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|"Music is a well-received art form" - IELTS - Music
3 - in the introductory paragraph, you do not mention that you will also discuss about "Is the traditional music of...
Writing FeedbackTTJudy - Aug 2, 2011 / hvthoteen - Aug 4, 2011
|Bowdoin: Comment on intellectual engagement, connection to place, or the common good
Writing Feedbacknicolew - Aug 2, 2011 / EricJ - Aug 2, 2011
|Do you think distance learning is more beneficial for students?
2 - With technology advanced----with advances in technology they promotespromote maybe the beginning of the last paragraph should add something...
Writing Feedbackvanessa000 - Aug 2, 2011 / Fiona_82075 - Aug 2, 2011
|Concealed Carry- do you agree or disagree.
Writing Feedbackvanessa000 - Aug 2, 2011 / Maninderrubal - Aug 6, 2011
|IELTS - the arguments for and against keeping pets
4 - For many years it has been recognized that animals are not justonly helpers for our work, but also they...
Writing Feedbackandroidman - Aug 2, 2011 / TTJudy - Aug 2, 2011
|Should fatherhood be valued equally as motherhood?
NEW - Hey, everybody, I want to say thanks once more here to each of you who ever leave some ideas...
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Aug 2, 2011 / — -
|As everything has own pros and cons in this world, also computers impact on our life is debatable
NEW - Topic: Some people believe that computers are more a hindrance than a help in today's world. Others fell that...
Writing Feedbackandroidman - Aug 2, 2011 / — -
|IELTS- Education- should graduates pay the full cost of their education?
3 - Hi Wolverine, Since you were asked to what extent you agree or disagree with the statement, you should...
Writing Feedbackcallmedumbazz - Aug 2, 2011 / EricJ - Aug 2, 2011
|IELTS "adult life at work" - What factors contribute to job satisfaction?
6 - Androidman and Vanessa000, thank you very much. it still has many functions to improve people to satisfy their...
Writing Feedbackinskychen - Aug 2, 2011 / inskychen - Aug 2, 2011
|IELTS--Air travel only brings advantages to the rich people?
2 - Hi Katie, Work on your grammar part,and also the spellings too. The arguments as I personally feel aren't very...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Aug 2, 2011 / ajit88rai - Aug 3, 2011
|Children should only play sports for fun, or should play in competitions [Toefl]
Writing FeedbackNeil zhang - Aug 2, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Aug 6, 2011
|It is better to save money for unpredictable future than to spend it on a travel
NEW - Topic: It is better to spend money on travelling and vacations than to save money for future. AGREE or...
Writing Feedbackjostar - Aug 2, 2011 / — -
|Is growth necessary for a happy life?
Writing Feedbackmywill - Aug 2, 2011 / dumi - Mar 23, 2013
|TOEFL- Do you agree or disagree? Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life.
3 - Thanks for the feedback, I know that the second paragraph is the weak spot of my essay. In fact,...
Writing Feedbacklykaon - Aug 2, 2011 / lykaon - Aug 2, 2011
|Structure and creators of the Stonehenge - TOEFL writing/
Writing FeedbackHusseinova - Aug 2, 2011 / mybloodyromance - Aug 3, 2011
|GRE:As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, humans thinking
Writing Feedbackego - Aug 2, 2011 / ghafarimahsa - Aug 3, 2011
|IELTS; Wealthy vs Poor Nations; not only a moral deed, but also a worthwhile one
3 - you should add up the detail reasons in the first para., it will make your outline more clearer~...
Writing FeedbackTTJudy - Aug 1, 2011 / ekekek - Aug 2, 2011
|'People are too busy' - Some prefer to spend their free time outdoors
4 - Thank you!!!...
Writing Feedbackkevinhsin1124 - Aug 1, 2011 / kevinhsin1124 - Aug 2, 2011
|GRE: The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them
Writing Feedbackghafarimahsa - Aug 1, 2011 / ghafarimahsa - Aug 8, 2011
|A Research Essay on Louis Riel, Hero of the Metis
NEW - Hi there, I am in social studies 10 summerschool course, my teacher had assigned my class to write an...
Writing Feedbackjanbreeze - Aug 1, 2011 / — -
|when need to discuss upsetting problems, which do you prefer ? email or telephone ?
NEW - When meet upsetting or controversial problems, different people have different ways to discuss them with others. Personally, I choose...
