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|IELTS: The Internet has transformed lives and economies but it turning the world ...
9 - Hi there, Borislav was totally right. I'm preparing for IELTS test too. I have found out that,...
Writing Feedbackdaquoc - Mar 2, 2011 / englishlearner1 - Apr 8, 2011
|(Elephant) the most important animal in your country? Why is the animal important?
Writing FeedbackKeng - Mar 1, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 8, 2011
|PRICELESS MOMENTS - TOEFL Older people enjoy their life more than young people
4 - Few weeks ago, when I took IELTS, we had 60 mins for two tasks. Somehow, I managed to "survive"...
Writing Feedbackmocak - Mar 1, 2011 / m00ny - Mar 2, 2011
|Topic: "Is the impact of imported food beneficial or not?"
Writing Feedbackcoronaeffect - Mar 1, 2011 / coronaeffect - Mar 9, 2011
|students' competence at all levels of the Malaysian education
6 - Conclusion: My suggestion. Improve teaching method, better trained teachers. Implement workplace experience by students doing certain hours of...
Writing Feedbackno183 - Mar 1, 2011 / Guest - Mar 24, 2011
|'globalization risk' - visitors to a country follow local customs and behavior?
3 - Here, I would like to suggest possible ideas for your essay. Tourists play an important role in tourism...
Writing Feedbackcherrysong - Mar 1, 2011 / IqbalThemi - Jun 2, 2015
|(the social processes) My teaching philosophy of museum teaching
4 - I prefer avoiding phrasal verbs in essays, but surely you can use it. Also, (as you probably noticed) word...
Writing Feedbackmintchoco - Mar 1, 2011 / m00ny - Mar 2, 2011
|A Great Nation = the general welfare of all its people
2 - It refers to a notion that what is known as "welfare." For my part, welfare is often indicated by...
Writing Feedbackwujing10 - Feb 28, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 3, 2011
|"to consider the limitation of parents" -Parents are the best teachers?
2 - Others, including me, argue that, although parents could play a key role in children's lives, it's a little hasty...
Writing Feedbacksabrinayaa - Feb 28, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 7, 2011
|It's better to have peace than prevailing war
4 - Long sentences are long. Try breaking down your ideas into more swallowable bits. Once you broach the 20 word...
Writing Feedbackniesaysi - Feb 28, 2011 / kgw - Feb 28, 2011
|Essay: The 'O' levels are redundant
Writing Feedbacktrenkins - Feb 28, 2011 / trenkins - Mar 13, 2011
|(control / opportunities /compliance) important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)
2 - Try to use those corrections when you type the essay again. Type it again just to practice the correct...
Writing FeedbackKeng - Feb 28, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 7, 2011
|young people's decision have no influence on the future of the nation
3 - to be much difficult. ---To be very difficult. Well... You work very hard here, so... there is...
Writing Feedbackdolly - Feb 27, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 6, 2011
|Groups or Organizations are an important part of people's lives. Are they important?
5 - Keep it plural: ...new norms and values for a living and apply all of them to the whole community....
Writing Feedbackjoseph240 - Feb 27, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 6, 2011
|Some people believe in making large amount of money while others don't care about it
3 - Capitalize when you start a sentence. Whereas is one word, no two. Do not capitalize "money" Some people...
Writing Feedbackgeetakaradkhele - Feb 27, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 6, 2011
|toelf essay- Should going to class at school be optional or required?
4 - Wow, you really got me thinking about this interesting question. It would be kind of interesting to let the...
Writing Feedbackmagicwwh - Feb 27, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 6, 2011
|An education is a life choice - "Educational institutions vs fields of study"
Writing Feedbackkgw - Feb 26, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Feb 28, 2011
|Reflection essay (argument considering the use of the organic foods)
2 - ...are safer and healthier more safety and healthy than conventional foods. It is interesting so far! I...
Writing Feedbacknayayoumi - Feb 26, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Feb 28, 2011
|Investing on public transportation is preferable!
Writing Feedbackmahrou - Feb 26, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 7, 2011
|Essay about the believe of people on child education - feedback
6 - I see a potential flaw with this essay. You are acting as though one cannot educate the child...
