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|IELTS> THE PROS AND CONS OF ANIMAL TESTING
Writing Feedbackthe leaf ninja - Jul 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 18, 2011
|Laws should be flexible (take account of various circumstances, times, and places)
4 - Thanks, it's great to have you here! it seems like you are already proficient at writing, and now it...
Writing Feedbackcchcal - Jul 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 19, 2011
|21st century is going to be new era and step forward to ambitious that we are calling imagination
Writing Feedbackshahdad - Jul 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 18, 2011
|Ielts topic: choosing studying at home or at school
4 - Okay, let's fix this complicated sentence: Studying with many classmates in an educational environment not only brings me...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 15, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 17, 2011
|Ambitious dreams encourage people to endlessly try for their success
3 - ... because it seems to be more advantageous to achieve the goals under general circumstances. After thorough consideration,...
Writing Feedbacksei - Jul 15, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 17, 2011
|In the pursuit of peace, is it okay to sacrifice the lives and freedoms of some?
2 - As a result, many people were stripped of their personal belongings, status, and wealth, and the people of the...
Writing FeedbackRoxal - Jul 15, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 17, 2011
|My pet tiger, bitten by a snake and died.
Writing FeedbackScott30 - Jul 15, 2011 / EricJ - Jul 17, 2011
|IELTS ESSAY - FREEDOM TO EXPRESS IDEAS; '3 Idiots'
6 - yup you are right,this days i am getting really reckless,write goverment instead of government or resturant instead of...
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Jul 15, 2011 / shahdad - Jul 16, 2011
|Classroom management and discipline, practical every day.
5 - I really enjoyed your essay. Though, before you submit essay's proof read and make sure your grammar is correct....
Writing Feedbackcelu - Jul 14, 2011 / Shirley Tey - Jul 18, 2011
|TOEFL: do you agree that technology helps students learn more and faster?
4 - Hi. Now a days nowadays it is possible for teachers to provide student with sutable materials in different formats...
Writing Feedbackshanbalook - Jul 14, 2011 / shhzbch - Jul 15, 2011
|Multicultural society is much more beneficial?
2 - To begin with, like the magnificent rainbow with seven colors, the variety itself is a priceless gift, and when...
Writing Feedbackmegiacodon - Jul 14, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jul 14, 2011
|TOEFL:'history and geography'; working teenagers while they are still students.
4 - Most people hypothesize that the students have a responsibility to study well at school.----Practice typing the sentence this way....
Writing Feedbacklinh202 - Jul 14, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 16, 2011
|"my father whom i respect forever" - The person i would like to be
Writing Feedbackiloveyou - Jul 14, 2011 / iloveyou - Jul 17, 2011
|TOEFL - the government should support the scientific research with no practical use?
5 - I like your point about the government and the real life. Good essay!! Therefore, I firmly believe that government...
Writing Feedbackblindside - Jul 14, 2011 / kevinhsin1124 - Aug 1, 2011
|Less than half of high school graduates with a diploma. - an essay
6 - Sounds like the best kind. Probably because that is what actually interests you. In my senior...
Writing Feedbackamrosca - Jul 14, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 20, 2011
|Do advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives?
NEW - I wrote a Writing Task 2 example and the task description is "Some people say that advertising encourages us...
Writing Feedbackkimrivera11 - Jul 14, 2011 / — -
|"studying in overseas" - IS IT GOOD TO STUDY ABROAD ?
3 - Now trim away the extra words: Many would be definitely be glad at the thought of being able to...
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Jul 14, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 16, 2011
|Academic writing Ielts: Effects of globalization
5 - Endless controversy has erupted over globalization. The purpose of my writing is to critically analyse the typical impacts...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 15, 2011
|TOEFL writing - Are parents best teachers? Yes, they are.
Writing Feedbacknguyendinhtuong - Jul 13, 2011 / nguyendinhtuong - Jul 15, 2011
|'born in Dehiwala; life of opportunities' - Essay about "MySelf"
Writing Feedbackavanthihfc - Jul 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 15, 2011
|TOELF-should children play computer games
5 - Does this first sentence NOT reveal what she will write about and what her feelings on this matter...
