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|IELTS topic. Smoking tobacco, like other dangerous drugs, should be made illegal.
4 - How about video games, the Internet, coffee, or sweets? All of these can be 'addicting and killing habit'...
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Apr 8, 2012 / EF_Team - Apr 11, 2012
|A wonderful trip with new experience (Toronto / Global village)
Writing Feedbackjaijagadeesh - Apr 8, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 13, 2012
|The Meaning of Silence- a research project
NEW - This is supposed to be a research project on The Meaning of Silence. 20 marks goes to the structure...
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|'a 80 years old widow had won five million dollars' - lucky person essay
3 - Hi Jeecee, Your passage is very interesting. It stimulates my thoughts and I really like it! By...
Writing FeedbackJeecee - Apr 7, 2012 / peterc - Apr 8, 2012
|IELTS; Problem with tutoring job/ issue with part-time job
4 - Hi jaijagadeesh, You have an affluent set of vocabularies. I've learnt so much from you... thank you very...
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Apr 7, 2012 / peterc - Apr 8, 2012
|IELTS (no country can progress without the co-operation of other countries)
Writing FeedbackJiya - Apr 7, 2012 / Jiya - Apr 8, 2012
|IELTS topic. Modern society benefits greatly from computer technology.
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Apr 7, 2012 / y0_3mma - Apr 8, 2012
|"Education is the key to success" discuss your view about this.
3 - I think your ideas and how you organize your essay is good. But you should concentrate about paraphase and...
Writing FeedbackYangTeng - Apr 7, 2012 / icez - Apr 12, 2012
|What is happiness? Why is it difficult to define?
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Apr 7, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 7, 2012
|The life in Perth
2 - I have lived in Perth since I arrived. I have studied English at the Curtin University for two weeks...
Writing Feedbackissaouy - Apr 6, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 9, 2012
|Essay on what shoud mass media broadcast on TV?
NEW - Mass media undoubtedly plays an important and crucial role in our diurnal life. All the various segments of the...
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|'Everyone considers that the perfect job is..' - essay
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|IELTS: Citizen's responsibilities
5 - You should try to strengthen your 2nd paragraph. Add examples to convince the readers....otherwise its a nice work...
Writing FeedbackScientiana - Apr 5, 2012 / Nitish - Apr 10, 2012
|'decline of care and concern for the high need-school' position with teach charlotte
NEW - I am applying for a position with teach charlotte and I have to complete a short essay for the...
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|'End of the world 2012' - my research writing
Writing FeedbackTimmy102 - Apr 5, 2012 / stn0795 - Apr 9, 2012
|Houston is not a Best Place to Visiting - essay
Writing Feedbackstn0795 - Apr 5, 2012 / stn0795 - Apr 9, 2012
|KEEPING ANIMALS INSIDE ZOOS; DISCUSS
Writing Feedbacksharadarige - Apr 5, 2012 / hafidgg - Apr 5, 2012
|IELTS: Teenager or adult years are the happiest?
2 - one thing i felt is paragraphi should be long enough and explained as much as possible one or two...
Writing FeedbackScientiana - Apr 4, 2012 / sharadarige - Apr 5, 2012
|Schools should decide whether they continue with School Uniforms ; Persuasive Paper
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|Essay - Street knowledge vs. book knowledge
Writing Feedbackicez - Apr 4, 2012 / icez - Apr 14, 2012
|'the head of English language Panel' - important event in my life
Writing Feedbacktinie - Apr 3, 2012 / tinie - Apr 4, 2012
|('my strong curiosity in computer..') - pragraph more beautiful and functional?
4 - Hi , i think you are writing a statment of purpose to get an admission. SOP should represnt about...
Writing Feedbacksherxon - Apr 3, 2012 / sharadarige - Apr 18, 2012
|Comparison/Contrast of paintings depicting the conquest of Jericho
4 - I haven't found this website to be unnecessarily banning people. I've been here less than one month and have...
