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|A discussion about two views toward talent
3 - Hi Susan, thank you for the corrections. would you pleas give your idea about the other essay that I...
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Apr 16, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 19, 2012
|IELTS: Advantages and disadvantages of staying away from families.
15 - Your task is to discuss both adv and disadv for both situations. Your passage seems to be focus mostly...
Writing Feedbackalirulez - Apr 16, 2012 / trang - May 7, 2012
|If Yoga is really that good for us , why are there so many injuries
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|History - a real science, or a meaningless waste of students' time?
2 - Thanks very much. As for the explanation of the first sentence - some scientists made a definition of what...
Writing Feedbackgiorgio186 - Apr 15, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 16, 2012
|IELTS TASK 2: About Fatherhood V/S Mother
Writing FeedbackJiya - Apr 15, 2012 / Jiya - Apr 18, 2012
|"The best way to give advice to other people .....attain it.
2 - .I, therefore, firmly believe the notion that yes, we should give the advice to the others, in a way...
Writing Feedbackdolly - Apr 15, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 18, 2012
|The study essay on Insect Entomopathogenic Nematode
Writing Feedbacksahel12 - Apr 15, 2012 / sahel12 - Apr 19, 2012
|IETLS GT 1: Bus problems
3 - Hi Jennyflower81, Thank you for the correction! I think I would focus on essay writing first, as it...
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Apr 15, 2012 / peterc - Apr 15, 2012
|IETLS GT 2: should there be free health services?
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Apr 15, 2012 / peterc - Apr 19, 2012
|'exposed to the ever-accelerated technology' - ielts : an essay written by myself
10 - dear xiang wei, a good essay with newly learnt words/phrases. but i'd love to suggest you to improve your...
Writing Feedbackzhangxiangwei - Apr 15, 2012 / phyu - May 11, 2012
|"Intellectual Journals" Globalization after the Cold War
2 - sorry about that, here's the journals I have so far. I copy pasted it from my Microsoft Word, so...
Writing FeedbackkacieN - Apr 14, 2012 / kacieN - Apr 14, 2012
|Pro Gun Ownership Research essay comments
2 - ...generating the notion that that A weapon is always used for bad ...All non-criminal, law-abiding citizens should have the...
Writing Feedbackearoman - Apr 14, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 17, 2012
|Toulmin Essay "Should Uniform Be Implemented for College Students "
Writing Feedbackleeza - Apr 14, 2012 / leeza - Apr 17, 2012
|'Violence and video games' - My essay on video games
NEW - Violence and video games ENG 102 Royere Jonathan The future of entertainment revolves around technology. Video games become...
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|IELTS Topic: Female Juvenile delinquency
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Apr 14, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 19, 2012
|IELTS topic: Your view of "Pen and Paper" Examination
7 - Hi all, I agree with you, I have prepare another similar question, but chance the content, I will...
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Apr 14, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 21, 2012
|IEITS: topic about adverting for goods
Writing FeedbackANN123 - Apr 14, 2012 / jaijagadeesh - Apr 16, 2012
|Technology has several positive and negative effects on today's world; solution
6 - Technology has become more and more important to human's lives . Therefore, advances in technology has tremendous effects...
Writing Feedbacktram - Apr 14, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 3, 2012
|'I have a wonderful support system' - Planning and reflections Ashford
2 - When I first started online here at Ashford, I was really nervous on how much stuff I had forgotten.and...
Writing Feedbackmissy7779 - Apr 13, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 17, 2012
|Tutoring in Morocco (English language essay)
Writing Feedbackhafidgg - Apr 13, 2012 / hafidgg - Apr 15, 2012
|IELTS Topic: Urban Sprawl: (causes and prediction)
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Apr 13, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 13, 2012
|IELTS Topic:Environmental issues"international Cooperation vs National participation"
7 - Hi Alirulez, I am sending now. big file, takes a while, cheers. This is a reading practice,10 tests,...
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Apr 13, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 14, 2012
|'injustice ruins the peaceful life' - THE INJUSTICE ESSAY
Writing Feedbackhafidgg - Apr 13, 2012 / hafidgg - Apr 14, 2012
|Change in life- Two different opinions.
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Apr 13, 2012 / leeminh - Apr 19, 2012
|IELTS Topic: Same job for a same company VS change job frequently
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Apr 13, 2012 / leeza - Apr 14, 2012
|Broadcast History Essay: Societal Affects from Crime Dramas
2 - hi.i liked your essay and your view is quiet clear,very minor flaws of punctuation.other than that it is impressive....
Writing Feedbackrhearhea - Apr 13, 2012 / jaijagadeesh - May 3, 2012
|'Types of news: Local, national and international' - news and types essay
5 - Hi, in general your writing is good and you could convey the message in the effective and short sentences....
Writing Feedbackveronicamosquer - Apr 12, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 13, 2012
|Review on my paper "What Price: Plastic"
3 - Please review my essay and answer the following questions. 1. What does the writer do well in this...
Writing FeedbackNkowalski - Apr 12, 2012 / Nkowalski - Apr 13, 2012
|IELTS: In certain cultures old age is considered to be more important
Writing Feedbackalirulez - Apr 12, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 25, 2012
|'Adams real estate may be superior to Finches' - GRE argument topic
NEW - The following appeared in a letter from a homeowner to a friend. "Of the two leading real estate firms...
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|'the daily demand of electricity in summer'; IELTS
NEW - The line chart above illustrates the different amount of electricity demanded daily in England in winter and summer and...
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|My toefl essay - If you could change one thing about your hometown, what would it be?