Writing Feedbackshhzbch - Jul 13, 2011 / amrosca - Jul 14, 2011
|About MY, Rahul, brother from PUNE
Writing Feedbackvijay kumar - Jul 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 15, 2011
|The reasons for learning languages of 1000 native and non-native speakers
3 - I have a suggestion for making the beginning clearer: The bar chart presents results of a questionnaire distributed to...
Writing Feedbackoonguyenminh - Jul 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 15, 2011
|SAT - Are people more productive and successful if they ignore opinions of others?
2 - Welcome, Geetanjali! Hey, Mirela, you are doing a lot of great work lately! Thanks, I hope you don't steal...
Writing Feedbackgeetanjali - Jul 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 15, 2011
|IELTS - School Graduate with negative attitudes - Cause and Solution
Writing Feedbacklearner26 - Jul 13, 2011 / shahdad - Jul 16, 2011
|IELT writing: what is your view of success?
4 - I appreciate the chance of letting me to overcome it. Do not capitalize all those words: I Will...
Writing Feedbackextrafresh - Jul 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 19, 2011
|'money can't buy happiness' - Is it more important to do work that pays well
Writing FeedbackRoxal - Jul 12, 2011 / Roxal - Jul 15, 2011
|TOEFL: Some people like to communicate by email and voice mail. Other face-to-face.
3 - Ajit, I really like your attitude and your suggestion. I am practising in writting but due to time limitation...
Writing Feedbackghafarimahsa - Jul 12, 2011 / ghafarimahsa - Jul 21, 2011
|What are factors which are related to academic success in high-school students?
NEW - As a high-school student, getting your distinctions is the pinnacle of our tedious academic endeavors. Thus drowning ourselves in...
Writing Feedbackisabellaclaudia - Jul 12, 2011 / — -
|IELTS (CHILDREN AND TV vs. SPENDING TIME OUTDOORS)
Writing Feedbacklearner26 - Jul 12, 2011 / Jennifer Zhang - Jul 27, 2011
|IELT writing: who should teach children to be good member of society?
5 - I personally believe that is not the sole responsibility of parents to teach children to be good members of...
Writing Feedbackextrafresh - Jul 12, 2011 / keemae1 - Jul 20, 2011
|TOEFL essay: "quick decisions are unsafe decisions"
15 - Hi start208, I mean "but are (not always wrong) and (very in need)". But I think i'd better delete...
Writing Feedbackleeward - Jul 12, 2011 / leeward - Jul 24, 2011
|"fulfilled the dreams and aspirations of him and his father" - my personal essay
Writing FeedbackRChodavadia - Jul 12, 2011 / RChodavadia - Jul 12, 2011
|Schoolyard: A good place for socialization.
Writing Feedbackcelu - Jul 11, 2011 / isabellaclaudia - Jul 12, 2011
|Myself as a teacher: "Never loose your strength and confidence."
Writing Feedbackn8dewangan - Jul 11, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 13, 2011
|TOEFL:Do you agree or disagree with the statement that a zoo has no useful purpose.
4 - Some people may believe that a zoo is futile in the era of globalization, which people can develop their...
Writing FeedbackAMM - Jul 11, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 13, 2011
|Financial education should be mandatory component of the school program
4 - I think you should type the essay again, and use amrosca's suggestions. That is the only way to improve....
Writing Feedbackshahdad - Jul 11, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 13, 2011
|Parents are the best teacher. Do you agree or disagree with this. ( TOEFL writing)
3 - Here is another idea: First and foremost, personal enjoyment is where I put my priority. ----This is a simple...
Writing Feedbacktunpip_1994 - Jul 11, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 13, 2011
|TOEFL - Learning to be independent is essential for young adults
3 - Good support and analysis of your point. I think you could make it stronger by not stating that it's...
Writing Feedbacksandy1210428 - Jul 11, 2011 / s1394 - Jul 12, 2011
|Discuss the causes of this phenomenon: In general, people are living longer now.
2 - hello, I like the elaboration of your essay. its a great essay, but i just note some words that...
