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|More and more village workers are not deciding to live in the city and travel in work
3 - "a tremendous number of workers numbers of people is escaping from countryside to urban areas" --> a tremendous number...
Writing FeedbackAlisha123 - Aug 10, 2011 / hvthoteen - Aug 11, 2011
|IELTS - Is Capital Punishment essential to control violence in society?
3 - Hello, Judy. I think you should state your opinion more clearly. Honestly, I cannot find your viewpoint after...
Writing FeedbackTTJudy - Aug 10, 2011 / ekekek - Aug 10, 2011
|My Essay for my First Academic English class: Should The Death Penalty be Illegal?
NEW - Last night, I was watching a Japanese movie called "Criminal Psychology: Personal Behavior Analysis" with my friend, David, at...
Writing Feedbackpakwunlam - Aug 9, 2011 / — -
|Do sorrows take much of our life? do we live to suffer?
NEW - do we live to suffer? In every day life, people enjoy some exciting things and live some happy moments,...
Writing Feedbackstart208 - Aug 9, 2011 / — -
|living in a foriegn country can not be better than your own.discuss
Writing Feedbackstart208 - Aug 9, 2011 / start208 - Aug 10, 2011
|The role of talent in success - born with or received through hard work?
7 - First,point out your view in the first paragragh clearly; 2 or 3 paragraghs to support your view; A concession...
Writing Feedbackmkeyan - Aug 9, 2011 / Helen L - Aug 10, 2011
|[Toefl] Do we need different sources of news to know about truth?
NEW - Topic: We need to have different sources of news and information to know which one is real or who...
Writing Feedbackjostar - Aug 9, 2011 / — -
|fashionably to be concerned; Young are more aware of issues like the environment
3 - well, as the essay title is the contrast of three aspacts between today and the past, so you need...
Writing Feedbackemphatic - Aug 9, 2011 / ekekek - Aug 11, 2011
|People should have hobbies and do activities that are different from their own work
2 - In order to relieve themselves from daily heavy workloads , some people feel that hobbies and activities much different...
Writing FeedbackHelen L - Aug 9, 2011 / EF_Susan - Aug 9, 2011
|Tofle topic: a company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near you
NEW - Topic: a company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Aug 9, 2011 / — -
|Opinion of the effect of television on individuals or on nations
NEW - Topic: In a review of Don DeLillo's novel White Noise, Jayne Anne Phillips writes that the characters are...
Writing Feedbackboxu53 - Aug 8, 2011 / — -
|[TOEFL] Which is better: to work for a company or own business? If you're active..
4 - moderators, please correct my mistakes, i`m not satisfied with these(( People, please don`t write unnecessary posts, my post disappears...
Writing FeedbackHusseinova - Aug 8, 2011 / Husseinova - Aug 14, 2011
|IELTS - illness prevention, promoting healthy lifestyles?
Writing Feedbackekekek - Aug 8, 2011 / boxu53 - Aug 8, 2011
|IELTS; International organizations; international aid is necessary
NEW - International organizations have failed to help everyone who needs help so they should only focus on helping the poor...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Aug 8, 2011 / — -
|IELTS: People's interaction and relationships vs technology
8 - Thank you...
Writing Feedbackhuajianmeng - Aug 8, 2011 / huajianmeng - Aug 11, 2011
|Is the help from government necessary ?
NEW - It is true that people can solve most of their problems by themselves or with the help from their...
Writing Feedbackbiran - Aug 8, 2011 / — -
|Today's world is full of cruelty and violence; Problems with student behaviour
4 - I think you should improve your introduction part. You need to illustrate "this tendency" more clearly. ...
Writing Feedbackemphatic - Aug 8, 2011 / ekekek - Aug 11, 2011
|TOEFL: To become well-informed, one has to get information from different sources
2 - Don't start with NOWADAYS, it will give the rater bad impression. Too many people use NOWADS. Try other options,...
Writing FeedbackHelen L - Aug 8, 2011 / jostar - Aug 9, 2011
|TOEFL:To remain happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than achieving~
Writing FeedbackHelen L - Aug 8, 2011 / biran - Aug 8, 2011
|FTMS Student Services Department event essay
NEW - With the blissful lights and the orderable decoration with theme of FTMS Staff Get Together & Breaking fast took...
