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|IELTS,ESSAYSome people think that museums should entertain people
2 - They hide many important things and these are invaluable information should be cater tofor the general public. --------------- the...
Writing Feedbackjaijagadeesh - May 3, 2012 / dumi - May 3, 2012
|IELTS TOPIC: Technology Vs Relationships ; Is this positive or negative?
NEW - IELTS TOPIC: In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? has this become a positive...
Writing Feedbacksansuki - May 3, 2012 / — -
|I prefer moving in search of a better place, rather than staying in one place
NEW - Question: Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives,...
Writing Feedbacksushiking - May 3, 2012 / — -
|TOEFL essay - Banning smoking in public areas and office buildings is good or bad?
3 - Thanks for your comments :) Certainly, I still face problems in choosing the appropriate expression in my essay. Perhaps...
Writing Feedbackll931110 - May 3, 2012 / ll931110 - May 3, 2012
|Ielts Task 2-should government spend money on saving languages
2 - Nowadays,nearly no country is immune fromto the problem of the extinction of some languages.--------------- immune means "protected by inoculation"...
Writing Feedbacklynnyang - May 3, 2012 / dumi - May 3, 2012
|'Finding my Mother' - TITLE BASED ON "A MEMORABLE DAY"
3 - I was not aware that posting my essay online to recieve help and feedback was considered plaigarism. I was...
Writing Feedbacknegon503 - May 3, 2012 / negon503 - May 17, 2012
|Essay on how to be culturally competent (applies to nurses too)
2 - Hi, your writing is quite good.It is imperative to understand background of patient before commencing treatment.However first we should...
Writing Feedbackjb3896 - May 3, 2012 / jaijagadeesh - May 3, 2012
|The Dangers of Obesity in the United States
2 - Mainly throughout your essay, you just wrote facts about obesity rates in America. I think you need to include...
Writing Feedbackbrown159 - May 2, 2012 / PandaGirl - May 3, 2012
|Does the Crazy Horse Memorial Exploit or Preserve History - Feedback
3 - Dear Felicite, I too agree with Melissa... good job and really interesting piece of writing !!!!!!!...
Writing Feedbackhardyjoe - May 2, 2012 / dumi - May 4, 2012
|The use of internet should be institutionalized in a community
Writing FeedbackRosylife - May 2, 2012 / lynnyang - May 3, 2012
|IELTS: Nuclear technology: Advantages and its risk
2 - I am a bit confused for your 2nd and 3rd paragraphs based on your conclusion, "nuclear are very powerful...
Writing Feedbackdiksu - May 2, 2012 / lynnyang - May 5, 2012
|Persuasive essay for same sex marriage, The Non-Issue essay
3 - Thanks! (:...
Writing FeedbackAllyCatt - May 1, 2012 / AllyCatt - May 2, 2012
|SHOULD PARENTS BE ABLE TO DISCIPLINE-ARGUEMENTATIVE essay
NEW - It is my opinion that spanking as a form of discipline is acceptable. It is a parent's responsibility to...
Writing Feedbackdulce_mami - May 1, 2012 / — -
|IELTS: What are some important qualities of a good supervisor(boss)?
NEW - IELTS: What are some important qualities of a good supervisor ( boss )? Use specific details and examples to...
Writing Feedbacksushiking - May 1, 2012 / — -
|'Learning process' - learning by yourself to learning with a teacher? [Toefl]
Writing FeedbackBabayan - May 1, 2012 / Bahrom_4474 - May 1, 2012
|Argumentative Essay : Animals should never be kept in cages.
3 - Thank you for your time, well i wrote that to try and emphasize on the fact that animals should...
Writing FeedbackTranslucent504 - May 1, 2012 / Translucent504 - May 1, 2012
|People at work; job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing
5 - Hi, The question has two parts: As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work,...
Writing Feedbacksharadarige - May 1, 2012 / ah_zafari - May 4, 2012
|When in Rome do as Romans Do. To what extent you agree or disagree?
2 - Some proverbs have roots in our childhood.In other words,people grow with them.When in Rome do as Romans do is...
Writing Feedbackparulsinha008 - Apr 30, 2012 / moravej44 - May 4, 2012
|Ethical Dilemma: 12 survivors in a shelter and 5 must leave. Who shall go?
