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|IELTS: Supermarket versus local community stores
Writing Feedbackriteshsinha - Feb 3, 2019 / eddies - Feb 12, 2019
|Which is more important family or friend
Writing FeedbackPhuongbo - Feb 2, 2019 / lin0208 - Feb 9, 2019
|IELTS task 2 - It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places.
4 - Sun, the first thing that i noticed with this essay is that you failed to properly address the task...
Writing Feedbackg890714 - Feb 2, 2019 / Holt - Feb 3, 2019
|IELTS writing task 1. The topic is about speed cameras.
2 - Ngo, you have written too many words for this essay. You will lose editing time when you write more...
Writing Feedbackngothanhnam2211 - Jan 30, 2019 / Holt - Jan 31, 2019
|Restrict drivers to drive to large cities.
Writing FeedbackHanNguyen0510 - Jan 30, 2019 / HanNguyen0510 - Jan 31, 2019
|IELTS 2: Grouping students in regard to their behaviour
4 - @gbhanjana Thank you for your assessment. I will try to improve on the points you have mentioned....
Writing Feedbackriteshsinha - Jan 29, 2019 / riteshsinha - Feb 3, 2019
|IELTS 2 - The values have been replaced with social status and wealth in how people see others
4 - Fitri, please make sure that you always spell your words properly using the United Kingdom version of the word...
Writing FeedbackLegecy - Jan 28, 2019 / Holt - Jan 29, 2019
|IELTS 2: Getting into a profession on the grounds of gender is not at all acceptable.
4 - Ramus, this essay will receive an automatic failing score because you have written less than the 250 minimum word...
Writing Feedbackraamusaatheesh - Jan 28, 2019 / Holt - Jan 29, 2019
|IELTS Essay: In cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem
4 - Geetika, there is no such reference as "past one decade". The correct term is "past decade". A decade covers...
Writing Feedbackgbhanjana - Jan 27, 2019 / Holt - Jan 28, 2019
|International help for developing countries - what kind of help is the most needed? / IELTS essay
6 - Hi there, I have some opinions about your essays. Hopefully, It helps. Your writing appeared to have had...
Writing FeedbackViktoriaKaliu - Jan 23, 2019 / HanNguyen0510 - Feb 5, 2019
|High salary or a good work atmosphere. Discursive Essay IELTS
Writing FeedbackIoneskoanna - Jan 23, 2019 / Ioneskoanna - Jan 26, 2019
|The extinction of animal species such as land and marine animals results from human activities IELTS
3 - Huu,, as a direct question essay, you are required to present your simplified response to both questions, in this...
Writing FeedbackPear45 - Jan 23, 2019 / Holt - Jan 24, 2019
|Write a paragraph about mathematics
4 - it is a quite clear paragraph, maybe you could add some words to make the whole process cohesive. Like...
Writing Feedbackmaithanhthuy - Jan 23, 2019 / youngnmax - Jan 27, 2019
|Group study or self-study, which is better?
7 - When presented with a the above instruction for the discussion, you must present each point of view as an...
Writing Feedbacksandholly - Jan 19, 2019 / Holt - Jan 21, 2019
|Modern communication have transformed people's time to contact with their friends
4 - There are many grammatical errors and wrong word choices . I'd suggest you to strengthen your language first before...
Writing FeedbackBaovan0811 - Jan 18, 2019 / Yaq - Jan 25, 2019
|Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed
Writing Feedbacknhieu18082001 - Jan 17, 2019 / sandholly - Jan 19, 2019
|The characteristics of society and studying major cities
2 - Manish, I believe you have written an essay that could fall within the baseline score of 4. I have...
Writing FeedbackManish766492 - Jan 17, 2019 / Holt - Jan 18, 2019
|The chart below give information about levels of education in Glasgow, a city in Scotland, in 2010.
2 - Quoc, the good news is that you wrote the perfect number of words for this report to gain maximum...
Writing FeedbackSherk - Jan 17, 2019 / Holt - Jan 18, 2019
|Whether a leader is supposed to be young or old should depend on various factors
5 - Avoid using any informal expressions such as " pros and cons", "in a nutshell " Your position is...
Writing Feedbackspeedkevin - Jan 16, 2019 / Yaq - Jan 25, 2019
|E-market has become an ever-increasing trend and gradually overtaken in-store shopping. Pros & cons.
2 - Duong, without the prompt, I cannot assess the responsiveness of your essay. So this review will only be based...
Writing Feedbackthuduong19 - Jan 16, 2019 / Holt - Jan 17, 2019
|Ielts Writing Task 1 line graph: Crude oil prices US dollars per barrel
Writing Feedbackhallynguyen13579 - Jan 15, 2019 / Sherk - Jan 17, 2019
|Nowadays, going abroad for studying has been more and more popular, also among Vietnamese students
3 - Hello Margaret, The essay is very good as it addresses all part of the question. Most ideas are given...
