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|GLOBALIZATION: Differences between nations are becoming less and less evident.
29 - "CONSCIENCE" -THIS is the best religion in the world... no culture ,tradition,ritual, or religion is above one's conscience..when ur...
Writing Feedbackbirdman - Jul 19, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jul 23, 2011
|TOEFL essay "Our need for friendship may be greater than ever"
4 - Thank you bhaweshwebmaste and EF_Kevin for your help!! I really appreciate it! I am very pleased to hear so...
Writing FeedbackU_Are_Awesome - Jul 19, 2011 / U_Are_Awesome - Jul 23, 2011
|Topic on Nuclear Technology - To what extend is it dangerous to life on Earth?
2 - Thanks Ajit, great stuff here! Ramandeep, can you rewrite the essay based on the corrections Ajit gave? ...
Writing FeedbackDhillon - Jul 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 21, 2011
|IELTS - "having heaven gift is offering a better a chance"
4 - seong~ Here is some advices from my perspective. 1.In the first para., you mention that "In my point...
Writing Feedbackletsroll - Jul 19, 2011 / ekekek - Jul 21, 2011
|Students' motivation should come from teachers and family
Writing Feedbackcelu - Jul 19, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 23, 2011
|An essay about effects of Living in a Foreign Conuntry!
4 - Living abroad is a tempting opportunity for people, because it could lead to gaining a lot of useful experiences...
Writing FeedbackFares - Jul 18, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 21, 2011
|Ielts topic: why do some students study abroad
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 18, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 20, 2011
|IELTS> Are environmental problems too big to be managed by individuals
Writing Feedbackthe leaf ninja - Jul 18, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 22, 2011
|what would we do to live longer?
3 - In order to help the essayist, we need to type the sentence the correct way. Hivarasti, practice typing...
Writing Feedbackhivarasti - Jul 17, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 20, 2011
|"borrowing money from a friend and friendship" - TOEFL iBT
Writing Feedbackmhr - Jul 17, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 22, 2011
|Ielts writing: taking a gap year or entering university as soon as possible ?
5 - ...the choice about which major to study.---I added ABOUT Don't make little errors, like not capitalizing "I"...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 17, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 20, 2011
|Children should not sit quietly in their seats and learn in a rote manner.
4 - Well, it seems like you are saying adults should be strict in order to demonstrate to other adults that...
Writing Feedbackstart208 - Jul 17, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 19, 2011
|Existence of the supernatural? Essay wrote on watching "The exorcism of Emily Rose"
12 - My sweetest frnd, I rarely get offensive/aggressive ever--i wasn't getting aggressive, but i just found Idiocy a cute...
Writing Feedbackajit88rai - Jul 17, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jul 18, 2011
|ielts essay - ways of reducing traffic conditions
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Jul 16, 2011 / Geenesh - Jul 19, 2011
|what can society do to assist homeless people?
Writing FeedbackFly109238 - Jul 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 18, 2011
|How to succeed in learning a foreign languge.
Writing Feedbackstart208 - Jul 15, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jul 17, 2011
|IELTS> THE PROS AND CONS OF ANIMAL TESTING
Writing Feedbackthe leaf ninja - Jul 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 18, 2011
|Laws should be flexible (take account of various circumstances, times, and places)
4 - Thanks, it's great to have you here! it seems like you are already proficient at writing, and now it...
Writing Feedbackcchcal - Jul 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 19, 2011
|21st century is going to be new era and step forward to ambitious that we are calling imagination
Writing Feedbackshahdad - Jul 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 18, 2011
|Ielts topic: choosing studying at home or at school
4 - Okay, let's fix this complicated sentence: Studying with many classmates in an educational environment not only brings me...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 15, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 17, 2011
|Ambitious dreams encourage people to endlessly try for their success
3 - ... because it seems to be more advantageous to achieve the goals under general circumstances. After thorough consideration,...
Writing Feedbacksei - Jul 15, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 17, 2011
|In the pursuit of peace, is it okay to sacrifice the lives and freedoms of some?