Writing Feedbacklinh202 - Jul 11, 2011 / isabellaclaudia - Jul 12, 2011
|"The Crusifix of Pope John Paul the II" - Describe an insignificant object
Writing Feedbackrlatin2002 - Jul 10, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 16, 2011
|TOEFL: Modern cooking methods have improved our life-style significantly
4 - It is really not a big difference. Susan made a change because it sounds awkward to say, "With technology...
Writing Feedbackfairwind - Jul 10, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 24, 2011
|ILETS essay. Becoming difficult to escape from media.
4 - Alisha, no one else other than a professional IELTS examiner would be able to exactly grade your essay...
Writing FeedbackAlisha123 - Jul 10, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jul 20, 2011
|Barcelona (where would you like to travel and why)
Writing Feedbackghafarimahsa - Jul 10, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 14, 2011
|TOEFL: 'school memories'; Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life.
5 - I think there is an error. First, in childhood, most people are happier than in adulthood. Your...
Writing Feedbackzuika94 - Jul 10, 2011 / sunglyeol - Jul 29, 2011
|If we choose an animal to like, we should do our best to protect them
Writing Feedbackghafarimahsa - Jul 10, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jul 12, 2011
|lot of people migrate to mega cities,reasons and the way to prevent the trend.
Writing Feedbackshahdad - Jul 10, 2011 / shahdad - Jul 16, 2011
|It is More Important to Work at a Job that You Enjoy than it's to Earn a Lot of Money
4 - Hey, I don't think there is anything to worry about. I read the essay, and the mistakes are very...
Writing Feedbackbahareh - Jul 9, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 13, 2011
|IELTS ADVERTISING- POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE PART OF OUR LIVES
7 - Many believe that advertising has brought great benefits to lives. Therefore, it should be considered a positive activity while...
Writing Feedbackthe leaf ninja - Jul 9, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 11, 2011
|Topic: "Why go to university?" - making dreams come true?
2 - GreatdealsLarge number of student go to universities per year in order to have a healthy and active environment,obtainacquire...
Writing Feedbacknguyendinhtuong - Jul 9, 2011 / dumi - Jul 9, 2011
|TOEFL: The best way of learning life (listening to advice or personal experience?)
NEW - TOPIC: Some people believe that the best way of learning life is by listening to the advice of family...
Writing Feedbackleeward - Jul 9, 2011 / — -
|Sex education should be a compulsory part of the secondary curriculum
5 - EF_Kevin: you have a great English skill and i am grateful for your feedback!Thanks...I will strive for the best...
Writing Feedbacksamuel11023 - Jul 9, 2011 / samuel11023 - Jul 11, 2011
|Ielts - use of nuclear technology should be discouraged even for civil purposes
4 - Welcome to EF!! I'm glad you are enjoying the sight. Thanks for posting! Be careful of little...
Writing Feedbackw_even - Jul 9, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 11, 2011
|My Grandma, youthful in spirit. Creative writing piece.
NEW - Hi, this is a piece of writing about my grandma, I am strugling with the structure and flow so...
Writing FeedbackGeeRaCeR - Jul 8, 2011 / — -
|ILETS Essay. Mass communication and transport continue to grow.
NEW - As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon...
Writing FeedbackAlisha123 - Jul 8, 2011 / — -
|TOEFL:Government should regard investing in building roads as the most important
5 - Yes, that is a good idea. However, sometimes you can get the wrong idea easily if you rely on...
Writing Feedbacklinh202 - Jul 8, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jul 12, 2011
|TOEFL-people should have hobbies and do physical activities
Writing Feedbacklisette - Jul 7, 2011 / lisette - Jul 10, 2011
|Technology or social needs ? Which should get priority over the other?
2 - Every governmental expenditure should be well thought out before being made. This facilitates much of the bureaucratic activity....
Writing Feedbackangellin25 - Jul 7, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jul 7, 2011
|IELTS: Space Exploration, money should be spent on? 'few compulsory drawbacks'
2 - As the competition between developed countries has become frequent, they try to build a reputation by means of exploration...
Writing Feedbackwinniesun - Jul 7, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 9, 2011
|IELTS> "Employees working at home" contribute benefits to employers?
3 - Plural: ...by their beloved family members may... encourage the employees to produce get more work done. ......
Writing Feedbackwinniesun - Jul 7, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 9, 2011
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