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|'College pressures' - on Illustration, narrative, cause, effect, contrast, compare.
3 - Many college students face a number of pressures. For instance, many college students have graduated from high school face...
Writing Feedbacknawal - Feb 17, 2012 / EF_Susan - Mar 6, 2012
|'More convincing' -TOEFL whether face-to-face communication is better
Writing Feedbackgoku123 - Feb 17, 2012 / zxc123 - Feb 21, 2012
|Young people in today are less dependent on their parents than in the past.
3 - an important mistake: the last paragraph should not only has one sentence. Try to balance the length of each...
Writing Feedbackliwenxin - Feb 17, 2012 / goku123 - Feb 17, 2012
|'types of goals we set in life' - CLEP College Comp Essay
Writing FeedbackHSaucy - Feb 16, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Feb 21, 2012
|Colleges Suffer from a Lack of Diversity of Ideas
2 - below are my revisions. Spelling/grammer corrections are in red, and the sentences in blue are ones that I think...
Writing FeedbackEstherwriter - Feb 16, 2012 / HSaucy - Feb 16, 2012
|'In realizing my ambition to be a doctor the biology course..' - reflective essay
Writing Feedbackakhras93 - Feb 16, 2012 / akhras93 - Feb 20, 2012
|do you agree that advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits?
Writing Feedbackrobust - Feb 16, 2012 / robust - Feb 17, 2012
|'working in an individual way and get the grades is better' - TOEFL
4 - Hi; I found other mistakes that might be considered ... I completed the all tasks myself lacking of any...
Writing Feedbackgoku123 - Feb 16, 2012 / bahareh - Feb 16, 2012
|'The advantages of exam out ways its disadvantages' - Help for ielts essay
3 - The benefits of testing are various. Firstly, the justice of tests can't be denied, tests provide a fair stage...
Writing Feedbackfarina - Feb 16, 2012 / robust - Feb 17, 2012
|Wearing the Ao dai
4 - Secondly, the Ao dai not only is very elegant, but also is one of the Vietnamese's pride, so it...
Writing Feedbackl4v3nd3r_hl - Feb 16, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 23, 2012
|what other factors should be considered to meause the success of a nation?
4 - Many social issues nowadays, taking high crime rates mostly caused by lack of education as an example, may disturb...
Writing FeedbackHELLOROSE - Feb 16, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 23, 2012
|Today more people are travelling than ever before. Benefits and why?
Writing Feedbackmarpl - Feb 16, 2012 / marpl - Feb 23, 2012
|Essay about - Are SAT/ACT good indicators of ones academic abilities?
4 - Students stress so much over these standardized tests that they may become ill, physiologically exhausted and stressed which might...
Writing FeedbackMememars - Feb 15, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 23, 2012
|'governments should not move their capitals without necessity' - IELTS
Writing Feedbackkkshwesin - Feb 15, 2012 / kkshwesin - Feb 16, 2012
|'What is abortion?' or "Don't get me started on.." essay
Writing Feedbacksawlytia - Feb 14, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Feb 16, 2012
|Advertising encourages us to buy things we don't really need, should be regulated?
2 - Hi :) I can make some suggestions to help you improve your paper. You have some excellent ideas and...
Writing Feedbackcate_lovygina - Feb 14, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Feb 15, 2012
|'better to marry a similar partner' - TOEFL
5 - First of all, conflicts about everything between two individuals who have just finished the freedoms of single lives popularly...
Writing FeedbackH_H - Feb 14, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 23, 2012
|'living in a higher pace is better' - TOEFL practice 59
4 - Some people tend to be in a hurry to complete their tasks, while others seem to prefer the opposite...
Writing Feedbackgoku123 - Feb 13, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 23, 2012
|what does it mean to live in a democratic society and how has it affect you.
Writing FeedbackMememars - Feb 13, 2012 / Athena - Feb 14, 2012
|Nuclear war v.s. the Unitied Nations
2 - i think this is great. if you want you could relate this to today's problems with nuclear weapons between...
