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|Dostoyevsky's Crime and Punishment-Is mankind inherently good or evil?
2 - Greetings! You've written an excellent essay! There is very little that I'd suggest changing. I should point out...
Writing FeedbackBake0345 - Apr 8, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 9, 2008
|Speech critique 2 - X's informative speech
2 - Greetings! Another great paper! Here are some editing tips: X's speech was an average one, it had...
Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Apr 8, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 9, 2008
|Speech critique 1 - a subject that can be supported by empirical data
NEW - Critique please. Thanks The following is a informative speech critique on me, X. The speech was to convey...
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|Ron Paul Media Expose. check it for errors.
2 - Greetings! You've written a very good paper! If you are following MLA format, when you mention the author's...
Writing FeedbackTimcago - Apr 6, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 7, 2008
|A reflection paper about my practicum site
Writing FeedbackKathy - Apr 6, 2008 / Kathy - Apr 7, 2008
|Art Administration MA essay
NEW - This essay was originally written for a specific school/program. But the program I want to submit it to requests...
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|Economy vs Ecology - essay
4 - You're very welcome! I learned a little Turkish ("a little" being a dozen words or so) from online friends....
Writing Feedbackramses0206 - Apr 2, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 4, 2008
|Spirit brings rights - essay
2 - Greetings! You make some very good points in your essay! Because of its length, I can't edit all...
Writing Feedbackramses0206 - Apr 2, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 3, 2008
|many traditional values and customs have been lost. Pls check my essay.
5 - Good morning Sophie! Unfortunately Sarah left us for other pursuits a few weeks ago; I am sure she...
Writing FeedbackSophie - Apr 2, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 14, 2008
|The Early Admission Scheme - article
2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay! Here are some editing tips: It is not because they are...
Writing Feedbackshing200584 - Apr 1, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 2, 2008
|Social Environment versus Instincts to shape human bahavior
5 - Greetings! Merhaba! You are absolutely not "bad at writing"! (And absolutely right that I was lacking in my...
Writing Feedbackramses0206 - Apr 1, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 3, 2008
|Descriptive essay a place you spend a lot of time
5 - Greetings! You're welcome, I'm happy to help! I think you've added some nice touches. I have a few...
Writing Feedbackbonechills - Mar 30, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 2, 2008
|Narrative Essay about ghosts - trouble placing my thesis
2 - Greetings! A thesis helps orient the reader to know what your essay is about. That's why you should...
Writing Feedbackenglish101 - Mar 29, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 30, 2008
|Beowulf Essay help
2 - Greetings! You've written a great essay! I have just a few editing suggestions: For a person to...
Writing FeedbackJaminbakk - Mar 29, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 30, 2008
|Should marketers be allowed to target children in their ad campaigns?
3 - Greetings! I think you've written a very good essay! Here are some editing suggestions: [ delete: This...
Writing Feedbackenglish101 - Mar 29, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 29, 2008
|Hong Kong for mainland tourists - article
2 - Greetings! You've done a good job! Here are some editing tips: Under Individual Visit Scheme, people from...
Writing Feedbackshing200584 - Mar 27, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 28, 2008
|Definition of Education-Need filter words & eliminate repetition paragrap.
14 - hey babydoll, well i was researching for the same paper that you have discussed here. Do you still have...
Writing Feedbackbabydoll - Mar 26, 2008 / jolly - Oct 25, 2008
|Re: Worldview essay feedback
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|Observation Activity In Jane Eyre
2 - Greetings! You've written some marvelous descriptive prose! I have just a few editing suggestions: "Swaying gently in...
Writing FeedbackWonderfulloser - Mar 25, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 26, 2008
|Is spanking a form of family violence? : "In Rod We Trust"
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|is this brief remark correct?
Writing Feedbackccppg - Mar 23, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 24, 2008
|"The Soldier's Duty" - Argumentive Photo Essay need help with more Ideas
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Writing Feedbackbabydoll - Mar 22, 2008 / Sealion - Oct 7, 2008
|End of the World Essay...
2 - Greetings! I think your writing contains many good ideas. The area where you need the most work is...
Writing Feedbackramses0206 - Mar 22, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 24, 2008
|what do you do for good health? pls check grammar and give some detail more
Writing FeedbackSophie - Mar 21, 2008 / Sophie - Apr 2, 2008
|Expository essay NUCLEAR POWER - I did a lot of language mistakes
2 - Greetings! Yes, a language mistake would probably be a problem with the grammar. I have made some corrections...
Writing Feedbackinvisible7959 - Mar 21, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 22, 2008
|Work at a job that you enjoy than it is to earn a lot of money?
Writing FeedbackManisa - Mar 19, 2008 / — -
|About Me essay (Karina raised in Kazahstan)
5 - Greetings! Thank you, Karina! Yes, there are several ways you could say it. For example, "Because English...
Writing FeedbackKarina - Mar 19, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 22, 2008
|Essay about awesome Soccer - edit it today
Writing FeedbackJohn doan - Mar 19, 2008 / John doan - Mar 20, 2008
|Is learning history important? - essay
Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Mar 19, 2008 / je2ks2 - Mar 20, 2008
|Problems with bad student behavior - Solutions
Writing Feedbacknguyenannhon - Mar 19, 2008 / nguyenannhon - Mar 20, 2008
|Media file - Sociology of the Family essay
Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Mar 17, 2008 / FredParisFrance - Mar 25, 2008
|Explantory Essay: About Revenge
4 - Greetings! Normally, when I think of an explanatory essay, I think of a "how-to" type of essay: how...
