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|<IELTS> should goverment control media crime?
3 - Wow, Katie, this is some good writing... This will definitely set a bad example for the immature audiences who,...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Apr 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 24, 2011
|[Ielts] effects of living longer for individuals and society.
2 - However,the influences attended by the consequences of increasing life expectancy are becoming hot-bottom issues because both individuals and society...
Writing Feedbackfindthetime - Apr 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 24, 2011
|Mahmud Hesabi - building a statue of a famous person in your country
Writing Feedbackmahrou - Apr 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 24, 2011
|Coaches are the best teachers. Agree or disagree with this statement?
6 - Maybe it is okay! It might be my error. Where I live, "coach" usually refers to athletics. So... I...
Writing Feedbackhihbari - Apr 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 28, 2011
|St. Edwards Essay, Sibling and birth order influence
5 - Hi Amena, when you write, don't include anything like this: The relationship between siblings is a very important relationship,...
Writing Feedbackamenanoori - Apr 22, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 24, 2011
|IELTS; average weight of people; 'changing lifestyle'
5 - Hello; honestly i think you should rewrite the essay. what you wrote is ok but it lacks cohison and...
Writing Feedbacksophialee111 - Apr 22, 2011 / start208 - Apr 24, 2011
|Essay for IELTS: The position of women in society
3 - Right after this sentence, before you end the first paragraph, I think you should add one more sentence....
Writing Feedbackdate_doctor - Apr 22, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 24, 2011
|computer in spite of teachers
Writing FeedbackMarsha2809 - Apr 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 23, 2011
|new technology school buildings wouldn't be needed in the future
4 - Hello Ismail and Annika, great work here. I'll add something that you may not know... the word Internet...
Writing Feedbackstart208 - Apr 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 23, 2011
|A decision should be popular with others
Writing Feedbackbahareh - Apr 21, 2011 / bahareh - Apr 24, 2011
|IELTS: Formal exams are the only way to assess a students true knowledge. Agree?
2 - I read Task_2 and I think it started with good introduction, but it still needs more senteces to complete...
Writing Feedbacksobin - Apr 21, 2011 / bahareh - Apr 21, 2011
|IELTS Essay Practice: People spend more and more time at their work place
Writing Feedbackbiangbiang - Apr 21, 2011 / hihbari - Apr 23, 2011
|Students to take a variety of courses? - AW-No.1-随你-Education
3 - Great corrections, nini!! :-) I'll give some other ideas: When choosing what to learn in the university, more...
Writing Feedbacksplendourchen - Apr 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 22, 2011
|Languages That I Know
5 - In the first paragraph, you gave a lot of information, but I was left wondering what the main idea...
Writing Feedbackalemsada - Apr 20, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 23, 2011
|IELTS TASK-2 (some avoid changes and others believe changes are good)
4 - pretty good. however, from my perspective, dividing the begining setence in second paragraph into several setences, with linking words...
Writing FeedbackNeeta - Apr 20, 2011 / sophialee111 - Apr 22, 2011
|should a government focus its budget more on very young children education?
4 - You do not need to capitalize the word government: The Government government has been more and more... ...
Writing Feedbackyoyofuny - Apr 20, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 22, 2011
|A lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more vacation time
4 - Awesome, Jesus! Thanks so much for this work you did... I see one more correction, and it involves...
Writing Feedbacktiantian - Apr 20, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 22, 2011
|IELTS ESSAY: Children work for money varites from country to country.
Writing Feedbackrrivanh - Apr 20, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 22, 2011
|My mother: Although she is not my whole life, she is still a big part in my heart. Important Person
2 - In my mind, one of the most important people is my mother.---Do you see the small change I made?...
Writing FeedbackMargo - Apr 20, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 21, 2011
|IELTS: technology versus traditional skills and life
Writing Feedbackamyllei - Apr 20, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 21, 2011
|Toefl essay-In a team, those who do not accept others' criticism cannot succeed.
2 - Great job here... not many errors! Think of a person who always convinces others that they are wrong...
Writing Feedbackyoyofuny - Apr 20, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 21, 2011
|Universities bear the responsibility of cultivating and developing interests of students.
4 - Bahareh Thank you for your remarks, bahareh! This essay is my first Issue, and I quote many old ideas...
Writing Feedbackaosi111 - Apr 20, 2011 / aosi111 - Apr 24, 2011
|About sports and international intension. Patriotic emotions?
Writing Feedbackamyllei - Apr 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 21, 2011
|"My friend is called Yuri, he is from Riga." - Describe a Person That You Know
Writing Feedbackneoner - Apr 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 21, 2011
|IELTS: Nowadays there are more opportunities for women than there were in the past
6 - Yes, carefulness is okay. Some people just write "care" to mean carefulness, so you could do that, too. ...
Writing Feedbacktoxic110 - Apr 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 23, 2011
|My family - relationships with dad, grandma, aunt.
6 - Description of my best friend Nasnet I met nasnet in Amierca when I was 13 year old. Our birthdays...
Writing Feedbackselam19 - Apr 15, 2011 / selam19 - Oct 7, 2011
|IELTS ; Growing traffic & pollution can be controlled by increasing petrol prices
Writing Feedbacksophialee111 - Apr 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 21, 2011
|"the different types of fuels used to power the United States?" -Classification essay
Writing Feedbackmarzyola1 - Apr 19, 2011 / marzyola1 - Apr 23, 2011
|Grading students and test scores - are they benefitial for improving students?
3 - Many people think that getting high grades is not beneficial for improving the students lives because they have a...
Writing Feedbackmahrou - Apr 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 22, 2011
|'Honesty to self and 'Honesty to others' - is it really important?
Writing Feedbackbestgirl - Apr 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2011
|The main causes of divorce
2 - Usually, you want to end your paper with a question but I don't think there's anything wrong with...
