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|Toefl: Being happy with a job is more important than having a high salary
Writing FeedbackNamnam - Oct 3, 2011 / Namnam - Oct 4, 2011
|Modern technology has made a negative impact on societies
4 - It`s my essay, almost about technology you can benefit if possible: boxca.com/5404ov48ozj8/21ci_esr.docx.html...
Writing Feedbacksepehr - Oct 3, 2011 / Husseinova - Nov 7, 2011
|Should rowdy students be separated from other learners? This practice does not benefit our society.
6 - I remember my lecturer told me you can start "it's often said that" if the idea is generally accepted...
Writing FeedbackAblet - Oct 3, 2011 / Anna Phuan - Oct 13, 2011
|IELTS TASK 2. GOVERNMENT SHOULD BUILT NEW BUILDINGS IN TRADITIONAL STYLE.
Writing FeedbackBINUDANIEL - Oct 2, 2011 / BINUDANIEL - Oct 3, 2011
|TOEFL - It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city?
Writing Feedbackmonamona - Oct 2, 2011 / basawang - Oct 2, 2011
|ielts- the importance of zoos and confinement of animal
NEW - Zoos nowadays have always generated a mixed feelings when it comes to education and equity among all creatures. While...
Writing Feedbackwjxjj123 - Oct 2, 2011 / — -
|'I Live alone here at Rowosari street, Indonesia' - About My self
3 - Ratih : Excuse me ,may I enter this room ? Rosidah : Yes,please. I have never seen you before....
Writing Feedbackrosidah - Oct 2, 2011 / rosidah - Oct 20, 2011
|Toefl : Books have more influence on society than the television
Writing FeedbackNamnam - Oct 2, 2011 / Namnam - Oct 2, 2011
|Practice AP Prompt- Identify Tragic Hero, their effects on others, and Tragic Vision
NEW - "Select a novel or play in which a tragic figure functions as an instrument of the suffering of others....
Writing Feedbackjonnnnnnn - Oct 1, 2011 / — -
|'Adam Realty or Fitch Realty sold a house at the same time' - Gre argument
2 - Hi, I think you point out several crucial points in this argument. Very good! However, I have...
Writing Feedbackforever298 - Oct 1, 2011 / basawang - Oct 1, 2011
|"things we obtain too easily, we esteem to lightly"
2 - When I was aroundabout six months old, My grandmother took something away from my mom and dad because its...
Writing Feedbackmorganlindsey99 - Oct 1, 2011 / iCan - Oct 4, 2011
|"City park for the city !" Essay Topic
4 - Thank you Soshianet !!! Because there are many people so I want to repair and make it bigger :D...
Writing Feedbackminhtung9x - Oct 1, 2011 / minhtung9x - Oct 7, 2011
|GRE: Real Estate firms in a town
NEW - Town Real Estate Agencies Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered...
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|TOEFL Writing : Why do you think people visit museums?
Writing FeedbackEnlightenus - Oct 1, 2011 / Namnam - Oct 3, 2011
|IELTS TASK 1: The American food budget (Pie Chart)
3 - Dear, are you sure your're helping me? So many grammatical errors and indistinct meanings. non vegetarian????...
Writing Feedbackkoei1982 - Sep 30, 2011 / koei1982 - Oct 1, 2011
|Brake before university education, are advantages more than disadvantades?
2 - dont start with "nowadays" start with something like, "in present day" "competeition" in the first line should be changed...
Writing Feedbackkulsoomprincess - Sep 30, 2011 / abbymyles22 - Oct 4, 2011
|Can't decipher this essay format and instructions, anyone want to give it a shot?
Writing Feedbacklinnie - Sep 30, 2011 / nikolnikonchuk - Oct 4, 2011
|"The computer is a boon to our society." To what extent would you agree?
Writing FeedbackDanLibriPark - Sep 30, 2011 / DanLibriPark - Oct 4, 2011
|IELTS WRITING: The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels
3 - The development of economy requires a largerlarge amount of energy (especially fossil fuels) to operate factories, machines, and vehicles....
Writing Feedbacklylong - Sep 30, 2011 / basawang - Sep 30, 2011
|"Plans should strategically integrate generations of governments" Writing
NEW - 19. Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated...
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|'a hero that we have looked up to' - SAT
NEW - The discovery that someone we admire has done something wrong is always disappointing and disillusioning. Yet even when people...
