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|Multi-Language Clash Synthesis essay
6 - Well... in order to see how it actually is an independent clause, think of this sentence: However,...
Writing FeedbackJoeyson - Nov 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 24, 2009
|TOEFL living in places different weather condition vs same weather condition
6 - Margarita, one of my teacher, who taught writing, told about this limitations. By taking into consideration of time we...
Writing Feedbackmargarita - Nov 18, 2009 / hitchhike - Nov 26, 2009
|Toefl Integrated task" William shakespeare"
2 - Thanks, Mashhadi, for this great work. I know that takes a long time! I hope your teachers will someday...
Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 18, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 20, 2009
|Studying people and events of the past time is very useful
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Nov 18, 2009 / margarita - Nov 25, 2009
|TOEFL:::working for a small company - more chances are to boost in your job
2 - You did a good job of making clear your thesis statement at the end of the first paragraph. Your...
Writing Feedbackmashhadi - Nov 18, 2009 / EF_Susan - Nov 20, 2009
|TOEFL preference essay " sports vs.arts" - feedback welcomed :)
4 - I believe when you are asked to stay and support your preference about two o more topics, subjects or...
Writing Feedbackeng_student - Nov 18, 2009 / margarita - Nov 23, 2009
|Toefl : lifestyle individualism VS collectivism
Writing FeedbackBabies - Nov 18, 2009 / EF_Susan - Nov 20, 2009
|Toefl essay on Silvio Berlusconi.
Writing Feedbackdar81 - Nov 18, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 20, 2009
|Toefl essay which changed people's lives automobiles bicycles airplanes
3 - Although new invention will changed the world more or less, only a few inventions can take the significant change...
Writing Feedbackrmli - Nov 18, 2009 / Jin - Nov 18, 2009
|[TOEFL]Tidal Power_Integrated task.
Writing Feedbackyin - Nov 18, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 20, 2009
|My Two Sons - Thesis statement for Comparison essay
5 - I have two fantastic boys in my family that were born four years apart and are as different as...
Writing Feedbackbmerrell - Nov 17, 2009 / TFS109201 - Nov 19, 2009
|Toefl - "not everything in life is according to our wish"
Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 17, 2009 / EF_Susan - Nov 18, 2009
|International Studies Paper on the effects of war.......
2 - How true and terrible that Twain quote is! Hey, I don't understand that last sentence of the first...
Writing FeedbackMGH1989 - Nov 17, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
|Toefl"A person you know is planning to move to your town. What do you think..
4 - The beginning is great! It is actually quite interesting at the start, because I think it is intriguing that...
Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 17, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 19, 2009
|Experience is the best teacher; influential person - Preparing for the Clep exam
4 - Susan and Kevin - thank you for the feedback. I studied the mistakes you pointed out and understand now...
Writing Feedbackpaula - Nov 17, 2009 / paula - Nov 23, 2009
|TOEFL ; Recent story that affected me the most was Pig Flu
4 - I don't know the name of the rule associated with this. You can write, "My jacket is here." and...
Writing FeedbackHelin - Nov 17, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 22, 2009
|Forward or first page - A Book I am Writing
Writing FeedbackJeannie - Nov 17, 2009 / Jeannie - Nov 29, 2009
|Essay on events that have changed Australia's multicultural society - feedback.
3 - Looking good. If you get inspired, maybe you will come up with a more intriguing first line. This is...
Writing Feedbackdubulee - Nov 17, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 19, 2009
|my art essay, parthenon vs pantheon
Writing Feedbackstockwell - Nov 17, 2009 / sesudita - Nov 19, 2009
|TOEFL ESSAY " Shools should ask students to evaluate their teachers"
13 - thanks a lot...
Writing Feedbacklyhongyen - Nov 16, 2009 / lyhongyen - Nov 30, 2009
|Toefl- Do you think it is good for teenagers to work while schooling?
3 - Good corrections! But, you are wrong to think they can be corrected by reading aloud. People learning English...
Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 16, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
|compare between your childhood and right now.
16 - learned to live in the "jungle"? [note: that was a metaphor? or really where you live?] hahah. what...
Writing Feedbackbilal ABUZENAH - Nov 16, 2009 / bilal ABUZENAH - Nov 22, 2009
|What are the problems with English Education in Korea?
9 - Throughout my middle school and high school educational courses, I had a good grade in English. I earned good...
Writing Feedbackkimster79 - Nov 16, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
|Toefl essay"What are the qualities of the good coworker?"
4 - Throughout in my experience, I noticed that good co worker should have certain qualities. She or he should work...
Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 16, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
|Important teenage decisions should be taken by parents or elders
Writing Feedbackhatung94 - Nov 16, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 17, 2009
|Are human needs for farmland, housing, industry more important than saving lands
3 - Nowadays, a growing number of people focus on an issue that which is the most important for human beings...
Writing Feedbacktiantianwenzi - Nov 16, 2009 / EF_Susan - Nov 17, 2009
|TOEFL Parents are natural teachers
16 - hitchhike, no problem, we are learners. Thanks for your thoughts on my writing. kevin, thanks for helping us!...
Writing Feedbackmargarita - Nov 15, 2009 / margarita - Nov 29, 2009
|Failed Descriptive Essay Subject Costa Rica
2 - No using cliches at EssayForum! :-) Just kidding... cliches are people, too. By the way, thanks so...
Writing FeedbackMaethirion - Nov 15, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 17, 2009
|Comparative Essay for ENG 1100... subject: Depression
Writing FeedbackMaethirion - Nov 15, 2009 / Maethirion - Nov 17, 2009
|Toefl;Government should definitely spend money in improving transportation services
Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 15, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 17, 2009
|ESSAY ON "THE WAR ROOM" MOVIE ABOUT CLINTON'S '92 PRESIDENTIAL ELECTION CAMPAIGN
2 - Wow, you're a very good writer! Your essay is powerful and interesting all the way through. The election...
Writing Feedbackkyleroland - Nov 15, 2009 / EF_Susan - Nov 16, 2009
|Compare and contrast between living in the countryside and the suburbs
3 - I am impressed! Most compare/contrast essays are very rigid and robotic, but your opening paragraph is so natural and...
Writing FeedbackThuy Nguyen - Nov 15, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 16, 2009
|Smoking ban - essay argumentative
5 - thanks...
Writing FeedbackAbutaleb2009 - Nov 14, 2009 / Abutaleb2009 - Nov 20, 2009
|Water is the most common element for ordinary people; A paragraph about water
Writing Feedbackapi - Nov 13, 2009 / api - Nov 15, 2009
|Advertisement Analysis Essay Help - A $385 Billion Dollar Image
2 - Thanks for posting, long-time lurker! your last para needs help: As we have analyze these advertisements, we...
Writing FeedbackMCafOcc - Nov 13, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 15, 2009
|TOEFL essay What are some important qualities of a good supervisor
2 - What does this mean? ----> good perception on the man. Do you mean to say this instead? ---->...
Writing Feedbackrmli - Nov 13, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 14, 2009
|Creative Essay "The Truth" about Poland
2 - These fields contain the utmost beautiful flowers, and the weather is out of this world. It only snows delicious...
Writing Feedbackevildanny2009 - Nov 12, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 13, 2009
|CBEST - 'Working abroad'; Making Important Decision
Writing Feedbackelainedlcruz - Nov 12, 2009 / elainedlcruz - Nov 13, 2009
|IS BEOWULF TRULY A HERO?
Writing FeedbackMGW698 - Nov 12, 2009 / caslyn1 - Nov 13, 2009
|CBEST Essay - Students caught DUI
3 - ...ing and suspending a driver's license decreases road accidents, brings maturity for young drivers and teaches citizen to be...
Writing Feedbackelainedlcruz - Nov 11, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2009
|an essay about" Emotion----A very short introduction"
3 - I really love your writing style. Some people think they know what "good" writing is, but good writing really...