Writing Feedbackicez - Apr 12, 2012 / icez - Apr 12, 2012
|IELTS: Why do we need music? - traditional music is used in vast level
3 - Hi. Jiya. For your essay, I am not sure about how ielts essay pattern should be organized. But...
Writing FeedbackJiya - Apr 11, 2012 / icez - Apr 12, 2012
|IETLS GT writing task 2: Should children follow strict rules of behaviour?
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Apr 11, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 13, 2012
|IETLS GT writing task 1: bad meal experience in a restaurant
3 - Hi scarlet_bouquet, Thanks for the comment, it is very helpful!! I will try to post another letter later,...
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Apr 11, 2012 / peterc - Apr 12, 2012
|IELTS: Financial success enables individuals to acquire a comfortable and relaxing life
Writing Feedbackxyx0905 - Apr 11, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 13, 2012
|IELTS topic. Behaviour in school is getting worse
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Apr 11, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 14, 2012
|'Online classes versus conventional classes' - my argumentative essay
Writing Feedbackskarlet - Apr 11, 2012 / missy7779 - Apr 11, 2012
|'all companies want to have a good business life' - Importance of Business Strategy
Writing FeedbackCanGokalp - Apr 11, 2012 / CanGokalp - Apr 11, 2012
|IELTS task 1 - bar and pie charts (the results of a survey of adult education)
5 - Hi Leeminh, writing a mix charts, you have check out any relationship between them, if not, a simple...
Writing Feedbackleeminh - Apr 11, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 14, 2012
|sat essay: should all people's opinions opinions be valued equally?
8 - You really make a good point. But i think the word can just be defined in many different ways....
Writing Feedbackkimuratakuya - Apr 11, 2012 / kimuratakuya - Apr 13, 2012
|ESSAY FOR CLASSIFICATION - Curriculums designed for elementary school students
Writing Feedbackcarmelitahu - Apr 11, 2012 / carmelitahu - Apr 12, 2012
|The Oversea Vietnamese Youth camp
Writing FeedbackThanh Huyen - Apr 10, 2012 / Thanh Huyen - Apr 12, 2012
|Essay on cooperation between nations
3 - Thanks lot Susan for the encouragements. I wish u spare little time to my new essay shortly. I don't...
Writing Feedbackhafidgg - Apr 10, 2012 / hafidgg - Apr 11, 2012
|An Essay About Maintaining Peace
4 - Thanks to both of you. I've rewritten the beginning. I' definitely going to do some more thorough research. Unfortunately,...
Writing Feedbackgiorgio186 - Apr 10, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 11, 2012
|"I'm so glad I found another person" - input on my short story
2 - A different approach or suggestion just to get you started. I'm not the best in grammar either so please...
Writing Feedbackhairywombat - Apr 10, 2012 / Thors Hammer - Apr 10, 2012
|GRE issue question about the value of scandals
3 - thank you! i am trying to prepare for the GRE and am quite nervous..more essays to come..please keep reading...
Writing Feedbackjharris1125 - Apr 10, 2012 / jharris1125 - Apr 11, 2012
|Common Forms of Fraud
2 - Common Forms of Fraud In that case fraud sometimes comes first. Fraud is illegalI would omit such a...
Writing Feedbacksrtheesa - Apr 10, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 10, 2012
|IELTS topic. Testing on animals and keeping them in unnatural conditions
Writing Feedbacky0_3mma - Apr 10, 2012 / y0_3mma - Apr 11, 2012
|to what extent should government be able to censor television or radio programs
Writing Feedbackdolly - Apr 10, 2012 / dolly - Apr 14, 2012
|classification of clothing into three categories
Writing Feedbackveronicamosquer - Apr 9, 2012 / veronicamosquer - Apr 10, 2012
|Ielts Task 2: About one or more Careers; Which is better?
Writing FeedbackJiya - Apr 9, 2012 / Jiya - Apr 11, 2012
|How Computer Affects My Life
Writing Feedbackstn0795 - Apr 9, 2012 / stn0795 - Apr 10, 2012
|Fatherless Essay (occurrences in my life)
4 - Periodically, I find myself daydreaming about my male parent, and how his warm embraces and a decent conversationswith him...
Writing Feedbackaishol - Apr 9, 2012 / Thors Hammer - Apr 11, 2012
|write a paragraph of effects of early marriage.
8 - As a result, they have no time to enjoy the pleasures of teenage life. Comn sequently, they divorce...
Writing Feedbackvinh - Apr 9, 2012 / dumi - Apr 13, 2012
|Petrol price increase and its impact on traffic & pollution levels
Writing Feedbackscarlet_bouquet - Apr 9, 2012 / xyx0905 - Apr 14, 2012
|'encourages to devoting'; Successful sports professionals can earn big money
5 - Your introduction have no motivator. Before expressing the main idea of the essay you should prepare a reader's mind....
Writing Feedbackhales - Apr 8, 2012 / ah_zafari - Apr 12, 2012
|Accident or Murder? The corruption on the entertainment business.
2 - Was Anna killed or was it just an accident? Doing research has lead me to believe that it was...
Writing Feedbackjallen18 - Apr 8, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 9, 2012
|IELTS ESSAY - 'News editors should broadcast & print a mixture'
3 - Thanks a lot Jennifer! I really like your suggestions & i'l try my best to follow this. Hope u...
Writing FeedbackJiya - Apr 8, 2012 / Jiya - Apr 9, 2012
|'blessed by uncle for being so alert' - The greatest achievement of my life
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