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|SHOULD MODERN SOCIETY BE CRITICIZED FOR BEING MATERIALISTIC
Writing Feedbacksingingbird - Apr 21, 2010 / singingbird - Apr 22, 2010
|A Country's Development Should Thrive on Education
Writing Feedbackvivien_wang - Apr 21, 2010 / thuong_lethi - Apr 23, 2010
|What factors do you think influence news editors' decisions?
4 - THanks so much! i often type wrongly english words but it could be better when i use pencils!:)......
Writing Feedbacktityeu - Apr 21, 2010 / tityeu - May 14, 2010
|Football match - Creative essay; 'The tension was getting more and more intense'
3 - We were sitting in the dressing room, waiting to go out to Wembley Stadium, the dream stadium of every...
Writing FeedbackAlexjewkes - Apr 21, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 22, 2010
|GRE issue 40 Scholars and academic inquiry and research
Writing FeedbackZoe 10 - Apr 21, 2010 / Zoe 10 - Apr 22, 2010
|TOEFL essay: It is more important to work at a job that you enjoy...
5 - Well, you write very well now and have a large vocabulary. The level of skill you have now is...
Writing FeedbackAzeri - Apr 20, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 23, 2010
|Descriptive Essay '' Half Way Tree''
3 - At On any given day, the Jamaican culture is flamboyantly displayed in a myriad of ways ranging from...
Writing Feedbackamuletchic - Apr 19, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 21, 2010
|The role of technology in our lives today: have we become too dependent
Writing Feedbacksingingbird - Apr 19, 2010 / singingbird - Apr 21, 2010
|"my best friend Lenka" - DESCRIPTION OF A PERSON
3 - She has got an oval face with bright blue eyes and a big smiling mouth.---In English, saying someone...
Writing Feedbacktobysek - Apr 19, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2010
|'This issue is two-sided' - advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country
2 - Good corrections from Azeri... here is another option for thje first part: Make this 2 sentences: It is a...
Writing Feedbackthoigiandeyeu - Apr 19, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2010
|Do you like living in a big city? It's a good opportunity for the students
5 - Even though living in the city has a number of difficulties and disadvantages, we cannot deny that living in...
Writing Feedbackthuong_lethi - Apr 19, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2010
|To what extent does television a negative effect on society?
9 - Thank you......
Writing Feedbackwilly0123 - Apr 19, 2010 / leggs - Apr 21, 2010
|People prefer to work with machines, not by hand - they are lazier
4 - I completely agree with kevin here. The essay was like a good hair day gone terribly BAD!!! However, the...
Writing Feedbackhoahongnhung - Apr 18, 2010 / Vakax - Apr 20, 2010
|Argument essay, Smoking in public
7 - Troy, why don't you post a revised essay and we'll comment. Notoman has given you plenty to work on...
Writing FeedbackTeerunky - Apr 18, 2010 / linmark - Apr 20, 2010
|Sometimes challenges bring out the best in us (a difficult medical condition)
NEW - CBEST sample writing prompt Unexpected challenges in our lives sometimes bring out the best in us. For example, we...
Writing Feedbackdees - Apr 18, 2010 / — -
|describing my friends (Putri)
Writing Feedbackranggapermanaa - Apr 18, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2010
|Essay:academic subjects and non-academic subjects.
2 - ...may not be healthy... ...to waste an increasinga lot of money... ...if you have a good health......
Writing Feedbackgreentea93 - Apr 18, 2010 / Azeri - Apr 18, 2010
|Some kinds of paid work affect badly to mental, physical and spiritual development of children
Writing Feedbackthoigiandeyeu - Apr 18, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 18, 2010
|Fatherhood should be considered as important as motherhood
Writing Feedbackthoigiandeyeu - Apr 17, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 18, 2010
|argumentive essay on abortion - fallacies?
3 - I think the politically correct thing to say is "pro choice" rather than pro abortion! :-) You...
Writing Feedbackdjoats - Apr 17, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 18, 2010
|I think that wealthy nations are not required to share wealth among poor nations
7 - yes i agree with tityeu, in my opinion wealthy should helprd the poor nation in order to share their...
