. Spelling/grammer corrections are in red, and the sentences in blue are ones that I think...
Writing FeedbackEstherwriter - Feb 16, 2012 / HSaucy - Feb 16, 2012
|'In realizing my ambition to be a doctor the biology course..' - reflective essay
Writing Feedbackakhras93 - Feb 16, 2012 / akhras93 - Feb 20, 2012
|do you agree that advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits?
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