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|GRE argument: sales prediction
2 - In sum, the author wants to make a prediction about the future sales whereas his deduction contains several facets...
Writing Feedbackmocixuan - Mar 16, 2010 / r43ew - Mar 17, 2010
|insufficient respect towards old members of society
Writing Feedbackvikasp - Mar 15, 2010 / vikasp - Mar 16, 2010
|TOEFL: Most of secondary schools include the art and music course in their annual program
Writing Feedbackdjanat - Mar 14, 2010 / mocixuan - Mar 17, 2010
|Report Help - Reflection on choice of education.
Writing Feedbackspecwarop - Mar 14, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 15, 2010
|living in one place or always moving for a good job ,house,or even climate.
3 - This is very thoughtful, but you will need to practice English a lot. It's hard to learn, but you...
Writing Feedbackmuxuan - Mar 14, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 15, 2010
|American Government "Paper" Concerning the Constitution...
3 - During the drafting of the United States Constitution, the legislating delegates were faced with solving several dilemmas, including... In...
Writing FeedbackMarkTwain90Angl - Mar 13, 2010 / EF_Susan - Mar 14, 2010
|TOEFL:reading fiction or watching movies
2 - Reading fiction is more advantageous than watching movies. First of all, reading fiction such as novels or short stories...
Writing Feedbackdjanat - Mar 13, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 13, 2010
|TOEFL: Schools should allot some hours a day to the physical exercises for their students.
2 - i think that you have little problem with grammar i'm pointing out some of your mistakes hope it will...
Writing Feedbackdjanat - Mar 12, 2010 / vikasp - Mar 12, 2010
|Words effect (Cause and Effect essay - Power of words)
Writing Feedbackbilal ABUZENAH - Mar 12, 2010 / bilal ABUZENAH - Mar 15, 2010
|Technical Article: How GNU/Linux differs from Unix
Writing Feedbackvinaytp - Mar 12, 2010 / vinaytp - Mar 15, 2010
|"It is the artist, not the critic," GRE ISSUE144
4 - We human beings always feel our oats when talking about arts. --- What does "feel our oats" mean? I...
Writing Feedbackflydreams - Mar 12, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 13, 2010
|comparing myself now to myself in the past
2 - your essay seem clear to understand. the bad thing is you have mentioned a lot of details i suggest...
Writing Feedbackangel 91 - Mar 11, 2010 / djanat - Mar 13, 2010
|TOEFL:a university plans to devlop a new research centre in your country.
2 - Most of the universities in the world seek to develop some research in some various countries. These research...
Writing Feedbackdjanat - Mar 11, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 12, 2010
|"people wanting to be important" - Definition essay: Pride
Writing Feedbackmaryam_mah - Mar 10, 2010 / maryam_mah - Mar 11, 2010
|SAT prep essay about materialism
3 - While countries like America and England enjoy ... Because of low production costs, and because of American and...
Writing Feedbackjordansearches - Mar 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 11, 2010
|TOEFL:Sport may be dangerous if we will become possessed by it too much.
3 - You didn't capitalize the first letter of the essay. Whatever the reasons for the sport practiced by young...
Writing Feedbackdjanat - Mar 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 11, 2010
|History & Literature Vs Science & Mathematics; Every subject is important
2 - Taylor, that's really nice of you to spend so much time with it. The argument over... Some people may...
Writing Feedbacketaewoo - Mar 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 11, 2010
|IELTS Writing: opinions on children's part-time job
Writing Feedbackzebraessay - Mar 10, 2010 / zebraessay - Mar 12, 2010
|What difficulties will face your country in the next ten years?
4 - Thank you Kevin, Your comments everytime help me much indeed, I really appreciate your responsiveness....
Writing Feedbackplotophyte - Mar 10, 2010 / plotophyte - Mar 12, 2010
|TOEFL:A person' childhood years are the most important years of a person's life
3 - Great job, Sabuhi, thanks!!! I think this correction is great, but it might be a misundersanding of...
