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|More and more animal species are becoming extince by human activies in land and sea.
4 - @TriceLiu and @Holt Thank you very much for your advice. I look forward to receiving your further advice on...
Writing Feedbackthuhabk - Aug 1, 2018 / thuhabk - Aug 2, 2018
|The population of major cities is rising sharply and continually - evaluate this trend
3 - @HoaBui There is a missing element in your research presentation. You have covered the existing problems and the suggested...
Writing FeedbackHoaBui - Aug 1, 2018 / Holt - Aug 2, 2018
|IELTS Task 2: Printed books vs Electronical books - what brings the future?
5 - Thank you Red Moon, problems with time management. After 40 minutes I have no time at all to double...
Writing FeedbackPaulthePhoenix - Aug 1, 2018 / PaulthePhoenix - Aug 3, 2018
|ESSAY- What can human being do to help stop global warming?
Writing FeedbackRobyn_Chau - Aug 1, 2018 / Robyn_Chau - Aug 1, 2018
|It's a big argument regarding opinion if a part-time job while study at university is worthy or not
4 - @TriceLiu I really thanks for your help. I read it carefully. You gave me some words to describe my...
Writing Feedbacklehuuquyen - Aug 1, 2018 / lehuuquyen - Aug 6, 2018
|A Call to Action Against Pollution Essay. Concerns of the environment.
2 - Ben, your opening paragraph is confusing. What is the actual thesis statement for this essay? What sort of pollution...
Writing FeedbackBenvanhook - Aug 1, 2018 / Holt - Aug 2, 2018
|Overfishing threatens many species with extinction and steals the livelihood of countless people.
Writing Feedbacksweetlife1234321 - Jul 31, 2018 / thuhabk - Aug 1, 2018
|The maps inform about the present changes in the town center of Islip and planned in the future.
2 - Anh, in this analytical report, you should be delivering the following paragraphs in order to meet the expected report...
Writing Feedbacktaat5991 - Jul 31, 2018 / Holt - Aug 1, 2018
|Alternative resources - an effective solution that should be encouraged to use in the near future.
3 - Nguyen, the TA score for this essay will be a 1. That is because you are not properly delivering...
Writing FeedbackNhat Px - Jul 31, 2018 / Holt - Aug 1, 2018
|Smoking is detrimental to the smoker and those who are nearby - smoking ban in public places
2 - Dear Tricie Liu Your essay is neat and thorough with clear structure. However, I would argue that you can...
Writing FeedbackTriceLiu - Jul 31, 2018 / PaulthePhoenix - Aug 1, 2018
|IELTS TASK 2: Discuss both view on whether or not to keep animal in zoo.
4 - Thank you all for your comments. I'm really appreciate your contribution. Hope you all have a good revision...
Writing FeedbackPaulthePhoenix - Jul 31, 2018 / PaulthePhoenix - Aug 1, 2018
|Topic relates with recycling system, could you check up my essay? Is that appropriate?
Writing FeedbackNurislam1404 - Jul 31, 2018 / Nurislam1404 - Aug 2, 2018
|Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately?
5 - @Holt Thank you very much for your help. I'll definitely try my best to write better in the following...
Writing FeedbackQuynh Nguyen - Jul 31, 2018 / Quynh Nguyen - Aug 1, 2018
|The quantity of waste generation in millions of tonnes in six nations during the 1980-2000 period
2 - Moon, your summary just needed the enumeration of the nations included in the table and the comparison type for...
Writing FeedbackRed Moon - Jul 30, 2018 / Holt - Jul 31, 2018
|Children are educated about the right and wrong differentiation, and often by force
3 - Thank you very much for your really great comments. I will try to practice more and hope that you...
Writing FeedbackHoang Dinh - Jul 30, 2018 / Hoang Dinh - Jul 31, 2018
|Air transfer, some people agree and some disagree, discuss both views and give your opinion
2 - Medhi, one of the many problems that your essay possesses is that you did not compose an accurate prompt...
Writing Feedbackimehdisadeghi - Jul 30, 2018 / Holt - Jul 31, 2018
|The two maps depict the land-use changes on an island. IELTS TASK 1
2 - Mia, you wrote a pretty decent comparison report for the images presented. However, by using the proportional scale reference,...
Writing FeedbackMia33109 - Jul 30, 2018 / Holt - Jul 30, 2018
|The line graph represents the measure of elder people aged 65 and over in USA, Sweden and Japan
3 - Here are some of my suggestions: _"Overall, all three countries demonstrate an upward trend" instead of "..show increasing...
Writing Feedbackemilakam - Jul 29, 2018 / Minh2903 - Aug 16, 2018
|The pollution of water in rivers, lakes and seas - Writing task 2 IELTS.
4 - Hey, answer for answer here :) Although you complimented on my writing style, i think yours is also pretty...