2 - As a result, many people were stripped of their personal belongings, status, and wealth, and the people of the...
Writing FeedbackRoxal - Jul 15, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 17, 2011
|My pet tiger, bitten by a snake and died.
Writing FeedbackScott30 - Jul 15, 2011 / EricJ - Jul 17, 2011
|IELTS ESSAY - FREEDOM TO EXPRESS IDEAS; '3 Idiots'
6 - yup you are right,this days i am getting really reckless,write goverment instead of government or resturant instead of...
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Jul 15, 2011 / shahdad - Jul 16, 2011
|Classroom management and discipline, practical every day.
5 - I really enjoyed your essay. Though, before you submit essay's proof read and make sure your grammar is correct....
Writing Feedbackcelu - Jul 14, 2011 / Shirley Tey - Jul 18, 2011
|TOEFL: do you agree that technology helps students learn more and faster?
4 - Hi. Now a days nowadays it is possible for teachers to provide student with sutable materials in different formats...
Writing Feedbackshanbalook - Jul 14, 2011 / shhzbch - Jul 15, 2011
|Multicultural society is much more beneficial?
2 - To begin with, like the magnificent rainbow with seven colors, the variety itself is a priceless gift, and when...
Writing Feedbackmegiacodon - Jul 14, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jul 14, 2011
|TOEFL:'history and geography'; working teenagers while they are still students.
4 - Most people hypothesize that the students have a responsibility to study well at school.----Practice typing the sentence this way....
Writing Feedbacklinh202 - Jul 14, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 16, 2011
|"my father whom i respect forever" - The person i would like to be
Writing Feedbackiloveyou - Jul 14, 2011 / iloveyou - Jul 17, 2011
|TOEFL - the government should support the scientific research with no practical use?
5 - I like your point about the government and the real life. Good essay!! Therefore, I firmly believe that government...
Writing Feedbackblindside - Jul 14, 2011 / kevinhsin1124 - Aug 1, 2011
|Less than half of high school graduates with a diploma. - an essay
6 - Sounds like the best kind. Probably because that is what actually interests you. In my senior...
Writing Feedbackamrosca - Jul 14, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 20, 2011
|Do advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives?
NEW - I wrote a Writing Task 2 example and the task description is "Some people say that advertising encourages us...
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|"studying in overseas" - IS IT GOOD TO STUDY ABROAD ?
3 - Now trim away the extra words: Many would be definitely be glad at the thought of being able to...
Writing FeedbackGeenesh - Jul 14, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 16, 2011
|Academic writing Ielts: Effects of globalization
5 - Endless controversy has erupted over globalization. The purpose of my writing is to critically analyse the typical impacts...
Writing Feedbackhvthoteen - Jul 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 15, 2011
|TOEFL writing - Are parents best teachers? Yes, they are.
Writing Feedbacknguyendinhtuong - Jul 13, 2011 / nguyendinhtuong - Jul 15, 2011
|'born in Dehiwala; life of opportunities' - Essay about "MySelf"
Writing Feedbackavanthihfc - Jul 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 15, 2011
|TOELF-should children play computer games
5 - Does this first sentence NOT reveal what she will write about and what her feelings on this matter...
Writing Feedbackshhzbch - Jul 13, 2011 / amrosca - Jul 14, 2011
|About MY, Rahul, brother from PUNE
Writing Feedbackvijay kumar - Jul 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 15, 2011
|The reasons for learning languages of 1000 native and non-native speakers
3 - I have a suggestion for making the beginning clearer: The bar chart presents results of a questionnaire distributed to...
Writing Feedbackoonguyenminh - Jul 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 15, 2011
|SAT - Are people more productive and successful if they ignore opinions of others?
2 - Welcome, Geetanjali! Hey, Mirela, you are doing a lot of great work lately! Thanks, I hope you don't steal...
Writing Feedbackgeetanjali - Jul 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 15, 2011
|IELTS - School Graduate with negative attitudes - Cause and Solution
Writing Feedbacklearner26 - Jul 13, 2011 / shahdad - Jul 16, 2011
|IELT writing: what is your view of success?