Writing Feedbackisai - Aug 7, 2011 / — -
|IELTS Government-sponsored space travel wasted money and effort of our generation
2 - Spaced travel, likeenormousthe dream of scientists, has made a great achievementwas achieved when the spaceman had the first...
Writing Feedbackinskychen - Aug 7, 2011 / dumi - Aug 7, 2011
|Improving public transportation could reduce air pollution in a city
NEW - Some people believe that governments should spend more money on developing public transportation, such as buses, trains, and subways....
Writing Feedbacksoshianet - Aug 7, 2011 / — -
|working from home or from your company's office which is better.
Writing Feedbackoluwakemi - Aug 7, 2011 / jenny328 - Aug 18, 2011
|I had power, but I seek happiness (examination)
Writing FeedbackGladys1620 - Aug 7, 2011 / Gladys1620 - Aug 19, 2011
|"Our Challenging Lives at Laconia State School" - How to eliminate "to-be" verbs
4 - I do agree with you, whole heartedly, because if Jocelyn is half as intelligent and compassionate and well spoken...
Writing Feedbacklilacmay4 - Aug 6, 2011 / EF_Susan - Aug 9, 2011
|"I'm on plane to Africa, WHAT!!" - FIRST UNDERGRAD ESSAY
6 - morganday123 Some questions: Is there a maximum amount of pgs your essay can be??? So what you mean is...
Writing Feedbackjisthesmartess - Aug 6, 2011 / jisthesmartess - Aug 7, 2011
|"proportion to the importance of the work" - IELTS - Professions
Writing Feedbackandroidman - Aug 6, 2011 / androidman - Aug 24, 2011
|"A poorly planned retirement can result in financial tragedy." -Persuasive essay
NEW - 3. Assignment: Persuasive Essay Final Paper Thesis: A poorly planned retirement can result in financial tragedy. Americans...
Writing Feedbackjobseeker78 - Aug 6, 2011 / — -
|Advertising has a strong negative effective on the unhealthy eating habits
2 - You presented many good statements. however, after completing your essay my brain still repeats several words. I mean you...
Writing FeedbackHelen L - Aug 6, 2011 / androidman - Aug 6, 2011
|TOEFL - Humans have feelings, and because of this, they are easily manipulated by grades
Writing Feedbackargentum - Aug 6, 2011 / Helen L - Aug 7, 2011
|"job transferring" - IELTS - Career
NEW - Topic: The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion mil be...
Writing FeedbackTTJudy - Aug 6, 2011 / — -
|[Toefl] best methods to get teenagers accustomed to adult life is part-time job
3 - An internship can be a part time job, but sometimes an internship is something you do not get paid...
Writing Feedbackjostar - Aug 6, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Aug 11, 2011
|IELTS - solving crime through attacking the causes of crime
2 - Hi Sangeetha, see I told u that you will get plenty of opinions here. EF_Susan has already made the...
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Aug 6, 2011 / ajit88rai - Aug 6, 2011
|The best way to educate primary school children?
Writing Feedbackhamzarayes - Aug 5, 2011 / hamzarayes - Aug 6, 2011
|If child wants to do well in school, parents should limit the hours wasted on TV?
Writing Feedbackhola bi - Aug 5, 2011 / hvthoteen - Aug 5, 2011
|Should government support scientific researches even the researches have no practical
Writing Feedbackbiran - Aug 5, 2011 / hola bi - Aug 5, 2011
|[Toefl] All University student should be required to take history courses?
7 - @Helen Yeah, I got tired in the end, and yes, it's proper to add a concession. @Peter Nice suggestion,...
Writing Feedbackjostar - Aug 5, 2011 / jostar - Aug 9, 2011
|'creativity should be devised'; A gift can contribute to a child's development.
Writing Feedbackshahdad - Aug 5, 2011 / shahdad - Aug 5, 2011
|Should teacher give students in the same group the same grade after a task?
Writing FeedbackXiaowang - Aug 5, 2011 / Xiaowang - Aug 11, 2011
|Modern technology can replace museums and art galleries agree or disagree?
2 - "replace many area" --> replace many areas "also can instead of museums " instead is not a verb...
