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|IELTS task 1 - bar and pie charts (the results of a survey of adult education)
5 - Hi Leeminh, writing a mix charts, you have check out any relationship between them, if not, a simple...
Writing Feedbackleeminh - Apr 11, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 14, 2012
|sat essay: should all people's opinions opinions be valued equally?
8 - You really make a good point. But i think the word can just be defined in many different ways....
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|ESSAY FOR CLASSIFICATION - Curriculums designed for elementary school students
Writing Feedbackcarmelitahu - Apr 11, 2012 / carmelitahu - Apr 12, 2012
|The Oversea Vietnamese Youth camp
Writing FeedbackThanh Huyen - Apr 10, 2012 / Thanh Huyen - Apr 12, 2012
|Essay on cooperation between nations
3 - Thanks lot Susan for the encouragements. I wish u spare little time to my new essay shortly. I don't...
Writing Feedbackhafidgg - Apr 10, 2012 / hafidgg - Apr 11, 2012
|An Essay About Maintaining Peace
4 - Thanks to both of you. I've rewritten the beginning. I' definitely going to do some more thorough research. Unfortunately,...
Writing Feedbackgiorgio186 - Apr 10, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 11, 2012
|"I'm so glad I found another person" - input on my short story
2 - A different approach or suggestion just to get you started. I'm not the best in grammar either so please...
Writing Feedbackhairywombat - Apr 10, 2012 / Thors Hammer - Apr 10, 2012
|GRE issue question about the value of scandals
3 - thank you! i am trying to prepare for the GRE and am quite nervous..more essays to come..please keep reading...
Writing Feedbackjharris1125 - Apr 10, 2012 / jharris1125 - Apr 11, 2012
|Common Forms of Fraud
2 - Common Forms of Fraud In that case fraud sometimes comes first. Fraud is illegalI would omit such a...
Writing Feedbacksrtheesa - Apr 10, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 10, 2012
|IELTS topic. Testing on animals and keeping them in unnatural conditions
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Apr 10, 2012 / y0_3mma - Apr 11, 2012
|to what extent should government be able to censor television or radio programs
Writing Feedbackdolly - Apr 10, 2012 / dolly - Apr 14, 2012
|classification of clothing into three categories
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|Ielts Task 2: About one or more Careers; Which is better?
Writing FeedbackJiya - Apr 9, 2012 / Jiya - Apr 11, 2012
|How Computer Affects My Life
Writing Feedbackstn0795 - Apr 9, 2012 / stn0795 - Apr 10, 2012
|Fatherless Essay (occurrences in my life)
4 - Periodically, I find myself daydreaming about my male parent, and how his warm embraces and a decent conversationswith him...
Writing Feedbackaishol - Apr 9, 2012 / Thors Hammer - Apr 11, 2012
|write a paragraph of effects of early marriage.
8 - As a result, they have no time to enjoy the pleasures of teenage life. Comn sequently, they divorce...
Writing Feedbackvinh - Apr 9, 2012 / dumi - Apr 13, 2012
|Petrol price increase and its impact on traffic & pollution levels
Writing Feedbackscarlet_bouquet - Apr 9, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 14, 2012
|'encourages to devoting'; Successful sports professionals can earn big money
5 - Your introduction have no motivator. Before expressing the main idea of the essay you should prepare a reader's mind....
Writing Feedbackhales - Apr 8, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 12, 2012
|Accident or Murder? The corruption on the entertainment business.
2 - Was Anna killed or was it just an accident? Doing research has lead me to believe that it was...
Writing Feedbackjallen18 - Apr 8, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 9, 2012
|IELTS ESSAY - 'News editors should broadcast & print a mixture'
3 - Thanks a lot Jennifer! I really like your suggestions & i'l try my best to follow this. Hope u...
Writing FeedbackJiya - Apr 8, 2012 / Jiya - Apr 9, 2012
|'blessed by uncle for being so alert' - The greatest achievement of my life
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|IELTS 'Parents and schooling is also essential to teach children'
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|IELTS topic. Smoking tobacco, like other dangerous drugs, should be made illegal.
4 - How about video games, the Internet, coffee, or sweets? All of these can be 'addicting and killing habit'...
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Apr 8, 2012 / EF_Team - Apr 11, 2012
|A wonderful trip with new experience (Toronto / Global village)
Writing Feedbackjaijagadeesh - Apr 8, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 13, 2012
|The Meaning of Silence- a research project
NEW - This is supposed to be a research project on The Meaning of Silence. 20 marks goes to the structure...
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|'a 80 years old widow had won five million dollars' - lucky person essay
3 - Hi Jeecee, Your passage is very interesting. It stimulates my thoughts and I really like it! By...
Writing FeedbackJeecee - Apr 7, 2012 / peterc - Apr 8, 2012
|IELTS; Problem with tutoring job/ issue with part-time job
4 - Hi jaijagadeesh, You have an affluent set of vocabularies. I've learnt so much from you... thank you very...
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Apr 7, 2012 / peterc - Apr 8, 2012
|IELTS (no country can progress without the co-operation of other countries)
Writing FeedbackJiya - Apr 7, 2012 / Jiya - Apr 8, 2012
|IELTS topic. Modern society benefits greatly from computer technology.
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Apr 7, 2012 / y0_3mma - Apr 8, 2012
|"Education is the key to success" discuss your view about this.
3 - I think your ideas and how you organize your essay is good. But you should concentrate about paraphase and...
