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|Self-Identity Paper for Ethnic Minorities Class, I haven't been in college for 15 yrs
4 - I like the subject matter. It grabs the attention and is definitely inspirational. I would definitely say you can...
Writing FeedbackAbbieDietz - Jan 19, 2012 / ggreif - Jan 19, 2012
|Students should work part time work during their studying or not.
3 - Hi Thors Hammer; Thankyou for your comment, but I couldn't understant how I should put my first point for...
Writing Feedbackbahareh - Jan 19, 2012 / bahareh - Jan 26, 2012
|'Lack of Respect' - essay edit
3 - Looks great!...
Writing Feedbackxsarabae - Jan 19, 2012 / cabotbp - Jan 19, 2012
|'computer bring us undeniably convenient environment' - TOEFL writing
NEW - Hi, I'm Aimee from China. I'm going to take TOEFL ibt this March. But I'm really weak in writing....
Writing FeedbackAimee the Crab - Jan 19, 2012 / — -
|'nurturing an innovative idea' - Essay: A Dreamer!
Writing Feedbackbrizansia - Jan 19, 2012 / mimi305 - Jan 19, 2012
|People who do not accept criticism from others cannot be successful at working
Writing Feedbacktinker7 - Jan 19, 2012 / mussy - Jan 19, 2012
|An Essay about the "The End of Growth"
2 - . A huge proportion of the current global population would probably starve to death within a short time if...
Writing FeedbackEdy - Jan 18, 2012 / qadirv - Jan 19, 2012
|Some people could be famous if they try and train
Writing Feedbacksoheilataheri - Jan 18, 2012 / soheilataheri - Jan 20, 2012
|'teachers can teach children with love' - computers in education
Writing Feedbacksibicherian101 - Jan 18, 2012 / sibicherian101 - Jan 18, 2012
|Toefl essay: parents have brought to our lives
3 - thanks a lot. However, can you help me with the opening of an essay, i always get trouble with...
Writing Feedbackthaiham95 - Jan 18, 2012 / thaiham95 - Jan 19, 2012
|IELTS: The steep price of petrol is not the best solution for growing traffic
4 - I guess your idea is as follows: Although high oil price can reduce traffic loads and pollution, due...
Writing FeedbackAlexisHuang - Jan 18, 2012 / basawang - Jan 20, 2012
|Toefl: concentrate on the objectives - people attend schools for various reasons
4 - Through-out the centuries, Universities' have been playing an important role in the development of stable societies. Individuals attend this...
Writing Feedbackthaiham95 - Jan 18, 2012 / Thors Hammer - Jan 19, 2012
|whether or not students should wear uniforms to school :)
3 - Thanks so much! I didn't actually think people would reply to this, but you did!! Haha your FARTERS method...
Writing Feedbacksjm979 - Jan 17, 2012 / sjm979 - Feb 16, 2012
|The Life Of Living Rich and Poor
2 - Looking around neighborhoods, seeing big nice houses, and shabby houses and neighborhoods, thinking about if it's the rich or...
Writing FeedbackShaPrea Patters - Jan 17, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 18, 2012
|...a still life water color; I too would like to live to be 92 years old
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Jan 17, 2012 / bwriter - Jan 19, 2012
|The outcomes of political conflict in Turkey essay
NEW - [b]please check my essay that was prepared for the proficiency exam in an university.And can you give me an...
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|'The America inside me' - Essay
2 - I suggest that on the third paragraph, you don't mention 4 am again, maybe you can calculate the hours...
Writing Feedbackbluec - Jan 16, 2012 / hades98 - Jan 16, 2012
|IELTS Academic - (more time improving their academic performance)
Writing FeedbackOlgakipan - Jan 16, 2012 / Olgakipan - Jan 18, 2012
|'factors to get happy and importance of happiness' IELTS Essay
Writing Feedbackforget00 - Jan 15, 2012 / lorichungg - Jan 16, 2012
|Testing the drugs on the animals. (integrated writing task- TOEFL ibt)
2 - According to the passage, many ofremedies that are created for diseases are discovered as a result of experiment on...