Writing Feedbacksillyman2000 - Jul 29, 2018 / hphuc123 - Jul 30, 2018
|IELTS writing 2 - will tax on fuel ease the traffic and pollution?
6 - Hi Smally Nice essay in term of structure and vocab. As the other two pointed out you need to...
Writing Feedbacksmally01 - Jul 29, 2018 / PaulthePhoenix - Aug 1, 2018
|Separate education for disruptive school students?
Writing Feedbackhhtttl13112002 - Jul 29, 2018 / hhtttl13112002 - Jul 30, 2018
|Essay about free transportation 24/7
3 - Kudzai, if you want to really help your friend prepare for the IELTS test then the best thing that...
Writing Feedbackmalvykay - Jul 29, 2018 / Holt - Jul 30, 2018
|Global Water Temper: Effects on Hurricanes - research paper
2 - Mark, you have a tendency to confuse the discussion by presenting unrelated natural disasters such as earthquakes and crime...
Writing Feedbackmnobleb - Jul 29, 2018 / Holt - Jul 30, 2018
|Advantages and disadvantages of having tourists and scientists travel to remote natural environment
4 - @smally01 I'm not sure if you're being somewhat sarcastic, but thanks for the help though :) The data and...
Writing Feedbackhphuc123 - Jul 29, 2018 / hphuc123 - Jul 30, 2018
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - Musical albums purchased in the UK according to sex and age
4 - It's fine Hien. Given in this specific topic with 3 graphs combined into one essay, I think the length...
Writing FeedbackTran Minh Hien - Jul 29, 2018 / PaulthePhoenix - Aug 1, 2018
|The bar graph illustrates the proportion of Australian males and females doing sport exercises IELTS
Writing Feedbackzahranatsir - Jul 28, 2018 / Holt - Jul 30, 2018
|Students should choose fields based on their preferences or just focus on job related subjects?
3 - Hoang, your essay is not responding to the task at all. You are being asked to discuss whether or...
Writing Feedbacksillyman2000 - Jul 28, 2018 / Holt - Jul 30, 2018
|Budget spent on building new fastest train railroad or public transport infrastructure? IELTS 2
2 - HI Indri! i have a few suggestions for your essay. 1. this sentence should be Transportation has already...
Writing FeedbackEkaputri17 - Jul 28, 2018 / zahranatsir - Jul 28, 2018
|Task 2 - Reading books vs. Watching films and television
6 - Thanks @PaulthePhoenix! It's great to know that I should focus on a point in the topic in the case...
Writing Feedbackritanguyen167 - Jul 28, 2018 / ritanguyen167 - Aug 1, 2018
|IELTS TASK 2 - it is good to share as much information, while others think the opposite
3 - Siti, the original prompt clues you into the fact that this is supposed to be a 5 paragraph essay...
Writing Feedbackzahranatsir - Jul 28, 2018 / Holt - Jul 30, 2018
|IELTS task 2: Reason why children play less with others and the effects on their development
4 - Anh, while your vocabulary is impressive, the fact that your paragraphs are not completely developed in terms of reasoning...
Writing FeedbackAnnLee - Jul 28, 2018 / Holt - Jul 30, 2018
|The government should punish young criminals in the same way as mature people.
NEW - Some people believe that young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults....
Writing Feedbackdieuanh0111 - Jul 27, 2018 / — -
|IELTS WRITNG TASK 2: The impact of ageing populations on both individuals and society
Writing FeedbackRed Moon - Jul 27, 2018 / Red Moon - Jul 28, 2018
|IELTS 2: Zoos and Wildlife protection; Is it cruel to keep animals in zoos?
2 - Hi caroline! I have a few suggestions related to your writing. 1. Avoid to use this sentence I...
Writing FeedbackCaroline77 - Jul 27, 2018 / zahranatsir - Jul 27, 2018
|The government ought to prioritize railways as the primary sector to receive funds rather than roads
2 - Siti, I have several points for correction in your essay in this instance. To start, you must try to...
Writing Feedbackzahranatsir - Jul 27, 2018 / Holt - Jul 28, 2018
|Students eager to traveling and earning more money instead of studying continuously
Writing Feedbackngoccamtu323 - Jul 27, 2018 / Holt - Jul 27, 2018
|Essay about Southland's crucial exports in 2000 and predictions for the next years
2 - Please post the chart so that we could help you more :) A few grammatical suggestions: 1. ... 1...
Writing Feedbackthanhphuc2049 - Jul 26, 2018 / TriceLiu - Jul 31, 2018
|The oversea tourist is the reason for causing tension and negative impacts to the country they visit
4 - Bui, you have some major errors in this essay that will automatically garner yo a failing score. The first...
Writing Feedbackphuongbui - Jul 26, 2018 / Holt - Jul 28, 2018
|The majority of UK students speak at least one other language in addition to English
3 - Hello @Holt Thank you so much for the feedback. It's extremely helpful and I'm so glad that I found...
