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|Work for the company or go for our own business?
Writing Feedbackapieceof - Jun 30, 2011 / Geenesh - Jul 1, 2011
|About Water - Water is the most important in our world
Writing Feedbackiloveyou - Jun 30, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 2, 2011
|Death penalty or a life in prison for murderers?
4 - The facts in your essay are also useful for the topic of "Fixed punishment for each type of crime?"...
Writing Feedbackandytranhung - Jun 30, 2011 / winniesun - Jul 3, 2011
|Families to pay taxes that support universal education?
Writing Feedbackandytranhung - Jun 30, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 2, 2011
|"tourism does not benefit the poorest" - IELTS
5 - It is looking good... Here is an idea: Next, the governments of the countries can build a village...
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Jun 30, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 30, 2011
|Should children learn a foreign language since their childhood in schools?
4 - collegue give good advice. I like your essay and like more the way mates dealt with. Good luck...
Writing FeedbackBecool - Jun 30, 2011 / start208 - Jun 30, 2011
|Should high school students allow to take courses they like? TOEFL
3 - Let's use the word EXPERIENCES: High school experiences play important roles in our academic careers and thereafter throughout...
Writing FeedbackBecool - Jun 29, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 30, 2011
|"equal abilities of both genders" - EQUAL NUMBERS OF MALE & FEMALE IN EVERY SUBJECT
4 - These sentences are too complicated. You should write shorter sentences. Shorter sentences are easier to read, just as...
Writing Feedbackthe leaf ninja - Jun 29, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 30, 2011
|How I Spent My Inheritance
Writing FeedbackXray1305 - Jun 29, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 30, 2011
|superficial is external human" One should never judge a person by external appearance
4 - oh thank you i really appreciate that, i have serious English writing problem. also thank you inspiring me...
Writing FeedbackDashka - Jun 29, 2011 / Dashka - Jul 5, 2011
|"people want to educate" - attending college or university for many different reasons
NEW - Hi all, I am preparing for TOEFL exam, and this is my first writing. Please rate it and point...
Writing FeedbackeLearner - Jun 29, 2011 / — -
|Improving roads and highways or improving public transportation?
Writing Feedback123nnt - Jun 29, 2011 / 123nnt - Jun 30, 2011
|The twenty first century experienced the significant growth of globalization.
NEW - Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and...
Writing Feedbackthe leaf ninja - Jun 29, 2011 / — -
|There is no better time to be alive than now (really?)
2 - Hi there, I'm preparing for ielts academic too. Just want to help by providing few comments on your...
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Jun 29, 2011 / the leaf ninja - Jun 29, 2011
|Email and text messaging threatening the status of written language?
Writing Feedbackroygao2008 - Jun 29, 2011 / 123nnt - Jun 29, 2011
|TOEFL-Smoking should not be promitted in restaurants or other public places
9 - Ha ha, yeah... it's tough. We want to allow each other freedom..so we want to allow people to...
Writing Feedbackcalvinhmw - Jun 28, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 4, 2011
|Money spent on Sports should be equal to money spent on University Libraries
2 - hahahahah.. the leaf ninja... what a great username. It leave my mind wondering, because... well, it must be wet...
Writing FeedbackBecool - Jun 27, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 30, 2011
|Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. It save lots of valuable time
Writing Feedbacklinh202 - Jun 27, 2011 / linh202 - Jul 2, 2011
|"desire of good employment" - Why people attend college or university?
Writing Feedback123nnt - Jun 26, 2011 / 123nnt - Jun 30, 2011
|Money spent on the Arts by a government and number of participants in arts.
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Jun 26, 2011 / Geenesh - Jun 29, 2011
|"parents should limit the hours of watching TV programs or movies" - Toefl
4 - This is a great thread! I'll give my ideas, too... Plural: programs Watching television programs and... Use...
Writing Feedbacklisette - Jun 26, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 27, 2011
|TOEFL_A job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high
5 - Hi Bao, your writing is quite impressive. I would like to tell you something about your writing. I noticed...