Writing FeedbackYangTeng - Apr 7, 2012 / icez - Apr 12, 2012
|What is happiness? Why is it difficult to define?
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Apr 7, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 7, 2012
|The life in Perth
2 - I have lived in Perth since I arrived. I have studied English at the Curtin University for two weeks...
Writing Feedbackissaouy - Apr 6, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 9, 2012
|Essay on what shoud mass media broadcast on TV?
NEW - Mass media undoubtedly plays an important and crucial role in our diurnal life. All the various segments of the...
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|'Everyone considers that the perfect job is..' - essay
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|IELTS: Citizen's responsibilities
5 - You should try to strengthen your 2nd paragraph. Add examples to convince the readers....otherwise its a nice work...
Writing FeedbackScientiana - Apr 5, 2012 / Nitish - Apr 10, 2012
|'decline of care and concern for the high need-school' position with teach charlotte
NEW - I am applying for a position with teach charlotte and I have to complete a short essay for the...
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|'End of the world 2012' - my research writing
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|Houston is not a Best Place to Visiting - essay
Writing Feedbackstn0795 - Apr 5, 2012 / stn0795 - Apr 9, 2012
|KEEPING ANIMALS INSIDE ZOOS; DISCUSS
Writing Feedbacksharadarige - Apr 5, 2012 / hafidgg - Apr 5, 2012
|IELTS: Teenager or adult years are the happiest?
2 - one thing i felt is paragraphi should be long enough and explained as much as possible one or two...
Writing FeedbackScientiana - Apr 4, 2012 / sharadarige - Apr 5, 2012
|Schools should decide whether they continue with School Uniforms ; Persuasive Paper
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|Essay - Street knowledge vs. book knowledge
Writing Feedbackicez - Apr 4, 2012 / icez - Apr 14, 2012
|'the head of English language Panel' - important event in my life
Writing Feedbacktinie - Apr 3, 2012 / tinie - Apr 4, 2012
|('my strong curiosity in computer..') - pragraph more beautiful and functional?
4 - Hi , i think you are writing a statment of purpose to get an admission. SOP should represnt about...
Writing Feedbacksherxon - Apr 3, 2012 / sharadarige - Apr 18, 2012
|Comparison/Contrast of paintings depicting the conquest of Jericho
4 - I haven't found this website to be unnecessarily banning people. I've been here less than one month and have...
Writing Feedbackgillygilly - Apr 3, 2012 / chalumeau - Apr 3, 2012
|sat essay: Do people succeed by emphasizing their difference from others?
Writing Feedbackkimuratakuya - Apr 3, 2012 / kimuratakuya - Apr 3, 2012
|FEATURE ARTICLE- Culture Shock
2 - I have attached my comments about the lead paragraph. Let me know what you think. Some questions for...
Writing FeedbackPraiseYou - Apr 2, 2012 / chalumeau - Apr 3, 2012
|'Nguyen Dinh Chieu Park' - MY FAVORITE PLACE
8 - I'm too bad. I'm Vietnamese but I do not know much about Nguyen Dinh Chieu. Thanks for your essay....
Writing Feedbacknonnon91188 - Apr 2, 2012 / stn0795 - Apr 5, 2012
|'reading fictions is more pleasant' - essay for Toefl
NEW - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more...
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|sat essay:Do highly accomplished people achieve more because they expect more?
NEW - Currently, people tend to regard the unsatisfied will to achieve more as the source of their unhapiness and frustration,...
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|'death penalty should be reinstated in Canada' - argumentative essay
Writing Feedbackmalibu - Apr 2, 2012 / chalumeau - Apr 3, 2012
|Sat essay: is an idealistic approach less valuable than a practical approach?
Writing Feedbackkimuratakuya - Apr 2, 2012 / Athena - Apr 4, 2012
|IELTS ESSAY "Ban sail of bottled water"
NEW - What is a natural resource that always should be free. Government should bend the sail of bottle water! To...
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|Essay about: Friends I have had
5 - I have a question very important. For what purpose did you write this essay? For some tests or undergraduate...
Writing FeedbackSaid Alwaili - Apr 1, 2012 / kimuratakuya - Apr 10, 2012
|'fading the role of family life in society...' - correct this essay
3 - hi said... your notes are great...thank you... :) ...you are right...this is not a scientific essay with real numbers...
Writing Feedbackrabbasi - Apr 1, 2012 / rabbasi - Apr 2, 2012
|'transportation of fruits and vegetables by air' - Essay
NEW - Some people believe that we should not use air transportation to carry fruits and vegetables. To what extent do...
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|Essay About Me - born in Indonesia
4 - To chalumeau: Well, it should be an application essay, shouldn't it? So some points why to choose this particular...
Writing FeedbackFitri Pratiwi - Apr 1, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 14, 2012
|'children workforce has become popular' - essay help
2 - Many people argue that adults should not encourage children to work by paying them. In my view, this issue...
Writing Feedbackjenk - Apr 1, 2012 / dumi - Apr 1, 2012
|Americas number one killing disease - research essay
4 - ... ... 76&codcch=26 mdanderson.org dana-farber.org/ If I were writing a short research paper, I would...
Writing Feedbacknsfvball - Mar 31, 2012 / chalumeau - Apr 2, 2012
|'Nadie, Como Vai, and Pass the Peas songs' - examine three songs essay
2 - I found this song to be exceptional because ; it blew me away. :) Firstly ,Secondly IN ADDITION,...
Writing Feedbackdiiemnguyen - Mar 31, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 3, 2012
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