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|Should the term FAILURE be used in educational system?
NEW - In the pursuit of becoming an educational hub, Singapore strives to maintain its competitiveness in this ever-modernizing society by...
Writing Feedbackisabellaclaudia - Jul 30, 2011 / — -
|IELTS- SHOULD PRACTICAL SKILLS BE TAUGHT AT SCHOOL?
4 - Moreover, with timetables are already full... This sentence, it seems to me, has a little problem. "Moreover, since...
Writing Feedbackcallmedumbazz - Jul 30, 2011 / Fiasdo - Jul 30, 2011
|The wolf + Strong relationships - help to the correction of these paragraphs?
Writing Feedbackp177 - Jul 30, 2011 / p177 - Aug 2, 2011
|READING FOR STUDENTS
4 - thank you...
Writing Feedbackcelu - Jul 30, 2011 / celu - Aug 1, 2011
|IELTS; Fonton and Meadowside Maps
Writing Feedbacknabila72 - Jul 29, 2011 / nabila72 - Jul 31, 2011
|Should people have just one career or possess several jobs at the same time?
4 - Thank you Annika, I will be more aware of using formal words in my articles. Thanks for reminding...
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Jul 29, 2011 / aleafsun - Aug 2, 2011
|Results of a survey into the causes of poor school attendance in the Britain
2 - This pie chart shows the results of a survey about the causes of poor school attendance in the Britain...
Writing Feedbacktosucceed999 - Jul 28, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 29, 2011
|TOEFL:Admittedly,advertising has exerted a negative influence on peoples' food choice
Writing Feedbackfenghaomingmike - Jul 29, 2011 / jostar - Aug 6, 2011
|IELTS; Widespread use of the Internet and its problems/ solutions
NEW - The widespread use of internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with...
Writing FeedbackAlisha123 - Jul 29, 2011 / — -
|IELTS- CRIMINALS RE-OFFEND AFTER HAVE BEEN PUNISHED. WHAT ARE CAUSES AND SOLUTIONS?
Writing Feedbackcallmedumbazz - Jul 29, 2011 / callmedumbazz - Jul 29, 2011
|Toefl】teachers should take courses every five years to update their knowledge?
5 - Hi, Dumi has given the most appropriate corrections required in your essay. There are several grammatical and spelling mistakes...
Writing FeedbackNeil zhang - Jul 29, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jul 30, 2011
|'Medicine, technology, and lifestyle changes' - The 21 century has begun
2 - Hei Aysel! :D Your essay structure is flawless and you definitely have thought of some strong points to...
Writing FeedbackHusseinova - Jul 29, 2011 / amrosca - Jul 30, 2011
|Describe the changes and development of a village called Chorleywood...IELTs test
6 - Dear Amrosca, I don't know how to show you my gradtitude rose from my deep heart after reading...
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Jul 29, 2011 / aleafsun - Jul 31, 2011
|TOEFL - Ambitious dreams are better than realistic goals.
7 - A substantial number of people think that having ambitious dreams is the best answer, for the people, because they...
Writing Feedbacksunglyeol - Jul 29, 2011 / EF_Susan - Aug 5, 2011
|Topic: A time you have the courage to do something or face something difficult
5 - To EF_Kevin, Thank you for giving me these advice. Do you think this essay can pass the CBEST...
Writing Feedbackboxu53 - Jul 29, 2011 / boxu53 - Jul 31, 2011
|In order to solve the problems , people should review the past. 【TOEFL EASSY】
5 - dear Zhang Yipeng your assey is good. it expresses enough about history. but its good to give some examples...
Writing FeedbackNeil zhang - Jul 28, 2011 / ego - Aug 1, 2011
|Detail the factors that affect editors to choose broadcasting news.
5 - Dear EF_Kevin, I really want to acknowledge you for reading my essays and give advices to me. The...
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Jul 28, 2011 / aleafsun - Jul 31, 2011
|Ielts Topic:Some people say that physical exercises should be a required part
2 - Different people possess their different reasons for their different choices. From my perspective, physical exercises need to be...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 28, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jul 29, 2011
|(IELTS) Should all countries joint efforts to solve the environmental problems?
2 - The green house effect is changing the atmosphere of the Earth which and poses a grave threat to the...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 28, 2011 / callmedumbazz - Jul 30, 2011
|(IELTS) protect animals, zoos should be banned?