Writing Feedbackhola bi - Aug 1, 2011 / — -
|"Your grandmother left you in her will 4 things to choose from" - Clep
3 - Thank you, Susan and ghafarimahsa for your time of reading and correcting my essay. I really appreciate your insights....
Writing Feedbackvanessa000abc - Aug 1, 2011 / vanessa000abc - Aug 1, 2011
|(IELTS) Could predict criminal acts from 3 years old child? Thanks~
NEW - Many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of three-year-old children to see whether they will grow...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Aug 1, 2011 / — -
|More money for successful sports professionals than others - fair or not fair?
3 - Thanks a lot katie.I appreciate your response.I know that i need to study more to do well and i'll...
Writing FeedbackLeonuous - Aug 1, 2011 / Leonuous - Aug 1, 2011
|Do you think parents are the best teachers. Toefl IBt wrting excercise
Writing FeedbackXiaowang - Aug 1, 2011 / Xiaowang - Aug 5, 2011
|"What do you think are the environmental challenges in Southeast Asia today, and why?
3 - thanx Wang.. maybe for an easier movement from a place to another place should be from places to...
Writing Feedbackmonno - Aug 1, 2011 / monno - Aug 1, 2011
|[TOEFL] What are the best ways of reducing stress? 'I prefer doing exercise'
4 - dear wu i think that the topic is about getting rid of stress not the benefits of excercise. your...
Writing Feedbackmhh2531 - Aug 1, 2011 / ego - Aug 1, 2011
|Should people follow their ambitious dreams and goals even they are not realistic?
NEW - Everyone has dreams and goals in his or her mind. Different people choose different goals. Some of them prefer...
Writing Feedbackbiran - Jul 31, 2011 / — -
|IELTS - school or parents have equal nurturing on students
NEW - It has been controversial issue, which of these have more influence on behaviour of children; parents or school. However,...
Writing Feedbackmybloodyromance - Jul 31, 2011 / — -
|TOEFL:Businesses had better not employ the workers for the whole of their life
NEW - Hi everyone, please help me to check my essay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks a lot! Businesses should hire employees for their...
Writing Feedbacklinh202 - Jul 31, 2011 / — -
|Parents should not allow their children to watch television so they are good students
NEW - TOPIC : DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THE FOLLOWING STATEMENT? Parents should not allow their children to watch...
Writing Feedbacksunglyeol - Jul 31, 2011 / — -
|"attended a catholic school" - Experiences that define you as a person
4 - @sunglyeol i know some capitalization of my words are wrong like "i", and thank you !! whats correct?...
Writing Feedbacklelou - Jul 31, 2011 / lelou - Aug 2, 2011
|IELTS Writing task 1_ the requirement of coal per person in 15 countries
3 - The industrialized nations consist of USA, Germany, UK, Russia and France. USA had the highest of consumption in coal,...
Writing Feedbackncm - Jul 31, 2011 / oonguyenminh - Aug 20, 2011
|Television for children. bad and good influences
6 - thank you...
Writing Feedbackcelu - Jul 31, 2011 / celu - Aug 1, 2011
|"No more fears and doubts" - Experience/s that define you as a person
Writing Feedbackgsvr27 - Jul 30, 2011 / gsvr27 - Jul 31, 2011
|a clear understanding of oneself can be a great driving force to one's ultimate goal
NEW - Does the perception of our potential determines whether we can accomplish our goals? Everyone has his or her...
Writing FeedbackLauratwilight - Jul 30, 2011 / — -
|IELTS- : favorite pastime of people in different countries
Writing Feedbacknguyenminh - Jul 30, 2011 / nguyenminh - Sep 23, 2011
|Should the term FAILURE be used in educational system?
NEW - In the pursuit of becoming an educational hub, Singapore strives to maintain its competitiveness in this ever-modernizing society by...
Writing Feedbackisabellaclaudia - Jul 30, 2011 / — -
|IELTS- SHOULD PRACTICAL SKILLS BE TAUGHT AT SCHOOL?
4 - Moreover, with timetables are already full... This sentence, it seems to me, has a little problem. "Moreover, since...
Writing Feedbackcallmedumbazz - Jul 30, 2011 / Fiasdo - Jul 30, 2011
|The wolf + Strong relationships - help to the correction of these paragraphs?
Writing Feedbackp177 - Jul 30, 2011 / p177 - Aug 2, 2011
|READING FOR STUDENTS
4 - thank you...
