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|economic development vs environment ---IELTS
8 - Great question!! 1、Thus, a great number of people firmly believe we will keep up this upward trend and...
Writing FeedbackJennifer Zhang - Jul 27, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 31, 2011
|IELTS; Government should spend money on ARTs, not only on public services
7 - Thus, a great number of people firmly believe that we will keep up this upward trend, achieving higher goals...
Writing FeedbackJennifer Zhang - Jul 27, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Aug 2, 2011
|"wheat export among three areas in 1985" - ielts exam
Writing Feedbacklllppp333 - Jul 27, 2011 / lllppp333 - Jul 28, 2011
|'valuable and irrecoverable'; Should a city preserve its old buildings?
6 - First, maintaining the old, historic buildings is a money-consuming task. First, maintaining the old, historic buildings needs money-consuming task....
Writing Feedbackfairwind - Jul 27, 2011 / mybloodyromance - Aug 3, 2011
|CBEST "As you get older, it is harder to have heroes, but it is sort of necessary."
NEW - Hi everyone, Please help! Please help! I need help with the grammar and the conclusion. Any suggestion are...
Writing Feedbackatjobsearch - Jul 26, 2011 / — -
|TOEFL: If no food at home we should have a restaurant in the neighborhood
Writing Feedbacksoshianet - Jul 26, 2011 / soshianet - Jul 29, 2011
|TV is the most effective media to spread information and communicating culture
Writing Feedbackjamliu0229 - Jul 26, 2011 / ekekek - Jul 26, 2011
|TOEFL - The government should support science research
12 - I think you got a nice start though strating with 'some people' are generic.. however, i feel that conclusion...
Writing Feedbacksunglyeol - Jul 26, 2011 / hjy222 - Sep 10, 2011
|Watching movies in a theater is more fun than watching them at home.
5 - IMO, there are some advice i have ever taken toefl test training class in China, my teacher told...
Writing Feedbackcsv8674xn - Jul 26, 2011 / Neil zhang - Jul 29, 2011
|CAMBRIDGE ESSAY; Good teachers set challenging tasks for their students.
2 - The majority of people acquire a substantial amount of notions. ---This sentence is not incorrect, but it is a...
Writing Feedbackmuge - Jul 25, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 27, 2011
|TELTS-- traditional ideas help teenagers for promising future?
2 - "Thinking twice before action as well as paying more attention to words are some treasures in traditional thinking and...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 25, 2011 / hvthoteen - Jul 25, 2011
|IELTS --Use cultural heritage to develop international tourism, right or wrong?
4 - Hearing some environmental activists' concerns about the negatives brought by international tourism, much worry arose in my heart as...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 25, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 27, 2011
|TOEFL, The best things in life do not cost money, agree or disagree
9 - Kevin, I am really thankful for your corrections. Besides, your idea is so nice and meaningful. Thanks for all...
Writing Feedbackghafarimahsa - Jul 25, 2011 / ghafarimahsa - Aug 11, 2011
|if in Rome, do as the Romans do-disagree
2 - learning new things in there who live in there is one of the very international cities the food they...
Writing Feedbacknikkinia - Jul 25, 2011 / Jennifer Zhang - Jul 27, 2011
|Ielts: Your friend has enough money either to go on a holiday or to buy a new
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 24, 2011 / hvthoteen - Jul 25, 2011
|IELTS> 'strict policies' - urbanisation - benefits and drawbacks
Writing Feedbackthe leaf ninja - Jul 24, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 27, 2011
|'People are envy'; advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need
3 - Let's pay attention to the structure. i think your aim is to write an academic writing for toefl or...
Writing Feedbackshahdad - Jul 23, 2011 / hvthoteen - Jul 24, 2011
|"girls tend to learn arts while boys science" uni. accept equal numbers of students?
3 - I'll make some grammar corrections. Please practice typing these sentences: Confronted by a situation in which girls are...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 25, 2011
|[more alternative explanations]- Argument-15-by shiyi
2 - However, if we examine the facts carefully, we can find one or more alternative explanations that could rival the...
