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|Write about an occasion when your arrogance caused you to make a wrong decision.
2 - During the years in mid-school , i joined the school`s swimming club as a way to keep myself fit...
Writing FeedbackYangTeng - Feb 12, 2012 / goku123 - Feb 15, 2012
|'Opportunities to go out in a quiet town' - TOEFL
3 - In terms of the configuration of this essay, I think it is not enough to only have 3 paragraph...
Writing Feedbackeradulova - Feb 12, 2012 / goku123 - Feb 13, 2012
|'job with more vacation time' - IBT
4 - It is not hard to figure out that a regular communication helps the generation gap decrease. Especially, we...
Writing FeedbackAlice Ren - Feb 11, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 16, 2012
|Personal essay on any experience, My Grandfather my hero , Has to be descriptive
NEW - I haven't written my first paragraph yet , pleasetell me if i need any corrections with the below writing...
Writing FeedbackVHUDGENS - Feb 11, 2012 / — -
|Studying people and their employers assistance - Ielts charts
2 - The two bar charts illustrate why people of different age groups study, and how their employers assist them in...
Writing FeedbackCoolmam - Feb 11, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 14, 2012
|Money can be ineffective and counterproductive part of the job
Writing Feedbackokbu - Feb 11, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 15, 2012
|"Studying English in an English-Speaking Country" - IELTS Writing
2 - Hi Kadrick, Sentence you used is more readable that way - According to a recent survey, International...
Writing Feedbackjai124 - Feb 10, 2012 / jayk - Feb 13, 2012
|'a person should have several careers' - career essay
Writing Feedbackkashkaldakus - Feb 10, 2012 / kashkaldakus - Feb 13, 2012
| comics books radio television film theatre (media communication) IELTS
2 - Books as a media have superiority in transmitting the information, because it is easy to acquire the knowledge which...
Writing Feedbackkiwiuua - Feb 10, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 15, 2012
|(food/drinks/tobacco category) "National spending in 3 categories"
NEW - The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Country...
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|'Educated high-school students with bright and independent mind' - Toefl essay
NEW - Topic- High school should allow students to study the courses that students want to study. Agree or disagree? High...
Writing FeedbackParvina - Feb 9, 2012 / — -
|'And what doesn't kill..' - childhood memory- survival of the fittest
Writing Feedbackcubanez - Feb 9, 2012 / — -
|A good sense of humor is one of the most important human qualities.
Writing FeedbackScientist - Feb 9, 2012 / mariagaston - Feb 10, 2012
|Essay is about Dieting which can change a person's life
Writing Feedbackhippelala - Feb 9, 2012 / hippelala - Feb 9, 2012
|The value of understanding ideas and concepts is higher than learning facts.
3 - Second, ideas and concepts are usually created by outstanding persons. Those people, who dedicated their whole life to specific...
Writing Feedbackcht1128 - Feb 9, 2012 / basawang - Feb 9, 2012
|Weight of people is increasing-- causations and resolutions
4 - Hi, In conclusion To conclude, individuals should change their perception about life style and attempt to adopt healthy...
Writing Feedbackcypress - Feb 8, 2012 / Athena - Feb 8, 2012
|'making important decisions - you have to consult or discuss' - TOEFL
4 - eradulova "Person should make decision every day no matter what kind of. Decision making is one of the main...
Writing Feedbackeradulova - Feb 8, 2012 / koniciwa - Feb 9, 2012
|Causes of loafing among youths, essay
Writing Feedbackjajadiba - Feb 8, 2012 / HelpmeWrite - Feb 21, 2012
|250 Word Essay on Education Reform
2 - This is my suggestions....hopefully it can help you.... However, there are students below the average of....( better to...