Writing Feedbackibsurd2012 - Sep 30, 2011 / — -
|"Pyramid of Honesty" - Feedback on tone
3 - The passage did in fact entertain me; however, do you think you are risking sounding snobby through this passage?...
Writing Feedbackessayhelpplease - Sep 29, 2011 / duke9418 - Oct 5, 2011
|ielts - should people be forced to stop working?
5 - yes Sangeetha, i was thinking that they are idealistic to be used in the speaking side of the ielts...
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Sep 29, 2011 / supernoob101 - Oct 4, 2011
|combining and optimizing - 'improve the quality of the education in a country is to'
Writing Feedbackrichard35568 - Sep 29, 2011 / — -
|IELTS TASK1: US Electricity out put during 1970 & 1984
4 - Hi, the 1st one isn't connected with IELTS, it's just my experience of daily reading of analitical staff....
Writing Feedbackkoei1982 - Sep 29, 2011 / Mizu - Oct 1, 2011
|IELTS LETTER> REPLYING A COMPLAINT ABOUT NOISE
2 - I am writing to you to reply your letter REGARDING THE COMPLAINT YOU HAVE MADE about the noise from...
Writing Feedbacksupernoob101 - Sep 29, 2011 / Geenesh - Sep 29, 2011
|'how the funding for reseach and development was allocated in the UK' - IELTS
2 - You have not given introduction for the second table in the introduction. Try to give numbers instead what is...
Writing Feedbackspyrosessay - Sep 28, 2011 / BINUDANIEL - Sep 29, 2011
|TOEFL- Should university give the same amount of money to its departments?
2 - Hi, The prompt is about sport activities and university libraries. So, I think you should focus on...
Writing Feedbackmonamona - Sep 28, 2011 / basawang - Sep 28, 2011
|'The Ibom shopping street' - A sence at a shopping street
Writing FeedbackANIEKAN FRIDAY - Sep 28, 2011 / ANIEKAN FRIDAY - Sep 29, 2011
|Process Analysis paper -- Essay about dressing well
2 - We had always attended several Indian weddings in conventions centers located all throughout Louisiana. She had pointed out...
Writing FeedbackSagar_Patel12 - Sep 28, 2011 / EF_Susan - Sep 29, 2011
|Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money
2 - Hi, There are some grammatical errors. Nevertheless, I want to talk about your structure because it may be...
Writing Feedbackbahareh - Sep 28, 2011 / basawang - Sep 28, 2011
|Distance Education is not practical for everyone. To what extent you agree / disagree
NEW - QUES: More and more colleges and universities are offering courses through distance learning. Distance learning has many benefits, but...
Writing FeedbackBINUDANIEL - Sep 28, 2011 / — -
|IT IS REALITY IT MIGHT LOOK LIKE STUPIDITY.
Writing FeedbackORTEGA EFE - Sep 28, 2011 / ORTEGA EFE - Oct 19, 2011
|IELTS> HOW TO DEFINE FRIENDSHIP
2 - Childhood friendship might not be that good at the end of the day. The important to look out for,...
Writing Feedbacksupernoob101 - Sep 28, 2011 / ORTEGA EFE - Sep 28, 2011
|Companies to spend time on listening to its employees instead of consultants
Writing Feedbacktanmaymathur89 - Sep 28, 2011 / tanmaymathur89 - Sep 29, 2011
|Patrick Garland's movie based on "A Doll's House" - Film Analysis Paper
Writing Feedbackmtjames0211 - Sep 27, 2011 / mtjames0211 - Sep 28, 2011
|'The American themes of opportunity and success' - US History Paper
Writing Feedbackcomp13 - Sep 27, 2011 / BINUDANIEL - Sep 28, 2011
|'the nature of the advertising' - most advertisements make products seem much be
Writing Feedbackrichard35568 - Sep 27, 2011 / richard35568 - Sep 29, 2011
|Topic: Approach to problem-solving - TOEFL IBT
3 - Some people prefer to think about and analyze a certain issue and to do it afterwards, yet others would...
Writing Feedbackziya - Sep 27, 2011 / okme_2008 - Sep 27, 2011
|TOEFL ESSAY ; Course grades are based on exams or based more on class participation?
6 - monamona In the independent essay we should write at least 300 words. In my opinion we should write...