Writing Feedbackcypress - Feb 13, 2012 / Mememars - Feb 15, 2012
|Being gay and overcoming myself.
2 - People in the town are well-politically oriented... Not sure what you mean by this.. can you be more clear?...
Writing Feedbackbyeung1489 - Feb 13, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Feb 13, 2012
|'Akron Catholic Church Closings' - essay 1 - describing a local issue
2 - Great introduction! For those who share in some denominationparticipate in religious activities and believe in some higher being,...
Writing Feedbackmdunbar824 - Feb 13, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Feb 13, 2012
|The teaching approach: 'I recommend the teachers to be friendly'
NEW - Hi guys I expect at least 7 in IELTS writing...Please help me by assessing my essay..Any suggestions will be...
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|IELTS- Travelling benefits for the travellers
6 - Hi Jay, I just thought that you could edit on the following sentences: People travel places for...
Writing Feedbackjayk - Feb 13, 2012 / Athena - Feb 24, 2012
|Should we have to always pay attention to the opinions from celebrities?
5 - Hi Goku123, In my opinion, your English is quite good. . Howver, I'm much concerned if your essay addressed...
Writing Feedbackgoku123 - Feb 13, 2012 / H_H - Feb 15, 2012
|Essay regarding the influence of technology on the way people react to each other
Writing Feedbackjuel33 - Feb 12, 2012 / juel33 - Feb 13, 2012
|argumentative essay on technology...whether to stand with or against it
2 - I'm guessing you're going to write about how technological advancement signifies the decline of human morals? I couldn't really...
Writing Feedbackmakma7 - Feb 12, 2012 / mylo_zyloto - Feb 12, 2012
|Write about an occasion when your arrogance caused you to make a wrong decision.
2 - During the years in mid-school , i joined the school`s swimming club as a way to keep myself fit...
Writing FeedbackYangTeng - Feb 12, 2012 / goku123 - Feb 15, 2012
|'Opportunities to go out in a quiet town' - TOEFL
3 - In terms of the configuration of this essay, I think it is not enough to only have 3 paragraph...
Writing Feedbackeradulova - Feb 12, 2012 / goku123 - Feb 13, 2012
|'job with more vacation time' - IBT
4 - It is not hard to figure out that a regular communication helps the generation gap decrease. Especially, we...
Writing FeedbackAlice Ren - Feb 11, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 16, 2012
|Personal essay on any experience, My Grandfather my hero , Has to be descriptive
NEW - I haven't written my first paragraph yet , pleasetell me if i need any corrections with the below writing...
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|Studying people and their employers assistance - Ielts charts
2 - The two bar charts illustrate why people of different age groups study, and how their employers assist them in...
Writing FeedbackCoolmam - Feb 11, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 14, 2012
|Money can be ineffective and counterproductive part of the job
Writing Feedbackokbu - Feb 11, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 15, 2012
|"Studying English in an English-Speaking Country" - IELTS Writing
2 - Hi Kadrick, Sentence you used is more readable that way - According to a recent survey, International...
Writing Feedbackjai124 - Feb 10, 2012 / jayk - Feb 13, 2012
|'a person should have several careers' - career essay
Writing Feedbackkashkaldakus - Feb 10, 2012 / kashkaldakus - Feb 13, 2012
| comics books radio television film theatre (media communication) IELTS
2 - Books as a media have superiority in transmitting the information, because it is easy to acquire the knowledge which...
Writing Feedbackkiwiuua - Feb 10, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 15, 2012
|(food/drinks/tobacco category) "National spending in 3 categories"
NEW - The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Country...
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|'Educated high-school students with bright and independent mind' - Toefl essay
NEW - Topic- High school should allow students to study the courses that students want to study. Agree or disagree? High...
