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|Reflective essay about global warming - legislators should listen to constituents .
2 - As the time passe s, more and more animals are suffering from the effects of Global Warming. We...
Writing Feedbackthania93 - Jan 30, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Feb 1, 2011
|About religious discrimination, Muslim and Ms. Gordon
Writing Feedbacknida2192 - Jan 30, 2011 / Chocolette - Jan 31, 2011
|Essay - Observing & reflecting upon gallery teaching
4 - Great comparison and contrast, great topic sentences... the only thing I don't like is all that info in the...
Writing Feedbackmintchoco - Jan 30, 2011 / EF_Susan - Feb 5, 2011
|IELTS- capital punishment..necessary or not?
Writing Feedbackajit88rai - Jan 30, 2011 / EF_Susan - Feb 5, 2011
|'nuclear family'; The extended family becomes less important than in the past
Writing Feedbackskyzhangty - Jan 30, 2011 / Shandana - Jan 30, 2011
|Toefl essay : One thing representing your country to an international exhibition
3 - Hi, little_wingg "rich of taste" Do you mean "Various kinds of flavors"? How about replacing it with "Plentiful...
Writing Feedbacklittle_wingg - Jan 28, 2011 / yecochi - Jan 31, 2011
|The causes of IMMIGRATION: social reasons, politic reasons and economic reasons.
4 - Another great point to think about is that you do not usually need to use "the" when you talk...
Writing Feedbacknabilkhan - Jan 28, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Feb 19, 2011
|Born talented or taught? - ielts essay
2 - -Music, sport etc has made usour life meaningful. although Although food, shelter and clothes are mans man's basic...
Writing Feedbackmanisha234 - Jan 28, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jan 28, 2011
|Rock involves sex sense,drug abuse,strong language;there are many types of music
2 - I t is generally believed that the music is voice of heart and a musician capable of conquering the...
Writing Feedbackfbi666 - Jan 28, 2011 / shesprettyodd - Jan 28, 2011
|IELTS-is a break good or bad after high school for students?
Writing Feedbackajit88rai - Jan 28, 2011 / sabrinayaa - Jan 31, 2011
|IELTS-computers..use,future prospects and over-dependence.
Writing Feedbackajit88rai - Jan 28, 2011 / machinairum - Jan 29, 2011
|IELTS-should universities accept equal number of males/females or not?
4 - Hi, thanks Kevin. I didnt know this fact about my writing skills, but I refrain from copying other people's...
Writing Feedbackajit88rai - Jan 28, 2011 / ajit88rai - Feb 20, 2011
|Students have to study a wide range of subjects, even the ones they don't like.
3 - Here is a great way to improve the first part. Students are going to school to gain knowledge, and...
Writing Feedbackrenga78 - Jan 27, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Feb 19, 2011
|'all men are equal before the law' - fixed punishments for each type of crime?
10 - I'm glad you are doing stuff like this, William, because I saw some valuable reviews you have given people....
Writing Feedbacksweetheart87 - Jan 27, 2011 / EF_Susan - Feb 9, 2011
|GRE Issue: Suggestion on improving the quality of instruction at the college
4 - Well, one great way to improve it would be to try to write 1 sentence that expresses the idea...
Writing Feedbackkitty__lan - Jan 27, 2011 / EF_Susan - Feb 12, 2011
|"Punta Cana" - My Favorite Vacation
5 - Your first sentence is excellent... perfect grammar. My favorite vacation destination is in the Dominican Republic, because it...
Writing Feedbackfdmonta - Jan 26, 2011 / EF_Susan - Feb 1, 2011
|"It is better act than just complain" grammar and spelling on this paragraph
3 - Grisbel, thanks for doing such a great job here! You are making essayforum better by giving above-average help like...
Writing FeedbackCharito - Jan 26, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jan 29, 2011
|Why People Cheat? (cheating has its advantages and disadvantages)
Writing FeedbackChuchu8892 - Jan 26, 2011 / surfsamurai - Feb 1, 2011
|(No) Sympathy for the Devil
2 - I have to change a word or two in this first sentence: Light filtered through the steel frames windows...
Writing FeedbackAtlasa - Jan 26, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 31, 2011
|Does advertising encourages us to buy products that we really do need?
6 - Advertisement is an action which is taking greater part of human's an effort that is taking up a large...