Writing FeedbackMargaret 2019 - Jan 15, 2019 / xuancuong - Jan 22, 2019
|Writing IELTS task 1 - the variation in types of food which, were consumed by Europian people
Writing Feedbacktramanh - Jan 15, 2019 / tramanh - Jan 15, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2. Encouraging children to live separately from parents
3 - Anna, the discussion you have presented does not properly represent the dual point of view and personal opinion discussion....
Writing FeedbackIoneskoanna - Jan 15, 2019 / Holt - Jan 15, 2019
|The school curriculum - sport activities for students?
2 - Nguyen, good work with the paraphrase and response. Bad work adding the reasoning sentence at the end. Remember, if...
Writing Feedbacktinhnguyen - Jan 14, 2019 / Holt - Jan 15, 2019
|There are many instances nowadays where younger individuals are becoming increasingly popular
2 - Frooti, you should always remember to change the verb form after an auxiliary presentation. So when you say "a...
Writing FeedbackFrooti - Jan 13, 2019 / Holt - Jan 14, 2019
|Skills of any individual cannot be observed by his appearance.
Writing Feedbackpiyush_anand - Jan 13, 2019 / piyush_anand - Jan 20, 2019
|Technology in Education Programs is the Future? - IELTS WRITING TASK2
3 - Your introduction does need to be tweaked a little bit beginning with the omission of '"nowadays". Also, I think...
Writing FeedbackRosi akira - Jan 12, 2019 / charleto9 - Jan 12, 2019
|Speaking essay about FAMILY - the most important thing of your life
3 - Quang, the essay lacks a proper introduction for every family member. Remember that you are introducing your parents to...
Writing Feedbackquangduy2110 - Jan 12, 2019 / Holt - Jan 13, 2019
|Effects of technology (impact on users and on different industries). 250 word essay
4 - @mona21khan There are quite a lot grammatical mistakes in your writing, for example its discovery it is well-known for...
Writing Feedbackmona21khan - Jan 12, 2019 / thuduong19 - Jan 16, 2019
|IETLS Task2: The power of advertising, and its influence on consumer buying - agree or disagree
Writing FeedbackJean Lin - Jan 11, 2019 / Jean Lin - Jan 12, 2019
|Online courses in university vs campus classes - impacts on students' learning outcomes
2 - Pham, this being your first post at this forum, I would like to focus first on the most common...
Writing Feedbacktonystark - Jan 11, 2019 / Holt - Jan 12, 2019
|Task 1_ Map_The maps below show how the town of Harborne changes from 1936 to 2007
2 - I think, you can write something else instead of writing: river was developed into residential area. For example, you...
Writing FeedbackTruong Ha - Jan 11, 2019 / RIA123 - Jan 11, 2019
|IELTS essay: Should everyone follow a vegetarianism diet?
5 - @Holt thank you so much for your response! I would certainly rewrite. Also sorry for my late reply....
Writing FeedbackthuyEDHANU - Jan 10, 2019 / thuyEDHANU - Feb 21, 2019
|PROS AND CONS OF TRAVELLING TO REMOTE NATURAL ENVIRONMENT
Writing Feedbacklinhnguyen2002 - Jan 10, 2019 / linhnguyen2002 - Jan 13, 2019
|Some people think that the detailed criminal description on newspaper and TV should be banned.
3 - Thank you Mr./Mrs. Holt for your precious assessment. In my next essays, I will pay more attention to the...
Writing Feedbackpanzerwarfare - Jan 10, 2019 / panzerwarfare - Jan 11, 2019
|SHARING INFORMATION IN SCIENTIFIC RESEARCH, BUSINESS - DISSCUSS AND GIVE OPINION
2 - Hoang, the prompt for this essay asks you to discuss both public points of view first. You are required...
Writing Feedbackcb25288 - Jan 10, 2019 / Holt - Jan 11, 2019
|Humans and Music - IELTS WRITING TASK 2
3 - Tran, your presentation, though fulfilling the word requirement, does not meet the minimum paragraph presentation. That is why your...
Writing Feedbackzzeldaaa - Jan 9, 2019 / Holt - Jan 10, 2019
|Imposing heavier punishments on dangerous drivers is the solely way to secure traffic
Writing FeedbackChuminh - Jan 9, 2019 / Chuminh - Jan 11, 2019
|IELTS : In many countries it is now illegal to advertise alcohol. Do you agree or disagree?
2 - There are some grammatical mistakes here: should be changed to "advertising alcoholic beverages" or "advertising alcohol" should...
Writing Feedbackhyashintaonen - Jan 9, 2019 / not_from_denmark - Jan 9, 2019
|Disadvantages of travelling by air
4 - Really thank you for helping me correct my mistakes. By the way, this paragraph is just an writing exercise...