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|'And what doesn't kill..' - childhood memory- survival of the fittest
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|A good sense of humor is one of the most important human qualities.
Writing FeedbackScientist - Feb 9, 2012 / mariagaston - Feb 10, 2012
|Essay is about Dieting which can change a person's life
Writing Feedbackhippelala - Feb 9, 2012 / hippelala - Feb 9, 2012
|The value of understanding ideas and concepts is higher than learning facts.
3 - Second, ideas and concepts are usually created by outstanding persons. Those people, who dedicated their whole life to specific...
Writing Feedbackcht1128 - Feb 9, 2012 / basawang - Feb 9, 2012
|Weight of people is increasing-- causations and resolutions
4 - Hi, In conclusion To conclude, individuals should change their perception about life style and attempt to adopt healthy...
Writing Feedbackcypress - Feb 8, 2012 / Athena - Feb 8, 2012
|'making important decisions - you have to consult or discuss' - TOEFL
4 - eradulova "Person should make decision every day no matter what kind of. Decision making is one of the main...
Writing Feedbackeradulova - Feb 8, 2012 / koniciwa - Feb 9, 2012
|Causes of loafing among youths, essay
Writing Feedbackjajadiba - Feb 8, 2012 / HelpmeWrite - Feb 21, 2012
|250 Word Essay on Education Reform
2 - This is my suggestions....hopefully it can help you.... However, there are students below the average of....( better to...
Writing Feedbacksonya15 - Feb 8, 2012 / jajadiba - Feb 8, 2012
|Essay on 'Dreams for the future rely on the work of Today'
Writing Feedbackkumailxp - Feb 8, 2012 / kumailxp - Feb 15, 2012
|'Evaluation of Walk the Line' - evalution of a movie essay
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|'public to use more public transportation' - IELTS band
Writing Feedbackroopali - Feb 7, 2012 / rithamanyewe - Feb 21, 2012
|Courage the Cowardly Dog: "Freaky" Fred Analysis (Weekly Essay to improve writing)
3 - Courage the Cowardly Dog may or may not have been meaningful to everyone, but it is unique when compared...
Writing FeedbackEddie94 - Feb 7, 2012 / EF_Susan - Feb 14, 2012
|'seat belt laws' - GED Practice Essays
Writing FeedbackMK1993 - Feb 6, 2012 / MK1993 - Feb 7, 2012
|'clean, beautiful, safe Shopping Center' - GRE-Argument
3 - Dear Jennifer, Thank you so much for your feedback. It is very helpful, I will be taking the GRE...
Writing FeedbackMRH - Feb 6, 2012 / MRH - Feb 8, 2012
|'Chanhe makes our lives better' - SAT test
Writing Feedbacksharon1012 - Feb 6, 2012 / roopali - Feb 7, 2012
|'Changing the design of cars' - integrated TOEFL
3 - Maybe you can try to divide your essay into 3 sections depending on the ideas. I think it will...
Writing FeedbackScientist - Feb 6, 2012 / cht1128 - Feb 9, 2012
|IELTS Task2 - academic subjects-
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|Prostitution is often called the world's oldest profession. Should it be legal?
Writing Feedbackeriey - Feb 6, 2012 / eriey - Feb 6, 2012
|IELTS-human activities harming Earth or improving quality of life
NEW - Hi, Please correct any errors and provide feedback on task achievement. Q. Some people say we humans are...
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|'I don't think people have to work hard to succeed' - Luck and success?
Writing Feedbackeradulova - Feb 5, 2012 / MK1993 - Feb 7, 2012
|Religious extremism and militancy - essay outline and response
2 - Hi :) I can make some suggestions on improving your grammar: Our green plant is green no more...
Writing Feedbackfarhatsultana - Feb 5, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Feb 5, 2012
|'Parents and Teachers play a vital role' - YOUNG HABITS DIE HARD
4 - Hi, i have some suggestions. On the contrary, when a child adopts good habits such as going to bed...
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