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|TOEFL-Students should not take part-time jobs when they study in university?
4 - Hi from Strictly English, we have put your essay through our database. This checks for fourteen different stylistic and...
Writing FeedbackSaraaa - Aug 4, 2011 / awengerse - Aug 8, 2011
|IELTS--Solve traffic and housing problems by moving companies to the rural areas?
3 - your grammar and vocabulary are so impressive. There are many phrases and new words useful to me. However,...
Writing FeedbackFiona_82075 - Aug 4, 2011 / hvthoteen - Aug 4, 2011
|GRE: A multi-national corporation should require employees to learn languages
Writing Feedbackbimala73 - Aug 4, 2011 / bimala73 - Aug 11, 2011
|Firm discipline is a necessary part of teaching children.
4 - Thank you very much! Kevin! your advice is very useful! I am very happy when seeing your edit. thanks...
Writing Feedbackthanhomenh_nq99 - Aug 3, 2011 / thanhomenh_nq99 - Aug 11, 2011
|Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia
Writing FeedbackManinderrubal - Aug 3, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Aug 8, 2011
|"Stone and Dylan": Who has made an impact on your life; how, why is he/she important
2 - ButSo were my two brothers, Stone and Dylan, who were positioned beside me with the same weary fate of...
Writing Feedbackmallorypreston - Aug 3, 2011 / EF_Susan - Aug 4, 2011
|Which would you prefer? to spend time with a few close friends or a large number or?
2 - Hello! Aysel, it's great to meet you. I'll make some suggestions... Better for less is qualified in...
Writing FeedbackHusseinova - Aug 3, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Aug 6, 2011
|Having less number of friends or more friends? Which is better?
5 - Let the topic be "some people prefer to spend time with one or two close friends. Other choose to...
Writing Feedbackmybloodyromance - Aug 3, 2011 / mybloodyromance - Aug 4, 2011
|[TOEFL] In the past, people were friendlier than we are now. Agree or Disagree.
NEW - When dating back to the old times, people argue that we, as human kind, were friendlier than we are...
Writing Feedbackjostar - Aug 3, 2011 / — -
|【TOEFL】Should governments spend as much money as possible on space exploration?
8 - In general, it is good! I think you should place another reason to support your opinion or place the...
Writing Feedbackashley_shan - Aug 3, 2011 / Helen L - Aug 8, 2011
|Possible effects of longer living for individuals and society[Report IELTs]
NEW - Surveys show that people are living longer in many countries. But increased life expectancy has many implications for aging...
Writing Feedbackspoontzc - Aug 3, 2011 / — -
|Should we read books that are based on real events, real people? NO
4 - Jostar thank you for you feedback. i found problem in the third part: "lots of people" not "lot of...
Writing Feedbackshahdad - Aug 3, 2011 / shahdad - Aug 3, 2011
|Ielts taks2: Father should share, parenting work more equally with woman. agree or no
Writing Feedbackoriole_baby9189 - Aug 3, 2011 / oriole_baby9189 - Aug 4, 2011
|This is a duty of parents to teach their children how to face the big society.
2 - Hi Saram: Few observation on your writing. Introduction should not start with the word "No Doubt". Also I...
Writing Feedbacksaram - Aug 3, 2011 / bimala73 - Aug 4, 2011
|Toefl: "health improvement and time-saving" food has become easier to prepare...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Aug 3, 2011 / hvthoteen - Aug 3, 2011
|a single international language or not?------IELTS Practice
4 - any contributor could help me with this question? Thank you:) a friend of mine thought my argument in the...
Writing FeedbackFiona_82075 - Aug 2, 2011 / Fiona_82075 - Aug 4, 2011
|follow fashion trends or dress in personal style?----IELTS practice
5 - I learn a lot from this essay, too. Well done:) kevin, I feel a little confused about "enable"....
Writing FeedbackFiona_82075 - Aug 2, 2011 / Jennifer Zhang - Aug 5, 2011
|"Music is a well-received art form" - IELTS - Music
3 - in the introductory paragraph, you do not mention that you will also discuss about "Is the traditional music of...
Writing FeedbackTTJudy - Aug 2, 2011 / hvthoteen - Aug 4, 2011
|Bowdoin: Comment on intellectual engagement, connection to place, or the common good
Writing Feedbacknicolew - Aug 2, 2011 / EricJ - Aug 2, 2011
|Do you think distance learning is more beneficial for students?
