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|'Jared High and I used to be best friends' - bullying cause and effect essay
4 - Thank you for fixing my mistakes. My teacher does not say about citation so you can skip it. She...
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|Essay About the Importance of Plural Opinions
Writing Feedbackgiorgio186 - Mar 25, 2012 / giorgio186 - Mar 31, 2012
|the progress of nation and the welfare of the people versus the outer space
2 - In every countryThe governments of most countries collect taxes from the peoplecitizens for thevarious development activities and for the...
Writing Feedbacksharadarige - Mar 25, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Mar 25, 2012
|'the right of taking someone's life as a type of punishment' - capital essay
NEW - Capital punishment is a brutal decision and should be abolished. Give your views in not less than 250 words...
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|The difference in drugs and alcohol in women.
Writing Feedbacksanderson8907 - Mar 24, 2012 / zogi maral - Mar 29, 2012
|Organic Foods - there are benefits of eating of organic foods essay
2 - Just a few suggestions PG1: Organic products entered the mainstream market in 2003, when pesticide and fertilizer lobbyist...
Writing Feedbackalexisf - Mar 24, 2012 / Thors Hammer - Mar 26, 2012
|Computers' negative & positive effects on children; 'strategic games'
6 - I have experience, so I may predict that it is 6.0-6.5 band essay. I would recommend you writing your...
Writing Feedbackalirulez - Mar 24, 2012 / Saidakhror - Mar 27, 2012
|Capitalism: The Best Option - essay draft
5 - That is a good point you make about capitalism being very broad. This is supposed to be a research...
Writing FeedbackAMB2064864 - Mar 24, 2012 / AMB2064864 - Mar 24, 2012
|"Some people think that schools are merely turning children into good citizens,,,
3 - 1. "Extreme" is an adjective. You need to use "extremely", an adverb to qualify the adjective "important". 2. "Almost"...
Writing Feedbackpearly - Mar 23, 2012 / basawang - Mar 29, 2012
|IELTS 'children in present times are given too much individual freedom'
7 - I know it is not good as ours ,i made some mistakes,i think my first sentence is not appropriate,but...
Writing FeedbackSaidakhror - Mar 23, 2012 / jaijagadeesh - Apr 1, 2012
|'Children are our future' essay on child physical development
2 - i am going to take coures early childhood edgution . ihave to write 250 world essay. please help me...
Writing FeedbackJadeYvonne - Mar 23, 2012 / pammy - Mar 23, 2012
|Slicing into Women: An Essay on C-sections
2 - Very well written and informative. I too, had a c-section and it does raise concerns... Anyway, you elaborated on...
Writing Feedbacktrishaguzman - Mar 23, 2012 / janeybear - Mar 23, 2012
|TOEFL ESSAY advice from grandparents has no use for grandchildren ?
3 - NICE points you have captured. The first paragraph could have been articulated in a better mananer. "For one...
Writing Feedbacksummerzhang - Mar 22, 2012 / sharadarige - Mar 25, 2012
|My mother, My angel
Writing Feedbackeling - Mar 22, 2012 / eling - Mar 22, 2012
|The Greenhouse Effect and How to Slow Its Destruction
4 - Please let me know what you think of my review. Congratulations! You have written a research paper. Now,...
Writing Feedbackren2047548 - Mar 22, 2012 / chalumeau - Mar 25, 2012
|INEQUALITY REDUCTION AND POVERTY ALLEVIATION IN AFRICA
Writing Feedbacknse - Mar 22, 2012 / TanvirBD - Mar 27, 2012
|salaries paid to professional sports people are too high
NEW - Some people believe that the salaries paid to professional sports people are too high, while others argue that sports...
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|All aspects considering their parents or schools essay
2 - Children shod should give respect to their the elders and mix up with their neighbors. Good behavior starts...
Writing Feedbackrajlysa - Mar 22, 2012 / joe19841010 - Mar 22, 2012
|'By travelling I will be able' your favourite leisure activity, an expository writing
3 - I have a lot of important events in my life That changed me significantly. That there wasone event made...
Writing Feedbacktinie - Mar 21, 2012 / tinie - Apr 3, 2012
|The reason why nearly half of married couples in USA get divorced - essay
4 - For example, my uncle has to work for about 10 hours => EVERYDAY? COULD BE SPECIFIC so he almost...
