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|In order to success, you should be more or different from others?
3 - Thanks a lot!...
Writing Feedbackvivianliu - Aug 23, 2011 / vivianliu - Aug 23, 2011
|"children should manage their own money at the young age" - TOEFL
Writing Feedbackyc9055 - Aug 23, 2011 / yc9055 - Aug 24, 2011
|CLEP - Individual Opportunity: Myth or Reality?
4 - Thank you! As you mentioned improvements I was able to see right away what you meant. And I thank...
Writing Feedbacklangers1 - Aug 23, 2011 / langers1 - Aug 23, 2011
|Sharing of wealthy nations and responsibility of poorer nations-ielts task 2
2 - The governments of poor nations have many difficulties in different fields such as economy developing economies,----only developing economies is...
Writing Feedbackbeepro21 - Aug 23, 2011 / Icecreamquest - Aug 24, 2011
|Teachers are responsilbe for motivating students to learn. To what extent you agree?
2 - Firstly, what is the length needed for the essay? I think you have some valid points in your essay...
Writing Feedbackakashacharya30 - Aug 23, 2011 / waikin - Aug 23, 2011
|Reducing the overall consumption of natural resources by creating awareness
NEW - The world is consuming natural resources faster than they can be renewed. Therefore, it is important that products are...
Writing FeedbackAlisha123 - Aug 22, 2011 / — -
|IELTS - Change, angel or devil?
NEW - Topic: Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think...
Writing Feedbackfish333 - Aug 22, 2011 / — -
|TOEFL physical exercise -on giving preference
4 - Your writing is not bad. I think you should pay more attention to your essay topic. In this essay...
Writing FeedbackNurika - Aug 22, 2011 / dumi - Aug 22, 2011
|salaries of sports professionals and other fields' professionals
Writing FeedbackIda - Aug 21, 2011 / reidabook - Aug 21, 2011
|TOEFL; "little Buffett" Children should learn to handle money to be responsible
NEW - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: In order to become financially responsible adults, children should manage...
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|Essay about the government decision on where put money - feedback
6 - EF_Kevin Hi Kevin, really appreciate it that you made useful comments on my writing. As for the below...
Writing Feedbackmarucat - Aug 21, 2011 / marucat - Sep 19, 2011
|"Gifted people and talents" - IELTS - Cam7 test1 task2
Writing Feedbackfish333 - Aug 21, 2011 / jamliu0229 - Aug 24, 2011
|IELTS-Do university graduates deserve higher salary than those who have not?
2 - In detail,in the beginning of 1970's Mitchford city was producing around half a million of dollar worth wheat.during this...
Writing Feedbacksobin - Aug 20, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Aug 29, 2011
|Why do not enjoyable things: necessity, importance for the future, families and friends in our lives
Writing Feedbacksoshianet - Aug 20, 2011 / vivianliu - Aug 23, 2011
|IELTS (Graph) - the main sources of energy in America in the 1980s and the 1990s
2 - "but it decreased to one in three." sorry I don't know what you want to express, do you mean"one...
Writing Feedbackatlantis - Aug 20, 2011 / mcshang - Aug 21, 2011
|"teaching and researching working together lead to the success" -Ielts writing
Writing Feedbackchinge - Aug 20, 2011 / chinge - Aug 22, 2011
|Ielts writing: Wealthy countries still have many poor members
NEW - Hi everyone, please read and correct this essay. Have a nice weekend :D Question: Although many countries are becoming...
Writing Feedbackoonguyenminh - Aug 20, 2011 / — -
|TOEFL; Is it a good thing to move to a new city or new country?
2 - great essay but there are some minor grammatical errors fixed relationships ... are to give them advices when...
Writing Feedbacksiebeniris - Aug 20, 2011 / isabellaclaudia - Aug 20, 2011
|Toefl: Big city and Countryside both have their positives and negatives
3 - i think the reason why you were suspended is that you only made this kind of comment :)) Let's...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Aug 19, 2011 / hvthoteen - Aug 22, 2011
|The importance of natural resources (forests, animals and clean water)
16 - Ana Maria, ARness and EF_Kevin. I would like to answer to your replies in order of their appearance....