Writing Feedbackshiyi - Jul 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 25, 2011
|'different styles and constructions'; Preserving old historical buildings? TOEFL
4 - I don't like the first sentence, because it is a statement of the obvious. 2 words: Every day...
Writing Feedbackessaylearner - Jul 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 25, 2011
|Ielts: (career / life experience) - Why do people go to university or college?
5 - I like the way you summed up your argument in that first paragraph. Very good stuff here. In a...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 25, 2011
|IELTS : The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA
2 - One graph depicts... Two graphs depict... English has weird rules for singular and plural. The two graphs depict...
Writing Feedbackroygao2008 - Jul 22, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 25, 2011
|IELTS- Writing task 1: Pie Charts: Valentine's Day Gifts
2 - Those of the "fair sex" prefer to offer candy to their lovers, 21% of women compared with 14% of...
Writing Feedbacknguyenminh - Jul 22, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 25, 2011
|"make my parents proud" - Unusual Circumstances Essay
Writing Feedbackeduardo8 - Jul 22, 2011 / langers1 - Aug 23, 2011
|students' scores and subject assessments - A TOEFL retouches and assignments
4 - As I read the introduction, I notice that you have a high level of proficiency in English. The only...
Writing FeedbackelwinOUTOFMIND - Jul 22, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 25, 2011
|CAMBRIDGE TOPIC; The widespread use of the Internet
7 - Thank you very much ef_kevin i have a ibt 5th august therefore i am trying to do something:) i...
Writing Feedbackmuge - Jul 22, 2011 / muge - Jul 25, 2011
|GRE Issue - the word thinking is tightly coupled with the word originality, which cannot be detached
Writing Feedbackbimala73 - Jul 22, 2011 / bimala73 - Aug 10, 2011
|Of all the mentioned five countries, Turkey had the highest spending in food, drinks and tobacco
Writing FeedbackDaisy Sircar - Jul 22, 2011 / roygao2008 - Jul 22, 2011
|Tourism could be very important for the development of many countries
6 - It is believed that tourism is playing an important part in the economy of different countries and it also...
Writing Feedbackthe leaf ninja - Jul 22, 2011 / linh202 - Jul 28, 2011
|TOEFL - Tv has NO negative effects on children.
Writing Feedbackwlsguszizi - Jul 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 23, 2011
|Essay about a personal quality(ies) that I have and am proud of
4 - The measure of the impossibility of an idea is directly correlated ---no, the measure is not corelated. The level...
Writing FeedbackRChodavadia - Jul 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 23, 2011
|"beauty is in fact in the eyes of the beholder" - O level essay BEAUTY
3 - Either it be centuries before BC, or today in this every-modernizing society, h You already made this point. I...
Writing Feedbackisabellaclaudia - Jul 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 23, 2011
|Fatherhood, motherhood, and bringing children up
3 - It is true that mothers are definitely responsible for number of babies they would like to have, when to...
Writing Feedbackgwapo - Jul 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 23, 2011
|Toefl essay: Eating out or Eating at home? Home food is the best!
Writing Feedbacksoshianet - Jul 21, 2011 / soshianet - Jul 23, 2011
|"Child's learning process" - Teaching Context
3 - TQ Kevin...
Writing Feedbackisai - Jul 21, 2011 / isai - Jul 24, 2011
|Faridabad, Tracing a town's culture
6 - That's called organized religion! :-) Ha, so you are in Faridabad... so interesting to be talking to...
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Jul 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Aug 6, 2011
|Originality does not mean thinking something that was never thought before; it means
Writing Feedbackghafarimahsa - Jul 21, 2011 / ghafarimahsa - Jul 23, 2011
|TOEFL: Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place
2 - I really like the way you support your sentences, I would like to know if you write this essay...
Writing Feedbacklinh202 - Jul 21, 2011 / ghafarimahsa - Jul 21, 2011
|The american dream/economic mobility essay
3 - Living the American dream today is almost like trying to keep up with the times. (Now add a sentence...
Writing Feedbackwritinwy2much - Jul 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 23, 2011
|My way of life and my parents way of life
Writing Feedbackmuge - Jul 20, 2011 / — -
|(IELTS) What's the greatest invention in the modern world?