2 - I'll make a lot of small changes... Please study these changes and type the sentences to practice the correct...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 28, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 31, 2011
|SPEND Vs SAVE; Most youngsters today are not hesitant to spend their money!
3 - Hey, Linh202, I see your efforts through good conjunctions at every begining of every paragraph. There is just...
Writing Feedbacklinh202 - Jul 28, 2011 / aleafsun - Jul 28, 2011
|ILETS ESSAY ON SIGNIFICANCE OF LEARNING HISTORY.
3 - In the conclusion, learning about past culture, art and lifestyle can bring profound influences to the society. Knowledge about...
Writing FeedbackAlisha123 - Jul 28, 2011 / Neil zhang - Jul 28, 2011
|We can know about ourselves more from animals just by watching them
2 - As we get more knowledge about human beings, people start to be interested in... I realized humans and...
Writing Feedbackcsv8674xn - Jul 28, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 31, 2011
|Economic development VS Loss of social values [IELTs]
Writing Feedbackspoontzc - Jul 28, 2011 / shahdad - Aug 3, 2011
|'Music lifts up our souls and releases them'; traditional vs international music
5 - EF_Kevin, You really made my day, and I appreciate that every viewpoint you have made about my essay....
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Jul 27, 2011 / aleafsun - Jul 31, 2011
|Describe two charts about a survey of adult education..from Cambridge IELTs 1
5 - I think you should balance the description in two charts. Just one sentence about the figure in the second...
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Jul 27, 2011 / ekekek - Aug 1, 2011
|Japan: special interest/passion+ how you have developed knowledge in these area?
Writing Feedbackwn2870 - Jul 27, 2011 / wn2870 - Jul 30, 2011
|economic development vs environment ---IELTS
8 - Great question!! 1、Thus, a great number of people firmly believe we will keep up this upward trend and...
Writing FeedbackJennifer Zhang - Jul 27, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 31, 2011
|IELTS; Government should spend money on ARTs, not only on public services
7 - Thus, a great number of people firmly believe that we will keep up this upward trend, achieving higher goals...
Writing FeedbackJennifer Zhang - Jul 27, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Aug 2, 2011
|"wheat export among three areas in 1985" - ielts exam
Writing Feedbacklllppp333 - Jul 27, 2011 / lllppp333 - Jul 28, 2011
|'valuable and irrecoverable'; Should a city preserve its old buildings?
6 - First, maintaining the old, historic buildings is a money-consuming task. First, maintaining the old, historic buildings needs money-consuming task....
Writing Feedbackfairwind - Jul 27, 2011 / mybloodyromance - Aug 3, 2011
|CBEST "As you get older, it is harder to have heroes, but it is sort of necessary."
NEW - Hi everyone, Please help! Please help! I need help with the grammar and the conclusion. Any suggestion are...
Writing Feedbackatjobsearch - Jul 26, 2011 / — -
|TOEFL: If no food at home we should have a restaurant in the neighborhood
Writing Feedbacksoshianet - Jul 26, 2011 / soshianet - Jul 29, 2011
|TV is the most effective media to spread information and communicating culture
Writing Feedbackjamliu0229 - Jul 26, 2011 / ekekek - Jul 26, 2011
|TOEFL - The government should support science research
12 - I think you got a nice start though strating with 'some people' are generic.. however, i feel that conclusion...
Writing Feedbacksunglyeol - Jul 26, 2011 / hjy222 - Sep 10, 2011
|Watching movies in a theater is more fun than watching them at home.
5 - IMO, there are some advice i have ever taken toefl test training class in China, my teacher told...
Writing Feedbackcsv8674xn - Jul 26, 2011 / Neil zhang - Jul 29, 2011
|CAMBRIDGE ESSAY; Good teachers set challenging tasks for their students.
2 - The majority of people acquire a substantial amount of notions. ---This sentence is not incorrect, but it is a...
Writing Feedbackmuge - Jul 25, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 27, 2011
|TELTS-- traditional ideas help teenagers for promising future?
2 - "Thinking twice before action as well as paying more attention to words are some treasures in traditional thinking and...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 25, 2011 / hvthoteen - Jul 25, 2011
|IELTS --Use cultural heritage to develop international tourism, right or wrong?