Writing Feedbackgillygilly - Apr 3, 2012 / chalumeau - Apr 3, 2012
|sat essay: Do people succeed by emphasizing their difference from others?
Writing Feedbackkimuratakuya - Apr 3, 2012 / kimuratakuya - Apr 3, 2012
|FEATURE ARTICLE- Culture Shock
2 - I have attached my comments about the lead paragraph. Let me know what you think. Some questions for...
Writing FeedbackPraiseYou - Apr 2, 2012 / chalumeau - Apr 3, 2012
|'Nguyen Dinh Chieu Park' - MY FAVORITE PLACE
8 - I'm too bad. I'm Vietnamese but I do not know much about Nguyen Dinh Chieu. Thanks for your essay....
Writing Feedbacknonnon91188 - Apr 2, 2012 / stn0795 - Apr 5, 2012
|'reading fictions is more pleasant' - essay for Toefl
NEW - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more...
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|sat essay:Do highly accomplished people achieve more because they expect more?
NEW - Currently, people tend to regard the unsatisfied will to achieve more as the source of their unhapiness and frustration,...
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|'death penalty should be reinstated in Canada' - argumentative essay
Writing Feedbackmalibu - Apr 2, 2012 / chalumeau - Apr 3, 2012
|Sat essay: is an idealistic approach less valuable than a practical approach?
Writing Feedbackkimuratakuya - Apr 2, 2012 / Athena - Apr 4, 2012
|IELTS ESSAY "Ban sail of bottled water"
NEW - What is a natural resource that always should be free. Government should bend the sail of bottle water! To...
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|Essay about: Friends I have had
5 - I have a question very important. For what purpose did you write this essay? For some tests or undergraduate...
Writing FeedbackSaid Alwaili - Apr 1, 2012 / kimuratakuya - Apr 10, 2012
|'fading the role of family life in society...' - correct this essay
3 - hi said... your notes are great...thank you... :) ...you are right...this is not a scientific essay with real numbers...
Writing Feedbackrabbasi - Apr 1, 2012 / rabbasi - Apr 2, 2012
|'transportation of fruits and vegetables by air' - Essay
NEW - Some people believe that we should not use air transportation to carry fruits and vegetables. To what extent do...
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|Essay About Me - born in Indonesia
4 - To chalumeau: Well, it should be an application essay, shouldn't it? So some points why to choose this particular...
Writing FeedbackFitri Pratiwi - Apr 1, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 14, 2012
|'children workforce has become popular' - essay help
2 - Many people argue that adults should not encourage children to work by paying them. In my view, this issue...
Writing Feedbackjenk - Apr 1, 2012 / dumi - Apr 1, 2012
|Americas number one killing disease - research essay
4 - ... ... 76&codcch=26 mdanderson.org dana-farber.org/ If I were writing a short research paper, I would...
Writing Feedbacknsfvball - Mar 31, 2012 / chalumeau - Apr 2, 2012
|'Nadie, Como Vai, and Pass the Peas songs' - examine three songs essay
2 - I found this song to be exceptional because ; it blew me away. :) Firstly ,Secondly IN ADDITION,...
Writing Feedbackdiiemnguyen - Mar 31, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 3, 2012
|Many animals and plants are dying out today. What are the causes and solutions
2 - Many animals and plants are dying out today. What are the causes and what are your solutions Please...
Writing Feedbackwoyaokaoyasila - Mar 31, 2012 / 15_dreams - Mar 31, 2012
|Nowadays children have too much freedom. Economic problem and self-earning?
4 - Just an idea, The current world moves fast and is materialistic, with prices soaring for the necessities of life;...
Writing Feedbackjaijagadeesh - Mar 31, 2012 / Thors Hammer - Apr 11, 2012
|IELTS: Amount of control on media information
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Mar 31, 2012 / peterc - Apr 8, 2012
|Analyze an Argument for GRE--Riverside Recreational Facilities
6 - Hellow every one.I'm very eager to study the pattern of essay writting?Is there any rules for the five paragraph...