Writing Feedbacksonya15 - Feb 8, 2012 / jajadiba - Feb 8, 2012
|Essay on 'Dreams for the future rely on the work of Today'
Writing Feedbackkumailxp - Feb 8, 2012 / kumailxp - Feb 15, 2012
|'Evaluation of Walk the Line' - evalution of a movie essay
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|'public to use more public transportation' - IELTS band
Writing Feedbackroopali - Feb 7, 2012 / rithamanyewe - Feb 21, 2012
|Courage the Cowardly Dog: "Freaky" Fred Analysis (Weekly Essay to improve writing)
3 - Courage the Cowardly Dog may or may not have been meaningful to everyone, but it is unique when compared...
Writing FeedbackEddie94 - Feb 7, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 14, 2012
|'seat belt laws' - GED Practice Essays
Writing FeedbackMK1993 - Feb 6, 2012 / MK1993 - Feb 7, 2012
|'clean, beautiful, safe Shopping Center' - GRE-Argument
3 - Dear Jennifer, Thank you so much for your feedback. It is very helpful, I will be taking the GRE...
Writing FeedbackMRH - Feb 6, 2012 / MRH - Feb 8, 2012
|'Chanhe makes our lives better' - SAT test
Writing Feedbacksharon1012 - Feb 6, 2012 / roopali - Feb 7, 2012
|'Changing the design of cars' - integrated TOEFL
3 - Maybe you can try to divide your essay into 3 sections depending on the ideas. I think it will...
Writing FeedbackScientist - Feb 6, 2012 / cht1128 - Feb 9, 2012
|IELTS Task2 - academic subjects-
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|Prostitution is often called the world's oldest profession. Should it be legal?
Writing Feedbackeriey - Feb 6, 2012 / eriey - Feb 6, 2012
|IELTS-human activities harming Earth or improving quality of life
NEW - Hi, Please correct any errors and provide feedback on task achievement. Q. Some people say we humans are...
Writing Feedbackjayk - Feb 5, 2012 / — -
|'I don't think people have to work hard to succeed' - Luck and success?
Writing Feedbackeradulova - Feb 5, 2012 / MK1993 - Feb 7, 2012
|Religious extremism and militancy - essay outline and response
2 - Hi :) I can make some suggestions on improving your grammar: Our green plant is green no more...
Writing Feedbackfarhatsultana - Feb 5, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Feb 5, 2012
|'Parents and Teachers play a vital role' - YOUNG HABITS DIE HARD
4 - Hi, i have some suggestions. On the contrary, when a child adopts good habits such as going to bed...
Writing Feedbackdr_pharmacy88 - Feb 5, 2012 / AmberAngel - Feb 6, 2012
|'no one should ever turn a blind eye to obvious signs of abuse' - Domestic Violence
2 - Wow, your essay is exemplary. I read it, and I cannot find any errors or changes to suggest- it...
Writing FeedbackPatrishaH77 - Feb 4, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Feb 5, 2012
|TOEFL - People are put too much focus on making wealth and progress in technology
4 - Thank you, Spyridon. I know I have difficulty in writing. Even writing an essay like this spent me 1...
Writing Feedbackcht1128 - Feb 4, 2012 / cht1128 - Feb 9, 2012
|My essay about positive things about an accident - Introduction.
Writing Feedbackbldblade - Feb 3, 2012 / roopali - Feb 7, 2012
|Art of writing, playing music; every have the right to choose any kind of music
Writing Feedbackpaul1911 - Feb 3, 2012 / paul1911 - Feb 5, 2012
|educate wrongdoers or sending them to jail
2 - Hi :) I can make some suggestions: In developing countries, like China, most criminals are limited in a...
Writing Feedbackallen_wang - Feb 3, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Feb 5, 2012
|'created memories playing arcades games' - descriptive essay and my first one
Writing FeedbackLinkinpark117 - Feb 2, 2012 / AmberAngel - Feb 4, 2012
|'Computer in the future has no limits' - What will Happen in the Future
2 - Amid all of the technological development that we are witnessing today, what can we expect to happen in the...
Writing Feedbackmishal alzaid - Feb 2, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Feb 2, 2012
|would you prefer to go on a long trip by car or by train?
Writing Feedbacktuyetden - Feb 2, 2012 / basawang - Feb 9, 2012
|Taking a gap year, should or should not? IELTS writing test 2
NEW - In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and...