Writing FeedbackFly109238 - Aug 5, 2011 / hvthoteen - Aug 5, 2011
|"want to learn any language" - ielts
Writing FeedbackArman177 - Aug 5, 2011 / Arman177 - Aug 5, 2011
|Should a working mother be blamed for children's deviant behavior?
NEW - Hey, there, Thanks for every body who is willing to give me some advice about my essay. Wish...
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Aug 5, 2011 / — -
|Should the dealth penalty be abolished in current society?
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Aug 5, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Aug 9, 2011
|Ielts - students that travel and work after high school vs. those who don't
4 - thanks...
Writing Feedbackbhuralal - Aug 4, 2011 / bhuralal - Aug 5, 2011
|IELTS---Advertising discourages us from being different individuals?
2 - Dear katie, I am confused with your introduction at the beginning. Since there are "different" kinds of products...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Aug 4, 2011 / aleafsun - Aug 5, 2011
|essay about importance of truth in any relationship .
NEW - i believe that the truth is most important thing in our life because if we imagine that we live...
Writing Feedbackosos zizo - Aug 4, 2011 / — -
|[TOEFL] better to have rules about clothing that people wear at school or workplace
NEW - Topic: It's better to have rules about the type of clothing that people wear at schools or in their...
Writing Feedbackjostar - Aug 4, 2011 / — -
|IELTS-- important to prevent language extinction
4 - I am confused at one point of Sun's comment, and just checked. "agree sth." is more British, and...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Aug 4, 2011 / jostar - Aug 5, 2011
|I would concede that knowledge from books is widely accepted - Ielts topic
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Aug 4, 2011 / hvthoteen - Aug 5, 2011
|TOEFL-Students should not take part-time jobs when they study in university?
4 - Hi from Strictly English, we have put your essay through our database. This checks for fourteen different stylistic and...
Writing FeedbackSaraaa - Aug 4, 2011 / awengerse - Aug 8, 2011
|IELTS--Solve traffic and housing problems by moving companies to the rural areas?
3 - your grammar and vocabulary are so impressive. There are many phrases and new words useful to me. However,...
Writing FeedbackFiona_82075 - Aug 4, 2011 / hvthoteen - Aug 4, 2011
|GRE: A multi-national corporation should require employees to learn languages
Writing Feedbackbimala73 - Aug 4, 2011 / bimala73 - Aug 11, 2011
|Firm discipline is a necessary part of teaching children.
4 - Thank you very much! Kevin! your advice is very useful! I am very happy when seeing your edit. thanks...
Writing Feedbackthanhomenh_nq99 - Aug 3, 2011 / thanhomenh_nq99 - Aug 11, 2011
|Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia
Writing FeedbackManinderrubal - Aug 3, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Aug 8, 2011
|"Stone and Dylan": Who has made an impact on your life; how, why is he/she important
2 - ButSo were my two brothers, Stone and Dylan, who were positioned beside me with the same weary fate of...
Writing Feedbackmallorypreston - Aug 3, 2011 / EF_Susan - Aug 4, 2011
|Which would you prefer? to spend time with a few close friends or a large number or?
2 - Hello! Aysel, it's great to meet you. I'll make some suggestions... Better for less is qualified in...
Writing FeedbackHusseinova - Aug 3, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Aug 6, 2011
|Having less number of friends or more friends? Which is better?
5 - Let the topic be "some people prefer to spend time with one or two close friends. Other choose to...
Writing Feedbackmybloodyromance - Aug 3, 2011 / mybloodyromance - Aug 4, 2011
|[TOEFL] In the past, people were friendlier than we are now. Agree or Disagree.
NEW - When dating back to the old times, people argue that we, as human kind, were friendlier than we are...
Writing Feedbackjostar - Aug 3, 2011 / — -
|【TOEFL】Should governments spend as much money as possible on space exploration?
8 - In general, it is good! I think you should place another reason to support your opinion or place the...
Writing Feedbackashley_shan - Aug 3, 2011 / Helen L - Aug 8, 2011
|Possible effects of longer living for individuals and society[Report IELTs]
NEW - Surveys show that people are living longer in many countries. But increased life expectancy has many implications for aging...
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