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|'a diary in English' - TOEFL optional essay - English ability
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|Talk about how the poets show their respect to animals.
4 - This confused me... Agamemnon is ancient mythology, and it has been told many times, but when I google...
Writing FeedbackKellyli - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|Talk about the metaphor of a movie "The PaintedVeil".
Writing FeedbackKellyli - Dec 29, 2009 / KAJAL - Dec 30, 2009
|Media essay - GRE (Issue Topic)
4 - The structure is pretty good; those grammar errors Susan caught are most important. For the structure, you hae...
Writing Feedbackivanka22 - Dec 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|Pieces of Literature (section of a magazine)
2 - It seems like you could use a 'lead in' sentence at the beginning. One sentence perhaps giving an idea...
Writing Feedbackjeffliwin - Dec 28, 2009 / EF_Susan - Dec 29, 2009
|nutrition for biology essay: becoming obese.
NEW - i'm not completely done with my essay. but i would love some suggestions or comments about my essay so...
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|Essay for a Contest: Living in Suburbia- Looking for some criticism
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|'unusual behaviors' - Games are as important for adults as they are for children
4 - Your feedback is very useful to my understanding a given prompt. each time i write an essay, i...
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 28, 2009 / Keng - Jan 3, 2010
|essay on sovereignty, MA International politics essay
5 - Thank you very much for the answer. "Relative equality of states and the ungoverned international arena" is a practical...
Writing FeedbackUmbyboy - Dec 28, 2009 / Umbyboy - Jan 7, 2010
|Essay about a valuable life lesson that you have
3 - what are types of your writing? Narrative, descriptive, explanation or just a storyline. I think you write...
Writing Feedbacksujujun - Dec 26, 2009 / Keng - Dec 28, 2009
|Computer is useful tool - has many functions
3 - Keng Thank you Keng so much! I still remember that you instruct me how to post essay into essay...
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|TOEFL "working by hand vs. using machines"
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|Rensselaer Polytechnic Institute: They say I impacted the 21st century...
8 - The world has entered an era of rapidly increasin g change. The people who lead Leading scientists of this...
Writing Feedbackmstickel - Dec 26, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 30, 2009
|IELTS: Television has changed the way children spend their leisure time.
5 - Hi, I'm Seong and I am also studying IELTS course of english. When I learned introduction of IELTS,...
Writing FeedbackROKO - Dec 26, 2009 / Seong - Dec 28, 2009
|Toefl essay Image that you have received land
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 24, 2009 / Keng - Dec 28, 2009
|introduction paraghraph about equal numbers of male and female in universities
3 - In paragraph 1, You should begin with what do you think about the prompt, then write opinions of the...
Writing Feedbackmona80 - Dec 24, 2009 / Keng - Dec 28, 2009
|TOEFl "ability to read and write more important today than.."
2 - This seems like it should be one sentence, not 2: How can I neglect the importance of writing and...
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Dec 23, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 24, 2009
|Toefl essay A person you know is planning to
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 23, 2009 / Keng - Dec 26, 2009
|Fatherhood - fathers have now same obligation as much as mothers have
2 - Don't forget to capitalize the first word of every sentence. In the past, time this role was mostly...
Writing Feedbackarvind143 - Dec 23, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 24, 2009
|Some people are born with certain talents..
Writing FeedbackSeong - Dec 23, 2009 / SnowWolf - Dec 23, 2009
|'freedom and independence' Do you learn better by yourself or with a teacher?
Writing Feedbackdarklight - Dec 22, 2009 / Keng - Dec 24, 2009
|TOEFL "growing in countryside vs big cities..."
2 - Hello! I noticed you've been helping a lot of people with their essays, thank you! Some people believe...
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Dec 21, 2009 / EF_Susan - Dec 22, 2009
|How computers have affected the way we work today vs. 100 years ago - CLEP
Writing Feedbackstars - Dec 21, 2009 / stars - Dec 25, 2009
5 - Its a cynical piece on an attitude I find much too often in the people in Western countries. ...
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|TOEFL Essay "read only factual books or not.."
NEW - 13. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should read only those books that are about...
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|the relationship between Jews and Christians, how to write about a film?
2 - Use italics instead of quote marks: James Carroll's Constantine Sword is a... James Carroll was a former priest...
Writing Feedbackstylegirl100 - Dec 20, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 21, 2009
|Toefl essay. people succeed because of hard work
2 - hi, Some suggestions: In my idea, it's better to introduce names used in your essay, for example: Karen,...
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 20, 2009 / hitchhike - Dec 20, 2009
|How to write an argumentative essay Modern technology has increased material wea
Writing Feedbackngothanhtam - Dec 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
|IELTS composition G class Task1 (Fitness facilities renovation)
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|Toefl essay "such as: improvement in their reading and writing skills, helping "
2 - For the reasons above, rich people not equal to unhappy people.----> in this sentence, you should write that being...
Writing Feedbacks011208 - Dec 17, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2009
|TOEFL "A gift can contribute to child's development..." - BOOK
5 - When you put 2 complete sentences together as a compound sentence, you are supposed to use a comma....
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Dec 17, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2009
|Toefl essay. The twentieth century
5 - Excellent, I sure respect that. I hope you will read some books by Stephen Kind, and read them...