Writing FeedbackImperialexile - Apr 30, 2012 / Imperialexile - May 2, 2012
|'Country history' - people visit museums when they travel to new places
NEW - Since the purposes of building a museum are to provide information about a culture, historical length and people, it...
Writing FeedbackMai Chu - Apr 30, 2012 / — -
|Education, The world's most powerful tool
7 - I was glad to help. I love helping others. I am really happy that you scored good! Please help...
Writing FeedbackNajah1987 - Apr 30, 2012 / kusanagi1981 - May 12, 2012
|TOEFL;MONEY matters a lot,So I agree it is the most important aspect of a job!
3 - Okay...! Now I got it. You have explained each and every point very well. No more questions:) All...
Writing Feedbackana_p - Apr 29, 2012 / ana_p - May 1, 2012
|IELTS: Impact of cooking subject
3 - Hi, I personally liked your essay. The ideas were good and appropriate . Good job, but I think for...
Writing FeedbackScientiana - Apr 29, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 30, 2012
|Rational about creative arts
2 - Good Job! I made some revisions. Secondly, Children (children) expand and deepen their understandings through multiple, hands-on experiences with...
Writing Feedbacknouf - Apr 29, 2012 / maria88 - May 2, 2012
|It's natural for everyone not to be able to think out of the box and take risks in the first place.
2 - Good essay! However, is this a problem and solutions essay type? Please write all words in your topic. Your...
Writing FeedbackRosylife - Apr 29, 2012 / Scientiana - Apr 29, 2012
|TPO 2 - 'telling the truth is indispensable in our daily life'
2 - [/b] Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Always telling the truth is the most important consideration...
Writing FeedbackYunfeng - Apr 29, 2012 / TFox - Apr 30, 2012
|Studying English with a private tutor is more helpful than studying in English class.
2 - Hi trang, 1. I would suggest that, you can start your essay by mentioning your opinion such as,...
Writing Feedbacktrang - Apr 28, 2012 / ana_p - Apr 28, 2012
|'make friends more easily?' - Persuasive essay for school uniforms
Writing Feedbackskye_malyn - Apr 28, 2012 / skye_malyn - Apr 29, 2012
|Playing Outdoor Sports - Essay - Help
3 - Hi Narrendran, I would suggest that, arrange your essay in a proper format such as introduction paragraph, main...
Writing Feedbacknarrendran5 - Apr 28, 2012 / ana_p - Apr 28, 2012
|Refections of my first week on school ( traning)
Writing Feedbacknouf - Apr 28, 2012 / nouf - Apr 28, 2012
|Both - the traditional and the international music brings people together.
Writing Feedbackxitrona - Apr 28, 2012 / xitrona - May 2, 2012
|To what extent should university courses be geared to the economic needs of society?
2 - In some countries, governments mandate to tailor education to society's needs which has sparked much controversy among different social...
Writing FeedbackSaidakhror - Apr 27, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 2, 2012
|education system to the development of a country
3 - First of all, policies of development and management of the government critically affect to the prosperity of a country...
Writing Feedbackloandinh - Apr 27, 2012 / sushiking - May 4, 2012
|"Many people visit museums when they travel to new places"; HISTORY
5 - hey thanks:)...
Writing Feedbackana_p - Apr 27, 2012 / ana_p - Apr 29, 2012
|TOEFL Essay "Learning new things should always be fun"
4 - Hey thanks for the corrections. Eighth standard means when I was in eighth class in school. I did silly...
Writing Feedbackana_p - Apr 27, 2012 / ana_p - Apr 28, 2012
|Discussion essay about the effect of tourism over culture
Writing FeedbackQuynhTrang - Apr 27, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 29, 2012
|CHCI essay: ss an issue,its effects,and possible solution
NEW - "Hey, Jose can you help me with this problem I don't understand the process of getting the solution?" "Claro...
Writing Feedbackunpredictable15 - Apr 26, 2012 / — -
|SAT ESSAY: "Is it better to be underrated than to be overrated"
Writing FeedbackVo Hong thuong - Apr 26, 2012 / sharadarige - May 1, 2012
|'Music is a great way of communication' - my essay
6 - Music is a great way of communication and people all over the world listen to the music of other...