Writing Feedbackdark_danny - Mar 16, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 19, 2008
|"Everything's An Argument" - Evaluative Essay
5 - Hello Sarah, Thank you very much, that was exactly what I was looking for. Again, Thank you. ...
Writing Feedbackspanky2300 - Mar 14, 2008 / spanky2300 - Mar 17, 2008
|Statement of Purpose for Savannah College of Art & Design; R.E.A.C.H. Art.
Writing Feedbackjladdison3 - Mar 13, 2008 / jladdison3 - Mar 14, 2008
|voluntary work - helping poor elderly people or newly arrived pupil
2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay! Here are some editing tips: But when it comes to choosing...
Writing Feedbackshing200584 - Mar 13, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 14, 2008
|Essay on requiring employees to dress formally..
4 - Greetings! That's a very good question! The "a" belongs to "company"; it is singular, just one company, but...
Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Mar 12, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 14, 2008
|"Pattern's of Medieval Life" - about the presentation in class
2 - Greetings! It sounds like you learned a lot from the presentation! Here are a few tips for you:...
Writing FeedbackBBgirl - Mar 10, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 12, 2008
|Feature article, Casino in Singapore - response to a government's decision
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Mar 9, 2008 / learningtowrite - Mar 10, 2008
|'Degree of happiness' with a job is more important than having a high salary
2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay! Here are some editing suggestions: the most contributing factor differs from...
Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Mar 9, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 10, 2008
|"Road to Perdition" movie review essay (grammar help)
3 - alright thanks alot for the help. Then about the semicolons. I just remember her going on a rant about...
Writing FeedbackLeighS - Mar 9, 2008 / LeighS - Mar 10, 2008
|Integrated writing task: the growth of tourism
3 - thank you very much,have a nice weekend. This is a great website for everyone to improve writing skill. Thank...
Writing FeedbackSophie - Mar 7, 2008 / Sophie - Mar 8, 2008
|Narrative Essay>.> Random moments
Writing FeedbackDsx2012 - Mar 6, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 7, 2008
|Essay on saving land for endangerous animals
4 - Greetings! Yes, the singular/plural conundrum is confusing in English. Most people these days say "they" when referring to...
Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Mar 5, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 6, 2008
|theoretical analysis of two different media sources ( book and a play)
Writing Feedbackdeshara - Mar 5, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 6, 2008
|Jean Piaget - how is my grammar-Psych paper?
Writing Feedbackhunnybun39 - Mar 4, 2008 / hunnybun39 - Mar 18, 2008
|Education is only single factor in country's wealth?
2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay! Here are some editing pointers for you: This essay will discuss...
Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Mar 2, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 2, 2008
|descriptive writing: creating an exterior scene
3 - Thank you!...
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Mar 2, 2008 / learningtowrite - Mar 3, 2008
|Essay on The most remembering moment in my life
Writing FeedbackDedyhka - Feb 29, 2008 / Dedyhka - Mar 3, 2008
|Essay on Customer Focus
2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay! I've done some editing for you: At Park Place Lexus, the...
Writing Feedbackasianbma - Feb 28, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 1, 2008
|Essay: Religion based discrimination
2 - Greetings! I'm happy to help with some editing tips! Recently, I viewed a video clip on Yahoo!...
Writing FeedbackYeereina - Feb 26, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 27, 2008
|My laptop is from Dell; An essay about my laptop
2 - Greetings! You've written an informative essay! Here are some editing suggestions for you: According to the policy...
Writing Feedbacknoni - Feb 25, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 26, 2008
|School lunches today - Illustration essay
3 - Greetings! There are some distinct differences between formal and informal essays. First of all, the viewpoint the author...
Writing FeedbackDDOWNS4 - Feb 24, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 4, 2008
|Literary Analysis on The Road Not Taken by Robert Frost
2 - In a person's life, many decisions have to be made, such as choosing to spend time hanging out with...
Writing Feedbackxdarkr0se - Feb 22, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 23, 2008
|Analysis of Squealer from "Animal Farm" by George Orwell
2 - Greetings! Well, I have to say that I think your instructor must have been grading on handwriting, because...
Writing Feedbacklorentzium - Feb 21, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 22, 2008
|Help with my essay on U.S. and covert policies
2 - Greetings! One thing I think your essay is lacking is focus. It's difficult to tell what your thesis...
Writing Feedbackcynthia24 - Feb 20, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2008
|A late arrival leading to serious consequences
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Feb 20, 2008 / learningtowrite - Feb 23, 2008
|Art Nouveau - Glasgow Style (essay)
2 - Greetings! You've written an interesting essay! Here are some editing tips for you: It took various styles...
Writing Feedbacksamuraihuynh - Feb 18, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 18, 2008
|One day you made a bad mistake which upset other people - essay help
3 - I spent very little time on this, and honestly, not much feelings or anything so it doesnt turn out...
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Feb 18, 2008 / learningtowrite - Feb 19, 2008
|World War I, also referred to as the Great War - Essay Suggestions
Writing Feedbackakwade - Feb 17, 2008 / akwade - Feb 18, 2008
|The Vacuum - Analytical Essay; could someone check my analytical essay for errors
4 - Greetings! I think that's an excellent way to write it! You've done a good job of looking behind...
Writing FeedbackTimcago - Feb 16, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 18, 2008
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