Writing Feedbackdjanat - Mar 9, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 10, 2010
|SAT practice essay about the possibility of knowing oneself
Writing Feedbackjordansearches - Mar 9, 2010 / jordansearches - Mar 9, 2010
|Sharuk Khan! He is my favorite hero.
6 - Sorry!! I can't give an accurate grade, because I don't know how these are scored. But if it's...
Writing Feedbackmegha - Mar 8, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 11, 2010
|should or should not schools create single sex education
Writing FeedbackSpitFires - Mar 8, 2010 / SpitFires - Mar 10, 2010
|GRE issue 153 skepticism in studying
Writing Feedbackclaire echo - Mar 8, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 10, 2010
|IELTS Essay -250words - Technology Progression has a negative impact on us?
3 - You write almost perfectly. I want to tell you, though that your first paragraph seems incomplete. It should have...
Writing Feedbackvictorp_sv - Mar 7, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 9, 2010
|Going overseas for university study
5 - Countries try to exemplify their greatest traits and most beautiful architecture to entice internationalists to come and visit them....
Writing FeedbackSayed Naeem - Mar 6, 2010 / caseySchooling - Oct 21, 2012
|GRE issue 48 History is like a puzzle
4 - Yeah, your sentences seem complex, like sentences used in formal writing. I notice that you are good at varying...
Writing Feedbackclaire echo - Mar 6, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 9, 2010
|gre issue7 video camera provides an accurate and convincing record.
NEW - TOPIC: ISSUE7 - "The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has...
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|Life in symmetry - Essay.
2 - You have a verb tense problem at the beginning. You can do this: Today, I spent almost two hours...
Writing FeedbackWanderer_x - Mar 5, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 6, 2010
|Tony Hoagland's "Romantic Moment" -- personal response essay
Writing Feedbackmbiscoe25 - Mar 4, 2010 / mbiscoe25 - Mar 28, 2010
|the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activty.
2 - People believe that the earth is being harmed by human activity. According to me me "Earth is better place...
Writing Feedbackmegha - Mar 4, 2010 / Ariel - Mar 5, 2010
|Toefl:Some students like classes where teachers lecture (do all of the talking)
3 - Thanks Azamat! Please check out the contributor page! My preference is based on several reasons. --- this is...
Writing Feedbackdjanat - Mar 4, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 5, 2010
|business and cultural contact + development - views and your opinion
NEW - 1 .Some people say that the increasing business and cultural contact between countries is a positive development, while others...
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|"great feeling of cooking" - Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare.
3 - That's what we're here for! Sometimes maybe you just want to correct a few of the mistakes, and...
Writing Feedbacksaruul2004 - Mar 4, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 5, 2010
|University education is mandatory to get a good career. Discuss opinion. IELTS
Writing Feedbackusalma2002 - Mar 4, 2010 / usalma2002 - Mar 5, 2010
|Proof/edit my cause & effect paragraph about unemployment- collegeEnglish
3 - Some of the common causes of unemployment are due to getting fired, getting laid off, the market economy,...
Writing Feedbackxoqtpie609xo - Mar 3, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 5, 2010
|Leave the land in its natural condition? 'harmony with modern cities'
4 - Nowadays, people tend to concentrate more on economic growth and leave the environmental problems behind by constructing more buildings...
Writing Feedbackbinhdt101 - Mar 3, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 5, 2010
|Illustrative Essay, The Dairy Farmers Life
Writing Feedbackmsdenna - Mar 3, 2010 / msdenna - Mar 5, 2010
|Email and text messaging threats written language
Writing Feedbackmalek1406 - Mar 3, 2010 / malek1406 - Mar 6, 2010
|5. mixed --21st century=opportunity,you agree/disagree, changes you hope--
Writing Feedbackcathyliu - Mar 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 4, 2010
|sedating music - There are many different types of music in the world today.