2 - With technology advanced----with advances in technology they promotespromote maybe the beginning of the last paragraph should add something...
Writing Feedbackvanessa000 - Aug 2, 2011 / Fiona_82075 - Aug 2, 2011
|Concealed Carry- do you agree or disagree.
Writing Feedbackvanessa000 - Aug 2, 2011 / Maninderrubal - Aug 6, 2011
|IELTS - the arguments for and against keeping pets
4 - For many years it has been recognized that animals are not justonly helpers for our work, but also they...
Writing Feedbackandroidman - Aug 2, 2011 / TTJudy - Aug 2, 2011
|Should fatherhood be valued equally as motherhood?
NEW - Hey, everybody, I want to say thanks once more here to each of you who ever leave some ideas...
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Aug 2, 2011 / — -
|As everything has own pros and cons in this world, also computers impact on our life is debatable
NEW - Topic: Some people believe that computers are more a hindrance than a help in today's world. Others fell that...
Writing Feedbackandroidman - Aug 2, 2011 / — -
|IELTS- Education- should graduates pay the full cost of their education?
3 - Hi Wolverine, Since you were asked to what extent you agree or disagree with the statement, you should...
Writing Feedbackcallmedumbazz - Aug 2, 2011 / EricJ - Aug 2, 2011
|IELTS "adult life at work" - What factors contribute to job satisfaction?
6 - Androidman and Vanessa000, thank you very much. it still has many functions to improve people to satisfy their...
Writing Feedbackinskychen - Aug 2, 2011 / inskychen - Aug 2, 2011
|IELTS--Air travel only brings advantages to the rich people?
2 - Hi Katie, Work on your grammar part,and also the spellings too. The arguments as I personally feel aren't very...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Aug 2, 2011 / ajit88rai - Aug 3, 2011
|Children should only play sports for fun, or should play in competitions [Toefl]
Writing FeedbackNeil zhang - Aug 2, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Aug 6, 2011
|It is better to save money for unpredictable future than to spend it on a travel
NEW - Topic: It is better to spend money on travelling and vacations than to save money for future. AGREE or...
Writing Feedbackjostar - Aug 2, 2011 / — -
|Is growth necessary for a happy life?
Writing Feedbackmywill - Aug 2, 2011 / dumi - Mar 23, 2013
|TOEFL- Do you agree or disagree? Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life.
3 - Thanks for the feedback, I know that the second paragraph is the weak spot of my essay. In fact,...
Writing Feedbacklykaon - Aug 2, 2011 / lykaon - Aug 2, 2011
|Structure and creators of the Stonehenge - TOEFL writing/
Writing FeedbackHusseinova - Aug 2, 2011 / mybloodyromance - Aug 3, 2011
|GRE:As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, humans thinking
Writing Feedbackego - Aug 2, 2011 / ghafarimahsa - Aug 3, 2011
|IELTS; Wealthy vs Poor Nations; not only a moral deed, but also a worthwhile one
3 - you should add up the detail reasons in the first para., it will make your outline more clearer~...
Writing FeedbackTTJudy - Aug 1, 2011 / ekekek - Aug 2, 2011
|'People are too busy' - Some prefer to spend their free time outdoors
4 - Thank you!!!...
Writing Feedbackkevinhsin1124 - Aug 1, 2011 / kevinhsin1124 - Aug 2, 2011
|GRE: The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them
Writing Feedbackghafarimahsa - Aug 1, 2011 / ghafarimahsa - Aug 8, 2011
|A Research Essay on Louis Riel, Hero of the Metis
NEW - Hi there, I am in social studies 10 summerschool course, my teacher had assigned my class to write an...
Writing Feedbackjanbreeze - Aug 1, 2011 / — -
|when need to discuss upsetting problems, which do you prefer ? email or telephone ?
NEW - When meet upsetting or controversial problems, different people have different ways to discuss them with others. Personally, I choose...
Writing Feedbackhola bi - Aug 1, 2011 / — -
|"Your grandmother left you in her will 4 things to choose from" - Clep
3 - Thank you, Susan and ghafarimahsa for your time of reading and correcting my essay. I really appreciate your insights....
Writing Feedbackvanessa000abc - Aug 1, 2011 / vanessa000abc - Aug 1, 2011
|(IELTS) Could predict criminal acts from 3 years old child? Thanks~
NEW - Many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of three-year-old children to see whether they will grow...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Aug 1, 2011 / — -
|More money for successful sports professionals than others - fair or not fair?
