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|Is it better to move around or to stay in one place? toefl essays
5 - alright I will follow your advice on the firstly thing. Thank you very much for clarifying my doubts,...
Writing Feedbackivan9210 - Nov 30, 2009 / ivan9210 - Dec 2, 2009
|The best solution to over coming traffic problems in your city
3 - Yes, idefinitely agree. This paragraph needs a lot of work. Especially take care about using unnecessary full stops and...
Writing Feedbackheromanmax - Nov 30, 2009 / archana_s91 - Dec 2, 2009
|Essay about the best advise and given - feedback
Writing Feedbackerinhcho - Nov 30, 2009 / yang - Dec 18, 2009
|TOEFL; Public transportation keeps society from the depletion of natural resources
3 - people can usetake public ..., train, and subway, the oil and gasoline nonrenewable will run out quickly. Using...
Writing Feedbacklyhongyen - Nov 30, 2009 / s011208 - Nov 30, 2009
|IELTS: The power of advertising depends on society and goods!
5 - In my opinion, the relation between the high sales of popular consumer goods and the power of advertising ,and...
Writing Feedbackkooka - Nov 29, 2009 / margarita - Dec 4, 2009
|traveling the world is educational. it has changed me. uc prompt 1.
Writing Feedbackprincess01 - Nov 29, 2009 / ashtene - Nov 29, 2009
|Do you agree that one should never be judged by their external appearances-fback
Writing Feedbacklook416 - Nov 29, 2009 / look416 - Dec 1, 2009
|My parents' shouting matches - UCF obstacles/bump in the road
4 - Hello, I thin it might be better to mention the fighting briefly, and then talk about the home away...
Writing Feedbackprotesturhero - Nov 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 15, 2009
|TOEFL: "people are living longer now"; 'Healthier life, well educated people'
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Nov 29, 2009 / shahps41592 - Nov 30, 2009
|TOEFL: Spending time with a large number of friends can add more to one's life.
4 - Thank you very much, guys!!! Kevin, thanks!!! Now I am doing some practice on the Integrated Writing task...
Writing Feedbackinrockuptible - Nov 29, 2009 / inrockuptible - Dec 6, 2009
|I can not arcoss the gap
2 - The twenty first century witnessed a world transforma tion. With the development of society ,our lives are more...
Writing Feedbackwyl_steven - Nov 29, 2009 / protesturhero - Nov 29, 2009
|Face-to-face communication is not anymore the more effective way to communicate.
4 - Parthew and Kevin, I really appretiate your feedback. Kevin, thanks so much for letting me see and understand...
Writing Feedbackmargarita - Nov 28, 2009 / margarita - Dec 1, 2009
|Essay about city living and country living
Writing FeedbackJannaiska - Nov 28, 2009 / ayida365 - Nov 28, 2009
|Spirits and rituals concept essay
7 - Not gonna lie, didn't understand most of it...but the admin might. so it's not a college essay?...
Writing Feedbacksoul997 - Nov 27, 2009 / yang - Nov 30, 2009
|TOEFL Why do some students study abroad?
3 - Thanks Susan! I appreciate your help on my writing. It will be great if you can,please, take a look...
Writing Feedbackmargarita - Nov 27, 2009 / margarita - Nov 29, 2009
|Argument Essay on Security Cameras - Feedback / Revision
2 - The growing use of surveillance cameras in today's society has led to several privacy issues being raised. The...
Writing Feedbacksonic_fanrs - Nov 27, 2009 / EF_Susan - Nov 28, 2009
|An IELTS about ads targeting younger and younger children
3 - I agree with your idea! You have introduced your topic clearly. Just pay attetion to grammer mistakes like "Parents...
Writing Feedbackleonardo092 - Nov 27, 2009 / linhexi - Dec 26, 2009
|TOEFL "Building a new movie theater in nighborhood.."
