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Writing FeedbackRajiv - Dec 17, 2011 / Rajiv - Dec 22, 2011
|Ability to learn from own disappointments is key to personal growth; AP Calculus
NEW - Prompt: The ability to learn from one's disappointments is key to personal growth and success. Tell us about what...
Writing Feedbackazn408 - Dec 16, 2011 / — -
|IELTS:C7T2: Should there be fixed punishments for each type of crime?
3 - It is a collective noun, so you should use the singular form of the verb. When ever you collect...
Writing Feedbacksmilectt - Dec 16, 2011 / pitt4life01 - Dec 17, 2011
|The same necessity of giving money to libraries and sport
Writing Feedbacksoroushx2x - Dec 16, 2011 / soroushx2x - Dec 16, 2011
|Something for my Creative Writing Portfolio. "Meet me there."
NEW - The soil is richer there. It hasn't been touched by the invisible hands of coorperations. The sneering greed of...
Writing Feedbackkayleighlevitt - Dec 16, 2011 / — -
|Important ceremony - Vietnam graduation from high-school
2 - Please re-read it you will find the mistakes yourself. Still if you want, I shall help you. However...
Writing Feedbackjenly - Dec 16, 2011 / sohaibsiddiqui - Dec 16, 2011
|How Writing Changed the World.
2 - Spoken languages were used thousands of years before languages began to be written. People have been now using...
Writing FeedbackDAV032195 - Dec 15, 2011 / EF_Susan - Dec 15, 2011
|It is absolutely wrong to student to evaluate teacher's knowledge
Writing Feedbackshafi - Dec 15, 2011 / shafi - Dec 16, 2011
|Topic:"Why do we need to read books"
Writing Feedbackhungnguyen1998 - Dec 14, 2011 / amon2006 - Jan 2, 2012
|Good sense of humor plays an important role in people's life. Agree or not?
2 - take all of the SAT words out, you have to sound like your speaking colloquially to the reader, it...
Writing Feedbackrajankharel - Dec 14, 2011 / sjmiller1993 - Dec 14, 2011
|Should students who work very hard in a course earn very high grades,SAT WRITING
5 - I agree that general purpose of grading is complex topic.And -->, and we should provide that how we can...
Writing Feedbackmursel - Dec 14, 2011 / stellastella - Dec 15, 2011
|Ielts 'fast food is becoming more and more popular even though it's junk'
4 - Dear milamiyamiila I completely disagree with the idea of avoid using Firstly, secondly, ... Because I am preparing for...
Writing Feedbackmilamiyamiila - Dec 14, 2011 / stellastella - Dec 17, 2011
|TOEFL_Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing and industry are more
2 - stellastella Thank you for your comment on my first essay at essayforum Now it's my turn :D although I'm...
Writing Feedbackstellastella - Dec 14, 2011 / princedynasty - Dec 15, 2011
|Listening greater kinds, forms of music than ever; Traditional vs International
6 - whether traditional music outweighs International music ->whether traditional music outweight International music or not First of all, we...
Writing Feedbackprincedynasty - Dec 14, 2011 / lllpppricky - Dec 19, 2011
|'debate of modern genetic development' - AP English Analysis Essay
2 - Had he arranged the opposing quotes first, the reader would understand them to mean that eugenics development is inevitable,...
Writing FeedbackSohilShah - Dec 13, 2011 / EF_Susan - Dec 15, 2011
|Article - "Never stop Loving"
NEW - I need to write an interesting article about Animal Assistance Therapy, as we already had one so I decided...
Writing FeedbackCasper019 - Dec 13, 2011 / — -
|TOEFL- The expression "Never,never give up" means keep trying and never stop working
Writing Feedbackstellastella - Dec 13, 2011 / Jennyflower81 - Dec 13, 2011
|Expository essay - My opinion on cell phones
Writing Feedbacktsubaki016 - Dec 13, 2011 / Jennyflower81 - Dec 13, 2011
|A TOEFL topic essay, Should a professor focus on teaching or education?
2 - It is good answer, but I will reccomend for you to make introduction more longer and write hook in...
Writing Feedbackbbw - Dec 13, 2011 / ardak - Dec 13, 2011
|'the number CDs was saled' - description essay
Writing Feedbacklllpppricky - Dec 13, 2011 / lllpppricky - Dec 14, 2011
|'promote humanity and understanding among the people' - IELTS essay
NEW - Topic; Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Other disagrees and thinks...