Writing Feedbackniki - Jan 26, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 31, 2011
|IELTS: Post-school qualifications in Australia - men dominated by reaching 90%
2 - This is the hardest kind of writing. It is very hard to explain charts properly, so do not be...
Writing Feedbackaspasiakor - Jan 26, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 29, 2011
|'one and only one' - some people are born with certain talents
Writing Feedbacksweetheart87 - Jan 26, 2011 / EF_Susan - Feb 1, 2011
|IELTS-is change required or not?
6 - A common expression is: Practice makes perfect. That is a common cliche in English. But it is NOT good...
Writing Feedbackajit88rai - Jan 26, 2011 / EF_Susan - Feb 1, 2011
|O level narrative:an attempt to help led to unexpected consequences for the helper.
2 - Cook woke up and found himself lying in the corner of a valley. --I like this very interesting first...
Writing FeedbackChim Can Cook - Jan 26, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 29, 2011
|Gender imbalance in classes is still proved to be acceptable
4 - This part should be simpler: Some claim that students are bestowed on benefits if the numbers of men and...
Writing Feedbackyaiba24 - Jan 25, 2011 / EF_Susan - Feb 1, 2011
|academic writing task 1- family types living in poverty
4 - Excellent progress in this thread. I'll add an idea about that first sentence: The given table depicts in...
Writing Feedbackaspasiakor - Jan 25, 2011 / EF_Susan - Feb 1, 2011
|How to deal with a gift of money ?
4 - Hi Ajit I think you must be a little disappointed about me, because I still have so many mistakes.It...
Writing Feedbacksabrinayaa - Jan 25, 2011 / sabrinayaa - Jan 27, 2011
|my dad teaches me and has a big influence on me
5 - This is a good start, but you should look through to find the first excellent sentence: My dad has...
Writing Feedbacknee - Jan 25, 2011 / EF_Susan - Feb 1, 2011
|Adults always say that life was better in their childhood and school days than it is
Writing Feedbackrenga78 - Jan 25, 2011 / EF_Susan - Feb 1, 2011
|Costa Rica, A memorable place, descriptive essay.
2 - This is too much for the reader to interpret, and not enough imagery. Let detail is more. The...
Writing FeedbackBradrick84 - Jan 25, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jan 27, 2011
|IELTS-visitor/host? who should adapt for cultural differences
10 - Hi Kevin, actually i did write a thread about what i wrote...but i dont know why/how, it was removed...will...
Writing Feedbackajit88rai - Jan 25, 2011 / ajit88rai - Feb 24, 2011
|Living style, foods, jobs, relations: changes required by our life
4 - Oh, it's so confusing! I cannot easily explain it. I'll write some sentences to help you. These sentences...
Writing FeedbackkhushiGul - Jan 24, 2011 / EF_Susan - Feb 7, 2011
|About the Grad CF Course (difficulty, diversity)
3 - Sorry I'm so slow! Still catching up from the busy season... Shouldn't Institute be capitalized here? ...
Writing FeedbackNesreen - Jan 24, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jan 27, 2011
|"No support for the U.S. space program" - CLEP Composition - Product Safety
3 - ... the car industry, the airline industry, and the defense industry to name a few.--I think you should write...
Writing Feedbackmichalms - Jan 24, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 30, 2011
|IELTS-good news/bad news? whats the best?
2 - The credit for this awareness... goes to the power of media. News has become a quintessential part of...
Writing Feedbackajit88rai - Jan 24, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 30, 2011
|Toefl, There is nothing that an uneducated person can teach an educated person.
3 - I'll improve the clarity right here: We can learn a lot of things from their the behavior, experiences...
Writing Feedbackhaleh - Jan 24, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 30, 2011
|Community that I belong - "The lab"
6 - Good essay and well written, you answered the prompt very well. I like this question. But there is...
Writing Feedbackltpvan - Jan 24, 2011 / chunf - Jan 30, 2011
|IELTS-do ads make us to buy more or is it a need?
4 - thankx khushi, i got it right in third try...lol....but no matter how many attempts i take right now...it will...
Writing Feedbackajit88rai - Jan 23, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jan 24, 2011
|O level essay: School uniform- sense of identity and good discipline
3 - You have to pluralize Uniform: "Uniforms are boring!" "Uniforms are unnecessary!" "School can still do well without uniforms!"...
