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|Toefl essay: Eating out or Eating at home? Home food is the best!
Writing Feedbacksoshianet - Jul 21, 2011 / soshianet - Jul 23, 2011
|"Child's learning process" - Teaching Context
3 - TQ Kevin...
Writing Feedbackisai - Jul 21, 2011 / isai - Jul 24, 2011
|Faridabad, Tracing a town's culture
6 - That's called organized religion! :-) Ha, so you are in Faridabad... so interesting to be talking to...
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Jul 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Aug 6, 2011
|Originality does not mean thinking something that was never thought before; it means
Writing Feedbackghafarimahsa - Jul 21, 2011 / ghafarimahsa - Jul 23, 2011
|TOEFL: Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place
2 - I really like the way you support your sentences, I would like to know if you write this essay...
Writing Feedbacklinh202 - Jul 21, 2011 / ghafarimahsa - Jul 21, 2011
|The american dream/economic mobility essay
3 - Living the American dream today is almost like trying to keep up with the times. (Now add a sentence...
Writing Feedbackwritinwy2much - Jul 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 23, 2011
|My way of life and my parents way of life
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|(IELTS) What's the greatest invention in the modern world?
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 20, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 22, 2011
|(IELTS) Internet teaching or traditional school? THX~
4 - ...brand new way for all citizens, particularly in rural area. Thus some parents suggest that traditional school education...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 20, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 22, 2011
|IELTS writing: Is education priviledged for youth, or lifelong task?
4 - If you are talking about one educator's point of view, the apostrophe goes before the s. If you are...
Writing Feedbackextrafresh - Jul 20, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 22, 2011
|IELTS - 'infrastructure' - How to solve growing traffic and pollution problems
Writing FeedbackIsabella_ - Jul 20, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 22, 2011
|Important truths are outrageous when they begin; GRE ISSUE TOPIC
4 - Thanks much Kevin for valuable feedback and taking time to dig into each details of my essay. I really...
Writing Feedbackbimala73 - Jul 20, 2011 / bimala73 - Jul 23, 2011
|IELTS task 2: Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part
5 - Thanks to all of you!!! these are the precious reviews! thanks again!!! In my country, we have...
Writing Feedbackthanhnam46 - Jul 20, 2011 / thanhnam46 - Jul 21, 2011
|some important aspects of incorporating technology in education.
NEW - Please read and correct to me. Technology is an outcome of education and now education benefits lot from...
Writing Feedbackstart208 - Jul 19, 2011 / — -
|Free mobile phone and access to the Internet to find jobs sponsored by tax payers?
9 - I don't know how those are scored. I would be guessing. Somebody told me about the way they score...
Writing Feedbacktosucceed999 - Jul 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 29, 2011
|Unfinished Argumentative essay. Students work while study. revising/thoughts
2 - For instance, a job added to an individuals busy schedule could help aid them to become more productive. ...
Writing Feedbacksafiyeve - Jul 19, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jul 20, 2011
|Standards of zoos should be leveled up; 'KEEPING ANIMALS IN ZOOS, RIGHT OR WRONG?'
7 - hi the leaf ninja, I think your essay is very clear and decent. You defence both situation on...
Writing Feedbackthe leaf ninja - Jul 19, 2011 / muge - Jul 22, 2011
|'positive reinforncement to teach is to praise positive actions, ignore negative ones
3 - The underlying assumption that is therefore needed for the putting forward of my following reasons is that to measure...
Writing Feedbackcchcal - Jul 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 21, 2011
|GLOBALIZATION: Differences between nations are becoming less and less evident.
29 - "CONSCIENCE" -THIS is the best religion in the world... no culture ,tradition,ritual, or religion is above one's conscience..when ur...
Writing Feedbackbirdman - Jul 19, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jul 23, 2011
|TOEFL essay "Our need for friendship may be greater than ever"
4 - Thank you bhaweshwebmaste and EF_Kevin for your help!! I really appreciate it! I am very pleased to hear so...
