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|IELTS: How to Allocate Government Expenditure
4 - yes, "on the weekend" is correct then again, you could take part of the sentence out too, and that...
Writing Feedbackwangshushu21 - Oct 12, 2011 / beccalevesque - Oct 12, 2011
|TOEFL - I believe that every businessman should do anything to make a profit
3 - Thank you for your comment. I agree with you about the word "populated", but I think the sentence...
Writing Feedbackargentum - Oct 12, 2011 / argentum - Oct 12, 2011
|essay about women opportunities
4 - First, in the past women used to only be the house maker. Women nurture their house and children in...
Writing FeedbackNMS - Oct 12, 2011 / Editor1010 - Oct 12, 2011
|'Stress is a serious problem' - Ielts task
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|Having good co-workers - TOEFL Exam
5 - Merely google, searching by using the topic (question) of TOEFL or IELST you will find many sample essays. ...
Writing Feedbackshinju - Oct 11, 2011 / engstu - Oct 20, 2011
|computer have negative effects on children. agree or disagree??
Writing Feedbackdheyce08 - Oct 11, 2011 / wraithseeker - Oct 18, 2011
|IELTS: How should the visitors and the host country deal with cultural differences?
4 - letho7990 Thank you for your suggestions. How should write the introduction? should i state each of the...
Writing Feedbacksmilectt - Oct 11, 2011 / smilectt - Oct 12, 2011
|Informal learning and childrean teaching
2 - Hell there, what is this all about? The first two sentences are good, and in this one I would...
Writing Feedbackdapatel - Oct 11, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Oct 15, 2011
|'a teacher should not only focuss on teaching' - IELTS
3 - Thank you very much for the information. I do really get the input especially the usage of 'should'. Thanks....
Writing Feedbackdianalpy - Oct 11, 2011 / dianalpy - Oct 11, 2011
|Causes and solutions to problems with student bad behaviour-ielts task2
NEW - Please help me improve this writing. Give me some comments and a score if possible. Thank you very much!...
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|Ietls7 - positive environment for children grow up (people with talents)
2 - This , however, has blinded people to the factthink that othersanybody can make quicker progress towardin ...
Writing Feedbackletho7990 - Oct 10, 2011 / dumi - Oct 11, 2011
|'Juliet states that Romeo invited her to dinner' - essay of the "to be" verb
NEW - Juliet states that Romeo invited her to dinner on a particular day though she does not keep a journal...
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|Get the most important characteristics of a society by studying its cities?
NEW - GRE - To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities. Is it...
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|When I grow up, I realize that the importance of politeness should be emphasized to a extent
Writing Feedbackrichard35568 - Oct 10, 2011 / richard35568 - Oct 11, 2011
|Pros and cons of raising fees in universities
3 - You should write about how it affects you as your own thoughts and not talk about how it will...
Writing Feedbackbeepro21 - Oct 10, 2011 / sally9216 - Oct 10, 2011
|'Who is Martin Luther King?' my research essay for Eng Comp.
2 - This is a really good start. Try using some more active verbs rather than "to be" verbs. "Before taking...
Writing FeedbackMayDo - Oct 10, 2011 / alexxlen - Oct 11, 2011
|TOEFL - Watching television broadcast - 'fertile land of numerous shows'
Writing FeedbackDande - Oct 10, 2011 / dumi - Oct 11, 2011
|More and more people are spending money on their pets, despite other expenses
NEW - Really appreciate that if you have time to correct my essay! Thx! /More and more people are spending...
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|'She cares about our feelings' -the best teacher i ever had
5 - When some of my classmates cannot pay their school's fees on timebecause of some money's problemdue to financial constraints...
Writing Feedbackagirl need help - Oct 9, 2011 / dumi - Oct 13, 2011
|TOEFL essay - Cars enslave us rather than liberate us?
4 - Cars now seem to have made our livelife easier and more convenient. Nevertheless, in my opinion, more cars...
Writing Feedbacknguyendinhtuong - Oct 9, 2011 / dumi - Oct 10, 2011
|o levels: narrative a story in which an interview is important
2 - I think this is definitely a strong narrative and will fulfill the prompt of a narrative essay. I think...
Writing Feedbackmrfrank - Oct 9, 2011 / Leah_Writer - Oct 12, 2011
|IELTS: Discussion on whether the huge salary of the sports professionals is fair
Writing Feedbacksmilectt - Oct 9, 2011 / smilectt - Oct 11, 2011
|First essay for TOEFL - What recent news story has affected you the most?
6 - a normal person ---> an ordinary person all important persons ---> all important people said beautiful words about Jobs...
Writing Feedbackpeterwhite - Oct 9, 2011 / argentum - Oct 9, 2011
|Some people want to eat at home, some not. 'in the restaurant is too expensive'
Writing Feedbackholyboy46 - Oct 9, 2011 / mouna456 - Oct 10, 2011
|TOEFL-Whether or not borrowing money from friends is good.
2 - a couple of reasons Not only does borrowing money from friends test the true friendship, it also offers...
Writing FeedbackDande - Oct 9, 2011 / CarmenCM - Oct 9, 2011
|My memory of my room-Second Home, Here
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|'In Hong-Kong diversity is nothing more than a mixture of identities' Rutgers
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|The best way to learn about a foreign country is to read its newspapers and magazines
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|Make a point about a special keepsake you have reminding you of a significant person
2 - The necklace my grandmother gave me is important because she gave to me before she died. When I...
Writing Feedbackhellokittyque - Oct 8, 2011 / EF_Susan - Oct 10, 2011
|'The perceived greatness of any political leader' - GRE Essay
3 - While I agree with what Leah West has said about your writing, I think the focus of your essay...