Writing Feedbackmuge - Sep 27, 2011 / muge - Sep 29, 2011
|'spend your life in your own way' - GMAT ESSAY - "SUCCESS"
Writing FeedbackAsmita_ - Sep 27, 2011 / pouriah - Sep 28, 2011
|'The Arctic deer populations are declining' - GRE analytical argument
2 - "The decrease in the vegetation may be due to any disease spreading the plants or may be due to...
Writing Feedbacktdivyendu - Sep 27, 2011 / Vincenzo - Oct 1, 2011
|Toefl----moving to a new place can lose old friends
Writing Feedbackmhh2531 - Sep 27, 2011 / basawang - Sep 27, 2011
|Explore some of the aspects or even a single aspect of "identity".
5 - Thanks so much Kevin! Wish you could have edited the whole thing, instead of just the last post I...
Writing FeedbackEditor1010 - Sep 26, 2011 / Editor1010 - Sep 29, 2011
|Three reasons for Overpopulation in Vietnam or India
6 - Ways: # government rules and regulation: Rewards for small family parents like increase in salary and punishment such As...
Writing Feedbackhanh - Sep 26, 2011 / deepakbaniya - Aug 4, 2012
|college education is necessary in the U.S society
2 - Thanks a lot Yao and Kory. I'm appreciated your ideas. I agree with you, Yao. This essay is too...
Writing FeedbackKathyLala - Sep 26, 2011 / KathyLala - Sep 29, 2011
|'people have to work and experience new things' - When people succeed
4 - I think the essay is not clear enough to deliver the intended view. As well, it lacks strong reasoning....
Writing Feedbackmonamona - Sep 26, 2011 / Asmita_ - Sep 26, 2011
|IELTS TASK 1: The Consumer Dollar : Where it goes. (Pie Chart)
Writing Feedbackkoei1982 - Sep 26, 2011 / yahiawestlife - Sep 27, 2011
|Toefl Essay Topic: Telecommuting, working in an office?
4 - Hi! The word-structure I uesed last day to you essay is not proper. The structure of your essay is...
Writing Feedbackmuge - Sep 26, 2011 / okme_2008 - Sep 27, 2011
|A successful person must be something specially, otherwise the fate would not smile at him.
2 - I read first paragraph of your essay, and did some re-wording. I hope you don't mind. I'm not professional,...
Writing FeedbackEminent - Sep 26, 2011 / koei1982 - Sep 26, 2011
|'stricter gun control laws equals more safety?' - G.E.D. Test Essay.
3 - How's this? ... ... Decreasing the availability of firearms will do very little, if anything, to make America...
Writing FeedbackSara_sheppard - Sep 26, 2011 / Sara_sheppard - Sep 27, 2011
|Chorleywood village near London - ielts writing task 1
5 - Thanks for your comments! Hello, Doysn.. In my essay, I used "North-South routeway" to describe the way that...
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - Sep 26, 2011 / MisterWandering - Oct 1, 2011
|the recipe to success is in fact failure.
NEW - There is perhaps no greater pursuit in life than that of success. Our endeavour, either it be at school...
Writing Feedbackisabellaclaudia - Sep 26, 2011 / — -
|Toefl: communal investments should be focused on which part
Writing FeedbackLaser - Sep 25, 2011 / monamona - Sep 28, 2011
|Mistake I Ever Made - suggestions
Writing FeedbacknanaA - Sep 25, 2011 / — -
|compare the advantages of living in dormitories with living in an apartment
NEW - Choosing a place to live often confuses students at universities. Most of them think living in university or living...
Writing FeedbackHoai Thu - Sep 24, 2011 / — -
|THE PUBLIC TRANSPORTATION IS AWFUL IN TOWN
Writing FeedbackSaray007 - Sep 24, 2011 / Zeinab1383 - Sep 25, 2011
|[graph] 'the number of international students in the USA'
2 - The first graphicgraph gives (information about) the quantities of abroad students in the USA between 2000 and 2004 yearswhile...
Writing FeedbackGangster777 - Sep 24, 2011 / MisterWandering - Sep 25, 2011
|To solve the problems of the present and future,people should review the past.TOEFL
NEW - Do you agree or disagree, in order to solve the problems of the present and the future, people should...
Writing Feedbackpepsi - Sep 24, 2011 / — -
|Toefl - 'the Earth is being damaged through human activities?'
NEW - Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes...
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