Writing FeedbackChim Can Cook - Jan 23, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 29, 2011
|"Children require the love shared by both father and mother" Fatherhood & motherhood
3 - In the past, there was a convention that fathers only are responsible for satisfying the material needs of the...
Writing FeedbackKSR - Jan 23, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 29, 2011
|Long-distance flight consumes more resources and pollutes more than cars
Writing Feedbackzhixiang - Jan 23, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 29, 2011
|Should juries have access to information about the defendant's. IELTS Task 2.
3 - Let's try to improve this first sentence a little bit: The decisions made by juries, which can interfere with...
Writing FeedbackARIA - Jan 22, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 24, 2011
|an essay about why laptop is important to me?
2 - Everyone needs to have an important object in her or his life. Capitalize: Inspiron with the model...
Writing Feedbackwbsxe - Jan 22, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jan 24, 2011
|MY REASON FOR VIEWING LIFE AS AMAZING (I was in five different hospitals)
2 - You can't start a sentence with Did like this... unless you are using poetic license. :-) Did not have...
Writing Feedbackshurtleffryan - Jan 22, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jan 24, 2011
|'murky aspects of life' - The study of history has value
Writing Feedbackminaplusplus - Jan 22, 2011 / minaplusplus - Feb 1, 2011
|Job expectations: changing job frequently or not?
Writing FeedbackHelga - Jan 22, 2011 / Helga - Jan 23, 2011
|emergency money; spend your earned money immediately or save it for future ?
10 - -Hey Sabrina, try to finish Norman Lewis book. It has all you need to have an excellent grammar. Just...
Writing Feedbacksabrinayaa - Jan 22, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jan 26, 2011
|No role for teachers in the classroom because of computers?
2 - This sentence needs to have an article before Education: Educational sector is not an exception. I don't mean to...
Writing FeedbackArunj4mast - Jan 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jan 24, 2011
|Bringing and grown up a child could be a challenging work, which demand attending of both parents
Writing FeedbackARIA - Jan 21, 2011 / ARIA - Jan 23, 2011
|Fatherhood crisis - women are solely responsible for deciding to have babies
2 - Aria did definitely give a thorough analysis, but do you understand all of it? It looks confusing! Do you...
Writing FeedbackBarbieTsu - Jan 21, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 27, 2011
|IELTS: Is television a very useful tool when it comes to education?
3 - ...and has only insignificant positive effects on a child. This essay will show my opinion for both views. Instead...
Writing FeedbackAlsu - Jan 21, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 24, 2011
|Do you believe the use of Internet in formal education is a good idea? - IELTS Task 2
5 - Some believe the Internet can change the essence of the traditional education from a serious issue to a kind...
Writing FeedbackARIA - Jan 21, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 27, 2011
|Toefl: knowledge gain from experience or book
2 - hey buddy, -i really feel that this line needs re-framing, especially the latter part. " Some people would like...
Writing Feedbacktaylor kong - Jan 21, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jan 23, 2011
|"Skin already determines a life style" - Race essay
2 - I'm going to eliminate as many unnecessary words as I can: There are various types of shades of "black"....
Writing FeedbackNewyorkerkidd - Jan 20, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 22, 2011
|Live in a big city (more chances, transportation, jobs)
Writing Feedbackmishal alzaid - Jan 20, 2011 / dumi - Jan 21, 2011
|Essay : study at home by using technology in the future?
3 - Thanks, Dumi. I'll give only a little help because Mishal only gives a few words in response to other...
Writing Feedbackmishal alzaid - Jan 20, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 26, 2011
|Toefl - Technology offer a place to involve children to share their unique ideas
Writing Feedbackstudent7 - Jan 20, 2011 / student7 - Feb 10, 2011
|Eating @ Home or in Restaurants?HOME food comes with freedom, low cost & high quality
Writing Feedbackmishal alzaid - Jan 20, 2011 / Rhettgray - Jan 20, 2011
|Students to study alone or with a group? Which do you prefer? Reasons?
3 - I Mishal, I recommend typing the essay again now that you see the errors. You can also do this...
Writing Feedbackmishal alzaid - Jan 20, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Feb 13, 2011
|O Level essay: Animals and birds should never be kept in cages. What's your opinion?
Writing FeedbackChim Can Cook - Jan 20, 2011 / EF_Susan - Feb 1, 2011
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