Writing Feedbackelojo - Mar 21, 2012 / joe19841010 - Mar 21, 2012
|Exemplification essay - All about clothes
2 - The essay flows good, intro and ending are well separated. I like how you include specific information about Gothic...
Writing FeedbackAlizia - Mar 21, 2012 / m00ny - Mar 21, 2012
|'studying abroad offers students many necessary skills' - paragraph pro/cons
5 - Moreover, they have to adapt many other things.It's which is very useful for them to be more confident...
Writing Feedbacktrang - Mar 20, 2012 / tuongvi - Mar 28, 2012
|GLOBAL WARMING - many causes of the worldwide phenomenon
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|Essay about Tibetan's sense of place - Shangri-La
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|Argumentative Essay - students with good grades should be paid
2 - In my opinion you provided good arguments. But there are a few who can be improved. For example [...]...
Writing Feedbacksharadarige - Mar 20, 2012 / Nightmelody - Mar 20, 2012
|'embraced the culture and US history' meaningful achievements and your field of study
Writing FeedbackForestville - Mar 19, 2012 / Forestville - Mar 20, 2012
|Negative experiences and priceless lessons (My first SAT essay)
3 - Thanks so much for your meticulous revision ! It should be somehow helpful for an apprentice like me !...
Writing Feedbackhvnguyen1311 - Mar 19, 2012 / hvnguyen1311 - Mar 20, 2012
|'The Lucky Boy' - CHILDRENS SHORT STORY
3 - Thanks so much for your response, it was written for a summative assignment in English class, and due in...
Writing FeedbackThors Hammer - Mar 19, 2012 / Thors Hammer - Mar 19, 2012
|Students who get suitable time they can opt in to work part-time
2 - What is the prompt of the essay? Is it a newspaper article? This affects the presentation style of this...
Writing Feedbacktipi - Mar 19, 2012 / kthanhpn - Mar 27, 2012
|'Preparation' - What events, activities have contributed to your own self-development
2 - Preparation is all of my events, activities and achievements for my development which has completely changed my attitude. "You...
Writing FeedbackPann - Mar 19, 2012 / pdelvalle7 - Mar 20, 2012
|Traditional culture; West java culture
2 - In this global era, traditional culture is starting to be forgotten especially in teenage point of view. ***In this...
Writing Feedbackdosdil - Mar 18, 2012 / chalumeau - Mar 19, 2012
|IELTS essay: Student behavior in schools, causes and solutions
3 - Jennyflower81 HI JENNY THANKS FOR YOUR TIME AND CONCENTRATION. ABOUT THE LAST POINT THAT YOU MENTIONED, I TRY...
Writing Feedbackamirameri83 - Mar 18, 2012 / amirameri83 - Mar 19, 2012
|People's characters are influenced by environment rather than genetics, do you agree
2 - I like your essay very much,but to me i think the environment has a upper hand in influencing people...
Writing Feedbacktipi - Mar 18, 2012 / Francis Tyme - Mar 22, 2012
|'Supply and consumption are two major engines' - Assesment of current affairs =)
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|'Government should not waste tax payer money on exploring space' - TOEFL No. 95
NEW - 95. Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space (for example, traveling to...
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|fatherhood and motherhood, IELTS writing task
Writing Feedbackahmadkaky - Mar 17, 2012 / TanvirBD - Mar 27, 2012
|Argumentative Essay - Should students be paid for good grades?
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|[Toefl]-The food we ate in the past was healthier than the food we eat today
Writing Feedbackcensem - Mar 17, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Mar 17, 2012
|IELTS: Petrol price, traffic problems and pollution; Any other effective measures?
2 - hash conditions ? firing petrol is not the proper usage. instead of saying "Single driver" it would be more...
Writing FeedbackStephen Chen - Mar 16, 2012 / sharadarige - Mar 17, 2012
|TOEFL essay - 'The importance of games for adults comparing to children'
8 - Sorry for my (very) late answering, but I got numerous assignments in school and I was unable to peruse...
Writing Feedbackll931110 - Mar 16, 2012 / ll931110 - Apr 19, 2012
|dressing style is not a good indication of character
Writing Feedbackcensem - Mar 16, 2012 / pinkhelicopter - Mar 16, 2012
|Nowadays, radio has still reliable means of transmission worldwide
3 - Dear Linh Vuong Nguyen, Thank you so much for correction. I am very glad. For the bellow sentence can...