Writing Feedbackchalumeau - Mar 31, 2012 / srtheesa - Apr 10, 2012
|'Childhood obesity has many bad effects on society' - essay
Writing Feedbackjenk - Mar 31, 2012 / jenk - Apr 1, 2012
|'the opportunity to receive education from university' - My essay for Toefl
NEW - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Nowadays it is much easier to achieve success with the...
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|Reasons for the increasing anti-social behavior and the lack of respect to others
2 - You should give your claims on the issue at first , then clearly and throughly explain them in the...
Writing FeedbackWay - Mar 31, 2012 / kimuratakuya - Apr 2, 2012
|'fulfilment is main factor which make people become happy' - IELTS exam
NEW - Topic: Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in...
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|Write a process paragraph of the following topic: " How to study for an exam?"
NEW - If you want to get good results in an exam, you should carry out three steps.Firstly, you should revise...
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|Dealing with first-time offenders and criminals - essay
3 - A million thanks。you give me much help.this essey is getting much better under you instruction.thanks again,have a good day....
Writing Feedbackwoyaokaoyasila - Mar 30, 2012 / woyaokaoyasila - Mar 31, 2012
|Are you too dependent on computers? [Argumentative essay outline + work]
5 - Can you give some statistic to prove your point that we are dependent to computer like how many hours...
Writing FeedbackDen - Mar 30, 2012 / bansmart06 - Apr 6, 2012
|Case Analysis on International Trade Law - Research essay comment
Writing Feedbackbaski - Mar 30, 2012 / sathiprakash - Apr 11, 2012
|'opinions regarding world culture' - essay for TOEFL
Writing Feedbackasdasd - Mar 29, 2012 / peterc - Apr 11, 2012
|'homeschooling offers their children more' - Essay Introduction
4 - I am pretty satisfied with your comment but I was wondering if you could elaborate on providing real examples...
Writing Feedbackmarinesista1989 - Mar 29, 2012 / marinesista1989 - Apr 1, 2012
|Having long hair - Essay - Feedback
Writing FeedbackMaite - Mar 29, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Apr 2, 2012
|Should students be given homework daily?; 'enhancing understanding, awareness'
Writing Feedbacktuongvi - Mar 29, 2012 / tuongvi - Apr 6, 2012
|Should arts-related entertainment venues such as museums and art galleries be free?
2 - Art is a form of expressing one's inner thoughts in the form of music, dance, sculptures, and carvings on...
Writing Feedbacksharadarige - Mar 29, 2012 / EF_Kevin - Apr 2, 2012
|Discuss both views and give your opinion about the advocates of international aid
2 - All things considered, the strength of grant campaigns international aid overwhelms its weaknesses, persuading me to assert operating aid...
Writing Feedbacksinhvienkt - Mar 28, 2012 / Way - Mar 31, 2012
|Reflection Essay on a cognitive-related school activity/event
2 - " Out of the many cognitive-related opportunities I was offered, the two week long overseas learning trip to Cambridge,...
Writing FeedbackLOLL - Mar 28, 2012 / sharadarige - Mar 28, 2012
|IELTS Writing Task 1 - Line Graph (Comparing Upward Trends)
3 - Before the first half of 1998,the own rate of home computer was higher than that of mobile phone. After...
Writing FeedbackDENNISHA - Mar 28, 2012 / woyaokaoyasila - Mar 31, 2012
|Now more and more workplaces are hiring an equal number of women and men.
NEW - Now more and more workplaces are hiring an equal number of women and men. Do you think it is...
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|Essay - Homosexual Parents | Does Sexuality Impact Children?
3 - I just have one question. In the third paragraph, there is the assumption that pressure would create parental awareness....
Writing Feedbackm_d_r_rio - Mar 27, 2012 / kimuratakuya - Apr 2, 2012
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