4 - I appreciate the chance of letting me to overcome it. Do not capitalize all those words: I Will...
Writing Feedbackextrafresh - Jul 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 19, 2011
|'money can't buy happiness' - Is it more important to do work that pays well
Writing FeedbackRoxal - Jul 12, 2011 / Roxal - Jul 15, 2011
|TOEFL: Some people like to communicate by email and voice mail. Other face-to-face.
3 - Ajit, I really like your attitude and your suggestion. I am practising in writting but due to time limitation...
Writing Feedbackghafarimahsa - Jul 12, 2011 / ghafarimahsa - Jul 21, 2011
|What are factors which are related to academic success in high-school students?
NEW - As a high-school student, getting your distinctions is the pinnacle of our tedious academic endeavors. Thus drowning ourselves in...
Writing Feedbackisabellaclaudia - Jul 12, 2011 / — -
|IELTS (CHILDREN AND TV vs. SPENDING TIME OUTDOORS)
Writing Feedbacklearner26 - Jul 12, 2011 / Jennifer Zhang - Jul 27, 2011
|IELT writing: who should teach children to be good member of society?
5 - I personally believe that is not the sole responsibility of parents to teach children to be good members of...
Writing Feedbackextrafresh - Jul 12, 2011 / keemae1 - Jul 20, 2011
|TOEFL essay: "quick decisions are unsafe decisions"
15 - Hi start208, I mean "but are (not always wrong) and (very in need)". But I think i'd better delete...
Writing Feedbackleeward - Jul 12, 2011 / leeward - Jul 24, 2011
|"fulfilled the dreams and aspirations of him and his father" - my personal essay
Writing FeedbackRChodavadia - Jul 12, 2011 / RChodavadia - Jul 12, 2011
|Schoolyard: A good place for socialization.
Writing Feedbackcelu - Jul 11, 2011 / isabellaclaudia - Jul 12, 2011
|Myself as a teacher: "Never loose your strength and confidence."
Writing Feedbackn8dewangan - Jul 11, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 13, 2011
|TOEFL:Do you agree or disagree with the statement that a zoo has no useful purpose.
4 - Some people may believe that a zoo is futile in the era of globalization, which people can develop their...
Writing FeedbackAMM - Jul 11, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 13, 2011
|Financial education should be mandatory component of the school program
4 - I think you should type the essay again, and use amrosca's suggestions. That is the only way to improve....
Writing Feedbackshahdad - Jul 11, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 13, 2011
|Parents are the best teacher. Do you agree or disagree with this. ( TOEFL writing)
3 - Here is another idea: First and foremost, personal enjoyment is where I put my priority. ----This is a simple...
Writing Feedbacktunpip_1994 - Jul 11, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 13, 2011
|TOEFL - Learning to be independent is essential for young adults
3 - Good support and analysis of your point. I think you could make it stronger by not stating that it's...
Writing Feedbacksandy1210428 - Jul 11, 2011 / s1394 - Jul 12, 2011
|Discuss the causes of this phenomenon: In general, people are living longer now.
2 - hello, I like the elaboration of your essay. its a great essay, but i just note some words that...
Writing Feedbacklinh202 - Jul 11, 2011 / isabellaclaudia - Jul 12, 2011
|"The Crusifix of Pope John Paul the II" - Describe an insignificant object
Writing Feedbackrlatin2002 - Jul 10, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 16, 2011
|TOEFL: Modern cooking methods have improved our life-style significantly
4 - It is really not a big difference. Susan made a change because it sounds awkward to say, "With technology...
Writing Feedbackfairwind - Jul 10, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 24, 2011
|ILETS essay. Becoming difficult to escape from media.
4 - Alisha, no one else other than a professional IELTS examiner would be able to exactly grade your essay...
Writing FeedbackAlisha123 - Jul 10, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jul 20, 2011
|Barcelona (where would you like to travel and why)
Writing Feedbackghafarimahsa - Jul 10, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 14, 2011
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