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|The Old & New Testament - Compare/contrast Paragraph
Writing FeedbackKohana - Nov 6, 2011 / Kohana - Nov 8, 2011
|receive the best direction and education from their parents as well as teachers
5 - Thanks you, Mohini. Admittedly that I thought of it when I was writting this essay, but I was really...
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|Education: teachers have more influence than parents
Writing FeedbackAbzal - Nov 6, 2011 / stellastella - Nov 9, 2011
|'Attitude for the changing world' Ielts Writing Task 2
Writing Feedbackdinhquangthinh - Nov 6, 2011 / ieltsbuddy - Nov 7, 2011
|TOEFL - In general, people live longer now. Why?
Writing Feedbackabc1400 - Nov 6, 2011 / Mohini - Nov 7, 2011
|Do not accept others' criticism cannot succeed?
Writing Feedbackamanda guo - Nov 6, 2011 / amanda guo - Nov 7, 2011
|Only movies that can teach us about real life is worth watching.
Writing Feedbacklily wang - Nov 6, 2011 / lily wang - Nov 8, 2011
|'Christmas Eve in Denmark' - a descriptive story (five-paragraph)
Writing Feedbackadamduun - Nov 6, 2011 / adamduun - Nov 16, 2011
|Addiction of computer leads to ignorence of family
Writing Feedbackyunus - Nov 6, 2011 / yunus - Nov 12, 2011
|Role ModelDaria presents a smart and mindful teenager; Essay on Role Model
2 - and pretending and to try to stray away from the crowd what society's perceiveptionabout to be influenced by thesocialsocieta...
Writing FeedbackEstarburst12 - Nov 5, 2011 / Prettywings - Nov 6, 2011
|'A small truck ran over a two-year-old girl' - This is argument essay
Writing Feedbackthaolam77 - Nov 5, 2011 / Jhangir - Nov 9, 2011
|Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are not.
4 - The grammar is pretty good. I pointed out a couple sentences that I thought could use some work. Nice...
Writing Feedbacksoshianet - Nov 5, 2011 / Jennyflower81 - Nov 8, 2011
|Topic - Suitable age for new language learning - IELTS
2 - It is common and sound nice to end up your essay with a conclusion. Try to begin your conclusion...
Writing FeedbackMohini - Nov 5, 2011 / stellastella - Nov 8, 2011
|Teenage pregnancy and sexual education at schools
2 - The overall message and content is very interesting. However, you can make this essay even stronger if you organize...
Writing Feedbackbdemerdan - Nov 4, 2011 / hesaves - Nov 4, 2011
|Da Nang and Da Lat, Vietnam: Compare and contrast two places you have visited
Writing Feedbackdinhquangthinh - Nov 4, 2011 / dinhquangthinh - Nov 6, 2011
|Money for students sports vs library activies
5 - You need to review your introduction because it is not clear.For example you can put it this way(this is...
Writing FeedbackHarikumarsharma - Nov 3, 2011 / clin93 - Dec 4, 2011
|work 3 days a week with long hours VS work 5 days a week with short hours
Writing Feedbackamanda guo - Nov 3, 2011 / natsheriff - Nov 3, 2011
|Ielts topic_Trying to save endangered animal is a waste of valuable resource
2 - Despite the undeniable cost of money and resource it may brought to in protecting them , IS NOT UNDERSTANDABLE...
Writing Feedbackwxq198820 - Nov 3, 2011 / soshianet - Nov 4, 2011
|"Some pig!" (the power of language frames)
2 - ...Charlotte's Web by E. B. White is a children's book ->(I think that) a typical book for children (is...
Writing Feedbackb357 - Nov 3, 2011 / dinhquangthinh - Nov 4, 2011
|To Cheat or not to Cheat?
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|Second Lang Acquisition Position Statement (how do we learn 1st and 2nd lang?)
Writing FeedbackPrinnyS04 - Nov 2, 2011 / iamzj - Nov 6, 2011
|Work and travel become new trend for youngsters these days.
NEW - In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and...
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|Private schools are better than public schools. "storytellers"
2 - also books, which Moreover, almost develop the educational system Gradually, schools dividesinto two groups choose a type of An...