Writing Feedbackbyxvera - Jun 25, 2011 / Becool - Jun 29, 2011
|TOEFL-Only movies that can teach us something about real life is worth watching agree
3 - Yes...that essay is really good. I'm quite nervous to take my exam.. I can't do like that. I have...
Writing Feedbackbyxvera - Jun 25, 2011 / winniesun - Jul 3, 2011
|To preach a Sermon
Writing Feedbackramonalford - Jun 24, 2011 / amrosca - Jun 27, 2011
|IELTS - Unlimited use of cars may cause many problems.
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Jun 24, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jun 24, 2011
|Parents are the best teachers (they bring us up, teach us, love us)
3 - The first sentence of the essay is a statement-of-the-obvious. I think you should give an unexpected, interesting statement to...
Writing Feedbacklinh202 - Jun 24, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 26, 2011
|Toefl: grades based solely on exams or based more on class participartoin
5 - Hi cool, I noticed your writing is very good except for some minor mistakes. You are over emphasizing using...
Writing FeedbackCoolmam9x - Jun 24, 2011 / Becool - Jun 30, 2011
|essay on 'Instead of developing its identity, Singapore is ..." - feedback
3 - This seems to be your thesis statement: Nonetheless, I think that the Singaporean Identity can still be felt here....
Writing FeedbackJulgoh - Jun 24, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 26, 2011
|One paragraph only, about a live N.B.A. game.
2 - Stunning your senses... very good... you should buy that domain name! :-) StunningYourSenses.com very cool... I think you...
Writing Feedbackcarsonleeallen - Jun 24, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 25, 2011
|TOEFL - should boys and girls learn in separate classrooms?
8 - I think seperation of the two genders in the educational field will not help them learn of the real...
Writing Feedbackzailn - Jun 23, 2011 / yoyott - Jun 28, 2011
|I need help on an Essay for the Documentary SiCKO
Writing FeedbackTaleah84 - Jun 23, 2011 / Taleah84 - Jun 24, 2011
|Should the criminals in jail be educated?---IELTS
4 - yes according to me looking at the background of the criminals , dey shud be educated but only after...
Writing FeedbackBruce - Jun 23, 2011 / shikhasachdeva - Jun 25, 2011
|To be a responsible adult,children should manage their own money at the young age
2 - Great writing here, and thanks, Ana, for the work you are doing to help all these essayists. I'll...
Writing Feedbackapieceof - Jun 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 25, 2011
|Pets are deserved to be behaved like the true family members?
Writing Feedbacklinh202 - Jun 23, 2011 / linh202 - Jun 26, 2011
|Being happy with a job is more important than having a high salary?
Writing Feedback123nnt - Jun 23, 2011 / 123nnt - Jun 26, 2011
|Immediate problems and anticipated problems which is more important to solve?
Writing Feedbackliuys65 - Jun 22, 2011 / liuys65 - Jun 26, 2011
|People attend colleges and universities: education, new friendships and relationships
NEW - Hey guys, it is me again. I just have another paragraph written out, and am hoping if someone will...
Writing Feedbackthrollen - Jun 22, 2011 / — -
|Success in life comes with 1% of Brilliance & Luck and rest of the 99% is hard work.
Writing Feedbacktamalroy1979 - Jun 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 25, 2011
|ielets essay popular events like the football world cup & other sporting
2 - Hi Spanish eyes, overall I would say that your ideas are good but just a gentle advice for you...
Writing FeedbackSpanish eyes - Jun 22, 2011 / the leaf ninja - Jun 29, 2011
|Should studying subjects that are needed by society be promoted?
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Jun 22, 2011 / Geenesh - Jun 23, 2011
|Movies have been popular for sixty years; inexpensive, entertaining and to go out with friend.
Writing Feedbackrosa paul - Jun 21, 2011 / rosa paul - Jun 25, 2011
|California State government like many is organized with a multi layered hierarchy.
2 - Hi Natasha, I was just wondering what mistakes were made on the first paper... what feedback did you get...