Writing FeedbackMai Chu - Feb 1, 2012 / — -
|writing and you
2 - Writing is what we do in everyday life. In fact, we are all writers. We write basic things like...
Writing Feedbackjenniijennjenn - Feb 1, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Feb 1, 2012
|TOEFL-- One or two close friends vs. a large number of casual acquaintances
3 - It's better to repeat the topic with different words or sentence in tofel test instead of giving your opinion...
Writing Feedbackapplenjuice - Feb 1, 2012 / fansr0731 - Feb 4, 2012
|narrative essay: Snowboarding Accident. (Original Composition)
NEW - Discuss the topic: Our friends and family are important. Grade 12 As I was snowboarding down the mountain,...
Writing Feedbackjasonty9 - Feb 1, 2012 / — -
|[IELTS] Is air travel only benefit for the richest people?
NEW - In the present-day society, it is believed that air travel has become the best way to travel a far...
Writing Feedbackcocoyan - Jan 31, 2012 / — -
|'highly motivated, self-disciplined and well-organised' - Distance learning
NEW - The number of courses offered by distance has increased a great deal over the last few years. In the...
Writing Feedbackakari - Jan 31, 2012 / — -
|'people deserve to be known for what they did' - - TOEFL
Writing FeedbackNayara - Jan 31, 2012 / Nayara - Feb 1, 2012
|'it was a completely new life' - memoir Essay
4 - memoir essay...
Writing Feedbackcalanka - Jan 31, 2012 / calanka - Jan 31, 2012
|'work has become the most vital part' - help for ielts essay
NEW - Topic As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important...
Writing Feedbackfarina - Jan 31, 2012 / — -
|'They follow what their heart say' - Childhood Dreams essay
Writing Feedbackkabir1 - Jan 31, 2012 / kabir1 - Jan 31, 2012
|'the mental desire without money' - Happiness in life - Ielts writing.
Writing FeedbackMai Chu - Jan 31, 2012 / Mai Chu - Jan 31, 2012
|nuclear technology a danger to life on Earth? Benefits and risks?
3 - The invention of nuclear technology came as a relief for humanity, in the advent of an all time deficit...
Writing Feedbackkapuriasonu - Jan 31, 2012 / calanka - Jan 31, 2012
|(price of petrol increase / the cement making process) - IELTS ESSAYS
2 - After putting the power into the mixer, and it is then heated by Rotating heater So throughthanks for...
Writing Feedbackkiwiuua - Jan 30, 2012 / Mai Chu - Jan 31, 2012
|Should the elderly be taken care by the society or family
2 - I really don't think you should restate the question in the first paragraph. Also, stay away from me an...
Writing Feedbackcypress - Jan 30, 2012 / reidabook - Jan 30, 2012
|E.E. Cummings "How have these aspects of life influenced the poet and his work?"
3 - Throughout his life, Cummings would often travel to many countries, which included France and even Soviet Russia. Cummings...
Writing FeedbackGigantron - Jan 30, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 7, 2012
|Persuasive Writing - Travelling around the world
4 - Hi, I am a Canadian Language teacher based in Thailand. I teach academic & creative prose. I've read some...
Writing FeedbackVan19602 - Jan 30, 2012 / ranger_85 - Jan 31, 2012
|[IELTS]Can distance learning bring the same benefits of attending schools?
3 - Thank you so much, Susan. Your correction is very helpful. By the way, as for your correction of the...
Writing Feedbackchelseazcl - Jan 30, 2012 / chelseazcl - Jan 31, 2012
|Fable story : the princess snail
Writing Feedbackthaoquyen - Jan 30, 2012 / thaoquyen - Jan 31, 2012
|[IELTS] Parents should not Control What Children Learn at School
5 - For those parents who like to supervise their kids' learning at school, theysometimes worry about ]classes setting] class set-up...
Writing Feedbackjpplus - Jan 29, 2012 / dumi - Jan 31, 2012
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