Writing Feedbackfarina - Dec 12, 2011 / — -
|'Interpersonal skills' - Self Essay
3 - Hi If you are writing for an academic writing it is better to avoid contraction which I see a...
Writing Feedbackpaulo311 - Dec 11, 2011 / stellastella - Dec 24, 2011
|Ruling The World With Ideas
3 - Thanks farina Ahmad, I am from Nigeria. I need you to suggest books that will enhance my writing ability....
Writing Feedbackmussy - Dec 11, 2011 / mussy - Dec 12, 2011
|'a request to produce new electronic device' - IELTS letter
3 - I am writing to request you to produce new electronic device for the Dick Smith electronic compay. I would...
Writing Feedbackroshan4 - Dec 11, 2011 / roshan4 - Dec 13, 2011
|Magazine article - "Road of Heart"
NEW - I need to write an article for a magazine about pets. It should be something about myself so here...
Writing FeedbackNetcon - Dec 11, 2011 / — -
|3 Hours-how 3 hours a week changed my life
Writing FeedbackVampireAngel - Dec 10, 2011 / — -
|Without a clear goal to focus our energy and drive us to grow, we cease to be truly alive.
Writing Feedbackmursel - Dec 10, 2011 / purple_216 - Dec 11, 2011
|IELTS - we should not let technology and make our lives simple?
5 - both of statement in question is right, one hand, technology has dramatically improved the how we live in you...
Writing Feedbackfarina - Dec 10, 2011 / apidjakfar - Dec 22, 2011
|'hesitate and miss good chance' TOEFL - Young People Enjoy Life more than older
4 - Hi It is better to use a pattern which is used in writing an academic essay First paragraph introduction,...
Writing Feedbackdelta - Dec 10, 2011 / stellastella - Dec 13, 2011
|Essay about "at the city park"
Writing Feedbackteteh ayu - Dec 9, 2011 / Tobi - Dec 9, 2011
|success in life depends on active attitude
3 - This really doesn't say anything about you at ALL. Maybe you could talk about an encounter with failure, how...
Writing FeedbackJerah_85 - Dec 8, 2011 / leviator - Dec 9, 2011
|My Great Idea. Satirical Essay.
Writing FeedbackTownhopper - Dec 8, 2011 / kenyaboyfresh - Dec 8, 2011
|Cooking - Activity done for the pleasure
Writing Feedbackamanjain14 - Dec 8, 2011 / mursel - Dec 8, 2011
|'Aerobic excercises and modest health' - Dieting can change a person's life
Writing FeedbackFalahatgar - Dec 8, 2011 / Zaara - Oct 17, 2012
|Should people always follow fashion?
3 - i can't agree more about the content of this essay , i firmly believe that following fashion is only...
Writing FeedbackTobi - Dec 8, 2011 / sniper_moon - Dec 8, 2011
|'the world of formidable evil, injustice and detest' - IELTS essay
Writing Feedbackfarina - Dec 8, 2011 / farina - Dec 10, 2011
|How is your generation different from your parents generation? Differences?
3 - Introduction: It is crystal clear that our generation has many differences from our parents' generation in such ways as...
Writing Feedbackhedieh - Dec 7, 2011 / hedieh - Dec 8, 2011
|The Achievement of Desire, response paper
Writing Feedbacknini89 - Dec 7, 2011 / Tobi - Dec 8, 2011
|Because environmental issues are too complex, individuals can do nothing about them.
3 - Thanks a lot!!! Response was so fast :) I wanna reduce my mistakes and improve writing ability. I think...
Writing Feedbacklento333 - Dec 7, 2011 / lento333 - Dec 7, 2011
|My development as a writer for an intro to my final English portfolio
2 - Hey Christian! Very interesting essay. I loved reading it, but it took some time to get through the second...
Writing Feedbackcmfelix - Dec 7, 2011 / tehfunkicookie - Dec 7, 2011
|IELTS essay if children should be sent to school at an early age?
6 - Dear Farian, I think there are several problems in your writing: Firstly, You use too long and...