Writing Feedbacktityeu - Apr 16, 2010 / parker1234 - Apr 19, 2010
|Daddy's Little Princess - analytical essay
Writing Feedbackqomoco - Apr 16, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 18, 2010
|TOEFL:living in the dormitories or in an apartment
5 - Sorry, I didn't read carefully directions to your essay. This is probably another type of toefl essays, that I...
Writing Feedbackdjanat - Apr 16, 2010 / Azeri - Apr 22, 2010
|"Modern Times: Man vs. Machine" Essay Feedback for my online English class
Writing FeedbackPharaoh - Apr 16, 2010 / Pharaoh - Apr 19, 2010
|'students' interests in culture learning'; Learning A Language Through Culture
4 - Ha ha, yeah, you are right. So the most powerful communicators speak in proverbs, like Yoda. "Do, or...
Writing Feedbackvivien_wang - Apr 16, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 22, 2010
|"Cogito ergo sum". (cause and effect)
2 - Matter exists for no other reason then than to allow our observation of it. That experiment where they...
Writing Feedbackwhatisgod - Apr 15, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 17, 2010
|IELTS essay: Do married women usually work? Why and why not?
3 - The title is a question: "Do married women usually work?" This is not the same as "Should married women...
Writing Feedbackvothiha - Apr 15, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 17, 2010
|IELTS ESSAY WRITING - GOVERNMENT AND EDUCATION
2 - The government has to provide primary and secondary education, but for university education either students or their parents should...
Writing Feedbacknhan8 - Apr 14, 2010 / vothiha - Apr 15, 2010
|Bertrand Russell's arguments agains the existence of God - my philosophy paper.
2 - I have been asked to provide a counterargument to one of Bertrand Russell's arguments against the existence of God,...
Writing Feedbackjlemaster1 - Apr 14, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 16, 2010
|[IELTS-TASK1]Multi-chart Music Preference
6 - Yep. Some writers are skillful enough that they can get away with breaking the rules. When you write...
Writing Feedbackvivien_wang - Apr 14, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 22, 2010
|[IELTS-TASK1]Bar Chart of the Welsh Highest Qualification 2001/02
Writing Feedbackvivien_wang - Apr 14, 2010 / vivien_wang - Apr 21, 2010
|you agree/disagree with ;'' it is better for children to grow up in the big city
5 - In addition they would not be affected by complicated social evils, such as drugs, drinking in bars, or discos.----...
Writing Feedbackvuhaiyen - Apr 14, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 16, 2010
|[IELTS-TASK1]Bar Chart of the UK Economy Structure
Writing Feedbackvivien_wang - Apr 13, 2010 / vivien_wang - Apr 21, 2010
|[IELTS-TASK1] Progress Diagram of Seawater Desalination
6 - The chart illustrates the process of seawater desalination, which are coped with by totalincludes four steps in total to...
Writing Feedbackvivien_wang - Apr 13, 2010 / vivien_wang - Apr 21, 2010
|"to create original movie advertisements" - Personal essay
4 - Ahhh you reponded too late. but thank you for the helpful advice. I have already turned in my paper....
Writing FeedbackTeaCake - Apr 13, 2010 / TeaCake - Apr 15, 2010
|Descriptive narrative on a person (a woman who is in an abusive relationship)
Writing Feedbacknatalie - Apr 12, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 14, 2010
|Addressing the one or two problems of not utilizing your Course Textbooks
3 - I can't say I blame those kids!! The text books cost hundreds of dollars, and sometimes the prof...
Writing Feedbackhtrrkt - Apr 12, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 13, 2010
|Motherhood in Mother Courage (needs grammatical editing or any other critique)
5 - This is full of excellent material, but I want to criticize the way you introduce paragraphs... I...
Writing Feedbackchocole - Apr 12, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 13, 2010
|IELTS TOPIC: Telecommuting ; GOOD OR BAD?
Writing Feedbacksharkondiet - Apr 12, 2010 / sharkondiet - Apr 17, 2010
|In order to maximize the efficiency of our scientists we should put few restricts on them
2 - You need more practice with singular/pluraland with verb tense. to some extent ... some things which is...