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Nov 26, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 27, 2009
|'A few years ago, boarding school was a fresh coming thing for us' - IELTS: Boarding school
3 - Hi maymay513,thanks for helping me. You help me find some errors which I did not realize. Thanks again!!! You...
Writing Feedbacksupersophie - Nov 26, 2009 / supersophie - Nov 27, 2009
|Today people are using nuclear energy and interested in it!
2 - issue. Moreuse. Then clean and cheap energy [cheaper* really? didn't know that. I thought uranium is very expensive.] choose...
Writing Feedbackchile - Nov 26, 2009 / meisj0n - Nov 26, 2009
|The lifestyle we live today is leading us down the path of an evolutionary disaster; choices we made
2 - Yes, the second para is much stronger than the first. Often, we need to cut the first para, because...
Writing Feedbackneuromancer - Nov 25, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 26, 2009
|TOEFL "Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done."
4 - Hi, s011208, One thing that catch my eye in your essay is the expressions "suffer from pressure", "not...
Writing Feedbacks011208 - Nov 25, 2009 / kooka - Nov 30, 2009
|IELTS:Are International Sporting Occasions a Safe Way for Releasing Emotions??
Writing FeedbackRuah - Nov 24, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 26, 2009
|TOEFL "why is music important?"
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Nov 24, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 26, 2009
|A Descriptive essay about Beauty feedback
Writing Feedbacknursehelp - Nov 24, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 26, 2009
|Skepticism in students' study---GRE ISSUE
2 - Doubts lead to experiments, and experiments lead to deeper understanding, to solution, it and in this way skepticism can...
Writing Feedbackbluebonnet - Nov 24, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 25, 2009
|My grandfather - Essay for school.
Writing Feedbackjgv115 - Nov 24, 2009 / jgv115 - Jan 25, 2010
|Advertisement is not a waste of money but an effective method of sales promotion
3 - Hi, ...people can hardly know ... when we use hardly, scarcely and some negative adverbial, inversion structure would...
Writing Feedbackpretty0407 - Nov 24, 2009 / hitchhike - Nov 24, 2009
|Germany, Italy, France, Britain - The Amount Spent on Consumer Goods
Writing FeedbackRuah - Nov 23, 2009 / Ruah - Nov 24, 2009
|TOEFL EASSY-- the ability of planning and organizing is essential for young
Writing Feedbackpretty0407 - Nov 21, 2009 / pretty0407 - Nov 22, 2009
|marriages should be arranged by the parents or not?
6 - Yes, I'm getting to them all as quickly as I can. Are there any particularly urgent ones? Also,...
Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Nov 21, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 25, 2010
|essay about Siddhartha's Teachers
Writing Feedbackluny - Nov 20, 2009 / harsha9 - Nov 21, 2009
|TOEFL: "Studying alone or in a group"/ Which do you prefer?
NEW - Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer?...
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|"Categories of Criminals" - Stanford Intellectual Vitality Essay
5 - wow, i really like yours. its interesting, but is it related to what major you're applying for? also, i...
Writing Feedbackfallen92 - Nov 20, 2009 / luu123 - Nov 29, 2009
|IELTS essay"people think children's spending time on TV, video..is good,while.."
NEW - Some people think children's spending time on TV, video and PC games is good, while others think it is...
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|Humankind has undergone many changes in the eating habit - food is easier to prepare
2 - gahhhh! I spent an hour typing stuff up and the browser messed up. o well, guess u'll have to...
Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Nov 20, 2009 / meisj0n - Nov 21, 2009
|Do you agree to "Watching Television is bad for children"?
5 - Today, children prefer to got go overseas for their education , and for this reason it is necessary...
Writing Feedbacklucidmanner - Nov 20, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 25, 2009
|COUNTRY BOYS - REACTION PAPER - edit this essay, I'm non native English speaker
2 - "Country boys" is the most unique type of documentary movie that I have ever watched, because it is not...