Writing Feedbackcindy17 - Nov 11, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2009
|TOEFL Physical exercise should be required part of every school day
7 - Excellent, at this point, the way to improve it is to cite reliable research data from journals such as...
Writing Feedbackmargarita - Nov 11, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 14, 2009
|The Graduation Day... (the best day of my life)
Writing Feedbackbilal ABUZENAH - Nov 11, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 14, 2009
|City and country living, which one will you choose?
3 - Some people think that city living has more benefits than country living. ...country living, so we can gain...
Writing Feedbacktinanguyen - Nov 11, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 11, 2009
|Toefl essay What do you prefer, learning by yourself or learning with a teacher
4 - Many of the students feel that self studies provide ... ... In short, the teacher provides guidance for...
Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 10, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 11, 2009
|TEOFL Essay "Small town vs big city"
4 - I found out a good job relating to my major. Besides, researchers in the field of sociology declare that...
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Nov 10, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 11, 2009
|should take circumstance and motivation for committing into account for penalty?
4 - hi. try to change your way,when you write your essays,be inventor. The write is art,so let's try something new...
Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Nov 10, 2009 / bilal ABUZENAH - Nov 10, 2009
|"Why people love watching action movies" Formal Essay
3 - "Action movies are full filling to many movie watchers because it supplies audiences with electrifying excitement, presents us a...
Writing FeedbackYojimbo_bobobo - Nov 10, 2009 / car3n - Nov 15, 2009
|Essay about Aspects of city living - feedback
3 - Nowadays, everybody is moving to live in the cities because of the facilities that they find it there. ...
Writing Feedbackwardooh - Nov 9, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 11, 2009
|Toefl essay For children it is better to grow at the country side or in th city
Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 9, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 10, 2009
|"Can TV teach people?" - Give band to my IELTS essay
5 - Luke and west, thanks for helping here! TV channels like National Geographic, Discovery and The Animal Planet are...
Writing Feedbackmaknojia - Nov 9, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 10, 2009
|the change in the life is good or not? discuss both sides and give your views.
3 - Yes, but you should also discuss the issues raised by other people who help. Bilal caught some important ones...
Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Nov 9, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 10, 2009
|Lunar New Year in Vietnam - essay
Writing Feedbacklinh2603 - Nov 9, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 10, 2009
|What are the aims of academic study and how can they be achieved?
4 - Hi! thank you so much...that was really helpful... Il take care about all that the next time!! I edited...
Writing Feedbackarchana_s91 - Nov 9, 2009 / archana_s91 - Nov 27, 2009
|TOEFL Essay." What changes do you think the 21st century will bring?"
3 - Hi, very well written, just tr to include summary of the passage in the conclusion para and also, main...
Writing Feedbackblue54 - Nov 9, 2009 / Poojasugandhi - Nov 9, 2009
|Animal testing: it's flat out wrong and cruel to the animals involved?
3 - According to absolutist moral philosophy, you might say it is never appropriate to hurt a weaker creature for one's...
Writing FeedbackCam - Nov 9, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 10, 2009
|TOEFL essay "homework - necessary or not"
6 - I think some statements in your essay don't develop well. For example" If a teacher wants to assign homework...
Writing Feedbacksilver_bullet - Nov 8, 2009 / tiantianwenzi - Nov 16, 2009
|Toefl; Who would you like to meet? Mr. Amitabh Bachachan
3 - If... then. If I could meet a famous entertainer, then i t would definitely... Number agreement: But these...
Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 8, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 9, 2009
|Good child should respect their parents, support, help them in their need time and make them proud
2 - I think your writing is not "academic" at all. You should improve it more and more for good result...
Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 8, 2009 / linh2603 - Nov 9, 2009
|TOEFL essay "Spending money on sport activities or library"
3 - Yes, it needs about 50 more words. Here is some help: ...among universities. A question arose in...
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Nov 8, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 9, 2009
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