Writing Feedbackcelu - Jul 30, 2011 / celu - Aug 1, 2011
|IELTS; Fonton and Meadowside Maps
Writing Feedbacknabila72 - Jul 29, 2011 / nabila72 - Jul 31, 2011
|Should people have just one career or possess several jobs at the same time?
4 - Thank you Annika, I will be more aware of using formal words in my articles. Thanks for reminding...
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Jul 29, 2011 / aleafsun - Aug 2, 2011
|Results of a survey into the causes of poor school attendance in the Britain
2 - This pie chart shows the results of a survey about the causes of poor school attendance in the Britain...
Writing Feedbacktosucceed999 - Jul 28, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 29, 2011
|TOEFL:Admittedly,advertising has exerted a negative influence on peoples' food choice
Writing Feedbackfenghaomingmike - Jul 29, 2011 / jostar - Aug 6, 2011
|IELTS; Widespread use of the Internet and its problems/ solutions
NEW - The widespread use of internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with...
Writing FeedbackAlisha123 - Jul 29, 2011 / — -
|IELTS- CRIMINALS RE-OFFEND AFTER HAVE BEEN PUNISHED. WHAT ARE CAUSES AND SOLUTIONS?
Writing Feedbackcallmedumbazz - Jul 29, 2011 / callmedumbazz - Jul 29, 2011
|Toefl】teachers should take courses every five years to update their knowledge?
5 - Hi, Dumi has given the most appropriate corrections required in your essay. There are several grammatical and spelling mistakes...
Writing FeedbackNeil zhang - Jul 29, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jul 30, 2011
|'Medicine, technology, and lifestyle changes' - The 21 century has begun
2 - Hei Aysel! :D Your essay structure is flawless and you definitely have thought of some strong points to...
Writing FeedbackHusseinova - Jul 29, 2011 / amrosca - Jul 30, 2011
|Describe the changes and development of a village called Chorleywood...IELTs test
6 - Dear Amrosca, I don't know how to show you my gradtitude rose from my deep heart after reading...
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Jul 29, 2011 / aleafsun - Jul 31, 2011
|TOEFL - Ambitious dreams are better than realistic goals.
7 - A substantial number of people think that having ambitious dreams is the best answer, for the people, because they...
Writing Feedbacksunglyeol - Jul 29, 2011 / EF_Susan - Aug 5, 2011
|Topic: A time you have the courage to do something or face something difficult
5 - To EF_Kevin, Thank you for giving me these advice. Do you think this essay can pass the CBEST...
Writing Feedbackboxu53 - Jul 29, 2011 / boxu53 - Jul 31, 2011
|In order to solve the problems , people should review the past. 【TOEFL EASSY】
5 - dear Zhang Yipeng your assey is good. it expresses enough about history. but its good to give some examples...
Writing FeedbackNeil zhang - Jul 28, 2011 / ego - Aug 1, 2011
|Detail the factors that affect editors to choose broadcasting news.
5 - Dear EF_Kevin, I really want to acknowledge you for reading my essays and give advices to me. The...
Writing Feedbackaleafsun - Jul 28, 2011 / aleafsun - Jul 31, 2011
|Ielts Topic:Some people say that physical exercises should be a required part
2 - Different people possess their different reasons for their different choices. From my perspective, physical exercises need to be...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 28, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jul 29, 2011
|(IELTS) Should all countries joint efforts to solve the environmental problems?
2 - The green house effect is changing the atmosphere of the Earth which and poses a grave threat to the...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 28, 2011 / callmedumbazz - Jul 30, 2011
|(IELTS) protect animals, zoos should be banned?
2 - I'll make a lot of small changes... Please study these changes and type the sentences to practice the correct...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 28, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 31, 2011
|SPEND Vs SAVE; Most youngsters today are not hesitant to spend their money!
3 - Hey, Linh202, I see your efforts through good conjunctions at every begining of every paragraph. There is just...
Writing Feedbacklinh202 - Jul 28, 2011 / aleafsun - Jul 28, 2011
|ILETS ESSAY ON SIGNIFICANCE OF LEARNING HISTORY.
3 - In the conclusion, learning about past culture, art and lifestyle can bring profound influences to the society. Knowledge about...
Writing FeedbackAlisha123 - Jul 28, 2011 / Neil zhang - Jul 28, 2011
|We can know about ourselves more from animals just by watching them
2 - As we get more knowledge about human beings, people start to be interested in... I realized humans and...
Writing Feedbackcsv8674xn - Jul 28, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 31, 2011
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