Writing Feedbackjhung620 - Nov 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 21, 2009
|Literary Analysis on The Haunting of Hill House
Writing Feedbackkparham322 - Nov 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 22, 2009
|Toefl essay - "Learning about past has its significance"
Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 20, 2009
|Multi-Language Clash Synthesis essay
6 - Well... in order to see how it actually is an independent clause, think of this sentence: However,...
Writing FeedbackJoeyson - Nov 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 24, 2009
|TOEFL living in places different weather condition vs same weather condition
6 - Margarita, one of my teacher, who taught writing, told about this limitations. By taking into consideration of time we...
Writing Feedbackmargarita - Nov 18, 2009 / hitchhike - Nov 26, 2009
|Toefl Integrated task" William shakespeare"
2 - Thanks, Mashhadi, for this great work. I know that takes a long time! I hope your teachers will someday...
Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 18, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 20, 2009
|Studying people and events of the past time is very useful
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Nov 18, 2009 / margarita - Nov 25, 2009
|TOEFL:::working for a small company - more chances are to boost in your job
2 - You did a good job of making clear your thesis statement at the end of the first paragraph. Your...
Writing Feedbackmashhadi - Nov 18, 2009 / EF_Susan - Nov 20, 2009
|TOEFL preference essay " sports vs.arts" - feedback welcomed :)
4 - I believe when you are asked to stay and support your preference about two o more topics, subjects or...
Writing Feedbackeng_student - Nov 18, 2009 / margarita - Nov 23, 2009
|Toefl : lifestyle individualism VS collectivism
Writing FeedbackBabies - Nov 18, 2009 / EF_Susan - Nov 20, 2009
|Toefl essay on Silvio Berlusconi.
Writing Feedbackdar81 - Nov 18, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 20, 2009
|Toefl essay which changed people's lives automobiles bicycles airplanes
3 - Although new invention will changed the world more or less, only a few inventions can take the significant change...
Writing Feedbackrmli - Nov 18, 2009 / Jin - Nov 18, 2009
|[TOEFL]Tidal Power_Integrated task.
Writing Feedbackyin - Nov 18, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 20, 2009
|My Two Sons - Thesis statement for Comparison essay
5 - I have two fantastic boys in my family that were born four years apart and are as different as...
Writing Feedbackbmerrell - Nov 17, 2009 / TFS109201 - Nov 19, 2009
|Toefl - "not everything in life is according to our wish"
Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 17, 2009 / EF_Susan - Nov 18, 2009
|International Studies Paper on the effects of war.......
2 - How true and terrible that Twain quote is! Hey, I don't understand that last sentence of the first...
Writing FeedbackMGH1989 - Nov 17, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
|Toefl"A person you know is planning to move to your town. What do you think..
4 - The beginning is great! It is actually quite interesting at the start, because I think it is intriguing that...
Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 17, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 19, 2009
|Experience is the best teacher; influential person - Preparing for the Clep exam
4 - Susan and Kevin - thank you for the feedback. I studied the mistakes you pointed out and understand now...
Writing Feedbackpaula - Nov 17, 2009 / paula - Nov 23, 2009
|TOEFL ; Recent story that affected me the most was Pig Flu
4 - I don't know the name of the rule associated with this. You can write, "My jacket is here." and...
Writing FeedbackHelin - Nov 17, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 22, 2009
|Forward or first page - A Book I am Writing
Writing FeedbackJeannie - Nov 17, 2009 / Jeannie - Nov 29, 2009
|Essay on events that have changed Australia's multicultural society - feedback.
3 - Looking good. If you get inspired, maybe you will come up with a more intriguing first line. This is...
Writing Feedbackdubulee - Nov 17, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 19, 2009
|my art essay, parthenon vs pantheon
Writing Feedbackstockwell - Nov 17, 2009 / sesudita - Nov 19, 2009
|TOEFL ESSAY " Shools should ask students to evaluate their teachers"
13 - thanks a lot...
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