Writing Feedbackabedkh - Jan 15, 2012 / glamport - Jan 15, 2012
|Deficient water resources: causes and solutions
Writing Feedbackakari - Jan 15, 2012 / paul1911 - Feb 4, 2012
|IELTS - watching events on television? - 'comfort of home'
3 - Hi, I think you have provided good arguments for and against the idea of watching live musical events....
Writing Feedbackjayk - Jan 15, 2012 / johnsmith111111 - Jan 21, 2012
|'the new supermarket in Garlsdon town positions' - Cambridge IELTS 5 writing
Writing Feedbackjoe19841010 - Jan 15, 2012 / ajit88rai - Jan 15, 2012
|'My First Cruise Ship Contract' - a narrative essay
Writing FeedbackFlint - Jan 14, 2012 / Flint - Jan 17, 2012
|to change is to risk something ,making us feel insecure .SAT writing ESSAY
Writing Feedbackmursel - Jan 14, 2012 / mursel - Jan 15, 2012
|'thousand of movies out there' - toefl writing answer
NEW - This is a toefl writing section... the subject is whether you like serious movies or just entertaining movies! ...
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|Many Teachers assign homeworks to student everyday. Homework = Progress?
6 - Expand on your ideas and give specific examples. Besides the spelling and grammer mistakes, your essay definetly has potential....
Writing FeedbackFayzi - Jan 14, 2012 / anita123 - Jan 24, 2012
|'Different People' - English practice
Writing FeedbackWendyNe - Jan 14, 2012 / Moonpie123 - Jan 14, 2012
|fatherhood and motherhood is important in children life
2 - You have many spelling and grammatical errors. Please go over the text once again and use a spell checker....
Writing Feedbackihtisham khalid - Jan 14, 2012 / anonymous124 - Jan 15, 2012
|Job security or job satisfaction? Which is better?
Writing Feedbacksamba - Jan 14, 2012 / anonymous124 - Jan 15, 2012
|'make a success by accomplishing meaningful things to them, not money' (TOEFL IBT 60)
2 - The first reason why I disagree with the above statement is that success doesn't mean money achievement, it concludes...
Writing Feedbackfamily_jvc - Jan 13, 2012 / phantuhoang - Jan 13, 2012
|'smoking makes people addict to it' - Toefl integrated task in Kaplan
Writing Feedbackthaiham95 - Jan 13, 2012 / thaiham95 - Jan 14, 2012
|Sharp Edges by Quinn Vlacich
2 - The ocean waves, as black as the shadows, beat against the sand, in tune with the steady beat of...
Writing Feedbackquinnzilla - Jan 13, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 14, 2012
|Nelson Mandela's rise to fame essay
2 - Just about everyone has heard the name Nelson Mandela once in their lifetime before , but who exactly is...
Writing Feedbackcherrysaurus - Jan 12, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 14, 2012
|Introductory PARAGRAPH FOR ESSAY, WHY THE 1980S WAS DIFFICULT FOR CANADA.
2 - Canadian government created "The Meech Lake Accord" to bring Quebec into constitution.---Here is where you should tell a little...
Writing FeedbackStaygolden - Jan 12, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 12, 2012
|Creativity is very important nowadays to make a better life
4 - Thank you....
Writing FeedbackBTDTXXDY - Jan 12, 2012 / BTDTXXDY - Jan 13, 2012
|It is on vegetarianism? - Life, Death, and Vegetarian School Lunches
4 - Hello :) Your essay is very interesting. The intro- the way you wrote it is a little extreme, but...
Writing FeedbackRaga - Jan 11, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Jan 12, 2012
|'parents and adult relatives are important people in teenagers' life' - TOEFL IBT
2 - I'm not trying to make you rewrite your whole essay, but you should really trying ignoring the scenario "Certain...
Writing Feedbacksecretphuong - Jan 11, 2012 / singh955 - Jan 11, 2012
|letter, e-mail, or telephone calls are much better than face to face communication
2 - It is so convenient that technology is not needed to make conversation. Otherwise this is not bad. ...
Writing Feedbacksecretphuong - Jan 11, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 11, 2012
|Stress: Cause and solutions (IELTS essay)
NEW - In recent years there has been increasing awareness about the causes of stress and people have been trying to...