Writing Feedbacksonutulsiani - Oct 8, 2011 / dumi - Oct 12, 2011
|'Heer - Ranja' - immortal love story
5 - a very fine introspection into love, indeed thought provoking. the way u expressed it was very nice btw...:)....
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Oct 8, 2011 / abhikuravi - Nov 6, 2011
|(Nodame Cantabile) - My movie presentation exercise
Writing Feedbackdoris lee - Oct 8, 2011 / doris lee - Nov 16, 2011
|'a time when a friend defended you in difficult circumstances' - narrative essay
Writing Feedbackmrfrank - Oct 8, 2011 / mrfrank - Oct 9, 2011
|An argumentative essay on technology world.
2 - "I it is also easy for teachers to average grades and keeps track of them" "Facebook and its advantaged"...
Writing Feedbackotiliagmercado - Oct 8, 2011 / mrfrank - Oct 9, 2011
|Intensive Agriculture Impact on Earth - destructive agriculture
Writing Feedbacklowryder49 - Oct 7, 2011 / lowryder49 - Oct 17, 2011
|IELTS: Museums VS Computers
4 - thank you...
Writing FeedbackRachellsea - Oct 7, 2011 / Rachellsea - Oct 9, 2011
|working experience;Every student should travel or work being going to university
3 - they haven't received it before ---> they have not received it before (never abbreviate in formal writings, except it...
Writing FeedbackVa_lencia - Oct 7, 2011 / argentum - Oct 9, 2011
|IELTS2 WHAT DO ART TELL ABOUT LIFE THAT SCIENCE DO NOT?
NEW - The advancement of science and technology has positive impact, but arts like music and painting are also important. What...
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|'What you've got to know about RTHK' - Is my essay clear enough?
2 - RTHK is perhaps a monopoly of broadcasting channel with a focus on radio broadcasting in Hong Kong. however...
Writing Feedbackscarlettrose - Oct 6, 2011 / Va_lencia - Oct 7, 2011
|About my first day in america and my longest and happiest day of life
4 - You need to check spelling. You should also check your grammar usage. Definietly go over this sentence- agarry in...
Writing Feedbackhadia - Oct 6, 2011 / buddybuddy1 - Oct 9, 2011
|'No concern for talents' - to succeed, be more like others rather than be different
Writing Feedbackbahareh - Oct 6, 2011 / bahareh - Oct 8, 2011
|'An adventure to me' the advantages and disadvantages of living in a foreign country?
3 - Hi Ve_lencia; Your essay has a briefly introduction which contains two question,and I think it would be better if...
Writing FeedbackVa_lencia - Oct 6, 2011 / bahareh - Oct 6, 2011
|'My grandma's house' - your favorite places or scenes - descriptive essay
NEW - we had to write a descriptive essay for english class, i struggled with this essay. If anyone has any...
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|governments waste millions of workers' dollars each year their space programs.
Writing Feedbacksoroush - Oct 5, 2011 / soroush - Oct 30, 2011
|"The Ultimate Coach" - Descriptive essay about my soccer coach
NEW - Can you please help me check for grammar, spelling etc. ? The Ultimate Coach It was my second...
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|Descripitive Paragraph: Christmas Time / Holiday Cheer
2 - Holiday cheer is infectious and warm, with the smell of cookies, gingerbread men, and hot cocoadance aroundfilling the house,...
Writing FeedbackGranger17 - Oct 5, 2011 / EF_Susan - Oct 6, 2011
|IELTS- letter of complaint: my dissatisfaction about the mobile phone
2 - For this letter, a list of the defectiveness of the mobile phone would be needed. This way, a point...
Writing FeedbackiCan - Oct 5, 2011 / Alexxiscensored - Oct 7, 2011
|'social perception development' children learn how to be good members of society
Writing Feedbackletho7990 - Oct 4, 2011 / letho7990 - Oct 8, 2011
|How far mankind has come from its previous, simpler way of living
Writing FeedbackcitingKylah - Oct 4, 2011 / Rajiv - Oct 10, 2011
|ielts : How does position of women influence society?
2 - Indeed,the human rights have changed the roles and responsibilities of women in th ... awareness about human rights...
Writing Feedbacksobin - Oct 4, 2011 / isqun1 - Oct 4, 2011
|a serious and strict teacher is more effective than a teacher with humor?
Writing Feedbackrichard35568 - Oct 4, 2011 / richard35568 - Oct 6, 2011
|Toefl: A person look and dress is more important for success than having good idea.
Writing FeedbackNamnam - Oct 4, 2011 / Enlightenus - Oct 5, 2011
|TOE- 'Revolution' - a historical event in your country that had a crucial effect?
3 - Yes~ I want to ask same question as basawang`s. Even if you write well, because you didn`t mention what...
Writing Feedbackmonamona - Oct 4, 2011 / Namnam - Oct 4, 2011
|Toefl Grades based solely on exams or participation during classes.
Writing Feedbackziya - Oct 4, 2011 / ziya - Oct 4, 2011
|IELTS 2. Should government control scientific research .
3 - I suppose it is better to avoid using To put in nutshell in academic writing it is informal. Use...
Writing FeedbackBINUDANIEL - Oct 3, 2011 / monamona - Oct 12, 2011
|a teacher should be strict or easygoing?
Writing FeedbackHEBELONG - Oct 3, 2011 / HEBELONG - Oct 5, 2011
|'had no regrets coming to Six Flags' - opinion essay
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|I would like to thank an Anonymous Hero (Ms. B. Phares)
2 - Wow, this is really heartfelt. I can tell you mean every word you're saying, and that's especially important in...
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|Life is wonderful. Isn't it?
Writing FeedbackAnna Phuan - Oct 3, 2011 / BunyodBek - Oct 15, 2011
|IELTS - Investment For a Nation's Future
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