Writing Feedbackscout2family - Jun 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 23, 2011
|Spending time alone or with friends?
3 - They become an energizer for my life, they bring many advices ( advice is an uncountable noun) to me...
Writing FeedbackDongwon - Jun 21, 2011 / linh202 - Jun 24, 2011
|should all the advertisements be banned?---IELTS
4 - I'll pick up where Ana left off: That is not to say, however, that advertisements have no downsides. Of...
Writing Feedbackannie890714 - Jun 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 22, 2011
|IELTS: Academic subjects vs other subjects.
NEW - Hello everyone, I've been preparing myself for the ielts test. I'm looking for some suggestions on my writing. ...
Writing Feedbackluciustsang - Jun 21, 2011 / — -
|"Mark." - a story research
15 - Hei Edward! That's okay... people quickly improve their skill when they practice together here. I hope you always...
Writing Feedbackamrosca - Jun 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 2, 2011
|'go back to childhood' Do young people enjoy life more than older people do?
2 - Many adults have been wishingwish that they could go back to their childhood and enjoy their young life again....
Writing Feedbackmhu9 - Jun 21, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jun 21, 2011
|"my graduation from high school" - generic thank you/graduation announcement
2 - This is a liberal arts major, designed to engage students in creating a voice for influencing our social world....
Writing FeedbackVictorious2011 - Jun 20, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jun 21, 2011
|Are we free to make our own decision, or are we limited in the choices we make
Writing Feedbackthrollen - Jun 20, 2011 / throllen - Jun 22, 2011
|Some people believe that only pupils of similar interests should be given admissions
3 - Yes, the grammar is bad, but you communicate your meaning powerfully. Don't worry! If you are serious about...
Writing Feedbackvuducnam - Jun 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 21, 2011
|Destruction of the world's forests amounts to death of the world we currently know.
3 - ...the destruction of forests will diminish oxygen production and the quality of life for many animals. Therefore, due...
Writing Feedbackthrollen - Jun 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 20, 2011
|"an old man next to the Grandfather clock" - An event that I will never forget
6 - To EF_Kevin: Actually, this isn't a real story, i was actually kinda following my friend's story about the...
Writing FeedbackKieron1598 - Jun 18, 2011 / Kieron1598 - Jun 22, 2011
|Applying for Master's scholarship to Britain! Academic merit and benefit to country.
Writing FeedbackErique - Jun 18, 2011 / Erique - Jun 20, 2011
|"Hamster, My Favorite Pet" - My practice essay
8 - Thank you for your alter and praise. ^o^ thinking in English make me can not exactly convey what i...
Writing Feedbackulfhvoqm - Jun 17, 2011 / ulfhvoqm - Jun 20, 2011
|Is it easier now to form friendships than ever before? ; Meaning of "friendship".
4 - Great job, Zumrad! Ana, thanks for this work you did. Zumrad, maybe you can type the essay again and...
Writing FeedbackZuma - Jun 17, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 18, 2011
|IELTS:: The gaps between the rich and the poor.
5 - This seems incomplete as an intro paragraph. In my opinion, it is good to add a sentence that...
Writing FeedbackOriharaMairu - Jun 17, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 20, 2011
|Education brings up more job opportunities for those who are educated.
7 - I wonder,in essays if i give some data unrealistic but it seem to realistic Is that ok, Example :...
Writing Feedbackthrollen - Jun 17, 2011 / vuducnam - Jun 19, 2011
|Most criminals are set free once they finished their jail term.
3 - No need for FOR: ...regret their sins. A jail term is given to the criminal after a cautious,...
Writing Feedbackvuducnam - Jun 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 18, 2011
|"Those who use drugs should be automatically sentenced to time in prison" - IELTS
3 - ...and effective solutions must be taken achieved in order to trim down the number of drug addicts. ...
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Jun 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 18, 2011
|Essay describing how to you were completely misunderstood (becoming pregnant)
NEW - okay i have to write an essay overexperiences. have you ever attempted to change the way people view you?...
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