4 - Hearing some environmental activists' concerns about the negatives brought by international tourism, much worry arose in my heart as...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 25, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 27, 2011
|TOEFL, The best things in life do not cost money, agree or disagree
9 - Kevin, I am really thankful for your corrections. Besides, your idea is so nice and meaningful. Thanks for all...
Writing Feedbackghafarimahsa - Jul 25, 2011 / ghafarimahsa - Aug 11, 2011
|if in Rome, do as the Romans do-disagree
2 - learning new things in there who live in there is one of the very international cities the food they...
Writing Feedbacknikkinia - Jul 25, 2011 / Jennifer Zhang - Jul 27, 2011
|Ielts: Your friend has enough money either to go on a holiday or to buy a new
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 24, 2011 / hvthoteen - Jul 25, 2011
|IELTS> 'strict policies' - urbanisation - benefits and drawbacks
Writing Feedbackthe leaf ninja - Jul 24, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 27, 2011
|'People are envy'; advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need
3 - Let's pay attention to the structure. i think your aim is to write an academic writing for toefl or...
Writing Feedbackshahdad - Jul 23, 2011 / hvthoteen - Jul 24, 2011
|"girls tend to learn arts while boys science" uni. accept equal numbers of students?
3 - I'll make some grammar corrections. Please practice typing these sentences: Confronted by a situation in which girls are...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 25, 2011
|[more alternative explanations]- Argument-15-by shiyi
2 - However, if we examine the facts carefully, we can find one or more alternative explanations that could rival the...
Writing Feedbackshiyi - Jul 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 25, 2011
|'different styles and constructions'; Preserving old historical buildings? TOEFL
4 - I don't like the first sentence, because it is a statement of the obvious. 2 words: Every day...
Writing Feedbackessaylearner - Jul 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 25, 2011
|Ielts: (career / life experience) - Why do people go to university or college?
5 - I like the way you summed up your argument in that first paragraph. Very good stuff here. In a...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 25, 2011
|IELTS : The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA
2 - One graph depicts... Two graphs depict... English has weird rules for singular and plural. The two graphs depict...
Writing Feedbackroygao2008 - Jul 22, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 25, 2011
|IELTS- Writing task 1: Pie Charts: Valentine's Day Gifts
2 - Those of the "fair sex" prefer to offer candy to their lovers, 21% of women compared with 14% of...
Writing Feedbacknguyenminh - Jul 22, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 25, 2011
|"make my parents proud" - Unusual Circumstances Essay
Writing Feedbackeduardo8 - Jul 22, 2011 / langers1 - Aug 23, 2011
|students' scores and subject assessments - A TOEFL retouches and assignments
4 - As I read the introduction, I notice that you have a high level of proficiency in English. The only...
Writing FeedbackelwinOUTOFMIND - Jul 22, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 25, 2011
|CAMBRIDGE TOPIC; The widespread use of the Internet
7 - Thank you very much ef_kevin i have a ibt 5th august therefore i am trying to do something:) i...
Writing Feedbackmuge - Jul 22, 2011 / muge - Jul 25, 2011
|GRE Issue - the word thinking is tightly coupled with the word originality, which cannot be detached
Writing Feedbackbimala73 - Jul 22, 2011 / bimala73 - Aug 10, 2011
|Of all the mentioned five countries, Turkey had the highest spending in food, drinks and tobacco
Writing FeedbackDaisy Sircar - Jul 22, 2011 / roygao2008 - Jul 22, 2011
|Tourism could be very important for the development of many countries
6 - It is believed that tourism is playing an important part in the economy of different countries and it also...
Writing Feedbackthe leaf ninja - Jul 22, 2011 / linh202 - Jul 28, 2011
|TOEFL - Tv has NO negative effects on children.
Writing Feedbackwlsguszizi - Jul 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 23, 2011
|Essay about a personal quality(ies) that I have and am proud of
4 - The measure of the impossibility of an idea is directly correlated ---no, the measure is not corelated. The level...
Writing FeedbackRChodavadia - Jul 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 23, 2011
|"beauty is in fact in the eyes of the beholder" - O level essay BEAUTY
3 - Either it be centuries before BC, or today in this every-modernizing society, h You already made this point. I...
Writing Feedbackisabellaclaudia - Jul 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 23, 2011
|Fatherhood, motherhood, and bringing children up
3 - It is true that mothers are definitely responsible for number of babies they would like to have, when to...
Writing Feedbackgwapo - Jul 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 23, 2011
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