Writing Feedbackakari - Jan 11, 2012 / — -
|Science and my previous teachers
Writing Feedbackmsw1225 - Jan 11, 2012 / Bleeckerandpine - Jan 11, 2012
|TOEFL_There is something that an uneducated person can teach an educated person.
Writing Feedbackstellastella - Jan 11, 2012 / thaiham95 - Jan 18, 2012
|ENGLISH CLASS; The significance of errors
Writing Feedbackhussein6558331 - Jan 11, 2012 / singh955 - Jan 11, 2012
|Facebook: A double-edged sword - a current scientific or social controversy
3 - I agree. That you have avoided conventional feedback and instead gave depth by examining both sides of the issue...
Writing Feedbackkayleighlevitt - Jan 10, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 10, 2012
|Over eating can be as harmful as smoking?
7 - Hi as far I concern over eating and eating junk food are two separate issues.I think you can pose...
Writing Feedbacksamba - Jan 10, 2012 / hussein6558331 - Jan 11, 2012
|'change is a way of life and brings new colours in it' - IELTS essay
3 - THIS IS MY RESPONSE TO YOUR ESSAY. Topic; some people prefer to spent their lives doing the same things...
Writing Feedbackfarina - Jan 10, 2012 / secretphuong - Jan 11, 2012
|Globalization and food
NEW - Traditions has been changed since the western food had reached to the GCC, according to Topics-mag.com (2007) "Many people...
Writing FeedbackMarwaAlAwadhi - Jan 9, 2012 / — -
|'Humanity and Energy' - my sentence outline about Renewable Energy
NEW - Nic Kehe English 102 Instructor Ryan Jones Humanity and Energy Since the introduction of electrical technology, and...
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|ielts preperation give me a band score
Writing FeedbackGURURE - Jan 9, 2012 / GURURE - Jan 12, 2012
|'the development of the disease tuberculosis in England' my graph description
2 - You seem to understand how to describe the graph. You might historically talk about events/reasons leading up to milestones...
Writing FeedbackMelly - Jan 9, 2012 / Coriolis - Jan 10, 2012
|The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women
2 - The below chart compares the hours of leisure time in a different weekstypical week between men and women, alongsidein...
Writing Feedbacknarsis_sh83 - Jan 9, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Jan 9, 2012
|The expression"never, never give up" _ essay
3 - Some people say that, ---No comma here.--- there is no real loser, he is a real defeated person when...
Writing FeedbackHuydq - Jan 9, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 12, 2012
|'children are free' - TOEFL- the happiest time of a person's life.
3 - I like this it was very intresting to read. I enjoyed it a lot. Becareful though, there are some...
Writing Feedbackstellastella - Jan 8, 2012 / oko - Jan 15, 2012
|Is it important for people to get college education to get a good job
NEW - I'm in the twelfth grade, and it's hard to write essay please check. Some people think that college...
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|Overpopulation - causes and solutions
Writing Feedbackakari - Jan 8, 2012 / akari - Jan 12, 2012
|'going back to university' - If you could go back to sometime and place in the past
3 - Your ideas are well thought of, but as Jennyflower said you should spend more time editing your grammar, and...
Writing Feedbackhedieh - Jan 8, 2012 / unwana11 - Jan 9, 2012
|'the nature advocates' - some people are born with certain talents ...
2 - Daniel Choi they are able to get aeligible to be successful According to the natures' advocates, just as a...
Writing FeedbackDaniel Choi - Jan 8, 2012 / farina - Jan 10, 2012
|'questions authority can lead to an improvement in the quality of life' - SAT Essay
4 - Alright. I think it's definitely at least a 10, but I would lean more towards 11-12 If there were...
Writing Feedbacklilyappleyard - Jan 8, 2012 / egpctim - Jan 8, 2012
|TOEFL "schools should give equal amount of money to sports activities and libraries"
2 - As far as I know you have to write a para about introduction! Actually use 5 para for writing...
Writing Feedbackmilk355 - Jan 7, 2012 / hedieh - Jan 8, 2012
|Do we live better than our forefathers?
Writing Feedbackken99m - Jan 7, 2012 / ken99m - Jan 9, 2012
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