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 17, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2009
|toefl Essay What the 21century will bring
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 17, 2009 / Keng - Dec 19, 2009
|Correct my writing (IELTS Task1: Describe chart about USA marriage and divorce rates)
Writing FeedbackPPTaro - Dec 17, 2009 / PPTaro - Dec 17, 2009
|Why do you think people attend schools?; 'for learning lots of things'
3 - Hi, Here is my suggestions: The first and second sentences are the same and you didn't add any...
Writing FeedbackHisashi Kondo - Dec 17, 2009 / hitchhike - Dec 17, 2009
|Expense for each consumer goods among all mentioned countries performed a visibly contrasting value
6 - EF_Kevin thanks for your kind offer to help me, and is it appropriate that I use "Initially" instead of...
Writing Feedbackyoungcatherine - Dec 16, 2009 / youngcatherine - Dec 22, 2009
|Viet Nam traffic
7 - "In order to reduce the number of traffic accidents, we should seriously punish traffic violators, encourage people to obey...
Writing Feedbackhalongphutu - Dec 16, 2009 / Kellyli - Dec 29, 2009
|Why Harvey Mudd College-This student asked and answered his own question
4 - Harvey mudd actually has something like a Why XXX college? essay on their supplement. It goes like this... ...
Writing Feedbackyf8651 - Dec 16, 2009 / opeakapo - Dec 31, 2009
|Toefl essay A government plans to build a new research center
5 - Hello my friend! In conclusion, that whether people use the research center for business or agriculture depends on...
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 16, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 18, 2009
|essay about universities should give the same money tos student's lib and sport
4 - hi, here is some minor corrections sports sport activities Obtain obtaining qualifications...for keeping the parallel structure with next phrases...
Writing Feedbackrobertsheperd80 - Dec 14, 2009 / hitchhike - Dec 21, 2009
|Creativity is much more needed process today to survive the future of mankind
7 - I wrote are becoming because it is present continious structure) When I noted their . I meant that you...
Writing Feedbackgms - Dec 14, 2009 / birzhanfm - Dec 18, 2009
|Toefl ; I agree that MONEY is the most important aspect of a job!
4 - They have to make money allowances necessary for the children. They need to give allowance to their children. ...
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 13, 2009 / mr_turtle - Dec 14, 2009
|Need help with sociology essay: Panopticon of Our Time
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|Why I want to attend Brandeis
3 - I don't know if "come to grips with" is the right phrase. Doesn't it mean something like "cope...
Writing FeedbackIntlIndian - Dec 13, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 15, 2009
|Kermit the Frog lamented that it's not easy being green. Do you agree?
4 - Very clever! Hey, I think you ought to leave the ending alone, because it fits perfectly with the...
Writing Feedbackkeilinger - Dec 12, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 15, 2009
|Biological perspective on Sexual Orientation - "nature or nurture" approaches
14 - Well... *they are not actual bullets *they cannot holler, ha ha, and *they are harmless in every way....
Writing FeedbackMcGregor10 - Dec 12, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 21, 2009
|Term paper on appearance vs. reality
3 - This first paragraph starts in an interesting way, but before you start quoting the prologue, you should introduce...
Writing Feedbackstudent32 - Dec 12, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 14, 2009
|Toefl essay: Governments should pay more attention on health care issue than ..
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|Toefl essay awards and prizes are given for
5 - Thank you for your perfect feedback I feel more knowledgeable to write the essay. I begin to know...
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 11, 2009 / Keng - Dec 13, 2009
|Good teachers should give Challenging tasks to their students
Writing Feedbackyasmin85 - Dec 10, 2009 / Logical_Fella_C - Dec 10, 2009
|difference between boy's manner and gild's manner
5 - You can further narrow it down to situations, e.g. table manners. This will bring your broad topic down to...
Writing Feedbacknuocmatcuada - Dec 8, 2009 / Hadiqa - Dec 14, 2009
|the Beatles - Favorite Band
3 - John Lennon performed at a church Premier July 6, 1957 in Liverpool suburb of Woolton. John convinced Harrison...
Writing Feedbackshelia1 - Dec 10, 2009 / EF_Susan - Dec 11, 2009
|IELTS Essay:Some parents believe that reading entertainment books is a waste of
Writing Feedbacklender - Dec 10, 2009 / autumnwave - Dec 16, 2009
|Toefl essay. Get up early or late - what would you prefer?
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 10, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 12, 2009
|The role of Citizen Participation in community planning - thesis statment lenght
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|essay of Umich: cultural, intellectual and social differences
8 - jzh110jzh110 no, i didnt. it has word limit. i can't elaborate many things. and tbh i dont know calligraphy...
Writing FeedbackChristie - Dec 9, 2009 / Christie - Dec 15, 2009
|Toefl- Kids playing computer games; What the parents did, what their children do
5 - Here is a quick idea for you: Is playing computer games waste children's time? Some people state that it...
Writing Feedbacks011208 - Dec 9, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 11, 2009
|WISH FOR CHRISTMAS
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|English CLEP Practice Essay - Friendships today are easier than ever to form
3 - Here is something I think will help. Use this structure: First sentence - attention grabbing, colorful words. Last...
Writing FeedbackKMK - Dec 8, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
|IELTS: Success has broader definition than the earning power of a person.
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