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 20, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 22, 2011
|(IELTS) Internet teaching or traditional school? THX~
4 - ...brand new way for all citizens, particularly in rural area. Thus some parents suggest that traditional school education...
Writing Feedbackekekek - Jul 20, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 22, 2011
|IELTS writing: Is education priviledged for youth, or lifelong task?
4 - If you are talking about one educator's point of view, the apostrophe goes before the s. If you are...
Writing Feedbackextrafresh - Jul 20, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 22, 2011
|IELTS - 'infrastructure' - How to solve growing traffic and pollution problems
Writing FeedbackIsabella_ - Jul 20, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 22, 2011
|Important truths are outrageous when they begin; GRE ISSUE TOPIC
4 - Thanks much Kevin for valuable feedback and taking time to dig into each details of my essay. I really...
Writing Feedbackbimala73 - Jul 20, 2011 / bimala73 - Jul 23, 2011
|IELTS task 2: Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part
5 - Thanks to all of you!!! these are the precious reviews! thanks again!!! In my country, we have...
Writing Feedbackthanhnam46 - Jul 20, 2011 / thanhnam46 - Jul 21, 2011
|some important aspects of incorporating technology in education.
NEW - Please read and correct to me. Technology is an outcome of education and now education benefits lot from...
Writing Feedbackstart208 - Jul 19, 2011 / — -
|Free mobile phone and access to the Internet to find jobs sponsored by tax payers?
9 - I don't know how those are scored. I would be guessing. Somebody told me about the way they score...
Writing Feedbacktosucceed999 - Jul 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 29, 2011
|Unfinished Argumentative essay. Students work while study. revising/thoughts
2 - For instance, a job added to an individuals busy schedule could help aid them to become more productive. ...
Writing Feedbacksafiyeve - Jul 19, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jul 20, 2011
|Standards of zoos should be leveled up; 'KEEPING ANIMALS IN ZOOS, RIGHT OR WRONG?'
7 - hi the leaf ninja, I think your essay is very clear and decent. You defence both situation on...
Writing Feedbackthe leaf ninja - Jul 19, 2011 / muge - Jul 22, 2011
|'positive reinforncement to teach is to praise positive actions, ignore negative ones
3 - The underlying assumption that is therefore needed for the putting forward of my following reasons is that to measure...
Writing Feedbackcchcal - Jul 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 21, 2011
|GLOBALIZATION: Differences between nations are becoming less and less evident.
29 - "CONSCIENCE" -THIS is the best religion in the world... no culture ,tradition,ritual, or religion is above one's conscience..when ur...
Writing Feedbackbirdman - Jul 19, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jul 23, 2011
|TOEFL essay "Our need for friendship may be greater than ever"
4 - Thank you bhaweshwebmaste and EF_Kevin for your help!! I really appreciate it! I am very pleased to hear so...
Writing FeedbackU_Are_Awesome - Jul 19, 2011 / U_Are_Awesome - Jul 23, 2011
|Topic on Nuclear Technology - To what extend is it dangerous to life on Earth?
2 - Thanks Ajit, great stuff here! Ramandeep, can you rewrite the essay based on the corrections Ajit gave? ...
Writing FeedbackDhillon - Jul 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 21, 2011
|IELTS - "having heaven gift is offering a better a chance"
4 - seong~ Here is some advices from my perspective. 1.In the first para., you mention that "In my point...
Writing Feedbackletsroll - Jul 19, 2011 / ekekek - Jul 21, 2011
|Students' motivation should come from teachers and family
Writing Feedbackcelu - Jul 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 23, 2011
|An essay about effects of Living in a Foreign Conuntry!
4 - Living abroad is a tempting opportunity for people, because it could lead to gaining a lot of useful experiences...
Writing FeedbackFares - Jul 18, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 21, 2011
|Ielts topic: why do some students study abroad
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 18, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 20, 2011
|IELTS> Are environmental problems too big to be managed by individuals
Writing Feedbackthe leaf ninja - Jul 18, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 22, 2011
|what would we do to live longer?
3 - In order to help the essayist, we need to type the sentence the correct way. Hivarasti, practice typing...
Writing Feedbackhivarasti - Jul 17, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 20, 2011
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