Writing Feedbackvquang2512 - Jan 9, 2019 / vquang2512 - Jan 10, 2019
|The government should prohibit to smoke in public areas for the sake of community health
2 - In my opinion, your ideas are quite good and well-developed and I'm impressed by the figures provided in your...
Writing Feedbackhyashintaonen - Jan 9, 2019 / Red Moon - Jan 9, 2019
|Bringing up the mentally and physically healthy children had been a constant concern of families
3 - Ramin, this essay will get an automatic failing TA score because you changed the discussion requirements and method of...
Writing Feedbackraminramin - Jan 9, 2019 / Holt - Jan 10, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: ENVIRONMENTAL ISSUES AND SOLUTIONS
Writing FeedbackRed Moon - Jan 8, 2019 / RIA123 - Jan 11, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: NOT HAVING CHILDREN AT A YOUNG AGE
3 - Ta, due to the fact that you did not understand the discussion prompt and you changed the discussion format...
Writing FeedbackThanhtam2412 - Jan 8, 2019 / Holt - Jan 9, 2019
|The problems people overreliance on cars and suggest the solution - IELTS Task 2
NEW - More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of...
Writing Feedbackannanthaayu - Jan 7, 2019 / — -
|Physics - CBEST Writing - describe one class which you faced difficulty
2 - Zhu, the best accomplishment that you have with this piece of essay writing is that you were able to...
Writing Feedbackqqtant - Jan 7, 2019 / Holt - Jan 8, 2019
|Writing ielts task 1: Developments in the town of Lakeside
3 - Thank you for taking your time to give me such quality feedback. But I find it unbalanced if you...
Writing Feedbacksillyman2000 - Jan 6, 2019 / sillyman2000 - Jan 8, 2019
|DIVERSITY CAN BENEFIT ORGANIZATIONS IN MANY WAYS
2 - Minh, your essay requires more than simple grammar editing. The content is also poor and lacking in substance. Aside...
Writing Feedbackylnl5051 - Jan 6, 2019 / Holt - Jan 7, 2019
|Air pollution and emission - Writing- Ielts- task 1- line graph
Writing Feedbacklethithuhuong - Jan 6, 2019 / lethithuhuong - Jan 8, 2019
|Products price fluctuation - fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks
5 - Nguyen, you have to complete your prompt overview when presenting your report otherwise your TA score will be low....
Writing Feedbackbnm123 - Jan 6, 2019 / Holt - Jan 7, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: THE IMPACT OF ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE - LIMITLESS POTENTIAL
3 - You should include more research on the impact of AI / technology in schools (for example there was research...
Writing FeedbackRed Moon - Jan 6, 2019 / Rich Monte - Jan 8, 2019
|Punishing murderers with death penalty vs life in prison - IELTS Task 2
4 - Hi. As two people have cited out your primary mistakes in this essay, so I'm going to just remind...
Writing Feedbackannanthaayu - Jan 6, 2019 / sillyman2000 - Jan 7, 2019
|IETLS Writing Task2: It is more important to teach the literature and history of their own country
3 - Sorry if I offend you but some parts in your essay are so confusing that I cannot understand anything....
Writing FeedbackJean Lin - Jan 6, 2019 / Red Moon - Jan 6, 2019
|The given figure shows the birth rates during the period from 1920 to 2000 in China and the USA.
2 - For the third paragraph, did you mean to put rates instead of percent? Also, I feel that it's...
Writing FeedbackSherk - Jan 6, 2019 / iahamed - Jan 6, 2019
|Finding safe replacement powers which have less side-effects on environment are vital in the world.
Writing FeedbackMosi - Jan 6, 2019 / Mosi - Jan 10, 2019
|In this era, people are facing major issue relating to the rising temperatures of the earth
3 - Muhammad, kindly familiarize yourself with English grammar writing rules. You need to learn about how to construct sentences properly...
Writing Feedbacktabe_success - Jan 5, 2019 / Holt - Jan 6, 2019
|What is it that excites me the most about a college.
4 - Unfortunately, still millions of ... I want to be become an engineer who can could connect to...
Writing Feedbackhellstein - Jan 5, 2019 / Sherk - Jan 6, 2019
|IELTS II : Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?
4 - 1. You're absolutely not writing an exactly the topic sentences in your essay, you have to substitute your idea,...
Writing Feedbackvikedarliyasi - Jan 4, 2019 / Sherk - Jan 6, 2019
|Speaking topic: Describe a memorable period or event from your childhood
3 - Hoa, when you write a conjunction, always remember to add a comma as in the case of "... some...
Writing FeedbackRoseHana - Jan 4, 2019 / Holt - Jan 5, 2019
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