Writing FeedbackTom and cat - Apr 12, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 13, 2010
|Essay: Learning to live with Big Brother
Writing FeedbackTikky - Apr 11, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 13, 2010
|Essay:Studying at home by using technology or studying at traditional schools?
2 - College students already do! ...and that they are irreplaceable, but others,in contrast,deem ...------ I just added some...
Writing Feedbackgreentea93 - Apr 11, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 12, 2010
|TOEFL:children should begin their formal education at a very early age
4 - I think you can give some specific examples to back up your argument. For instance, it is widely agreed...
Writing Feedbackdjanat - Apr 10, 2010 / vivien_wang - Apr 13, 2010
|My intro paragraph: a cause and effect essay on getting my first hamster
Writing Feedbacklydever91 - Apr 10, 2010 / lydever91 - Apr 19, 2010
|College education: available to all or to only good students?
Writing Feedbackhandonguyen - Apr 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 12, 2010
|An invention we'd be better off without - essay critique
4 - What is unstructured voice? structure means to have topic sentences that tell the main idea of paragraphs and...
Writing Feedbacklesharo - Apr 9, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 13, 2010
|Are people more likely to be productive/successful when they ignore opinions?
3 - Azeri, Thanks a lot for the suggestions. You do not need to support nor reject the statement, but you...
Writing FeedbackKokirisword - Apr 9, 2010 / Kokirisword - Apr 10, 2010
|Basic archetypal hero essay on McMurphy from One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest
NEW - Hello, I need some help reviewing my essay on the hero from the story One Flew Over the Cuckoo's...
Writing FeedbackSikes - Apr 9, 2010 / — -
|Hotels in Taipei, Taiwan: need help on transitions between paragraphs.
Writing FeedbackKellychen1125 - Apr 9, 2010 / Kellychen1125 - Apr 12, 2010
|Mohammad and Nour - help me my comparison/contrast essay
Writing Feedbackcute girl - Apr 9, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 13, 2010
|"a freshly mowed lawn in summer" - Descriptive Senses Composition
7 - It depends on the teacher's expectations. If the teacher is trying to teach a particular method, follow it....
Writing Feedbacklibrarylover - Apr 9, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 13, 2010
8 - I DO LIKE YOUR SECOND ESSAY. AS ALWAYS , NO GRAMMAR ERRORS.CONCRADULATION. YOU HAVE JUST ONE PROBLEM TO FIX....
Writing Feedbackstranger4ever - Apr 9, 2010 / djanat - Apr 16, 2010
|'The Advantages and Disadvantages of Globalization'
2 - Globalization has contributed a lot to the world today. It boosts countries' economies, advanced technologies and improves daily life...
Writing Feedbacksyahid - Apr 9, 2010 / PrinnyS04 - Apr 9, 2010
|Should friends be honest to each other?
6 - What a good topic! for me, we first have to understand the true notion of friendship, which can be...
Writing FeedbackKokirisword - Apr 8, 2010 / dejavu - Apr 12, 2010
|"cursing the unlucky circumstances" - A translated Passage, good in English?
5 - Thanks for help indeed Mr. Kevin. However you didn't grade the passage! Thanks for the explanation....
Writing Feedbacktasneemspring - Apr 8, 2010 / tasneemspring - Apr 10, 2010
|Essay For My Right To Be Me- feedback
4 - Well, you talk about it several ways: What happened to freedom of expression? What happened to freedom of thought?......
Writing FeedbackTheMadHatter - Apr 7, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 9, 2010
|Let's face the music! ; School Uniforms Persuasive Essay
Writing Feedbacksphat952 - Apr 7, 2010 / sphat952 - Apr 15, 2010
|Violance Against Women
2 - In western countries women are more independent and more-ormore or less equal to male in the society. It is...
Writing Feedbackasokapalama - Apr 7, 2010 / zhangqin - Apr 8, 2010
|Obedience and Disobedience in their extremes!
Writing Feedbackcraver - Apr 7, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 8, 2010
|Two types of transportation: Is Compare and Contrast Clear Enough?
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