Writing Feedbackfarina - Dec 7, 2011 / phuongthao15389 - Dec 9, 2011
|'To improve my insight into medicine' - Why Medicine? Vanderbilt scholarship
2 - Well formulated essay. Some general advice for revising: 1.More focus should be laid on your perspective of 'medicine'. Your...
Writing Feedbackkenyaboyfresh - Dec 6, 2011 / hwei1994 - Dec 6, 2011
|'a very beautiful young woman who is very ambitious' - Describing a friend
Writing FeedbackNii Kommey - Dec 6, 2011 / Nii Kommey - Dec 11, 2011
|'new international knowledge and experience' - The reason for studying abroad
Writing FeedbackDiyorbek - Dec 6, 2011 / Diyorbek - Dec 8, 2011
|Middle school sex ed argument paper
NEW - This is a research based argumentative paper ... MLA format.. I really need help editing and making it flow...
Writing Feedbackmikky05v - Dec 5, 2011 / — -
|Group Essay - "Warning! Teen Dating Hurts!"
7 - Where are those paragraphs? You need to do a draft and post it here.... Then others would be able...
Writing Feedbackplant4therice - Dec 5, 2011 / dumi - Dec 7, 2012
|Life of a child star-rewards and problems
3 - Thanks for your interesting ideas on the subject of my essay:)Maybe I should discuss this subject both sides,not just...
Writing Feedbackgreentea93 - Dec 5, 2011 / greentea93 - Dec 6, 2011
|boom Internet - people use the Internet more and more
2 - N owdays, as the wolrd becomes more develop the more people use internet. Bom internet rapidly of the people...
Writing Feedbackchickenbaby - Dec 4, 2011 / jasonty9 - Dec 4, 2011
|Reliance on Technology has deteriorated our ability to think
NEW - Man has been continuously inventing ever since he was a nomad. His desire to settle necessitated him to think...
Writing Feedbacksandy87 - Dec 4, 2011 / — -
|ielts chart - information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola
Writing Feedbacklllpppricky - Dec 4, 2011 / phuongthao15389 - Dec 7, 2011
|'recently moved to new house' - IELTS Letter
NEW - You are recently moved to new house. There has been damage after you move into the house. Write a...
Writing Feedbackroshan4 - Dec 4, 2011 / — -
|Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
2 - Throwing rubbish in our beautiful environment has created many problems in our lives. This essay will be discussed some...
Writing Feedbackroshan4 - Dec 4, 2011 / greentea93 - Dec 5, 2011
|IELTS writing - Describing a process
2 - The flow chart given shows the procedures followed after the IELTS exam has been completed. This article will...
Writing FeedbackJarret - Dec 4, 2011 / roshan4 - Dec 5, 2011
|Government has announced that it wishes to build a military base near your community
3 - Thank you so much for your invaluable suggestion.I wrote mine,a type of bomb hidden under ground, in a contest...
Writing FeedbackHarikumarsharma - Dec 4, 2011 / Harikumarsharma - Dec 5, 2011
|The time I spent at Jamaica Hospital. Cardiology is something that I have always been zealous about.
NEW - Walking into the beautifully furnished hospital building, I scanned the area. There were hundreds of patients waiting for prescriptions,...
Writing Feedbackchickenonrice - Dec 3, 2011 / — -
|What is considered as a "bad behavior" in Morocco?
NEW - HEY ! recently, i have written some essays and poems but i didn't find anyone correct me my mistakes...
Writing Feedbacksniper_moon - Dec 3, 2011 / — -
|Essay on Responding to September 11
Writing FeedbackLexill - Dec 3, 2011 / Lexill - Dec 6, 2011
|In the pages of human history, conflicts are unavoidable; Is conflict helpful? SAT
2 - The helpfulness of conflicts is unlimited. Conflicts can have significant impacts upon society and future generations. One such example...
Writing FeedbackLily Rose - Dec 3, 2011 / kkelsey82 - Dec 3, 2011
|Ordering a special electrode.
2 - Thank you for your helpful recommendation. As I said, I should use intramuscular electrodes for stimulating muscles in...
Writing Feedbackabedkh - Dec 3, 2011 / EF_Susan - Dec 5, 2011
|Easier-prepared food cannot make a promotion to our own life and even could cause some consequences.
5 - ok, thanks!...
Writing Feedbackrolin - Dec 3, 2011 / rolin - Dec 5, 2011
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