Writing Feedbackalaba2812 - Feb 26, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 5, 2011
|(love, care, family) - should pets be treated as family members
4 - From ancient times , human beings have been living in groups because they are social animals. Earlier there...
Writing Feedbackgeetakaradkhele - Feb 26, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 4, 2011
|Some people enjoy changes, and they look forward to new experiences. Others not.
6 - After this sentence, do not end the first paragraph right away. Add one more sentence to express what...
Writing FeedbackKeng - Feb 25, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 5, 2011
|Comic / book / film / theater / radio / TV - the most effective media communication?
2 - This is hard to read, because you did not always capitalize the first word of sentences. From the...
Writing Feedbackosveh - Feb 25, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Feb 27, 2011
|'money for school tuition'; Teens work while they are still students
4 - In some countries , teenagers have jobs while they are still students. ... obtain from working while studying:...
Writing Feedbackjoseph240 - Feb 25, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 4, 2011
|TOEFL: is it better to take several different kinds of job when you are young?
3 - I, as a young man, agree with the assertion that young people should take several different kinds of job...
Writing Feedbackmercury01 - Feb 25, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 4, 2011
|Both genders go out of their homes to do jobs spending too much time at work
Writing Feedbackajit88rai - Feb 25, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 15, 2011
|toelf essay- Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable
NEW - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more...
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|China, TOEFL-iBT integrated writing- Macro Polo
Writing Feedbackminnamiue - Feb 25, 2011 / minnamiue - Mar 1, 2011
|THE CAVE- Creative Writing
2 - The only sound to be heard was the constant and monotonous dripping of the wet patch on the roof....
Writing FeedbackEdzo - Feb 25, 2011 / EF_Susan - Feb 26, 2011
|Ghost: Is it real?
Writing Feedbackniesaysi - Feb 25, 2011 / bestgirl - Mar 8, 2011
|Is national curriculum best for students?
4 - Thanks, dumi! I'll do the next part: Apparently, national curriculum provides local school students with standard ... ...
Writing FeedbackPsyche1991 - Feb 24, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 4, 2011
|whether to allocate a huge of money for defense is right policy
4 - Yes, but actually many teachers advise against using words like that in the essay. They say the conclusion...
Writing FeedbackChinh - Feb 24, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 4, 2011
|the consumption of different product + people are born with certain talents
3 - Yep, this is very strong... only people with excellent command of English can write like this. task 1...
Writing FeedbackIsi Amat - Feb 24, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 4, 2011
|Hiking safety - exam practice
3 - Thanks, Kelly! Hi Jack, welcome to EF. You have written a great essay. I am going to refer people...
Writing Feedbackjack88 - Feb 24, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 4, 2011
|TOEFL: Why do you think people attend college or university? 'It opens the door'
5 - Hi Sabrina, I'm practicing with the CDs from the TOEFL-Textbooks. I am not sure if it is okay...
Writing FeedbackJonity - Feb 24, 2011 / Jonity - Feb 27, 2011
|GRE AW issue "Student should bring a certain skepticism to whatever they study"
NEW - Thanks in advance about any suggestions! 153"Students should bring a certain skepticism to whatever they study. They should...
Writing Feedbacktonia - Feb 24, 2011 / — -
|Every generation of people is different in important ways. How about your generation?
7 - Thank you so much...just do not restrict your ideas...let them follow..Thats what i have learned.Keep reading and writing, that...
Writing Feedbackjoseph240 - Feb 24, 2011 / dolly - Feb 24, 2011
|teacher should not talk about their own political view , agree or disagree.
3 - Hi Roxina, you have to type it again, and use the corrections dumi provided. They are very good! You...
Writing Feedbackroxina - Feb 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 4, 2011
|"A problem shared is a problem solved" (for TOEFL)
6 - Actually, I think I disagree. I have often been surprised at how much my writing improves when I...
Writing FeedbackBorislav - Feb 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 10, 2011
|What are the causes and solutions of Anti-social actions?
8 - Thanks for your great comment, EF_Kevin! I'm always confused with social topics like this, I should read more and...