Writing Feedbackbirdman - Aug 19, 2011 / birdman - Sep 4, 2011
|TOEFL. WHEN DISCUSSING CONTROVERSIAL PROBLEMS, TELEPHONE OR TEXT MESSAGING.
Writing Feedbacksiebeniris - Aug 19, 2011 / siebeniris - Aug 19, 2011
|Freedom to show creativity in portraying skills in producing any form of art
NEW - Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film)...
Writing FeedbackAlisha123 - Aug 19, 2011 / — -
|Music development-writing task 2 in ielts test
2 - we do not write etc in Ilets essay rather than writing short, write in conlcusion what do u mean...
Writing Feedbackbeepro21 - Aug 19, 2011 / Alisha123 - Aug 19, 2011
|'simplistic view'; Can petrol price increase impact on pollution?
Writing Feedbackfish333 - Aug 19, 2011 / fish333 - Aug 19, 2011
|There are also people whose childhood was the unhappiest period of his or her life
3 - Personally, I suppose u have some misunderstanding about this topic... This topic says 'childhood is the happiest time of...
Writing Feedbackgresa gashi - Aug 19, 2011 / fish333 - Aug 19, 2011
|Teachers obligations are much greater that can be summarized only in compliment and punishment
Writing Feedbackghafarimahsa - Aug 19, 2011 / ghafarimahsa - Aug 20, 2011
|How can a busy person have a healthy lifestyle?
NEW - This is my 300 word essay about that question. How can a busy person have a healthy lifestyle?...
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|Key issues to make city become better!
3 - Diversity in your vocabularies, learn more from your writing. But could you mind change some "citizens" to "residents"...
Writing Feedbackprettybear94 - Aug 18, 2011 / Icecreamquest - Aug 25, 2011
|"it is okay to lie as far as the lie does not hurt anybody" ?
Writing Feedbackerblina emini - Aug 18, 2011 / erblina emini - Aug 19, 2011
|What kind of writing have you done at work and in school?
4 - These experiences have changed my perception on writing and now is an enjoyable part of English class I look...
Writing Feedbacksyed199343 - Aug 18, 2011 / Lindabrown - Aug 30, 2011
|Toefl topic: Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways
NEW - Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways or should governments spend more money on improving public...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Aug 18, 2011 / — -
|the immediate problems of today OR anticipated problems of the future
NEW - ISSUE56 - "Governments should focus more on solving the immediate problems of today rather than trying to solve the...
Writing Feedbackrochun - Aug 18, 2011 / — -
|nature or nurture which one have influence on personality and development ?
2 - Whether temperament which we arewere born with or experience various situations has an effect on our character or growing...
Writing Feedbackgolish65 - Aug 18, 2011 / prettybear94 - Aug 18, 2011
|Climate change - Help on finding the subject and any sentence errors
3 - thanks for the spell check. when i said the subject, i meant was the 3 topic sentences that i...
Writing Feedbackemiliorijo - Aug 18, 2011 / emiliorijo - Aug 18, 2011
|Could you live without TV? - Toefl iBT
Writing Feedbackjenny328 - Aug 18, 2011 / br93 - Aug 18, 2011
|Roommates quality and their importance - Toefl IBT
2 - your essay is quite good but you dint give examples. To make your essay more interesting to read I...
Writing Feedbackjenny328 - Aug 18, 2011 / oluwakemi - Aug 18, 2011
|An IELTS Essay - Cam8 test2 task2 - technology and communication
Writing Feedbacksaint318 - Aug 18, 2011 / saint318 - Aug 18, 2011
|Is it a waste time for government to spend money on criminals?
NEW - Most people think it is a waste of time for the government to spend a lot of money changing...
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|"a competition background" - a color of life
Writing Feedbacksangnguyen - Aug 17, 2011 / sangnguyen - Aug 19, 2011
|The possible effects of living long on an individual and on the whole society?
4 - I have some ideas for improving this. It is already very good, though! There are some social, financial...
Writing FeedbackOovi - Aug 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Aug 29, 2011
|"All group & organization should function as teams" - Essay Evaluation
3 - Team work is the ability to work towards common vision even if the vision gets blurry.----Great sentence!! By the...
Writing FeedbackSumGMAT - Aug 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Aug 29, 2011
|Spend more time on personal enjoyment or do what people should do?