Writing Feedbackalemsada - Apr 18, 2011 / engwriting101 - Apr 18, 2011
|"Claudia, my cousin and best friend" - Describe a person you know
Writing Feedbackbrinastar - Apr 18, 2011 / alemsada - Apr 21, 2011
|Students Should not be in Control of their own Education.
Writing Feedbackbahareh - Apr 18, 2011 / bahareh - Apr 21, 2011
|People who have different interest are less likely to be an ally
4 - One may prefer to spend weekends sitting in the couch, eating popcorn and watching movies. The other may...
Writing Feedbackbutterbescotch - Apr 18, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2011
|Celebrities who committed crimes should be allowed to come back ?
2 - For several years, it has been one of the most controversial issues has been whether or not we should...
Writing Feedbackkoreanguy1 - Apr 18, 2011 / EF_Susan - Apr 18, 2011
|Face-to-face communication preferable to those who need to know what the interlocutor's feelings are
Writing Feedbackannieb - Apr 18, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2011
|I strongly believe that pets must be part from every family
Writing Feedbacktdamqnova - Apr 17, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2011
|[IELTS]should children be made to obey the rules?
4 - I think you should add another sentence to that first paragraph. The thesis statement is missing! Add a sentence...
Writing Feedbackfindthetime - Apr 17, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2011
|TOEFL - Basic economic class can help the students touch the surface of this field
4 - This is a great thread! Do you have questions about any of the corrections? I don't think anyone noticed...
Writing Feedbackdaliqin - Apr 17, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2011
|[IELTS]more young people are leaving school and unable to find jobs after graduation
Writing Feedbackjamliu0229 - Apr 17, 2011 / jamliu0229 - Apr 20, 2011
|Television has brought positive or negative effects on children behavior.
4 - I see where dumi corrected "argue" and added "d." argued. It is argued that... Do you know why that...
Writing Feedbackroaa - Apr 17, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2011
|'traditional life styles have to be changed' - opinion essay
2 - Oh... I see... at the beginning, you meant to type "pace." Nowadays, the pace of development is faster...
Writing Feedbackcharlotte_macyc - Apr 17, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2011
|Toefl - high school should open basic economic course to the their students
4 - Hi there, I see some great help being given in this thread. Thanks, everyone! I'll give a few...
Writing Feedbackjennyxff - Apr 17, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 19, 2011
|Advantages and disadvantages of the internet. Increasing the living standards?
Writing Feedbackrrivanh - Apr 16, 2011 / paula13 - Mar 15, 2014
|Work or travel during gap year - Discuss!
3 - Working and traveling before the start of university studies is common in many countries. Most students are enthusiastic about...
Writing Feedbackcharlotte_macyc - Apr 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 19, 2011
|Write a paragraph about the differences between the city in the past and now.
3 - No need to capitalize "technology" in that first sentence. With Technology technology advancements and the increasing numbers...
Writing Feedbackmrxkms - Apr 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 19, 2011
|US marriage and divorce in 1970 and 2000. IELTS Task
Writing FeedbackARIA - Apr 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2011
|IETLS - advertising and consumer goods. What are the real needs of customers?
Writing FeedbackNeeta - Apr 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 19, 2011
|Different Forms of Entertainment ( Bar Graph) Task 1
Writing Feedbackturalfh - Apr 16, 2011 / turalfh - Apr 19, 2011
|TOEFL essay--In a team, those who do not accept others' criticism can not succeed
Writing Feedbackdaliqin - Apr 16, 2011 / daliqin - Apr 17, 2011
|Both movies and television has great influence on people.
3 - I agree with engwriting101 Maybe you could use "people" or" individual" to replace your own experiences. because it should...
Writing Feedbackcutie - Apr 15, 2011 / findthetime - Apr 19, 2011
|Spending life time in a changing manner. IELTS Task 2
Writing FeedbackARIA - Apr 15, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 19, 2011
|Write a two paragraphs, each describing a city in Syria. Then compare them.
3 - I don't know if "eating-lover" would be right. I don't really like it. Actually, I like that sentence...
Writing Feedbackmrxkms - Apr 15, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 17, 2011
|TOEFL eassy- it is easier to succeed nowadays than in the past. agree or not?
4 - Dear Daliqin Lets start with your forum type which is "Essaya, Term Papers" which I am not sure...
Writing Feedbackdaliqin - Apr 15, 2011 / ARIA - Apr 15, 2011
|GRE issue topic---faculty should spend time working outside the academic world
Writing FeedbackZhongwen Xu - Apr 15, 2011 / Zhongwen Xu - Apr 20, 2011
|We all want to make big diffirences in our life, -Education
Writing FeedbackSICHENGLI - Apr 15, 2011 / SICHENGLI - Apr 17, 2011
|IELTS (task 2) A year break for traveling or work before joining university.
10 - Dear All, Thank you for providing feedback. I hope you will continue to give you guidances in future...
Writing FeedbackNeeta - Apr 15, 2011 / Neeta - Apr 20, 2011
|TOEFL -the way a person dressed is a good indication of personality?
4 - Yeah, maybe it is poor, but you are smart! Lots of people in the 21st century are bilingual, and...
Writing Feedbackdannier - Apr 15, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 19, 2011
|Morality of Vegetarianism Persuasive Essay
4 - engwriting101 -- it was just a persuasive essay. Kevin -- thank you! really helpful advice, I'll be sure...
Writing FeedbackAmyCarol - Apr 14, 2011 / AmyCarol - Apr 16, 2011
|What was your biggest challenge adjusting to college like as a freshman?
3 - Well, I certainly do! We need lots of help to make sure everyone improves their skill! :-) As...
Writing FeedbackJd87rh - Apr 14, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 16, 2011
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