Writing Feedbackhakan - Apr 26, 2012 / loandinh - Apr 27, 2012
|TOEFL Essay " Watching television is a waste of time"
NEW - Do you agree with the following statement? Watching television is a waste of time. Use specific reasons and examples...
Writing Feedbackana_p - Apr 26, 2012 / — -
|IELTS topic: Increase in retiring age-agree or disagree
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Apr 26, 2012 / ah_zafari - May 3, 2012
|'There is no best teacher, only the best lesson' - parents the best teachers?
3 - My? Parents are the personspeople who have great affecteffcectto shape myon my characteristics andmy thinking. They teach me a...
Writing FeedbackKaitou - Apr 26, 2012 / mwskwong - May 3, 2012
|"We need to increase the funding for the movie" - ARGUMENT ESSAY FOR GRE
2 - The argument stated here, in my opinion, is seriously flawed. It makes alot of claims which are baseless. There...
Writing Feedbacku1b604 - Apr 26, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 26, 2012
|'NOT taking away all their civil rights and basic neccesities' ISSUE ESSAY
NEW - TOPIC: A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil...
Writing Feedbacku1b604 - Apr 26, 2012 / — -
|Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world.
3 - I think you've really done a good job except for some unnatural expressions. For example, I think...
Writing Feedbacksharadarige - Apr 26, 2012 / Yunfeng - Apr 27, 2012
|Consequences of Media Violence - What psychological science tells about bad effects?
NEW - What are the consequences of media violence? Communicate to your audience why they should care about this issue, what...
Writing Feedbackdtd514 - Apr 25, 2012 / — -
|The advantages of globalization are still superior to disadvantages?
NEW - Topic: even though globalization affects the world's economics in a very positive way, its negative side should not be...
Writing Feedbackloandinh - Apr 25, 2012 / — -
|'telling truth is a virtual and important in any relationship' - essay
NEW - Truth is something that not be modified. Telling the truth is always a big decision to make for everyone...
Writing Feedbacksisashin - Apr 25, 2012 / — -
|SAT Essay : Strive to better themselves or accept who they are and what they have ?
4 - Thank you for your opinion about my essay. You are right that my crucial proplem is that I do...
Writing Feedbackhvnguyen1311 - Apr 25, 2012 / kimuratakuya - Apr 29, 2012
|We never know the value of water until the well is dry
Writing FeedbackBahrom_4474 - Apr 25, 2012 / Bahrom_4474 - Apr 26, 2012
|IELTS task2: Sould government allocate more budget to some special subjects?
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Apr 25, 2012 / ah_zafari - May 8, 2012
|IELTS Topic :Overpopulation is causing problem in poor and developed both nations
2 - Hi; some of the sentences are run off, and needed to be changed. for example, Firstly, dramatic increased population,...
Writing Feedbackdiksu - Apr 25, 2012 / bahareh - Apr 25, 2012
|We should recognize the valuable information and eject the junk one
Writing FeedbackYunfeng - Apr 24, 2012 / ana_p - Apr 27, 2012
|My opnion is that smoking should be banned in public places
3 - I agree with Susan, it all looks great, just be sure you are persuading the reader one way or...
Writing FeedbackJVE - Apr 24, 2012 / faithcarson - Apr 25, 2012
|Toefl; universities should provide an internship or educational work for students.
Writing Feedbackbahareh - Apr 24, 2012 / ana_p - Apr 27, 2012
|Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel better in apartment
2 - Hi, in general your essay looks good. I have some suggestions that I mentioned them as follow: With the...
Writing Feedbacksharadarige - Apr 24, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 24, 2012
|Is playing computer games by youngsters a good or a bad thing?
2 - The twenty first century brings a gradual shift away... This first sentence makes sense but in my opinion, is...
Writing FeedbackSaidakhror - Apr 24, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 25, 2012
|Gambling assessment tool
4 - Hi, I am really concerned about the purpose of writing this essay. Is it for IELTS or TOEFL?? If...
Writing FeedbackJeecee - Apr 24, 2012 / frank1992 - Apr 30, 2012
|Flipping Useless Land into a Parking Lot
Writing Feedbackhaitham - Apr 24, 2012 / u1b604 - Apr 26, 2012
|Informative essay on How to improve writing skill?
2 - ... Because of this, I improved my writing skill by exercising some of the following steps. ...I also know...
Writing Feedbackbarbiegirl - Apr 24, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 25, 2012
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