Writing FeedbackU_Are_Awesome - Jul 19, 2011 / U_Are_Awesome - Jul 23, 2011
|Topic on Nuclear Technology - To what extend is it dangerous to life on Earth?
2 - Thanks Ajit, great stuff here! Ramandeep, can you rewrite the essay based on the corrections Ajit gave? ...
Writing FeedbackDhillon - Jul 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 21, 2011
|IELTS - "having heaven gift is offering a better a chance"
4 - seong~ Here is some advices from my perspective. 1.In the first para., you mention that "In my point...
Writing Feedbackletsroll - Jul 19, 2011 / ekekek - Jul 21, 2011
|Students' motivation should come from teachers and family
Writing Feedbackcelu - Jul 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 23, 2011
|An essay about effects of Living in a Foreign Conuntry!
4 - Living abroad is a tempting opportunity for people, because it could lead to gaining a lot of useful experiences...
Writing FeedbackFares - Jul 18, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 21, 2011
|Ielts topic: why do some students study abroad
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 18, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 20, 2011
|IELTS> Are environmental problems too big to be managed by individuals
Writing Feedbackthe leaf ninja - Jul 18, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 22, 2011
|what would we do to live longer?
3 - In order to help the essayist, we need to type the sentence the correct way. Hivarasti, practice typing...
Writing Feedbackhivarasti - Jul 17, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 20, 2011
|"borrowing money from a friend and friendship" - TOEFL iBT
Writing Feedbackmhr - Jul 17, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 22, 2011
|Ielts writing: taking a gap year or entering university as soon as possible ?
5 - ...the choice about which major to study.---I added ABOUT Don't make little errors, like not capitalizing "I"...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 17, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 20, 2011
|Children should not sit quietly in their seats and learn in a rote manner.
4 - Well, it seems like you are saying adults should be strict in order to demonstrate to other adults that...
Writing Feedbackstart208 - Jul 17, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 19, 2011
|Existence of the supernatural? Essay wrote on watching "The exorcism of Emily Rose"
12 - My sweetest frnd, I rarely get offensive/aggressive ever--i wasn't getting aggressive, but i just found Idiocy a cute...
Writing Feedbackajit88rai - Jul 17, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jul 18, 2011
|ielts essay - ways of reducing traffic conditions
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Jul 16, 2011 / Geenesh - Jul 19, 2011
|what can society do to assist homeless people?
Writing FeedbackFly109238 - Jul 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 18, 2011
|How to succeed in learning a foreign languge.
Writing Feedbackstart208 - Jul 15, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jul 17, 2011
|IELTS> THE PROS AND CONS OF ANIMAL TESTING
Writing Feedbackthe leaf ninja - Jul 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 18, 2011
|Laws should be flexible (take account of various circumstances, times, and places)
4 - Thanks, it's great to have you here! it seems like you are already proficient at writing, and now it...
Writing Feedbackcchcal - Jul 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 19, 2011
|21st century is going to be new era and step forward to ambitious that we are calling imagination
Writing Feedbackshahdad - Jul 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 18, 2011
|Ielts topic: choosing studying at home or at school
4 - Okay, let's fix this complicated sentence: Studying with many classmates in an educational environment not only brings me...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 15, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 17, 2011
|Ambitious dreams encourage people to endlessly try for their success
3 - ... because it seems to be more advantageous to achieve the goals under general circumstances. After thorough consideration,...
Writing Feedbacksei - Jul 15, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 17, 2011
|In the pursuit of peace, is it okay to sacrifice the lives and freedoms of some?
2 - As a result, many people were stripped of their personal belongings, status, and wealth, and the people of the...
Writing FeedbackRoxal - Jul 15, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 17, 2011
|My pet tiger, bitten by a snake and died.