3 - hi, I'm not good. I will share my experience. "For conclusion" - everybody uses this word. If you choose...
Writing Feedbackplotophyte - Mar 2, 2010 / saruul2004 - Mar 4, 2010
|"Make all you can, save all you can, give all you can" it's better to save money
4 - Otherwise is one word. Also, this is a run on sentence: For basic needs, we should have money; otherwise...
Writing Feedbackmegha - Mar 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 4, 2010
|Comparison and Contrast : Differences between two lives
Writing Feedbackpurplespongy22 - Mar 2, 2010 / cathyliu - Mar 2, 2010
|Private car ownership has grown dramatically in recent years.
Writing Feedbacksaruul2004 - Mar 2, 2010 / cathyliu - Mar 18, 2010
|Explain why you like (or do not like) to work in a team.
5 - i have some corrections i hope that help you - never begin a sentence by because/ the sentence must...
Writing FeedbackN2N - Mar 1, 2010 / djanat - Mar 4, 2010
|desirable lifestyle: as a celebrity or common people. argument IELTS
Writing Feedbackusalma2002 - Mar 1, 2010 / usalma2002 - Mar 2, 2010
|"Preventing Herpes" - Current Issue in Public Health using an article about health problem
9 - I think this should be two sentences instead of one: Herpes is one of the most co mmon sexually...
Writing Feedbackcomet2000 - Mar 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 24, 2010
|essay about studying abroad in spain
2 - I enjoyed reading your essay, it was very well thought out and interesting. Here are a few small mistakes...
Writing Feedbackdefnite - Feb 28, 2010 / EF_Susan - Mar 1, 2010
|Hunger - it's difficult to fully grasp the plight of it; Causes, Concerns and Symptoms
3 - Thanks!!...
Writing Feedbacksperkie - Feb 28, 2010 / sperkie - Mar 12, 2010
|the town of Garlsdon: Maps, roads - IELTS cambridge 5 writting task1
2 - Capitalize the first word: The central part is the town centre and surrounding it is the housing district with...
Writing Feedbackcathyliu - Feb 28, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 1, 2010
|Informational and persuasive essay on travel
3 - Thank you very much! I truly appreciate your insight. As times passes and my writing skills improve I hope...
Writing FeedbackJ Carpenter - Feb 27, 2010 / J Carpenter - Mar 1, 2010
|"That birthday card" - Besides the Point? A Re-thread
Writing FeedbackChenalaska - Feb 27, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 28, 2010
|Commitment,Intellectual ability & Enthusiasm; Recommendation by academic advisor
Writing FeedbackHanna - Feb 27, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 4, 2010
|Maps, roads - IELTS cambridge 5 writting task1 check out the grammar
5 - Thanks everyone! You are all making this forum a great place by helping each other so much. In...
Writing Feedbackmerchant - Feb 27, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 28, 2010
|personal narative -mexico tattoo
NEW - started writing this personall narrative for a senior english assingment..feeling kinda stuck. please helppp Laying my head back...
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|Your school days, an enjoyable event description
5 - The enjoyable event I would like to talk about here is the spring outing activity that happened on my...
Writing Feedbackcathyliu - Feb 26, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 27, 2010
|what is advantage and disadvantage of a new shopping mall ?
3 - A mechanisms of free-trades of consumerism in modern times, shopping malls are large places full of goods and service...
Writing FeedbackBBOY - Feb 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 27, 2010
|TOEFL assay: You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business.
4 - I see that you are very good at writing in English! I'll help with a phrase in this sentence:...
Writing Feedbackcuchocruz - Feb 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 27, 2010
|Havisham: My Story based on the Poem Havisham
Writing FeedbackAdamking120 - Feb 25, 2010 / Adamking120 - Feb 26, 2010
|micheal jackson : rock with you
4 - 1958: when Michael was born in lower middle class family with a curse of being black. ---- if you...
Writing Feedbackkasi_gem - Feb 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 26, 2010
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