Writing Feedbackaraikin - Nov 2, 2011 / soshianet - Nov 2, 2011
|Higher education is an indispensable part of today's society;Purpose of University Ed
2 - Students gain not only the necessary knowledge for their future careers, but also the life skills that are inevitably...
Writing Feedbackengnoob - Nov 1, 2011 / EF_Susan - Nov 7, 2011
|international sport events play a significant role in decreasing tensions..
3 - International sport events play a significant role in decreasing tensions.. FOOTBALL IS THE MOST POPULAR GAME AND PLAYED SIGNIFICANT...
Writing Feedbacksoraya - Nov 1, 2011 / SHAHFAHAD - Nov 23, 2011
|Knowledge is more significant. Experience refers to a direct contact, often comes after a long time.
Writing Feedbacksoshianet - Nov 1, 2011 / soshianet - Nov 4, 2011
|Things that people find boring and do not like to do can be required for them or benefit them. TOEFL
3 - I think it is better use this style in your writing: Introduction -> consider two different side of...
Writing Feedbackandy314 - Nov 1, 2011 / abc1400 - Nov 6, 2011
|Favorite Ride at Amusement Park and my Approach to Life
Writing Feedbackrifatmursalin - Oct 31, 2011 / blynnleon - Oct 31, 2011
|'The life lessons that I learned in Mr. Chaney's class' - Intellectual Development
Writing Feedbackcstephanie41 - Oct 31, 2011 / cstephanie41 - Oct 31, 2011
|'Baby Tiger' - Analyzing an Advertisement
2 - As time goes on, the number of problems faced by conservationists continues to cultivate.---I could definitely be wrong, but...
Writing FeedbackChocodile - Oct 31, 2011 / EF_Susan - Nov 3, 2011
|One man's terrorist is another's freedom fighter
3 - Thanks for the response, I ended up doing well on the overall exam. This was 1 of 4 questions....
Writing Feedbackbrohammer26 - Oct 31, 2011 / brohammer26 - Nov 12, 2011
|Essay about watching someone die. Odd, I know.
4 - My hopefully improved edit: Never would I have thought that the person who has impacted me the most...
Writing Feedbackelijahcrago - Oct 31, 2011 / elijahcrago - Nov 1, 2011
|Rather than help their children do school work parents should encourage their do work
NEW - Since China implements the one child policy, parents are more and more concerned about children's learning. Some parents even...
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|Psychology - my favorite class and reasons
2 - since my early teenage years by Wilhelm Wundt, a Germany scientist goals that psychologists follow human...
Writing Feedbacksarahadams - Oct 31, 2011 / manik1694 - Oct 31, 2011
|Mothers have and will always impact our lives
Writing Feedbackjuliajohnson12 - Oct 31, 2011 / amanda guo - Oct 31, 2011
|Teachers are responsible for motivating students to learn
2 - teachers should know that their behavior has a significant effect on future of their students. One of the...
Writing Feedbackabedkh - Oct 30, 2011 / krisnix - Oct 31, 2011
|why more school leavers unable find a job?
NEW - After they complete their studies, some students are unable to find jobs that would be a common phenomenon in...
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|'we should live a life of better quality'; high-paying with long working hours or not?
Writing Feedbackcelijy - Oct 30, 2011 / celijy - Oct 31, 2011
|The Cause I Believe In - Uphold Peace
NEW - "If you wish to experience peace, provide peace for another." Mahatma Gandhi. Peace is not something you own;...
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|TOEFL- Sometimes a situation demands people to do thing they do not like!
2 - The topic you chose to write on was extraordinarily awesome. You could do so much better under this topic...
Writing Feedbackmonamona - Oct 29, 2011 / Iridescent - Oct 29, 2011
|4. A government's role is only to provide defense capability and urban infrastructure
2 - high- quality labor some might want to pursuitpursue highest educations, whereas others are satisfied with only a university degree....
Writing Feedbackthanhomenh_nq99 - Oct 29, 2011 / soshianet - Nov 1, 2011
|Different countries, different work settings
2 - Hi Michelle! You have a great dream to long for, you realize the necessity of how you can study...