Writing FeedbackScott30 - Jul 15, 2011 / EricJ - Jul 17, 2011
|IELTS ESSAY - FREEDOM TO EXPRESS IDEAS; '3 Idiots'
6 - yup you are right,this days i am getting really reckless,write goverment instead of government or resturant instead of...
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Jul 15, 2011 / shahdad - Jul 16, 2011
|Classroom management and discipline, practical every day.
5 - I really enjoyed your essay. Though, before you submit essay's proof read and make sure your grammar is correct....
Writing Feedbackcelu - Jul 14, 2011 / Shirley Tey - Jul 18, 2011
|TOEFL: do you agree that technology helps students learn more and faster?
4 - Hi. Now a days nowadays it is possible for teachers to provide student with sutable materials in different formats...
Writing Feedbackshanbalook - Jul 14, 2011 / shhzbch - Jul 15, 2011
|Multicultural society is much more beneficial?
2 - To begin with, like the magnificent rainbow with seven colors, the variety itself is a priceless gift, and when...
Writing Feedbackmegiacodon - Jul 14, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jul 14, 2011
|TOEFL:'history and geography'; working teenagers while they are still students.
4 - Most people hypothesize that the students have a responsibility to study well at school.----Practice typing the sentence this way....
Writing Feedbacklinh202 - Jul 14, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 16, 2011
|"my father whom i respect forever" - The person i would like to be
Writing Feedbackiloveyou - Jul 14, 2011 / iloveyou - Jul 17, 2011
|TOEFL - the government should support the scientific research with no practical use?
5 - I like your point about the government and the real life. Good essay!! Therefore, I firmly believe that government...
Writing Feedbackblindside - Jul 14, 2011 / kevinhsin1124 - Aug 1, 2011
|Less than half of high school graduates with a diploma. - an essay
6 - Sounds like the best kind. Probably because that is what actually interests you. In my senior...
Writing Feedbackamrosca - Jul 14, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 20, 2011
|Do advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives?
NEW - I wrote a Writing Task 2 example and the task description is "Some people say that advertising encourages us...
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|"studying in overseas" - IS IT GOOD TO STUDY ABROAD ?
3 - Now trim away the extra words: Many would be definitely be glad at the thought of being able to...
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Jul 14, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 16, 2011
|Academic writing Ielts: Effects of globalization
5 - Endless controversy has erupted over globalization. The purpose of my writing is to critically analyse the typical impacts...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 15, 2011
|TOEFL writing - Are parents best teachers? Yes, they are.
Writing Feedbacknguyendinhtuong - Jul 13, 2011 / nguyendinhtuong - Jul 15, 2011
|'born in Dehiwala; life of opportunities' - Essay about "MySelf"
Writing Feedbackavanthihfc - Jul 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 15, 2011
|TOELF-should children play computer games
5 - Does this first sentence NOT reveal what she will write about and what her feelings on this matter...
Writing Feedbackshhzbch - Jul 13, 2011 / amrosca - Jul 14, 2011
|About MY, Rahul, brother from PUNE
Writing Feedbackvijay kumar - Jul 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 15, 2011
|The reasons for learning languages of 1000 native and non-native speakers
3 - I have a suggestion for making the beginning clearer: The bar chart presents results of a questionnaire distributed to...
Writing Feedbackoonguyenminh - Jul 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 15, 2011
|SAT - Are people more productive and successful if they ignore opinions of others?
2 - Welcome, Geetanjali! Hey, Mirela, you are doing a lot of great work lately! Thanks, I hope you don't steal...
Writing Feedbackgeetanjali - Jul 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 15, 2011
|IELTS - School Graduate with negative attitudes - Cause and Solution
Writing Feedbacklearner26 - Jul 13, 2011 / shahdad - Jul 16, 2011
|IELT writing: what is your view of success?
4 - I appreciate the chance of letting me to overcome it. Do not capitalize all those words: I Will...
Writing Feedbackextrafresh - Jul 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 19, 2011
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