Writing Feedbackmegiacodon - Feb 23, 2011 / megiacodon - Mar 3, 2011
|The effectiveness of teachers and classrooms - Urban Prep Fellowship
2 - ...still have the zeal and enthusiasm to press forward and teach!---So far, this has a lot of energy and...
Writing FeedbackSatterfield2006 - Feb 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 2, 2011
|Better documentary tool: Video camera vs written docs
3 - Hi, I will look into the corrections that you have suggested. Thank you so much for your suggestions. :)...
Writing FeedbackVVR - Feb 23, 2011 / VVR - Feb 25, 2011
|O level: Leadership. Necessiity of nurturing leadership in everyone
Writing FeedbackChim Can Cook - Feb 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 2, 2011
|"Dominican Republic and grades" - descriptive essay about a personal experience
Writing Feedbackeve13 - Feb 23, 2011 / eve13 - Feb 27, 2011
|people with original ideas are of much greater respect than followers?
NEW - People who have original ideas are of much greater value to society than those who are simply able to...
Writing FeedbackChinh - Feb 23, 2011 / — -
|Which kind of roommate would you prefer? (American roommate)
Writing Feedbackvaishali1980 - Feb 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 2, 2011
|"death penalty is applied unfairly and randomly" pros and cons of the death penalty
3 - It deters murderers to do from committing more crimes in the future, because they would lose their lives and...
Writing FeedbackZubaida - Feb 22, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 2, 2011
|Do you prefer learning by yourself to learning with a teacher?
Writing FeedbackBarrera09 - Feb 22, 2011 / Barrera09 - Mar 5, 2011
|Toefl : Teachers should not make their social or political view known to students..
6 - Hello Rich, what are you doing here? I thought I suspended your membership several months ago when you made...
Writing Feedbacks033591 - Feb 22, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Feb 23, 2011
|Hero paper.. "Sometimes even our heroes get hurt"
Writing Feedbackashleynicole12 - Feb 22, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 2, 2011
|SAT, example of a realistic person? - Optimism vs Realism
Writing Feedbackcathchen - Feb 22, 2011 / cathchen - Mar 3, 2011
|"Photography and Soccer as My Helpful Hobbies" Write about hobbies something you have
3 - ...aided me in my pursuit of photography and soccer. One of mine my hobbies assisted me in photography....
Writing Feedbackyasinb - Feb 22, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 2, 2011
|Role of biomedical research play in your future.
2 - "Take an aspirin to alleviate your fever," said my worried mother after she felt my forehead with her palm....
Writing FeedbackKennyD - Feb 22, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Feb 24, 2011
|How young people's behaviour is influenced by their peers
5 - I agree with Kevin.You have great idea there, but in my opinion, I find your essay having plenty of...
Writing FeedbackRoma - Feb 22, 2011 / cathchen - Mar 3, 2011
|SAT essay, can we fuse the ideas or just choose one side when offered the choice?
Writing Feedbackcathchen - Feb 22, 2011 / cathchen - Mar 3, 2011
|Women Should not Choose Abortion Persuasive Paragraph
3 - Wow did not know about that last statement pretty harsh. Thanks for the feedback it's appreciated....
Writing Feedbackironhawk893 - Feb 21, 2011 / ironhawk893 - Feb 24, 2011
|Students should bring a certain skepticism to whatever they study.
4 - Use "parallel structure" Is it better for students to question what they are taught than accepting to accept...
Writing FeedbackSDtoto - Feb 21, 2011 / EF_Susan - Feb 28, 2011
|'Important from medical point of view' - Pets should be treated like family members
3 - Notice the two sentences you put together as one run-on sentence: They have their own way to express their...
Writing Feedbackdolly - Feb 21, 2011 / EF_Susan - Feb 26, 2011
|large amount of money or earn comfortable living
Writing Feedbackdolly - Feb 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Feb 22, 2011
|The mass media: TV, radio and newspapers, have great influence on people's ideas
5 - Thanks Susan...
Writing FeedbackChinh - Feb 21, 2011 / Chinh - Feb 28, 2011
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