Writing Feedbackmsyoshino - Jul 26, 2018 / msyoshino - Aug 7, 2018
|Statistical information about the underground railway systems in six cities
2 - Hoang, if you take 27 minutes to write one analytical report, you are taking too much time. You only...
Writing Feedbackhphuc123 - Jul 26, 2018 / Holt - Jul 27, 2018
|IELTS WRITING TASK1: ESSAY ABOUT UK BIRTH RATE IN WOMEN AT 6 AGE GROUPS
4 - I think the overall writing is very good, however, you should pay more attention to the plural form, for...
Writing Feedbackvodat1512002 - Jul 26, 2018 / Minh2903 - Aug 6, 2018
|People learn another language because of their linguistic passion, career, journey, migration, etc.
NEW - title: Some people say that the only reason for learning a foregin language is in order to travel to...
Writing Feedbackkhue - Jul 26, 2018 / — -
|What I do in my free time - thinking about my goal
3 - Jhuang, this is more of a statement than an essay. So you should present short but clear sentences Since...
Writing FeedbackSandy047 - Jul 25, 2018 / Holt - Jul 26, 2018
|The society and young people impact on it
3 - Thank you so much for your suggestion, Holt. Those are really helpful! Now I have the direction to work...
Writing Feedbackimprove_writing - Jul 25, 2018 / improve_writing - Jul 26, 2018
|IELTS 2: essay discussed about teaching children, what is good and what is bad for them
3 - Baljeet, you have an unnecessary focus on crime in this discussion. The essay only asks about the degree of...
Writing Feedbackbaljeet12345 - Jul 25, 2018 / Holt - Jul 26, 2018
|Age problem in choosing a leader for an organization
5 - Huynh, this is a single opinion essay. All IELTS Task 2 essays are one sided unless otherwise specified. In...
Writing Feedbacktrangtrang96 - Jul 25, 2018 / Holt - Jul 28, 2018
|The number of university undergraduates and government spending on each of them from 1991 to 2001
2 - Hi @Kimmy9682, I think you should include the chart so we can fully understand the topic requirement, therefore...
Writing FeedbackKimmy9682 - Jul 24, 2018 / trangtrang96 - Jul 24, 2018
|Education for young people is important in many countries. What about illiterate adults?
3 - An Le, for starters, you are not giving the correct response in your thesis statement. Your response is not...
Writing FeedbackANLE1608 - Jul 24, 2018 / Holt - Jul 25, 2018
|In most countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important.
Writing FeedbackTriceLiu - Jul 24, 2018 / TriceLiu - Jul 25, 2018
|The measured rates of weight among residents in the Charlestown
Writing Feedbackhup - Jul 23, 2018 / Holt - Jul 24, 2018
|Developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid
3 - Hoang, the problem you have is that you tend to begin your discussion in the first paragraph when you...
Writing Feedbackhphuc123 - Jul 23, 2018 / Holt - Jul 24, 2018
|Science lessons in school should be more interesting
Writing FeedbackEtheos - Jul 23, 2018 / Holt - Jul 24, 2018
|@IELTS : The beneficial of team sport more than individual sport
2 - Hi @bichnguyen, any chance to post the question as well? From your essay it seem that it is just...
Writing Feedbackbichnguyen - Jul 23, 2018 / smally01 - Jul 23, 2018
|IELTS WRITNG TASK 1: Attendances at hospital emergency care departments
2 - Moon, there is absolutely no way that you will be able to write 222 words in the exam center....
Writing FeedbackRed Moon - Jul 23, 2018 / Holt - Jul 24, 2018
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: WINTER TRAVEL TRENDS IN THE US FROM 1999 TO 2003
Writing Feedbackxdung7292 - Jul 22, 2018 / xdung7292 - Jul 23, 2018
|From the limestone and clay - process of making cement
Writing Feedbackhuyenhuyen69 - Jul 22, 2018 / huyenhuyen69 - Jul 24, 2018
|IELTS 2: music should not be taught in schools instead other subjects such as computers and science
5 - Avoid use this sentence this essay will discuss about ... because it will make the examiner think that...
Writing Feedbackdimdim02 - Jul 22, 2018 / zahranatsir - Jul 27, 2018
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 we have three important parts of education: reading, writing and maths.
4 - you can expand your idea why you agree/disagree in your body paragraphs. for instance, in first body paragraph ,...
Writing Feedbackdoda22 - Jul 22, 2018 / dimdim02 - Jul 23, 2018
|The distribution of tourist to different type of tourist attraction particular in Theme Parks
2 - Please include a picture in your thread or your next message for other people to give you feedback...
Writing Feedbackhuyen1109 - Jul 22, 2018 / hphuc123 - Jul 26, 2018
|IELTS Writing Task 1: Summary on the structure in job market in Great Britain in 1992
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