Writing Feedbacktipi - Mar 16, 2012 / tipi - Mar 18, 2012
|IELTS Question: Freedom of Creative Artists: restriction or not?
9 - Hi there, thank you for your message. I have no problem to your opinion. But my conclusion is...
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Mar 16, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 11, 2012
|'Medical advances are growing faster' - Evaluation Essay
2 - I have some ideas for improving your wording, i hope this helps :) Medical advances are growing faster...
Writing Feedbacksarabean718 - Mar 15, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Mar 17, 2012
|Narrative/Description Essay About An Unforgettable Vacation
4 - Furthermore, on this vacation, I was aware of how fear I was when I reached nearly to the dead....
Writing FeedbackNettie - Mar 15, 2012 / huongdoan - Apr 7, 2012
|Narrative paragraph on "The worst Job I ever Had"
Writing FeedbackJustJeff - Mar 15, 2012 / JustJeff - Mar 15, 2012
|younger workers are preferred than elders
2 - Hi there, I have just submitted an essay writing which was about: why some companies encourage employees who...
Writing Feedbacksharadarige - Mar 15, 2012 / xyx0905 - Mar 16, 2012
|IELTS: early retirement for 55+ employees to help younger people
7 - Thank you for your message. It is undeniable some IELTS examiners prefer to read a clear objective essay rather...
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Mar 15, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 11, 2012
|Jane Eyre 2011 Film Review Critical Essay (Cary Fukunaga's 2011 film adaption)
4 - :( In that case, what Jane is preserving is her honor, her faith, and her role in the household...
Writing Feedbacklittlemonster - Mar 15, 2012 / chalumeau - Mar 15, 2012
|ielts - the proportion of older people and positive / negative effects
2 - This is IELTS exam topic on the 10th March 2012 (Academic Module) - Australia I wrote 4 paragraph,...
Writing Feedbacklllpppricky - Mar 15, 2012 / xyx0905 - Mar 15, 2012
|(IELTS) Charitable organizations should help all people?
3 - Rkerur...quite appreciate your help...your suggestions are vary useful...My Endlish grammar, coherence and logical reasoning are not good...I will continue...
Writing FeedbackAshlin - Mar 15, 2012 / Ashlin - Mar 16, 2012
|TOEFL - new technology helps students a lot
3 - I think in general, your essay is good in explaining and developing ideas. However, you should use more linking...
Writing Feedbackeradulova - Mar 15, 2012 / ll931110 - Mar 15, 2012
|IELTS: Government should contol Violent Movies and TV programs?
3 - Thank you for your message. "Actually, this is correct in many real life situation. " this is my...
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Mar 14, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 11, 2012
|'Oslo, Norway' - creative writing: write about someone important to you
Writing Feedbacknchowder - Mar 14, 2012 / darthpotato94 - Mar 15, 2012
|Computer essay - 'becoming increasingly dependent on computers'
2 - We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. Can you be more specific when you say "we" I assume you...
Writing FeedbackNurkhan - Mar 14, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Mar 17, 2012
|'sales (in 1000s) of cigarettes in Tobado' - Describe a graph
4 - The graph shows sales in thousands of cigarettes in Tobado from 1994 to 2010, with a prediction to 2020....
Writing FeedbackNTC - Mar 14, 2012 / chalumeau - Mar 15, 2012
|What extent to you agree on that capital punishment essential to control violence?
2 - I wrote a similar topic: the advantages and disadvantages of the introduction of fix punishments Advantages of fix...
Writing FeedbackRafiullah - Mar 14, 2012 / xyx0905 - Mar 15, 2012
|'The Wishing Chair' - a story on my worst experiance
Writing Feedbackellamaya - Mar 13, 2012 / ellamaya - Mar 13, 2012
|(the types of entertainment you like the most) comparision essay
2 - You should expand the last paragraph! Other than that I think you have a solid piece and solid points....
Writing Feedbacktamminhthai - Mar 13, 2012 / Rkerur - Mar 13, 2012
|(Antonio Salazar) "a person who's influence was significant for the history"
2 - J. Kennedy and M.L. King have made a lot of progress for democracy, think about other personamong many people...
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