Writing FeedbackSindthia13 - Oct 28, 2011 / violonc_21 - Oct 31, 2011
|Sat: Creativity is like eating and respiration for people.
Writing Feedbackheba - Oct 28, 2011 / sashnv - Oct 28, 2011
|TOEFL:The expression "Never, never give up"
4 - Hi; Indeed, development is the most important purpose of human, such as develop in medicine, technology, and so on....
Writing Feedbacksoshianet - Oct 28, 2011 / bahareh - Oct 31, 2011
|GRE:Educationors should dissuade students from pursuing fields unlikely to succeed.
5 - thanks for your advice my friend! I appreciate it more than I could say :P Your answer is kinda...
Writing Feedbackdaliqin - Oct 28, 2011 / daliqin - Nov 1, 2011
|'Men and women are not equally suited for the same tasks' - GRE ANALYTICAL WRITING
Writing Feedbackgre_nov - Oct 28, 2011 / gre_nov - Oct 28, 2011
|discuss upsetting or controversial problems by text-messaging OR voice-messaging?
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|'congratulations by FTMS to all graduates' - Press Release
NEW - Example Press Release Congratulations to the FTMS College Graduates who have successfully completed their studies and was awarded...
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|historical women in US history
2 - "No matter where you are around the world" "no matter where you are" "no matter" change those first...
Writing Feedbacksarahadams - Oct 27, 2011 / NeonGhost - Oct 27, 2011
|European people spent most on the basic needs like food, drinks and tobacco
NEW - Hello. Please help me check whether emphasized words and underlined phrases and sentences are written in proper ways. Thank...
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|SAT essay: Do incidents from the past continue to influence the present?
3 - Thank you for your feedback Nityaa. :) The sentence in the first paragraph, "it is not hard to...
Writing FeedbackLily Rose - Oct 27, 2011 / Lily Rose - Oct 29, 2011
|'education is the backbone of success' - personal essay
2 - What is the question you are responding to? I feel that the premise is maybe a bit too pedestrian...
Writing Feedbacksarahadams - Oct 26, 2011 / AussieTechie - Oct 29, 2011
|Balance the balance of freedom and responsibility
3 - Really good essay (: One's most precious thing in life is freedom. Freedom cannot exist only by...
Writing Feedbackwangyida - Oct 26, 2011 / anisemc - Oct 29, 2011
|'The only factor in grading should be examinations?' - toefl writing
2 - I find your essay great, your meaning about 'The only factor in grading should be examinations?'is total clear. Your...
Writing Feedbackmakme - Oct 26, 2011 / Sindthia13 - Oct 28, 2011
|TOEFL_Some prefer to work for a company, some prefer to work for themselves.
Writing Feedbackmonamona - Oct 26, 2011 / soshianet - Oct 26, 2011
|Are people overly influenced by misleading images? Score my SAT essay:
3 - The question is more about intentional deception, which is why the examples of business leaders and advertisers were used....
Writing FeedbackDanny154 - Oct 26, 2011 / fiametta00 - Nov 12, 2011
|IELTS ESSAY: Invention of A New International Language. Advantages & Disadvantages.
Writing FeedbackGinwo - Oct 25, 2011 / mursel - Nov 23, 2011
|CLEP 30 min. Practice Essay: Colleges need to have a mandatory core curriculum...
3 - Thanks for the input, EF_Susan! I actually saw those mistakes, but not during the 30 minutes so I...
Writing Feedbackultramanjones - Oct 24, 2011 / ultramanjones - Oct 26, 2011
|"Love" - essay on the reflection of the notion/idea of love
3 - artists draw and , paint and sculpt I wouldn't spend large amounts of time with someone and ,...
Writing Feedbackscarlet67 - Oct 24, 2011 / Chigozie - Oct 26, 2011
|Do you think it is the good idea for a student to have a part time job?
4 - Hi Nowaday is wrong should writ nowadays . Also it is better to separate your paragraphs. Best wish...
Writing Feedbackshinbonis - Oct 24, 2011 / monamona - Oct 26, 2011
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