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|toefl: overemphasizing on personal lives of famous people by media
6 - For me,writing an essay in English is not easy. It takes time to practice. Kevin,thank you so...
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|Narrative Ethnographic Essay - Needs help
2 - In 1995, a Minister, along with his wife and five children, emigrated from Guatemala City, Guatemala. Her youngest...
Writing Feedbacknguyend - Dec 2, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2008
|Have there been any bumps in the road in your life.
4 - I agree with hasnaahmed.Maybe try and inverse your story,start from the end.If you wanted this esay to be semi-formal...
Writing FeedbackMoni09 - Dec 2, 2008 / arthas13 - Dec 3, 2008
|Poltical Science, Multiple Questions Essay on Political Issues
Writing Feedbackiceboar - Dec 1, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2008
|MONOPOLY VS. PERFECT COMPETITION (research paper feedback)
3 - Thank you! I'll make some changes and will focus on MLA citation; it's not due until next week so...
Writing FeedbackAndrew - Dec 1, 2008 / Andrew - Dec 1, 2008
|'Budget cuts' - the leading problem facing our eduactional system today?
2 - Budget cuts have been the leading problem facing our educational system today. When the state of California announced a...
Writing Feedbackmavictoria - Dec 1, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
|Datong District, the oldest district of Taipei City, is my hometown.
Writing Feedbackcamellia2008 - Dec 1, 2008 / camellia2008 - Dec 2, 2008
|Passion for a subject or cause? UD Essay Help
Writing Feedbackameretouch - Dec 1, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
|US Space Project - English CLEP essay (space exploration!)
2 - Space exploration has made information available to us that previously unimaginable. Issues like hunger, disease, global warming ......
Writing FeedbackRacheli - Dec 1, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
|Research Paper (Argument)-Reflections of Society in Children's Literature
2 - I thought the opening paragraph was fine, and your intention clearly stated in the last sentence. Though still...
Writing Feedbackldixon - Dec 1, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
|'I am easy to communicate' - University Of XXX - essay
Writing Feedbackseatoy - Dec 1, 2008 / seatoy - Dec 9, 2008
|Haitian immigrants and their choice to struggle for better life-essay check
2 - The lives of immigrants are very difficult and filled with many hardships. In "Brother I`m Dying" Edwidge Danticat...
Writing Feedbackkichikov22 - Nov 30, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
|This is an description essay about my bedroom
Writing Feedbackbeauty125 - Nov 30, 2008 / clivec1 - Dec 6, 2008
|how your family's experience or cultural history enriched you or presented
3 - in the beginning, you stated off with a little background info, which was nice but you kind of lost...
Writing Feedbacktonydengcnu - Nov 30, 2008 / janaylloyd09 - Dec 9, 2008
|Should teachers permit to teach if they don't have teacher's certification
2 - Teacher education has always played an important role in determining student outcomes. To be certified in Illinois, teachers must...
Writing Feedbackxiulyu - Nov 30, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
|The Watergate paper feedback
Writing Feedbackop2607 - Nov 30, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
|'it is the right thing to do' - Page 218 Autobiographical Essay
5 - Well, I would not call it a discrepancy... but the reason I mentioned it is that what it made...
Writing Feedbackrandomzm - Nov 30, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
|Describe a character in fiction: How the steel was tempered
3 - He once said: "Personal business must yield to collective interest." He respected his superiors and learned a lot...
Writing Feedbacktonydengcnu - Nov 30, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
|About an activity: the magazine Young
3 - After a whole day's efforts, which ranged from printing posters to blowing balloons, everyone was exhausted. However, because of...
Writing Feedbacktonydengcnu - Nov 30, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
|TOEFL ESSAY - serious or entertaining movies
4 - Instead of, "Here are my reasons," try: My reasons include the following: Oh, all the corrections that...
Writing Feedbackcamellia2008 - Nov 30, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
|TOEFL essay: Zoos have no useful purpose. Agree/disagree
4 - No, I only know about editing. However, I know some Native speakers of English who do not write as...
Writing Feedbackmaryna_lm - Nov 29, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
|TOEFL essay: Apartment Vs dormitories at university.
Writing Feedbackmaryna_lm - Nov 29, 2008 / maryna_lm - Nov 29, 2008
|Arumentative Essay(MLA Style) Is Spanking the Right Way to Discipline
3 - Thanks Kevin...
Writing Feedbacksunnyside - Nov 29, 2008 / sunnyside - Nov 30, 2008
|Essay about "what I would do with some land"
2 - we should not decide their destinies for... capability to take care of them or of whether or not...
Writing Feedbackmaryna_lm - Nov 29, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Nov 29, 2008
|foil essay on Wuthering Heights
4 - wow kid wow....
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|help with essay for aboard
4 - With the enormous population in Beijing it has various ethnic groups, races and tribes. I am currently taking...
Writing Feedbackcutepandagirl - Nov 28, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Nov 29, 2008
|Members of a group can learn from each other, and it will help compensate one's weaknesses.
3 - well, the essay I am practicing is time-impromptu writing, which means I am not allowed to reserch something on...
Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Nov 28, 2008 / je2ks2 - Nov 29, 2008
|Essay about selecting the course.
6 - However, this claim overlooks the potential advantages of students' own selected course, such as increasing students' motivation and their...
Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Nov 28, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 3, 2008
|"the Tenth Man" - Simple Essay
Writing Feedbackstudent838 - Nov 27, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Nov 28, 2008
|Polar bear essay - I could really use on what i've written so far
2 - Great! I made some minor changes below. It will be good if you have a good intro paragraph and...
Writing Feedbackshannon1432 - Nov 27, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Nov 28, 2008
|the crucible-how is John Proctor presented (paragraph about him&elizabeth)
NEW - Hi, just wondering if I am answering the question with this paragraph or have gone of the point completely!!...
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|'change must come from the top' - written for English CLEP
Writing FeedbackRacheli - Nov 27, 2008 / Racheli - Dec 1, 2008
|Personal Response -The Wars
Writing FeedbackFissionMailed - Nov 26, 2008 / FissionMailed - Nov 27, 2008
|Computers have made life becomes easier or difficult? Discuss
2 - I suggest that you add a sentence to the first paragraph to say what your opinion is: although computers...
Writing Feedbacklayaili - Nov 25, 2008 / kevin02720 - Nov 25, 2008
|A four-paragraph essay about The True Meaning of Courage
Writing Feedbackkarroll - Nov 25, 2008 / karroll - Nov 25, 2008
|"born in the rural area of Chin" - pls. help revise: My background
Writing Feedbacktonydengcnu - Nov 25, 2008 / tonydengcnu - Dec 9, 2008
|"My father" - pls. help revise part of my P.S.
NEW - My father works as a senior IT researcher in RICOH, a prestigious Japanese company. Under his influence, I learned...
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|Research paper on Poe's "Ligeia"
4 - Excellent! This is a great passage; if you keep your comparisons similar to this, you're going to have a...
Writing FeedbackTe Amari - Nov 24, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
|Report on whether to diagnose a 6 year old boy who may have autism
2 - Good evening :) I have edited the first two sections of your piece and also given some general...
Writing Feedbackjay45 - Nov 24, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
|IELTS; COMPUTERS REPLACE MAN POWR IN JOBS
Writing Feedbackmie08 - Nov 24, 2008 / mie08 - Nov 24, 2008
|'crowded, polluted, noisy place' - a new high school may be built in the neighborhood
Writing FeedbackAsselya - Nov 24, 2008 / Asselya - Dec 3, 2008
|Cumulative class essay about supervisor
NEW - Hello, we were told to write a 4 page essay on our supervisor at work using the material we...
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|Telling the truth is not a best option always
Writing FeedbackAsselya - Nov 23, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
|Biology Creative Essay
Writing Feedbackmonee2 - Nov 22, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
|ADVANTAGES OF CITY LIVING AND COUNTRY LIVING, can you help me with this?
NEW - Some people, say that living in the countryside is the best choice, because is better for your heath. But...
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|help with essay #1: experience with soup kitchen
Writing Feedbackdatanator - Nov 22, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
|'I was two months pregnant' - A decision that has changed my life
2 - Make sure you are capitalizing the first words of every sentence. "so" should be capitalized. At this point...
Writing FeedbackTMcGee - Nov 21, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
|What is Conrad's definition of evil from heart of darkness and the strange
NEW - What is conrad's defintion of evil from heart of darkness and The Strange Case Of Dr. Jekyll and Mr....
Writing Feedbackmissy7187 - Nov 20, 2008 / — -
|Paper about ISA. My teacher said my paper is unorganized.
2 - The main thing about organization is that each subject you want to talk about should have its own paragraph....
Writing Feedbacksadie0910 - Nov 20, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
|Essay about bad effects of the internet on students
2 - Good afternoon :) In regards to meaning, there is no difference between "internet" and "the internet." "The" is...
Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Nov 20, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
|For advice: Account of my experience
4 - Oh, that is an interesting question! In common usage, "temperament" suggests emotion, and ability to control one's temper,...
Writing Feedbacktonydengcnu - Nov 20, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 9, 2008
|Realism Essay - the readers choice
NEW - Had to write an essay on realism/romatacism. Please give any grammer corrections and content suggestions you may have. ...
Writing Feedbackmichaelfrye1970 - Nov 20, 2008 / — -
|Teenagers and alcohol essay - help revise or offer suggestions:
2 - Good evening :) First, avoid contractions in formal academic writing; for instance, "It's" should be "It is." ...
Writing Feedbacktonydengcnu - Nov 19, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
|For revision or suggestions: The activity I like most
Writing Feedbacktonydengcnu - Nov 19, 2008 / tonydengcnu - Dec 9, 2008
|The Freedom to Choose Death
NEW - The Freedom to Choose Death Euthanasia has become one of the most controversial topics nowadays. Euthanasia means "mercy...
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|Persuasive Essay Abu Graib Prison Camp-Need Help
NEW - I need help, I am a very WEAK writer. No prisoner should ever feel mortally violated and striped...
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|Choose one of the following transportation vehicles - essay, change lives
6 - thanks...))...
Writing FeedbackAsselya - Nov 18, 2008 / Asselya - Dec 13, 2008
|'traffic jam, noisy neighborhood' - New movie theater may be built
3 - Good afternoon :) "Going to movie theater is a hobby for many people; therefore, the number of movie...
Writing FeedbackAsselya - Nov 18, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
|Pls. help revise essay: The person who has great influence on me
Writing Feedbacktonydengcnu - Nov 18, 2008 / tonydengcnu - Nov 19, 2008
|research essay on novel "monkey beach"
NEW - I have finished an research paper on residential school and it is based on the novel, monkey beach. Can...
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