3 - Thanks a lot katie.I appreciate your response.I know that i need to study more to do well and i'll...
Writing FeedbackLeonuous - Aug 1, 2011 / Leonuous - Aug 1, 2011
|Do you think parents are the best teachers. Toefl IBt wrting excercise
Writing FeedbackXiaowang - Aug 1, 2011 / Xiaowang - Aug 5, 2011
|"What do you think are the environmental challenges in Southeast Asia today, and why?
3 - thanx Wang.. maybe for an easier movement from a place to another place should be from places to...
Writing Feedbackmonno - Aug 1, 2011 / monno - Aug 1, 2011
|[TOEFL] What are the best ways of reducing stress? 'I prefer doing exercise'
4 - dear wu i think that the topic is about getting rid of stress not the benefits of excercise. your...
Writing Feedbackmhh2531 - Aug 1, 2011 / ego - Aug 1, 2011
|Should people follow their ambitious dreams and goals even they are not realistic?
NEW - Everyone has dreams and goals in his or her mind. Different people choose different goals. Some of them prefer...
Writing Feedbackbiran - Jul 31, 2011 / — -
|IELTS - school or parents have equal nurturing on students
NEW - It has been controversial issue, which of these have more influence on behaviour of children; parents or school. However,...
Writing Feedbackmybloodyromance - Jul 31, 2011 / — -
|TOEFL:Businesses had better not employ the workers for the whole of their life
NEW - Hi everyone, please help me to check my essay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks a lot! Businesses should hire employees for their...
Writing Feedbacklinh202 - Jul 31, 2011 / — -
|Parents should not allow their children to watch television so they are good students
NEW - TOPIC : DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THE FOLLOWING STATEMENT? Parents should not allow their children to watch...
Writing Feedbacksunglyeol - Jul 31, 2011 / — -
|"attended a catholic school" - Experiences that define you as a person
4 - @sunglyeol i know some capitalization of my words are wrong like "i", and thank you !! whats correct?...
Writing Feedbacklelou - Jul 31, 2011 / lelou - Aug 2, 2011
|IELTS Writing task 1_ the requirement of coal per person in 15 countries
3 - The industrialized nations consist of USA, Germany, UK, Russia and France. USA had the highest of consumption in coal,...
Writing Feedbackncm - Jul 31, 2011 / oonguyenminh - Aug 20, 2011
|Television for children. bad and good influences
6 - thank you...
Writing Feedbackcelu - Jul 31, 2011 / celu - Aug 1, 2011
|"No more fears and doubts" - Experience/s that define you as a person
Writing Feedbackgsvr27 - Jul 30, 2011 / gsvr27 - Jul 31, 2011
|a clear understanding of oneself can be a great driving force to one's ultimate goal
NEW - Does the perception of our potential determines whether we can accomplish our goals? Everyone has his or her...
Writing FeedbackLauratwilight - Jul 30, 2011 / — -
|IELTS- : favorite pastime of people in different countries
Writing Feedbacknguyenminh - Jul 30, 2011 / nguyenminh - Sep 23, 2011
|Should the term FAILURE be used in educational system?
NEW - In the pursuit of becoming an educational hub, Singapore strives to maintain its competitiveness in this ever-modernizing society by...
Writing Feedbackisabellaclaudia - Jul 30, 2011 / — -
|IELTS- SHOULD PRACTICAL SKILLS BE TAUGHT AT SCHOOL?
4 - Moreover, with timetables are already full... This sentence, it seems to me, has a little problem. "Moreover, since...
Writing Feedbackcallmedumbazz - Jul 30, 2011 / Fiasdo - Jul 30, 2011
|The wolf + Strong relationships - help to the correction of these paragraphs?
Writing Feedbackp177 - Jul 30, 2011 / p177 - Aug 2, 2011
|READING FOR STUDENTS
4 - thank you...
Writing Feedbackcelu - Jul 30, 2011 / celu - Aug 1, 2011
|IELTS; Fonton and Meadowside Maps
Writing Feedbacknabila72 - Jul 29, 2011 / nabila72 - Jul 31, 2011
|Should people have just one career or possess several jobs at the same time?
4 - Thank you Annika, I will be more aware of using formal words in my articles. Thanks for reminding...
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Jul 29, 2011 / aleafsun - Aug 2, 2011
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