2 - Its makeit makes sense for people to explore the pleasure of life. a large amount of works work, which...
Writing FeedbackAuguste - Aug 16, 2011 / Jennifer Zhang - Aug 16, 2011
|[TOEFL] government budget focus, young children or university?
5 - Your essay is prefect but you didn't indent your paragraphs so it it is very hard to read your...
Writing Feedbackphilossophia - Aug 16, 2011 / abc1400 - Sep 1, 2011
|Traditional foods are repaced by international fast food. advantageous or disadvantag
NEW - In many countries , traditional foods are being replaced by international fast food . This is having a negative...
Writing FeedbackFly109238 - Aug 16, 2011 / — -
|[TOEFL] Children's academic success is influenced by parents or classmates?
Writing FeedbackChristyH - Aug 15, 2011 / ChristyH - Aug 16, 2011
|The variable number of water for the agriculture, industrial and domestic use
2 - Some of these ways are illustrated in the graph above. Agriculture, industrial and domestic uses are being investigated...
Writing Feedbackarvin_infinity - Aug 15, 2011 / EF_Susan - Aug 17, 2011
|College should not require Freshmen to purchase meal plans
Writing Feedbackvanessa000 - Aug 15, 2011 / vanessa000 - Aug 17, 2011
|"the controlled use of power brings out hidden traits" - Essay evaluation
3 - Thanks Dey, Do you intend to mean in adding more english or correcting grammer or adding more examples?...
Writing FeedbackSumGMAT - Aug 15, 2011 / SumGMAT - Aug 16, 2011
|Essay about argument of a complete ban of smoking everywhere. Agree or disagree?
NEW - Hi guys, I'm newbie here and also in writing IELTS task 2, therefore I will appreciate any useful helps....
Writing FeedbackFerb - Aug 15, 2011 / — -
|Some follow their ambitious dreams, some focus on realistic dreams.What do you think?
NEW - Personally, I believe the ambitious dream is my choice. However, I will break the ambitious dream down to several...
Writing FeedbackMark1 - Aug 15, 2011 / — -
|IELTS writing-There are social and medical problems associated with the use of mobile
NEW - Topic: There are social and medical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What are these problems? Do...
Writing FeedbackOwenXa - Aug 15, 2011 / — -
|Creativity essay - Human thought must be free, imaginative and even playful
NEW - I wrote the following essay in 25 minutes, in preparation for the SAT. English is my second language, and...
Writing FeedbackDanny154 - Aug 15, 2011 / — -
|Books are not needed because one can read information on computers.agree or disagree
Writing Feedbackkiana - Aug 15, 2011 / usnanathan - Aug 16, 2011
|MCAT-The nature of democracy requires that its citizens be dependent upon one another
3 - THank you!...
Writing Feedbackpshla - Aug 14, 2011 / pshla - Aug 21, 2011
|The production and sale of cigarettes should be made illegal.
3 - Hi, Susan Thanks for the correctings. I know the arugment is kind of week, but what I want to...
Writing Feedbackvanessa000 - Aug 14, 2011 / vanessa000 - Aug 15, 2011
|"Be Happy It Happened" - Using A Favorite quotation from an essay or book..
5 - Thanks. We just read "Of Smells" and "Of Studies" in class and I feel like reading more essays like...
Writing FeedbackMcK_Allie - Aug 14, 2011 / McK_Allie - Aug 15, 2011
|"training is more important than natural talent?" - IELTS WRITING TASK
Writing FeedbackIeltslearner - Aug 14, 2011 / Ieltslearner - Aug 15, 2011
|"Just another Thursday" - personal writing
3 - thanks for you edit. the formatting and the lack of the punctuation marks after the last words resulted during...
Writing Feedbackgreenfish16 - Aug 14, 2011 / greenfish16 - Aug 15, 2011
|People should listen to others criticism and think if it's to worth accept it
Writing FeedbackEricGreen - Aug 14, 2011 / EricGreen - Aug 14, 2011
|I prefer to work for a lager company - more chance for promotion
4 - Your writing is great! But if some words can be replaced by others , I mean diversity, such as...
Writing Feedbackshipima - Aug 14, 2011 / Icecreamquest - Aug 25, 2011
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